FF: Aadat [Part 5 pg 6]

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skstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

awwww its gooood, i am glad u didnt make them vrindas kids hehehe n its cute to see teji being vrindas brother...lookin forward to where its headed

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Suga.Point

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

I love the way you write Rajvot!! Love the way you write the descriptions of emotions!! And Teji is so awesome in your FF!!! The brother-sister relationship is so cute!! And when you said that Teji was Vrinda's mother, father and brother was really emotional like Shab said and really gotta agree with you Shab on that one that is does describe how much the kids are so neglected from their parents! And can't wait for Yug!!! When will he come?!?! LOL!!

Please update soon!!! You left us without an update for so long!!

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Priyanka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

first of all, thankss forr finally updatingg ravjot & thankss forr makingg it soo awesomee, it wass soo nicee to readd about teji and vrinda in their childhood, they seeem soo adorablee!

teji's character likee most people havee commented, iss soo wonderful andd hee seems like thee perfect brother! (wishh my brother was likee himm😆)

it wass really awesomee and im glad you finally updatedd, im goingg too have too nag you moree often noww😛

well great work ravjot, pleasee doo update soon, it wass soo much fun too bee surprisedd at thee family becausee i thought it wass going to be a rb/vri marriage, it turnedd out too bee soo much better with a glimpse of vrinda and teji as such an adorable bro/sis jodi...

waitingg patiently (for now) for thee next updatee..

best wishess x. priyanka

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SweRav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

thanks thanks thanks so much for the update Ravjot! and I am so happy that couple are not rajbeer and vrinda! Instead you have shown us such a wonderful brother-sister relationship between teji and vrinda! I love it so much! Please update soon! such an emotional and heart-touching update! I loved it!

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Lesca

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

😭😭that was juss too beautiful....plz continue😳

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mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

🤣 im excited for part 4 (obvious reasons) 🤣 and LOL i was doing my job *glares*

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Great part, so sweet the brother and sister relationship totally loved it!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Cont soon!

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Ravjot

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Thanks everyone who commented. Really appreciate it😳 Here's the next part. Enjoy =)

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Part 3

She sees Kuldeep sitting on that chair holding the baby boy and remembers when Kuldeep used to carry her around and tickle her. Over the years as her parents relationship got worse, Kuldeep started to shower her with affection less and less while her mother would take out her frustration on them, though she did not mean to. Even though Vrinda was used to not getting attention, she could not help but feel a bit hurt. She shrugged off the feeling. Vrinda didn't want to spend her life thinking about all this and wanted to move forward. Plus she had Teji bhaiya and that meant the world to her.

He was the one who gave her hope that her life wouldn't turn out like her parents and that there was someone out there for her. She smiled at the thought of her hone wali bhabhi coming to life with them. Her brother was in love and was to be getting married soon. Thinking about it made her happy as she had never seen her brother this happy before. Vrinda thought it was amazing that he had found someone to spend the rest of his life with happily and would escape the fate that their parents had through an arranged marriage. Ever since she became aware of her parents' failed marriage, she started to despise the idea of it and believe it made the two people unhappy. Vrinda thought that loved marriage would a better option because you get to chose who you marry and if you already loved them, that love would last.

~6 Years Later~

"Leave me alone!" he yelled

"Don't walk away from me when I'm talking to you Teji."

"I don't have to time to hear all this."

"Why? What's wrong with what I said? I just asked you one question and you go ballistic"

"You want me to move to another city and leave my job and you're saying there's nothing wrong with that Freida?"

"I never said to leave your job. I said to get a transfer."

"Freida it would take me an hour longer to get to work. There's no way I can manage that" he tries to explain calmly, even though he knew that Freida would not understand.

"So? I just want a small house for us and our kids to live in. Is that too much to ask?"

"Yes it is!" he snaps.

"This is the first time I'm asking you for something and you say no? Do you even care about my feelings? Why did you even marry me Teji?"

"That was a mistake!" he yells before leaving the room.

As Teji walks out, he doesn't see Vrinda standing near the door with tears in her eyes. The person that she cared about the most was also miserable. She had thought that after marriage he'd be happy because he would be with the one he loves. And it indeed had worked out but over the years the love started to fade. Nothing is permanent, Vrinda realised. Not even love. Marriage in itself is a mistake, be it arranged or love.

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

I really enjoyed your update. The words you use to explain the situation and what the characters are feeling are just perfect. I feel really bad for Teji, though. I was hoping the kids would find the happiness that their parents lacked in their marriage. Apparently, history repeats itself.
I hope we get to see Yug soon...maybe in the next update?