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Posted: 16 years ago
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Tnx thu i jus cant stay away form yhu lot got i hav 9 comments and 40 view mashallah i see people like! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2:

Heyyyaaa, right I fort I need to update now i want people to like it i would love it if more people comment J

Yug: I really need to find out more baut vrinda when I go to the party I will go in to her room and see if there is anything that tells me about her.

Prem: Yug Yaar yhur here and I was looking for yhu every where anyways i got a text form Heer saying tht she has invited us to vrinda's party 2morrow.

Yug: ermm i no thingy foned me vrinda.

Prem: Oh did she?

THE NEXT DAY!

Heer: Vrinda hunny!

Vrinda: Oh hiiii

Heer: is everyone here?

Vrinda: Yea except we is waiting for yhur lover boy and Yug!

Heer laughs!

Heer: they are here!

Prem: hi heer (and he hugs her)

Heer: hiiii prem

And they all came in.

Yug sneaks in to vrinda's room and he opens her cupboard and he sees a dairy and a photo album! On the photo album it said my childhood the greatest moments in my life private and confidential (got from MizMagick lol) so he opens it up and he looks at the picture and he sees HIMSELF with a girl he recognise it was the girl he loved and he still loved and he looks at the notes on the side and it says VRINDA WHICH IS ME AND MY BEST FRIEND HOPEFULLY MY FUTURE YUG J

He found out tht the girl he liked was no other then vrinda and the he opens the diary.

Diary

Dear diary,

Rite hi I couldn't really rite when i was young but i will rite all my memories in the diary now. Soo lets start first in my life there is one person ilive for tht is only my YUG! I love him even if he doesn't love me i still love him even if he doesn't remember me i still love him!

Let's start with my childhood background jus something about my YUG!

Yug was unique handsome cute but i only was with him till Yr 9 then he had to move to England but yug is the life i wonder how he is now he proberly handsome and fit and s**y but God Know inint.

BYE DIARY FOR EVER TILL I FIND MY YUG!!

He was shocked with what he read and she started to cry but he remembered that it was vrinda's room and he wiped his tears and kissed the diary and the photo album and headed downstairs but on the way he saw vrinda so the fort tht i will go to her and tell her tht it is me HER YUG. They were meant to be for each other and her parents sed she can marry him but i don't know how i will face her because i left here L

When yug was heading towards her another man came to her and she was looking outside day dreaming when:

Kapil: heyyyyaaa my love!

Vrinda: get off me

Kapil: (he turned to her and sed remember your parents are out for 3 months and i can do anything!

Vrinda: don't blackmail me!

Kapil: give me a kiss!

Vrinda: get off me get off me i will shout!

Kapil: remember we will be engaged when your parents come!

Vrinda: how can i get married to yhu when my parents don't even know you!

YUG: GET OFF MY FIANCE!

Kapil and vrinda were shocked

Yug: (wispers to her) follow my lead!

Vrinda: Okay

Yug: how dare you touch my fianc?

Vrinda was crying!

Yug; don't you dare come near her again UNDERSTAND!

Kapil; Fianc (and give vrinda the evils)

Yug: vrinda come on let's get away from this fool!

Vrinda and Yug go hand in hand as real couple and take her to the Conner!

Vrinda: What was all tht about?

Yug: i need to tell you something!

Vrinda; what?

Yug: i no about your YUG and tht is me i went in your room and looked at your photo album and so my picture of us and i am your Yug!

Vrinda: What your my Yug!

Yug: i am your YUG your FUTURE!

Vrinda hugs Yug and prem and heer hear everything and them to hug and they are proud of what they did for their friend J

Vrinda: vrinda and Yug come out holding hands and premeer ask yy they are holding hands and she sed

Vrinda: he is my FIANCE

Precap:

Kapil plz don't kill me I am really sorry

Prem and Her are the ones yy Yuvi are united and tehe story will get more interesting soon and I have put premeer in it cuz i luv their couple also they ae soo romantic soo all those who don't like them i am sorriiiiii!

I hope yhu liked it i think it is kinda short like as i have read all of yours so i see how long yours are and mine are nothing compared to yhur FF thanx yhu 4 reading my ff i hope you like it lol

Plzzzzz comment thnxz i will update soon inshallah!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great hun.keep updating.and i liked u brought many popular couple like prem heer jai bani yug vrinda.loll.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow... i love it... really interesting... wonder what Kapil will do to vrinda...
btw is Kapil... tha Kapil form RKAB? (yudishtrir)
plz update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadaf.12

wow... i love it... really interesting... wonder what Kapil will do to vrinda...

btw is Kapil... tha Kapil form RKAB? (yudishtrir)
plz update soon!!

