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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Tomiko

Comments!

Me do loves them.😃😆

Binks: Thinking up dialogues for Yug is the hardest thing and I fear I never do justice to his character.😳

I needed a third brother and thought - why not Raj? Lols; I hope there aren't any Raj-inda fans who'll beat me up after reading this.😆

Wake up calls are welcome any time - days fly by without me noticing - old age I guess!😉😆

well I guess I know what you mean about Yugs dialogues cos here everyone knows Yug so well that we would notice if something he said is not him we would know it immediately so I can understand what you have to go thru thinking dialogues for him but hun you have been spot on so far😃😃😃

thank god you made RB Yugs brother and I just hope you made him a good bro not those evil type ones

hey why did you edit the last part😕😕😕 and yaar your note is missing too so please update soon and put us out of this misery

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Nabila

@Tomiko

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

BLOOPER ALERT!

Oklie...so the reason why I removed the last part of the previous chapter was because I realised I'd made an error. My muse usually kicks in at night when I'm trying to sleep and so I make notes in a little book before transferring them to my computer when I have time. Shoooo, I'm blaming the blooper on the fact that I was half asleep when I wrote it.😳😆

It's being revised and will be up with Chapt IX along with the back story of what happened 3 years ago.😃

Edited by Tomiko - 16 years ago

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

wow gr8 so finaly we will get to know about the past 😃

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Vienna

@Vienna

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

wow! last part updated.. n here i was expecting yuvi marriage😆 plz update soon.. really need to know abt past..

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Suga.Point

@Suga.Point

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

LOL! OK! Well hun when are you going to update?!?! u keep on dissapearing after wonderful updates!! please update soon!

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Nabila

@Tomiko

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Hey Everyone!😛

Okie, so I've got most of the next part drawn up and it'll be up by Friday.

But, I was thinking of a few changes and wanted to ask your guys opinion.

Should I do a sort of flashback thingy and in the next two or three parts go over the WHOLE back story of what happened three years ago?

OR, should I just have the basic details in a conversation and move on to the next part of the story?

Let me know ASAP so I can start planning it.😃

Hugs to all those who commented🤗......me loves you all but to lazy to reply to all comments!😳

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

You have to have a flash back just them talkimng about it isnt enough cos i've been waiting to find out what happened so what happened to them has to be there😃😃 hope this helps

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shabana

@shab_rules

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

hunny i think you should do a little of both. have some flash backs, and keep the basic details in the conversation asel. coz if its just the conversation, it will be too shorty. and if your gonna show the thing in 3 parts it will be too long.

any way thats my idea, rest is upto you, but youre a wicked writer, so im sure whatever you do it will be brilliant !