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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi guys I am not a good writer but I am attempting my first OS for the title mentioned . Hope you all like it and if not so please mention it in remarks.

It has been years and Ladnu is the same but TH is not. Once the house is not the same. Once where girls were denied for education now a girl of that house is a first lady doctor of ladnu Suman has completed her MBBS and now actively involved in Mobile bike ambulance service of his brother . Shiv is also very smart and want to become a Pilot and MBA service is not a small service anymore now it has a fleet of 50-60 bike ambulance and is operated in state level. Maasa is actively involved in religious work and every festival in ladnu is celebrated in grand manner and Aditya and Massisa are taking care of K&U and K&U which is always a brand name share it's profits with MBA service and government is also supporting them in their good deeds. Aditya is thankful for this second chance which was given to him by Kanak and Uma a person to whom everybody hated now it's loved by every one and found his love in life as well which is Tiara who is also doctor and actively involved in MBA service. And she also has her share of experience from this house where she has seen siblings love, bonding of Aditya and Kanum and Transformation of Massisa once a wicked and selfish women now really loving and caring towards the house and really second chance should be given to everyone if not than no dacoit will become a Valmiki ever . Everyone in the house is seems to be happy except Uma.

Will life will give him a second chance ?

Guy's please please do comment to continue or not

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please do continue with yr os lovelycolour👍🏼 👏 n why Uma is not happy❓❓
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Ritchie I will surely continue with the next part. Hope you all like this.
Chapter 1

The preparation of Shivratri were on full swing and every one was enthusiastic about it both the families Toshiwal haveli was decorated with flowers and it was the time for double celebration as apart from festival it was Aditya's marriage as well. Aditya and Tiara got engaged 6 months before and it was there decision that they will get married in the same Umashankar Temple in which Kanum first marriage happened but Aditya clearly mentioned that he will try to be good husband but don't expect to be like his Dhoti bro and Tiara accepted saying that she will not expect him to be like Uma as she is not Kanak and the Jodi of Kanum will not be taken place by anyone. Aditya also requested Maasa that Uma should attend this marriage or else marriage will not happen. At first Maasa hesitated but Massisa made sure he will do that and said for how long he will not face the truth he will have to face it. Uma has not came out of his room from last 6 months every body thought that he will come out by his own but now it's enough so Massisa decided that she will go to his room and make him to come back to his life.

Massisa knocked to room but Uma didn't open it so Massisa called Bhabho. Everyone in Rathi family was happy either saras vansh and purab were taking care of KMB which has 25 different shops and 2 in Jodhpur and around 150 people working for them. Saras has still not forgetted that Kanak was the one who has taught her to make sweets in TH and same she has taught to her workers here but the taste cannot be replaced. Vansh was also preparing for Shivratri festival and Aditya marriage as he is taking care of sweets in occasion and was double checking everything. Ved reminded him that it's a part of family so stop taking care and get ready or otherwise sweets will be sent but he will be here. Payal and ved are ready and by next 10 min Vansh also got ready. When phone rang Bhabho picked up and was tensed with it. She told vedansh that she is going now they can follow later on. Vansh dropped her to TH.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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We want chapter2 👏 yeah..chapter2 🤗.so don't make us wait for long 🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super lovely. Written nicely. Pl continue dear. Were you writing before?
I'm interested to know why uma is sad and what happened to kanak?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting opening Lovely!! Thank you for bringing glimpses of TSMSP back... I will definitely read this please continue!! Where are KanUm??? I miss them so much!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's really interesting. Please continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks guys for your comments at first I was hesitated as this is my first writing and I don't want to spoil Kanum with it but now I'm sure it will be good.
Chapter 2

Bhabho entered the TH from last 3 years she has not come to ladnu though sarvansh were regular visitor but not her. Last time she visited when Kanak had cleared paramedics study and license for MBA was given to Uma and there was a big celebration in the house. Everyone was invited Tiara chinmay had also came and said that they are also interested in MBA service and Uma was so happy with this and Kanak as well . for the entire evening if light would not be there in TH than also it would be brighten up by there smiles and Aditya hoping here and there sometimes to Tiara and sarvansh and the dance which Kanum did was ultimate as if they have forgotten the whole world. Aditya also commented the say that he didn't know that his Dhoti bro will dance so well. And Uma replied that it has to be good after all he was practicing from last 2 months and Kanak said that it is nothing the best dance will be on that day when he will get married to Tiara. The whole world would see it and that day would be be remembered for Aditya and Tiara but for Kanum this has upset Aditya as no one see Aditya and Tiara in front of Kanum and on that day as well the spotlight would be on them. Everyone laughed and Uma made him understood that the day would be so special for them that they would not mind about the spotlight light only about each other and Aditya said just like both of you.

Today is that day but hundreds of things are going in Aditya's mind and when Bhabho came he greeted her and take her to Uma's room and told her that he has not came out of his room from last 6 months. Bhabho knocked the door and Uma can say no to anyone but not Bhabho so he open the door. The sight of the room was miserable Uma who used to keep his room very clean and tidy has messed it up very badly it was Kanak pictures all around, spider web on the walls no light he has put curtains on the window and mirrors are also broken no one would believe it was Uma's room. And he was in the bad shape weaken like not eaten for last 3-4 days and long beard and moustache like a sage. Bhabho told Massisa to send someone to clean up the room and Aditya to make Uma fresh till then she will arrange a plate for him. After 30 minutes Uma came out of his room. It has-been 6 months when last time family members had saw him so Shiv just ran and hugged him but he was so lifeless that he had not sense anything this has hurt Shiv very much . Suman and Maasa made him sit on the dinning table and Bhabho came out with the plate. He cannot deny any thing from Bhabho so he has eaten his meal . bhabho said whatever has to happen had happened a long time back every one was affected but life has to move on so why he is stuck to past memories they also remember her but it bring happiness to them and she will be sad somewhere seeing you in such a state. To this Uma just replied she will be back.

Massisa hold him tightly and said that she is dead she will not come back and accept this fact like others it has been 3 years and if she has to come back she would had returned . she doesn't want to be rude to him but shy want to make him realize the truth . she continued to say she died in front of you they killed her still you are living in illusion that she will come back why ? Every holy book tells the same thing once the person is dead he lives only in memories but you have to clear all her memories as well. She just went to his room to clear all Kanak stuff which still has a place in Uma's wardrobe but Uma began to plead not to do so and Massisa stopped. Everyone in the house was watching this.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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#Waitingforthenextpart !!! Xxx tense KanUm action just what I yearn for... waiting eagerly to see KanUm reunite!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Made me cry. Lovely Pl don't take much time to next chapter.

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