Kanuma FF Mene Socha Na Tha PART11 Updated

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Shalini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

PART 6. Lunch is it tasty. In afternoon Kanak went to Uma office with lunch. Everyone greets her. Kanak goes towards Umas Cabin. Uma : what are you doing here. Kanak : I bought this lunch for you Uma : I will not eat anything cooked by you and also masa is not there to support you. Kanak : really she open tiffin box Tiffin box contains Umas favorite dish rajma, chawal Uma : I will not eat it take it from here. Kanak :ok by saying this she puts one tablespoon rajma chawal on his mouth and leave from there without tiffin. After kanaks leave Uma starts eating rajma chawal bcoz he li kes it very much. When he finished his food Kanak appears in front of him and ask is it tasty. Friends pls do tell me how it is

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Superb👏👏 waiting for nxt

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Divyaamurali

@Divyaamurali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Waiting for next update cutest girl 👏uma is getting impressed

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Hi cutest girl,

This kanak is really naughty and romantic!! Uma lab tak ignore karega.

Update the next part. It's really good.

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Reshma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Continue cutest girl! What a coincidence I also had rajma chawal for lunch

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Shalini

@CutestGirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

PART 7. Diary Kanuma Room In night kanak gets irritated with Uma Kanak: From half an hour you are writing this stupid diary can u pls sleep I am too sleepy. Uma: If you are sleepy than sleep. Kanak: pls off this light Uma:ok he switch off the light and goes into bed Kanak gives him good night kiss. Uma : how shameless you are. Kanak rolled her eyes on his comment go close to him and put her head on his chest. Uma: What the hell is this. Kanak dont reply anything she goes into deep sleep Uma(in mind): how cute she is but on the very next second his mind said no Uma stop stop yourself falling from her innocence. Uma( heart): but she is too cute and innocent. By thinking all this he also falls in deep sleep. Friends pls do tell me how it is

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desigal2017

@desigal2017

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Hi cutestgirl,

I appreciate your enthusiasm, willingness, and the speed at which you write stories.

But you need to think of the development of the story, the characters and what you really want to say through it and also the way you structure these scenes.

Sometimes, it gets a little difficult to read cos you give so much spacing bet lines..

Only saying this cos I am a teacher and I can't stop myself. Sorry if I hurt you in anyway.

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Shalini

@CutestGirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: desigal2017
Hi cutestgirl,
I appreciate your enthusiasm, willingness, and the speed at which you write stories.

:)

But you need to think of the development of the story, the characters and what you really want to say through it and also the way you structure these scenes.

Sometimes, it gets a little difficult to read cos you give so much spacing bet lines..

Only saying this cos I am a teacher and I can't stop myself. Sorry if I hurt you in anyway.

thanks I always like honest feedbacks bcoz they help in improving . in future the story unfolds than you will understand what I want to say and sorry there is problem in editing bcoz I write it from mobile actually my laptop is dead so I thought why to make others wait so I updated it from mobile.

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Manasa Rekha

@manasa.123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Of course no doubt it's very interesting.

This bold Kanak is awesome. I love this Kanak who expects and takes the love ffrom husband without asking. That's one trait I am sure make guys fall for girl.

I am sure Uma can't withstand any longer without falling in love.

Thank u, I like your quick updates so I don't need to wait for too long..

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Reshma

@AVRfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Loving this bold Kanak! Continue please

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