KalMa SS-“Two hearts💞💞” completed!!! last part updated on 5th Aug... - Page 13

Originally posted by: InkAndFable

Read the last three chapters in one go.

I had some issues with my laptop. I wasn't able to keep track of the story.

Amazing...😍😍😍😍😍

I loved Malhar as a caring husband who tries his best to keep his wife happy, making new beautiful memories and let her overcome her troubled childhood.

I loved Kalyani who acts mature and prioritize her husband and her new family above everything. She tries her best to keep them happy.

This story feels so natural, connect to the real world.

Oh, Karan...He is an awesome character. He was happy for his friend and he is not like Sampada. He was happy for his friend and accepted his marriage. On the other hand, Sampada who is still not over Malhar.

Update the next part soon...😄

Woah firstly thanks for the wonderful comment... i like wen readers actually connect with a story n elaborate their views... its commendable... thanks for commenting n pls do continue it helps us to deliver more as a writer... thanks for the appreciation 🙌🏻💞

Originally posted by: kusharberry

beautiful update dear

loved it

uff this sampada nah is getting too much bas kalma should kick her out asap such a snake she is

aww jealous malhar

please do continue soon

Awww glad u liked it... stay connected ll try to update soon n yupp tganks for commenting🤩

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Awesome ! Ab hum ko toh serial mei honeymoon milega kab woh zaffar" s ko pata hai ...story mein mumbai ho ate hai...The katti wali part was choooo cute❤❤❤🥰🥰🥰And as usual Sampada ka 😱😱🙀🙀gaya . Chalo aj k liye itna cuteness kafi hai...waiting for the next update .

Haha serial me bhi milega... but it has to progress slowly in order to keep running... but till then humari stories se kam chala lo... enjoy reading n yeah thanks for the comment...

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Their chemistry is so organic. Malhar ki possessiveness mein vi ek cuteness hai .Basically these two are teddies and cuties! Loving it .❤❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰🍦🍦🍫🍫

aww thanks for the cute comment... yupp wana keep their raw chemistry intact...🙌🏻

Originally posted by: asmitasb

Just awesome part this was. Malhar was so jealous n too possessive about his jaan. I hope aisa scene hume actual me dekhne mile where kalyani n malhar going out somewhere and kalyani meets her old friend from pune and they hug n talk continuously. Acp Saab toh aag babula ho jayenge aur phir hoga introduction Meri Patni haaye you've written that scene so well I toh got visualization.

Kalyani character is portrayed so well. She knows her situation, she knows value of people because as a child she was alone. N now when she get such lovable n caring people as her aai, baba and malhar she really don't want to lose them she wants to hold them and ready to do everything for their happiness. I just love her character in the story. Very well thought dear. ❤️ waiting for next part.. Please post soon.

Aww thanks for such a long comment as i said i like when u guys stay connected to story n explain ur comment n give us reviews... it really pushes us to write more... thanku so much... ll try to update soon...

Originally posted by: Vermilion

will comment in night. Good morning

Hehe Good morning dearest... n yuppp do comment at night... ll be waiting for the reviews..🙌🏻

Originally posted by: rammehra103

Awesome update👏

Loved the jealous malhar Rane 😆

Please Karan should be a good guy

Loved how kalyani cared for malhar feeling

Sampada is a witch😡..

Update soon

Glad that u liked it.... stay connected ll try to update soon.. n yupp thanks for commenting 😅🙌🏻

Originally posted by: sidyusha

Aww thanks for such a long comment as i said i like when u guys stay connected to story n explain ur comment n give us reviews... it really pushes us to write more... thanku so much... ll try to update soon...

That's our pleasure...And hats off to you for managing two ffs at a time. I know it's hectic job to complete a chapter. And managing two ffs at a time is mentally tiring too. Getting into the character, and writing according to situation is tough at times. Kudos!

Originally posted by: asmitasb

That's our pleasure...And hats off to you for managing two ffs at a time. I know it's hectic job to complete a chapter. And managing two ffs at a time is mentally tiring too. Getting into the character, and writing according to situation is tough at times. Kudos!

Aww thanku so much...💞💞

Pls read my new story , nighaien .i have posted 3 parts , I will b very happy , if u give ur precious feedback .