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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

LOL you have got me stumped with what to put next

Yug think to himself 'oh no what am i going to do how i am i goin to get rid of her! I just hope she doesn't start talking to Vrinda'

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Priyanka

@Mana26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

Next thingg wee see iss Vrinda returning & she has two coca cola 's in her handd, shee has a big baby toothed grin until she sees Bharti standing next to YUG, her expression changes into a moree speculatingg onee andd all in a matter of seconds YUG sees Bharti rushing over too vrinda andd...

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shabana

@shab_rules

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

hahahahahahahahahahaha, sorry i cant think of anything to add, but the thought of bharti in a mental asylum just makes me laugh, oh my, my eyes are filled with tears of happiness !!!

and yeah guys, i agree with nikita, its only been like a day or so, they cant be this much in love ALAREADY??? ita moving way too fast, even for a story.

p.s, sorry for this.

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shabana

@shab_rules

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#144

ok so we have discussed it, and because it has moved extremely fast, we have to back track now.

so guys, i know you are all CRAVING YUVI ROMANCE, but make it slow, and subtle ok, no rushing. no one is after us, and in this story yuvi will be together, so no need to move it this fast. other wise by the next page yuvi will have had their kids.

and we dont have rb or bharti in this story, they are banned from being in it, so plz dont bring them in, this is a happy story after all.

so im writing the next part, and do remember not to make your posts too long. keep going guys, and HAVE FUN !!!!!!

yug :go away, leave us alone

neel: yug , wot do you mean we? wake up yug !!!

yug openes his eyes to realises it was all but a dream.

Edited by shab83 - 16 years ago

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skstar

@skstar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

neel: yug i have been waking u up for more than an hour well two now

yug: OMG IT WAS A DREAM, the running, pool, you on tree, our party, teji, your hot date and some mental bharti...what happened to me? (scenes are flashing in his mind)

neel: OYE yug yaaar last night you and I were talkin about vrinda, than i mentioned about this girl i have a crush on...you mentioned this dance party in USA and while all this bhaskar bharti was on tv......oh and we got drunk😳

Edited by skstar - 16 years ago

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

skstar your response has me in splits of laughter!

Shabs brilliant dream idea, nice way to slow it all down!

Yug: no wonder my head is pounding

Neel: Good thing i have remdy for it

Yug: What?

Neel: Get out of bed, shower and then we are going out to get drunk again

Yug: WHAT! Ouch too loud

Neel: Ok well we are going out for breakfast, i feel like a greasy, fat english breakfast, the eggs, the bacon, the beans and chips and since the first two items aren't going to be cooked in this house, can you get a move on!!

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skstar

@skstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

yug: neel wait so there is a girl in this house name vrinda right?

neel: yes there is remember she walked in to our room while we were laying down and after she left you went to sleep woke up later only to get drunk with me so technically u never left this room

yug: wow ive been jet laggin and drinking at the same time--pagal ho gaya yaaar- i am so confused and lost that i really need to get out okay yaar lets go do breakfeast- hot cold any breakfeats will work- need my memory in peace

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Neel leaves Yug's room to bump into Vrinda

Neel and Vrinda: Sorry

Neel: Vrinda what are you doing today?

Vrinda: Nothing

Neel: Want to come with me and Yug for breakfast??

Vrinda: Ummm... yeah ok!

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skstar

@skstar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#149

mamasa yugs mom comes and sees vrinda....

mamasa: vrinda actually you cant go you see come with me i need to talk to you

neel: okay its fine vrinda we'll go out next time

vrinda goes in the room with mamasa.....mamasa tells her that vrindas mom wants us to introduce her to some family and they are coming to see her today.

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 16 years ago

#150

Vrinda: KYA!!! Mamasa: Your mother wants you to meet this family and they are coming today Vrinda: I heard you the first time but I can't believe mom, i have just completed my studies and she already wants me married off, sorry aunty but do you mind me using ur phone

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