Kanak Uma OS : The Night!! (16+)

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Hey there all the lovely people!!
Me is back with another piece of insanity... everyone was so excited and let down by the not even on the horizon SR of KanUm. So I thought I would make matters worse, and give some kind of narration to it - that's the evil me 😆
Honestly I am a bit skeptic because I don't write this kind of stories, but posting it as I am adat se majboor 😆
A special shout out to Manasa and Asfia for they are my own personal Oliver Twist, always asking for more.



OS : The Night


Kanak looked at the door, he would come any moment and she had to be ready... it had been ages since they met, the love turned into desire that ran through her veins, made her tremble yet she kept focus. She had to hold him, absorb him, love him, annihilate him with passion.

Uma walked in with confidence and grace, yet as his gaze fell on her, his entire existence liquified, she looked ethereal as a bride, the red made her look bold and fierce, she was looking at her hands in her lap, sitting on the bed, amongst the flowers, their bed for suhagraat, their union. How long has he known her, they were married for ages, kissed and rolled over a number of times but today it was different... the room was like a live wire, the electricity was ecstatic. He turned and placed the lock on the door, not that anyone was home but he put his hands to use... he turned around and his eyes fell on her, as she raised her head and their eyes met... he knew he had lost even before the battle had begun. The music came alive at the moment she flicked off her duppata, gone was the cover and the game was on.

She got off the bed in slow seductive manner, her lehnga pulled up revealing her arched feet as it touched the floor, his eyes burning by the display, she got up and turned away revealing her bare back, his breath held at the display, a single hook by flick of finger' his mind made a mental note... she let her hair down, the tresses falling on her back, covering what had been revealed. finger combing them strand by strand pulling them in front she turned and walked up to him in a slow seductive gait. She was a hot mess, her hair loosened yet her borla was in place, her necklace, bangles all demanded personal attention from him. His gaze went to his favorite yet fiercest competitor, her kamar band which hugged her so closely that Uma was jealous of it.
She stopped at arms length in front of him, her eyes never breaking contact, it was a dare... Uma accepted the challenge as his fingers went up to his neck to unbutton his waistcoat, without moving an inch it fell to the floor, he stepped ahead, his fingers reaching for his kurta buttons, one by one with slow determination they were undone, he removed the kurta and took another step, he stood right in front of her. Kanak's courage faltered and she turned away, his hands came up to her shoulders, cupping them as his fingers trailed a path to her nape. His hands at the necklace, she closed her eyes for this was real, her eyes flew open in shock as it wasn't his fingers that had undone the necklace but he opened it with his lips, placing soft kisses on the nape, where the necklace had been seconds before. He inhaled her fragrance as he continued to kiss her neck and trailed to behind her ears. His hands traveled down her arms to her wrist. He captured her wrist, unable to bear it any longer, she turned and pushed him, he moved a step back but his hands captured her wrist in a grip, it was a mistake she realized. He would make her pay, but she wouldn't cower... she raised her eyebrow questioningly, he brought her hand near to his lips and kissed her bangles and removed them one by one, each dropping on the floor like there was no tomorrow. He took in her form, how the blouse barely covered her curves, his gaze traveling further south landed on her kamar Bandh, before he could move his hands, her hands went around his neck pulling him down and she kissed him, he kissed back after a momentary shock, tremors ran through them, the smoldering kiss seared their souls. His hands in her hair pulling her more into him, she broke free, he stared at her questioning while she smiled and his chain was in her hand, the vixen had removed it while kissing.
He held her waist and brought her closer, looking into her eyes, the twinkle of mirth which dissolved into darkened passion. He held her hand behind her and blew softly at her ear, and biting at her ear and neck and then soothing it with his tongue, he had marked her, she smiled at the thought, blush creeping up on her cheeks.
He picked her up and laid her on the bed , he bent over at her and removed the borla, he looked at her, he kissed her eyes and nose and then captured her lips while his hands latched on her waist, he drew a trail of kisses down her neck, the plunging v of her breast to her navel, he removed the kamar bandh with his mouth while his fingers were entwined with hers on either side.

