FF:HOW YUVI UNITE prt 62 updated on pg44 30/11/09 - Page 27

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Posted: 16 years ago
crap yaar why wasnt RB being back enough i wont be able to take another Yug Bharti cos i'm just too tired of them in the show and the last bit i think Bharti called Yugs family didnt she????
coming to your writing yaar you are really good your writing is excellent hun very well done👏👏👏
please hun unite yuvi soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Woww Shabs Tht Is Awesome Yaar
EXCELLENT Yaar Plzzz Update ASAP
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh goddd why did Yug forgive Bharti so quick or i mean go back to her...why do u have to torture usssssssssss n he even held her hand n wanted to sleep with her that is too grosssssssss🤢


the old man and his words of wisdom were great but i guess whatever he said made him go back to bharti which i didnt like hehehehe but wow i loved the old man and what he said i need one of those too....givin me advice and all😊

over all great update n enjoyed reading it...cant wait for the next and i am freakin confused about bharti and who she called? WHO DID SHE CALL? well hmm whatever it is i hope she becomes evil n yug kicks her out of his house LOL.....🤣😆 n divorces herrrrrrrrrr argh.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: NZ_rockx

OMG is Yug really gonna except Bharti???? 😲 😕
Oh no!!!

well....ummm.....well, he is gona kinda accept her, as in, he will TRY to make their marriage work. as for him loving her.....NEVER GONNA HAPPEN !
but great update yaar..im not sugar coating it 😉...lol..but seriously u described everything so perfectly 👏..the pain that yug was feeling 😭.. and i liked the talk between old man and yug..it was sooo nice n touching..
great job and plzzzz update soon 😃

thnx for ur honest opinion. im happy you forund what the old man said touching. actually there is a sceret about the old man. i had hoped that maybe you guys would have figured it out. i did leave plenty of clues in the update.
and yes i will be updating soon. do keep reading. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: urmee

first i've to tell what is this shab?u updated after such a long time ,then couldn't it be a lil more?

ok,now come to the story.at the first few lines i was totaly lost in yug.i was feeling madly how lonely he is.it was hurting me and i was feeling sooooooooooooooo sad for him that at that moment i just wished i could run to him and hug him.and say him,"don't be that sad.don't feel urself that alone".loll.actualy it was my usual weakness for yug. ❤️
by the way i read the lectures of that old man very carefully and feit that in my heart.those words effected me so much .especialy these lines touched my heart -" I have seen many people try and try and try and fail miserably. And then one day suddenly their luck will change. ALL BY ITSELF when the time is right, you will see, it changes all by itself. !" i think these word will help me also in my personal life.for that u deserve a big big thanx from me.⭐️
u made a silent cliff-hanger.when i finished the whole update i was just,whatt?what she told in the last line? and then i read the last line again and then understood.loll
oh shab,pls............... update soon.u r one of the most late FF writer.loll😆

oh i knew you would complain. i know im extremely late, and i also felt it was a bit short, so i cud totaly imagine you saying dat 😆. but i did already apologise in advance.
after the previous "achey breaky" update, i tried really hard not to make this one sad. and i honestly thought i has suceeded until i read ur coment. so sorry for that. but yes, untill yuvi dont unite, i guess there will be some sadness wont there !
and awwwwwww, thats soooo sweet. the truth is, that i use to think the way yug did. that a person can try really hard, and achive ANYTHING, and change their luck. but certain things have made me see differently. and now i also belive that yes offcourse you shud try, coz u cannot succeed without trying, but...if still you dont suceed after giving it your best, then MAYBE IT JUST ISNT THE RIGHT TIME ! and i also belive we get the bad to appreciate the good in life.
im glad those "old mans" words will help you personally too. THANK YOU, for understanding !
and i silent cliffahanger..LOL. u didnt tell me what you understand tho, what is your take on bhartis phonecall ?
yes yes, i will be updating soon. and dont i know it. that i am one of the world slowest FF updaters. but surely im not as late as some of the other FF writers on this forum ?? am i ?? 😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: isranawaz

tnx for the update... whats this shab is it yuvi unites or yug n bharti unites...? lolz...

