FF: Sarak Ke Us Par - Chapter 5 - - Page 5 [21/04] - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hi...you have a new reader....i love the start..and i love the vrinda here...how she is so carefree... and for the title i have a suggestion...SARAK KE US PAR....
Edited by miss_hyper - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

^^Aww thanks guys!! I was so tired of seeing Vrinda as this uptight girl who kept saying no to Yug at the start....I always like it when the girl bugs the hell out of the guy rather than the other way round.😆

And I think I'll go with Sarak Ke Us Par.
Thanks for the lubbly name.😳 Chapter 2 up in the next two minutes!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This one's for K_luv; small part but hope it makes your wait for Monday that little more bearable.😃

And for hyper_dreams; for having a wonderful ID name and giving me the title I was looking for.😳
Chapter 2
Yug came to a screeching halt and cursed in a way that he was sure Masa would have disapproved of. The sharp thud against the rear of his beloved bike hadn't sounded promising and it was with trepidation that he rose and glanced at the splatter of mud that was currently oozing towards his end wheel. But under it he could clearly make out a dent. Though small, it was noticeable and he realised that someone, the same person who had been strolling mindlessly in the middle of the road, had probably graced him with a handful of muck, and a significantly sized stone.
Face contorting in anger, he pushed overgrown locks out of his eyes and scanned the dusty road for the culprit; coming face to face with a young girl whose murderous expression matched his own.
"Agar bike chalaani nahi athi tho sarak par kya kar rahe ho!"
Growing annoyed by the second, he stalked towards her and grasped her arm, looming over her and using his height to intimidate the chit of the girl standing before him. Surprisingly, she squared her shoulders and instead of backing away [like any sane person would have done], she gave him a mocking smile and stomped heavily on his foot.
Yug yelped in surprise and jumped backwards, only for her to grasp his shoulders and knee him deftly in the stomach.
"Agli bhar hath lagaya tho chappal se maroonghi. Samje thum?"
He grit his teeth in reply and tried to remember why exactly his Masa had warned him never to hit a girl. At that moment he couldn't think of a singe sane reason. Suddenly there was a gasp and Yug, for the first time, noticed another girl standing slightly behind the Jhansi Ki Rani. She was taller than her companion by maybe an inch, but more slender with round eyes that flitted between him and his attacker in worry.
"Vrinda, pagal hogayi hai kya!"
"Thu kuch math bhol. Is bathameez ko sabak sikhana hi hoga…sarak par tho aisa chaltha hai jaise iski baap ki hai."
Yug snapped back to attention and forced himself not to strangle her pretty little neck as he clenched his jaw.
"Dekho, ghalthi thumhari hai. Ek tho binah dekhe mere bike ke samne agayhi. Aur upar se bina waja mar ne lagaye. Agar thum larki nahi hothi tho…"
"Tho kya huh?"
She took a purposeful step forward, hands perched on her hips as she tilted up her chin and stared defiantly at him. She had grey eyes, which should have been dull but instead sparked at him, narrowing slightly as she opened her mouth, probably to threaten him again.
Just like that, Yug lost patience. He had been travelling for the better part of the last three days and the last thing he wanted was to stand here taking punches from someone who was too small to be this hugely irritating. And so, before the Jhans – Vrinda, he mentally corrected himself – could utter more than a strangled cry, he hauled her on to his shoulders and brushed past the other girl [the nicer one, as Yug had already summarised].
Vrinda shrieked in his ear and continued to rain punches down his back. Her legs flailed wildly in front of him and Yug caught a knee before it could knock him in the chest.
"Agar thumne mujhe abhi neeche nahi uthara tho…"
Yug smiled and complied, dropping Vrinda in the filthiest puddle of mud that he could find. There was, he thought, some justice in watching her muddy form staring at him in open-mouthed shock.
"Agli bhar mujh phar hath uthaya tho isi thara thujhe uthar-oon gha. Samjhi?"
And he got on his bike and left before she could collect her bearings and do little more than splutter in the mud.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww his bike got a dent? I can totally imagine Yug looking that angry and he looks good too *goes into lala land*😍

Vrinda threw a stone at it? I love her character in this. Stomping on his foot and not being intimidated😆 She's funny.Omg she kneed him too?😲 I take that back. She has anger issues. Bechara Yug. Luckily he didn't hit her back and like a good boy, remember that his mom told him never to hit a girl. He threw her in mud?🤣 I love this relationship of theirs, starting from hate and then developing into love. It'll be fun to see them meet each other again and have them fall for each other.
Can't wait to read the next update. Continue soon😊
Edited by ravioli_11 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
woooow a superub chapter nibbles... u r such a fantastic writer 👏 boht maza aya parh k...nd i luved vrinda much more in ur chapter she is so carefree and funny... and thanx God Yug ne vrinda ko kuch tou ghussy mein kaha... well luved ur concept...waiting 4 ur next chapter my dear... all the best 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
hey i am irika and i started to read your ff and its amazind please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi nibbles.....oh thanx for dedicating the chapter for me...and btw...my names miss_hyper....real name sonia..😳...so glad u used my suggestion.....lovely update....cnt believe vrinda kicked and he threw her in the mud...interesting....lets see hw this love story starts...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanku so much for dedicated part of it 4 me! cho sweet of u! wen will u b ur nxt update??? quickly plz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey everyone!

I'm sorry I haven't been here....I have the whole next part [plus YuVi's next meeting] sketched out but haven't managed to put it down because college is going crazy.😕😆
Will do my best to bring up the next part as soon as I can, as long as you guys want to read.😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
good update!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz continue!!😊

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