Kanak Uma ~Night Series~ : Story I

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Hey there all the lovely people!!
It's a Sunday, and you all know what happens on a Sunday. Apologies for not being able to update the other SS. But here is another piece of my insanity which was on popular demand. Starting a kind of Night Series. Please bear me for it's weird and I don't know how to handle such stuff. It's pure imagination.


Night Series I


Uma closed off the last file for the day, he rubbed his eyes and flexed his arms, looking at the watch, he almost jumped up... he was half n hour late than the deadline. He walked out of his office in the house, lights were switched off... warning bells rang in his head, Kanak would be really upset with him. There was no one else home and he was so absorbed in work that he left her alone. He mentally condemned his unconscious insensitivity towards her.
A light glow flickered from their room, maybe she was already asleep, or must be weaving a net for him, to bait him and trap him and then finish him off - he shrugged off the evil anticipation and walked in.
He entered the room, and stood for a while in the doorway, the room was decorated with tea lights and flowers. He was so dead, and his soul refused to move ahead, he mechanically out of habit turned and locked his door...
the flowers on the floor were decorated in form of an arrow, he followed the arrows to the bathroom, the door was a bit ajar, he looked inside, the bathroom was also decorated, but he couldn't see Kanak from his position, thinking she wasn't in there he slid open the door and his gaze fell on the mermaid at the edge of the bathtub... she wore a bathrobe which barely covered her thighs, her hair spilling over her form, basking in the light emitted by the candles her skin glowed.

Kanak sighed lightly as she heard the door open, she had been waiting for him but that account would be settled later, first she had to do as per her plan, to slowly seduce him, make him realize what he had been missing all day... blushing at her thoughts, she facepalmed herself lightly... she continued staring at the book in her hand, for she couldn't read a word anymore.
Uma took in the scene before him and after minutes of silence he broke free from the invisible hold, he walked up to her and sat down besides her, she hadn't turned to face him, he leaned on his elbow to look at her, trying to figure out how bold the shy little vixen had become. Her face was partially hidden by her tresses, his lone finger moved up to it and placed it behind her ear... he sucked in a breath, her face glowed in the light, her eyes downcast on the book, she looked angelic. He knew wasn't reading for her eyes didn't move. He bit back a smile, she looked at him from the corner of eyes and she snapped shut the book.. she had been waiting and waiting and he was enjoying himself. "What are you doing? He asked finger drawing circles on her arm. Her eyes flew up and narrowed at him questioningly. "I am sorry I am late He replied back holding his ear. He looks so cute, Kanak thought to herself... but he had to make up. "Good she tried to get up, her legs had numbed by sitting upright for so long, she stood, her bare legs stumbled and he caught her in his arms... his hands on her ribs and her bare thighs, shivers ran through like currents. "Where do you think you are going? He asked looking at her... "changed my mind she replied snuggling closer to his chest, his heart beat rolled like the drum, she smiled at the affect she had on him. He could only smile at her, he walked to the bathtub and sat in the warm water with her held in his arms... "Uma she gasped with red horror, color crept up on her face and all boldness seeped away from her, mixing in the water. He saw her from the vantage point. He freed her hand from her back and started massaging her feet, she could have forgotten her numb legs but he could never let her suffer. She sat on his laps while he worked magic on her feet, a sense of calm ran through her body, her love for him, him taking care of her, he knew everything be it happiness or pain... he knew her like an open book... she looked at him absorbed, her hands crept around his neck, and other turned his face towards her, she kissed him taking him by surprise. Their limbs entangled, the water making everything more slippery and exciting, the wet kisses the tickling water made their love making session more exotic.


It's never an ending ...



Rocks and chappals are always welcome šŸ¤—

Do let me know how it was. Hit like comment whatever!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written Blue
I love this story and thank you so much for this.

but hopefully we may get mid week update on the other story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome blue
The location added the charm to the scenario
I was expecting when would the bathroom be used properly in our show, love the view.😳
So romantic... totally enjoyed it

Thanks for the sunday treat dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasa.123

Beautifully written Blue

I love this story and thank you so much for this.

but hopefully we may get mid week update on the other story.



Hey there Manasa
Thank you for reading and a short precise comment.
Waise you were amongst the people who actually wanted a series on the night edition... mujhe abhi yaad aya šŸ˜†

That story is stuck somewhere, jinxed to be honest - I can never make time for it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhaana

Awesome blue

The location added the charm to the scenario
I was expecting when would the bathroom be used properly in our show, love the view.😳
So romantic... totally enjoyed it

Thanks for the sunday treat dear



Hey there
Thank you for reading and such a lovely comment.
They have such amazing bathroom but never put to proper use, so that's why had to take the matters in my own hands, I am such a weirdo šŸ˜†
Glad you like the Sunday surprise.

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Wow spell binding story blue. So erotic and passionate 😳.Blue hope we get some scenes like this in BKk track.The way u wrote that bathroom sequence was so fascinating ā˜ŗļø ultimate Touch of this romance is that loving caring massage šŸ˜› so mesmerizing and sensuous romance under water ā˜ŗļøThank u so much for giving us sundae delight
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear Beautifully written Blue ... totally enjoyed it thank youuuā¤ļø
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So eroticso romantic I love this story and thank you so much dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai blue.
It was amazing.
Thank u dear for the wonderful sunday treat.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Wow spell binding story blue. So erotic and passionate 😳.Blue hope we get some scenes like this in BKk track.The way u wrote that bathroom sequence was so fascinating ā˜ŗļøultimate Touch of this romance is that loving caring massage šŸ˜›so mesmerizing and sensuous romance under water ā˜ŗļøThank u so much for giving us sundae delight



Hey there Divya
Thank you for reading and a wonderful comment.
Would love to see some KanUm only moments in Bangkok, on the beach or in hotel room.
Oh indeed the best part was the feet massage, that he didn't forget her predicament in the moment of closeness.
Haha it actually can be called a sundae delight - after all it's supposed to be sweet šŸ˜‰

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