😆, i was exepecting some one to say this. i know it ist not gonna be easy. but trust me guys. whatever happens, this story is about YUVI !!!!!
not yug and bharti, and rb and vrinda. for a few updates it may seem like that, but if you feel unsure, just go back and read the title of the story for reasurance ok 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sadaf.12

wow... really wise words in this part!
thank youuuu hun
i loved it!
BUT OMG IS YUG GONNA ACCEPT BHARTI JUS LYK DAT!!!???
ummm, maybe
but i bet he will still love Vrinda!
bingo !
'But when Yug would come to know about her phone call, would he also be so forgiving ?'
OMG... i jus got this scary thought!!! what if Bharti called Vrinda n said RB was alive jus to get her to leave whereas in real lyf RB is still dead!!!
LOL,😆😆😆, i cant tell you, how you are way off from the mark hun. you couldnt be any further from the truth. think again hun, THINK !!! i was positive i had made it really obvious. hint- its not as exiting as you think it is.
omg is bharti a negative character now..!!!!????
umm will have to wait and see for that im afraid, im still deciding.
omg hun... i cant take it anymore... i realy wanna know... plz update soon!
yes i will update soooooooooooooon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nikita_88

*reserved*

*unresevred* thnx for unreserving, but 😆 i didnt even know you had reserved, ive been away all day long. im glad you comented b4 i came inline tho. i love redaing ur coments
Hey Shabs
You welcome 😛! 😆😆Another 16 day wait thank god I got you to update 😆
Ok so the old man loved him, hehehe but was a dream or did he exist kind of reminds me of a book I read but the person was dead anyways going off topic back to what you wrote, about luck was it another lecture 😆😆 but despite that I see it as a major turning point in the story cause of its after effects.
umm yes, well i suppose you cud say it was a sort of lecture 😆. but the thing is, yug needed to to hear something that would help him take his next step. hes all alone, and he has no ones shoulder to lean on. so a "farishta" of sorts did come and help him out.
i was hoping that more people would have asked about this "old man", but ur the only one hun. i guess you have an eye for spotting things others dont (thats why ur soo good at spotting the bloopers in the show😆 ), and actually what you sed is not far off. i gave plenty of clues in the update, as to who this old man was, shame no one managed to recognise him 😕.

Bharti 😡😡OMG I can't believe it was her with the phone call so now I am confused is RB alive or not cause you said you have to put up with RB and Bharti from now on but if Bharti made the call is he alive?

vrinda recieved a call from someone who she calls rb, and bharti also made a call to someone. but that doesnt neceaserily mean that both calls were conected does it ! a lot of you guys are adding 2 and 2 and coming up with 5. trust me, when you will find out, you will say "ooohhhhh, so thats what it was" and i bet you will think its lame too. but even though it may be lame, im not spoling the surprise. if you STILL havent guessed it, then you will just have to read to find out (umm you actually you have to read even if you have figured it out, DONT STOP READING 😆 )
Yug why is he so sweet why does he have to become a good husband? I know he is a nice guy but why????
because yaar, thats what yuggie is. he is the GOOD GUY, the decent guy, the sweet guy. hes gotta live upto his reputation hun.
Great parts! thank you 😳
Cont soon and clear my confusion and don't leave us waiting too long or I am going to have to remind you all over again! 😳😳😆

yes yes, i will cont soon. i promise !
unfortunatly i dont think the old man will be making an appearance again. so we wont be able to discuss him again.
BUT, before i update, you have to tell me the correct answer, about the identity of the "old man"
no answer, no update, (i was soo sure you guys would get it )
Edited by shab_rules - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MizMagick

wow!!! This is just like soooo amazing!"!!

Your a gud writer Shabs even BETTER THAN I AM!!! lol
kEEP UP THE GUD WORK AND U'LL BE HEADING HIGH!!!

thankyou hunny, that is very kind of you to say that. i look forward to reading urs too. and plz do keep reading.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Binky

crap yaar why wasnt RB being back enough i wont be able to take another Yug Bharti cos i'm just too tired of them in the show and the last bit i think Bharti called Yugs family didnt she????

coming to your writing yaar you are really good your writing is excellent hun very well done👏👏👏
please hun unite yuvi soon

im sorry hun. while writing this i was thinking binky is gonna hate this. but i have to do this. and if you manage to stay with my FF you will realise why.
like i sed a the beginging of this FF i want to correct the mistakes of the track in the drama. so i have to sort of follow that track in order to make it better. i want to show, that ekta and her creatives can show this story line, and yet at the same time not destroy yuvis love for each other.
because THEY WILL NEVER FALL OUT OF LOVE !
thankyou for your lovely coment hun, it truely means a lot.
and ummmm, well yuvi will unite, that much is for sure, as to how soon it will be, well theres quite a bit to get thru yet hun. so i cant promise it will be really soon.
but plz bear with me. all i can say is that i hope it will be worthwhile in the end !
Edited by shab_rules - 16 years ago

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