Yea Kapil Is From RKAB
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhh..dats very nice n interestin..
dont know wat kapil will do..really wanna do read more...
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww..It is so roamantic..Pls update soon=]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's soooooo gud!!!
Hun plz update real quick and soon.
Me want to read more and wanna know what happens next!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys i have updated and its sooooo romantic plz comment and tell me!
if it wasnt for MIzMagick i wouldnt update soo plz say tnxz lol
luv yhu amira aka MizMagick Thanxz yhur the bestest friend i can ever have lol :)👏

Part 3

Yug: All the couples on the dance for plz

Prem: heer you want to dance (for the ones who do watch kis desh prem and heer do the same dance as they did on Heer birthday. Jus Incase Yhu dont no her is the link plzzz watch it http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pqWw0TNcdVc

Heer: my pleasure (she blushed)

Yug got down on his KNEES!

Yug: Want to dance

Vrinda was a about to run away and he got her by the hand and sun her and she fell in his arms and they stared at each other and they got up and they begun to dance

Prem: heer you look really beautiful todayJ

Heer: you don't look bad today either! You look handsome (and she blushed)

Yug: so when are we planning to get married?

Vrinda: you still hav to wait for 3 months till you get me!

Yug: oh yy don't torture me i want to spend every second with you

Vrinda: yug

Yug: vrinda

And vrinda hugged him

Prem: so i can't wait

Heer: i can't either jus 1 week left

Prem: i can't live without you for a minute how am i going to live without you for a week?

Heer: you can learn!

Prem: *sigh* now i can't even see you at collage

Heer: i no prem

Prem hugged heer

After seeing both couples hug Kapil got a glass and smashed it and his hand was bleeding and he left

PARTY FINISHED

Yug: bye i am going to miss you a lot i mean it and oh yea i love you!

Vrinda: i love you to

Prem: i love you heer i don't know how i am going to live without you for a week!

Heer: perm it's only a week

Prem: i love you!

Heer: i love you to!

Prem: Yug let's get a move on

Yug: sure prem

And they both hugged their fiancs and were about to leave

Heer: vrinda i am going to okay

Vrinda jus remembered about Kapil and said why not all of you lot stay

Prem: what i good idea (he looked at heer and smiled and she blushed)

Yug: yea your rite prem lets stay!

Heer: let's watch a movie!

Yug: what a brilliant idea!

Prem: Let's watch Ghajni

Both girls looked at each other and prem and yug smiled the girls looked scared! ( you no yy prem and yug smiled ininnh its a bit obvious)

Girls: ermm okay

Yug: yea

Prem: couples sit together (looked at heer)

Yug; yea

In between heer felt really scared so she squeezed prem and prem looked and held her hand and yug did the same except instead of watching the movie the both couple's just stared in to each other's eyes and then watched the movie.

Heer fell asleep on prem's shoulder and she was still holding his arm and his hand and so did vrinda a do the same to yug and the film finished.

Prem: heer's asleep

Vrinda: vrinda is also.

Prem fort to himself oh she looks soo cute

Prem: i think we should pick them up and take them to our room. (Note: they all stayed in the same room.)

So prem picked up heer and yug picked up vrinda, heer ha heer on her face soo prem put it behind her ear and vrinda was hold tight and yug kissed her cheek

They all went to sleep.

Kapil: you lied to me i am going to kill you he took a knife out and was about to stab her)

Vrinda: no i am sorry Kapil don't kill me

Vrinda screamed everyone woke up.

Yug: vrinda what's wrong

Vrinda could not breath properly

Yug hugged her

Vrinda: Kapil

Yug: don't worry you just had a nightmare its okay

As vrinda was sleeping with heer, she went and sat next to prem and yug sat next to vrinda.

PRECAP:

VRINDA:MUM I WANT TO GET MARRIED

Radikha: of course beta

Vrinda: the boy is yug

Yug: mum! (He sed in his mind)

Bani: yug yhu here (she fort)

Vrinda: this is my friend she has come for your yhur rista

Heer: auntie!

Radikha: heer beta how's prem

Heer: he is there!

i no it wasnt perfect but it was good wasnt it
plzzzzzzz comment and tell me how it was.......
plzzz press the like button
i might update tommorrow
Edited by MissSweetyPie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww... such a cute n romantic part... i loved it...plz update soon

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