KalMA SS : Arranged Marriage (Updated Part 4 on Page No 11)

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Marriage...what is marriage

Is it about love or is it about spending your entire life with a person whom you know or may be you don't...well we are Indians and we do opt for arrange marriages

Hey but the question remains same...What Is Marriage

If you ask me then for me it's not just about love , it is more than that.

It is about commitment, giving, taking and understanding your partner.

The fact that you want to spend your entire life with someone and be a part of their everyday life means that you are ready to share everything, compromise somewhere, and agree to trust your partner.

And as we say true love stands by each other's side on good days and stands closer on bad days but for that true love first you need to build trust n companionship

So my story is about that trust , companionship , friendship n eventually about love between two unknown people coz in my story our KalMa is going for an Arrange marriage.

Note-

See I m trying to write something after 3 long years so plzz excuse my mistakes.

My story is not related to the show's storyline...I m writing a totally different story.

I m going to write my story in Hinglish coz I like to write my dialogues in hindi but I'll try to use as much English as I can

In my story KalMa aren't married so they don't have Moksh...sorry in advance

So here is my story

Arranged Marriage

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Arranged Marriage

Character Sketch:

Deshmukh's-

Ahilya Deshmukh & Rao Deshmukh -Kalyani's Grandparents

Anupriya & Atul Deshmukh- Kalyani's parents ( In my story there is no madhuri , kalyani is Atul Anu's daughter)

Kalyani -Daughter of Deshmukh family...she is 22 year old and her family has fixed her marriage with Malahr Rane

Pallavi & Vivek Deshmukh- Kalyani's Paternal Uncle & Aunt (Chacha Chachi)

Godavari & Nal -Kalyani's Cousins

Rane's-

Vedshree Rane- Malhar's Grandmother

Divya & Nishant Rane -Malhar's Parents

Malhar Rane -He is an ACP and Rane family's elder son (his family wants him to get married to Kalyani Deshmukh coz she is Ahilya's grand daughter and ahilya n vedshree are childhood friends so they want their grandchildren to get married)

Piya & Ansh Rathod -Malhar's younger sister and his brother in law (though piya is younger to Malhar but still she is married to Ansh)

Chetali & Avinash Singh -Malhar's paternal Aunt & Uncle (Bua & fufha ji)

Rishi and Neha -Malhar's cousins (Chetali & Avinash's children)


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Arranged Marriage

Prologue:-

Ahilya Niwas Courtyard

(Ahilya Deshmukh was sitting on her swing n anyone can sense her frustration.)

Ahilya -Anupriya...Anupriya

Anupriya- Ji Aao sahib

Ahilya- Is Kalyani still sleeping

Anu - no aao sahib , she is having her breakfast

Ahilya -hey parmeshwara...aaj is ladki ko dekhne ladkewale a rahe hain aur yeh 10 bje tak toh nashta hi kar rahi hai...kya hoga iska

(In The Dining Hall)

(Pallavi came with a plate of parathas)

Pallavi -kalyani aaj tum mujhe aao sahib se maar khilwayogi...jaldi kha lo aur taiyaar ho jao

(Goda came there)

Goda- Kalyani tai aao sahib is so angry plzz have ur breakfast fast otherwise aao sahib gonna kill u

(Kalyani still gobbling her food)

Kalyani -as if I care

Goda- Tai what's ur problem...why r u behaving like a kid

Kalyani (Fuming In Anger)- Why the hell Am I behaving like a kid...hello I m a kid...I m just 22 n aao sahib wants me to get married to a Police Officer.I wanted to complete my education n pursue my Doctorate n here I m going to doll up for a guy who is an ACP like really

(And then she hears a loud voice)

Purnviraammm...

Kalyani (With a horrified tone) - Ji aao sahib

Ahilya- bacchi nhi ho tum...tumhari umar mein hamari shadi ko 4 saal ho chuke the aur itna hi nhi hum atul aur vivek ko janam bhi de chuke the...accha ladka hai malhar aur hum tumhare dushman nhi hain..jao jakar parlour mein taiyar ho kar aao

Kalyani -parlour kyun

Ahilya- kyunki tum par humein ek paisey ka bharosa nhi hai...tum aur goda jao...appointment humne le li hai

Kalyani -par aao sahib konsa shadi hai sirf dekhne hi toh

Ahilya -purnvirammm...jao dono

In Rane House

Vedashree Rane- Divya where is ur son

(Piya entered)

Piya -bhaiya taiyaar ho rahe hain dadi

Divya- aaj sab acche se ho jaaye...kalyani is a nice girl

(In Malhar's room...malhar was wearing his blazer and ansh and rishi were teasing malhar)

Ansh- waisey Malhar bhai naam kya hai

Malhar(with his cute smile) -Malhar Rane

Rishi- Bhai we know u r the great ACP Malhar rane but we r asking for bhabhi's name

Ansh- rishi would be bhabhi

Malhar- her name is subhangi

Rishi (with a shocked look) - but mamiji said her name is kalyani

Ansh -yeah her name is Kalyani Deshmukh

Malhar -jab pta hai toh pucha kyun

Ansh- ahaan malhar bhai chalaaki haan

Malhar -plzz guys give me 10 mins...I m coming

Ansh & Rishi -ok bro...we r going but come fast

Malhar- yeah

(Kalyani n goda both are in beauty parlour and as usual kalyani is murmuring something)

Kalyani -aane do ACP ko usi ki service revolver se usko goli nhi maari na toh mera naam bhi Kalyani Deshmukh nhi

(in Malhar's room)

Malhar (he is talking to himself)- so Malhar ready for ur exam...god life mein har exam mein top kiya hai lekin aaj darr lag rha hai...I m dam nervous I just hope kalyani taiyar ho is sab ke liye, this is so insane man...ACP Rane aaj kya hone wala hai...Kalyani Deshmukh plzz be nice to me otherwise pta nhi kya hoga.

So, that's for now frds

Tell me how's the prologue...

Edited by SONAL30 - 6 years ago
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Index:-
Prologue - UP
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Great Start 👏 Looking forward to read more from you 😊 I am really glad to read something in Hindi 😃
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Different and beautiful... 😳 looking forward for next update
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This already got me electrified 😃
Malhar all excited n nervous to meet kalyani on the other hand Kalyani is not yet ready to face him 😆 can't wait of next update 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful prologue dear
Loved it
Ek taraf malhar who is excited and damn nervous I felt dusri taraf Kalyani who is ready to BBB him
Ek doubt hai is malhar love with Kalyani
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice
Waiting for more

I too like the fact that it is in Hinglish
I too write in Hinglish for Hindi shows then only you get that feel

Quick updates please
Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 6 years ago
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Really nice CS n Prologue waiting for next update pls continue

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