Ek Duje Ke Liye:-Part:-1 update on pg-4 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

i love the character sketche i think i like Yugs side more cos it has Sujal and Kashish love them to bits and Preet as well and of course Yug 😳😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
wow...wat a character sketch yaar...superb!!!
loved it..
loved all the characters..
plzzzz update soon...😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
i saw the promo hun, and i love it and ur charachter sketch.
so far so great. looking forward to the FF
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Guys here i m with 1st part of "Ek Duje Ke Liye"....I m nt good writer but i tried my best so plz forgive me if i made any mistake.

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Part:-1

Scene starts from "Raichand Mansion":- (Note: Dadabeer-DB; Babasa-VA)


"Raichand Mansion"

In Kishangang:-

A man is standing in a big drawing room n shouting "Babuji","Radhika","Pratham" kaha ho jaldi aao aap log.Sab aate hai n DB said,"Kya baat hai "Kushal" kyu chilla raha hai bachchon ki tarah".

Kushal:- I m very happy Babuji….Avi Anurag ka phone aaya tha London se woh log kal subah India aa rahe hai hamesha k liye.Pichle 10yrs se main is din ka intzar kr raha tha n ye bolte hi uski aankho me anshu aa jate hai.

Pratham:-Dad aap ro rahe hai aaj to aapke liye sabse khushi ka din hai n I promise you dad k ye din mai aapke n Anu Uncle k liye hamesha k liye yaadgar bana dunga.

Radhika about to say smthng then she notice that DB ki aankho me anshu hai to woh unse bolti hai k "Babuji aap kya ab tak Babasa se naraz hai".

DB:- Nhi bahu yeh to khushi k anshu hai,itne saalon baad dono pariwar ek saath honge,ab to bas kal k suraj ka intazar hai jo mere dost ko le kar aayega".

Kushal:- Pratham beta ek kam kar tu avi Pratapgadh ja aur waha Babasa ke makan ki safai karade aur haan Teji ko v saath le lena.

Pratham:- Thik hai Dad par Bachcha ke school se aane ka waqt ho gaya hai.

Radhika:- Lado ko mai le aaungi tu ja aur jaldi se ye kam khatam kara aur v bahut se kam baki hai beta.

Pratham:- Thik hai Mom pr ye Teji kaha hai apne room me v nhi tha.

A boy enter in room n sing "2mne pukara aur hum chale aaye,Jaan hatheli pr le aaye re" Mai yeha hu bhaiya n apni arms open kar ghutno pr baith jata hai n ek pyari smile krta hai. Pratham uske ear pakar kr use khara karta hai n Teji chilata hai "MAaaa".

Pratham:- Kaha tha subah se mai kabse tujhe dundh raha tha.

Teji:- Arey bhaiya aap bhul gaye na,aap ne hi to keha tha ke office ja kar Delhi wali project file Mr.Punj se sign kara lu wahi kara kar aa raha hu,ye lo.

Pratham file leta hai n check karta hai phir Teji ko dekhta hai pr woh uski taraf nhi dekhta, Pratham smile krta hai aur sochta hai naraz ho gaya koi baat nhi do min me mana lunga n apna dono ear pakar kar uske samne khara ho jata hai.

Pratham:- Sorry yaar maaf karde.

Par Teji use dhekhe bina dusri taraf mur jata hai to Pratham upset ho jata hai n use apni taraf turn karta hai n uski aankhon me aanson aa jate hai n Teji ye dekh kar use hug kar leta hai.

Teji:- Bhaiya mai to mazak kar raha tha mai kavi aapse naraz ho sakta hu kya,sirf aaphi hai jo mujhe samajhte hai…..I m sorry bhaiya.

Pratham:-Oye nautanki bas kar dekh Mom ko v rula diya na.Ab ye sab chor aur taiyar ho ja hume Pratapgadh jana hai,mai gari me tera wait kar raha hu.

They both leave for Pratapgadh n at home Kushal & Radhika are planning abt tomorrow's party.They are arguing on smthng suddenly they listen a voice,stop fighting n shout 2gather "LADO".Both turn n saw a cute n beautiful girl n said…. "VRINDA".


Part:-2 precap :-

Entry of Vrinda⭐️ and Friends:-

😊😃😆😉😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
aww dat was nice hun.
i soo glad the dadus are not enemies in this. im sick of seeing dat.
vrindas fammily is nice, teji doesnt seem like too much of a prankster, and i like that also.
so va's family is coming, and then the romance will start. i cant wait.
great first part hun, i look forward to the next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: shab_rules

aww dat was nice hun.

i soo glad the dadus are not enemies in this. im sick of seeing dat.
vrindas fammily is nice, teji doesnt seem like too much of a prankster, and i like that also.
so va's family is coming, and then the romance will start. i cant wait.
great first part hun, i look forward to the next.



Thnx hun i'll update next part soon....!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

That was a really good part, I was meant to comment earlier but got distracted!

I loved the introductions, I can't wait for Vrinda's entry and can't wait for Yug's family to arrive!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
gr8 update hun it was really nice to and cant wait to see how Vrinda is in your FF so do update soon and like shab said its really good to see that the dadus are not enemies cant wait to see how you bring about YuVi love story so eagerly waiting for you to update 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Only 2-3 replies.....i think no body like my FF then y i post it....I m leaving it...sorry dear. 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
wow...wat an AMAZIN start...👏
loved alllll the characters soooo much 😳😳
teji's entry was superb..i cud totally imagine that...😛
im soooooo excited now...vrinda's entry n yug's family is also coming...😛
i hope we will get to c alot of cute n romantic scenes 😉
plzzzzzzzzz yaar update sooon...i really cant wait to read next part..😛

Edited by NZ_rockx - 15 years ago

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