It wasn't a game to be won individually. But to lose oneself in the other and both would emerge victorious for they had both won over each other. As she bathed in the glory of the love he showered, she gave him all her passion, her love, her trust. They joined not just physically but their souls connected. After rounds of steamy love making sessions they lay together spooned, Kanak with her back to his chest, his arms around her, his chin over her head, this was her world and she wouldn't let anything ruin it. She clutched the sheets closer and Uma pulled her even closer for he thought she was cold. He gave her his warmth, his love and his life. They both gave up everything to the other yet they felt ecstatic and richer than ever. For love is not just to attain or give up, but to live and inhale every second of life to be grateful and hopeful. "Up for something? He asked softly as his toe tickled her leg, raising goosebumps of anxiousness. "You still have to ask she replied snuggling more into him. "Always!! He replied.



It's never the end for there is always a new beginning.



Rocks and chappals are always welcome 🤗

Please do let me know how bad it was and convince me not to write anything like this ever again 😳


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Divyaamurali thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Blueee I am awestruck unbelievable such a hot sensuous beautiful SR sequence of KanUm from you dear 👏My goodness I got goosebumps yaar each and every minutes of the special night are explained in detail 😛 kanak and uma both are bold expressing their desires..naughty and passionate Too hot- blooded ufff... That kamarbhand was the highlight of the seq removing of kamarbhand was 😳 😳kanak seducing uma and he is already amorous lost before the battle begun😛challenge of erotic love making in their Suhagrat bed 😉each and every love gestures of uma made me blush dear ☺️ohhh so sizzling steamy love making 😳 I enjoyed and visualized each and every scene of the sequence already after seeing half rambha sequence we have gone crazy u added on more fuel to our desire to see SR of KanUm soon very bad yaar. 😆Thank u so much blue u have fulfilled our dreams of incomplete rambha charitra with ur erotic amazing OS.
I really loved this line dear "it wasn't a game to be won individually but to loose oneself in the other and both would emerge victorious for they both had won each other ."wah what a wonderful lines dear. U made us to fly dear into the fantasy world i have never read such a lustful sensual story like this Hats off to u 👏how u have beautifully penned that emotional ecstasy moments of couple 's union physically and their souls united giving up everything to each other. Love is to inhale and exhale every moments of life ❤️❤️
The above hearts for u sweetheart love u so much blue for giving us a fantastic OS which made us dreamy and amazed me with fascination truly enchanting. Plz blue don't stop writing this sensuous romantic story ur a amazing writer and we will expect more from you. Another SR story soon dear ⭐️

Bluee ur story made me blush my PA was asking me why ur blushing mam any love message u read oh god I was so embarrassed 😊
Edited by Divyaamurali - 7 years ago
SooSan thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Blue what a story😊 really enjoyed it😊
manasa.123 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Suniye blue ji (Sorry Asfii, I liked the blue ji too, so using it)

Yeh Kya likh diya?

Kya kahe kya na kahe

Kuch kahe bhi tho kaise kahe

Haye Haye Dil ka haal kaise kahe

(Don't worry, I had this syndrome when I am too happy I will do silliest things, that's more dangerous me when I am too happy)

So now you know you made me too happy with your OS.

Wow! superb blue, Hats off to your writing style that you took time to write every small detail so beautifully.

Can we expect night series now?
AppleOfEye thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
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Woah! Look what I found! ☺️

It's too good! If we get this types of update then yeh dil will mange more! 😳

You've put ghee on fire blue! Loved the Os! It was indeed a surprise!

Uff kamarband & jealousy... the hot romance- I've become red now! ☺️ You should write steamy scenes as you write very well... 😳

Yeah..if u give this types update why we won't be greedy? I still can't forget that story too! 😉

But enjoyed this very much! ☺️

@manasa its totally okay no need for sorry...chalo you can use that, it is free for use! 😆

SO blue ji, Mogambo khush hua! 😈
Edited by _Asfii_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Woah! Look what I found! ☺️

It's too good! If we get this types of update then yeh dil will mange more! 😳

You've put ghee on fire blue! Loved the Os! It was indeed a surprise!

