5 Shot - And Then There Were Five (complete) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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The fact that I could visualize word by word was too hot to handle! So amazing friend! You write very well! And another really cool aspect was that you reflected on Vansh and palomi and massi sa's feelings in regards to what has just happened. Thanks a bunch for this treat! Do continue writing!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh shymy outstanding five shots dear amazing kanum moments uma is too naughty and too romantic I can visualize each and every scene of their hot sensuous romance in bathtub 😉 what a style of writing u have very much impressed 👏 uma naughty grin mischievous looks was well written .U took me to the lala land today 😳 uma is too bold .Bathtub romance is the highlight dear 😛 hope CVS uses that bathtub for future romance in our serial Plzz continue writing buddy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

The fact that I could visualize word by word was too hot to handle! So amazing friend! You write very well! And another really cool aspect was that you reflected on Vansh and palomi and massi sa's feelings in regards to what has just happened. Thanks a bunch for this treat! Do continue writing!


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Oh shymy outstanding five shots dear amazing kanum moments uma is too naughty and too romantic I can visualize each and every scene of their hot sensuous romance in bathtub 😉 what a style of writing u have very much impressed 👏 uma naughty grin mischievous looks was well written .U took me to the lala land today 😳 uma is too bold .Bathtub romance is the highlight dear 😛 hope CVS uses that bathtub for future romance in our serial Plzz continue writing buddy


One could only wish😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my shamy it was beautiful...!! Thanks!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Your writing skills are amazing, shmy. One by one your shots kept me imprisoned, but the last one was deadly 😆 This is the kind of novel that is always better then the movie inspired by it. Congratulations.
Waiting for ur next story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai shmy.
Amazing. Hats off👏
All shots are superb.
Waiting for next story

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