Yeah..if u give this types update why we won't be greedy? I still can't forget that story too! 😉

But enjoyed this very much! ☺️

@manasa chalo you can use that, I have kept it free for use! 😆

SO blue ji, Mogambo khush hua! 😈


Exactly Asfii,

This surprise update don't make us asking for the other update dear blue..

So please keep that update also in mind...

I know we are being extremely greedy but what can we do , we are helpless..

Please...

@Asfii dear
Thank u letting me use blue ji
Edited by manasa.123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Haila Blueji (Borrowing the *JI* I hope you don't mind Asfu😆) Yeh kya tha...☺️

I was all paani paani while reading it...☺️

I LOVEDDD it...ab toh apko Blue " ji " hi kehna padega...

It was indeed a SURPRISE...It's sooo good & sensuous...

Like Asfii...my dil mange more too...

Milega kya?!!!


But, thank you so so much for this OS...much needed for our dukhi heart...😆






Edited by M_Nira - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Arre, sab mere piche pade ho! 😳

@ manasa ji & nira ji you both can call blue ji !😆

And no need for sorry & thanks as I've said it is free for use! 😆

@blue dekhiye ji looks like I've spread kanak syndrome on your post! 🤣
Is it okk ji??
M_Nira thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Arre, sab mere piche pade ho! 😳

@ manasa ji & nira ji you both can call blue ji !😆

And no need for sorry & thanks as I've said it is free for use! 😆

@blue dekhiye ji looks like I've spread kanak syndrome on your post! 🤣
Is it okk ji??




Toh thik hai Blue Ji aaj se sach mein Blue "Ji" ho gayi!! 😳

Kanak syndrome has become viral!! 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Blueee I am awestruck unbelievable such a hot sensuous beautiful SR sequence of KanUm from you dear👏My goodness I got goosebumps yaar each and every minutes of the special night are explained in detail😛 kanak and uma both are bold expressing their desires..naughty and passionate Too hot- blooded ufff... That kamarbhand was the highlight of the seq removing of kamarbhand was😳😳kanak seducing uma and he is already amorous lost before the battle begun😛challenge of erotic love making in their Suhagrat bed😉each and every love gestures of uma made me blush dear☺️ohhh so sizzling steamy love making😳 I enjoyed and visualized each and every scene of the sequencealready after seeing half rambha sequence we have gone crazy u added on more fuel to our desire to see SR of KanUm soon very bad yaar.😆Thank u so much blue u have fulfilled our dreams of incomplete rambha charitra with ur erotic amazing OS.

I really loved this line dear "it wasn't a game to be won individually but to loose oneself in the other and both would emerge victorious for they both had won each other ."wah what a wonderful lines dear. U made us to fly dear into the fantasy world i have never read such a lustful sensual story like this Hats off to u👏how u have beautifully penned that emotional ecstasy moments of couple 's union physically and their souls united giving up everything to each other. Love is to inhale and exhale every moments of life❤️❤️
The above hearts for u sweetheart love u so much blue for giving us a fantastic OS which made us dreamy and amazed me with fascination truly enchanting. Plz blue don't stop writing this sensuous romantic story ur a amazing writer and we will expect more from you. Another SR story soon dear⭐️

Bluee ur story made me blush my PA was asking me why ur blushing mam any love message u read oh god I was so embarrassed😊



OMG Divya - you have replied back bigger than the story and I am blushing like a tomato.
Smiling like a fool I am unable to reply back...😳

There is this idea that only men are more into the act, whereas both of them are humans and can desire each other equally... hence Kanak is bold and daring. There is a momentary hesitation but that flies away the moment he touches her. - that's enough with my gyan.

Kamar bandh was my favorite part too

I haven't written such a story ever, so it's a novelty for me. And the way you have dissected through it gives me goosebumps 😳
I had thought I was making it too descriptive without dialogue and I thought okay let's do this and get done with it. And here I am getting amazing feedback.


Ps - just a tip. Play aang laga de on slow volume while reading it again - it would be something else 😉


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