Saraswathi Nauka; A Titanic like FF on TSMSP - chapter 3 update ( pg3)

Hi friends I have come with a new ff on TSMSP. This is my first ff on a forum. So guys please forgive me for any mistakes and my poor English knowledge

First of all I should tell this is the love story of Uma and Kanak on a ship. Very romantic and erotic things to be happen ahead. And even Kanak is not a parentless girl . Let's see what would happen on their destined love journey...

Chapter 1

SHE;

Kanak is the one and only daughter of the retired police officer Sandhya Rathi and the rich hotel owner Sooraj Rathi. She is a very jovial and tricksy girl who was over loved by her parents and brothers. Even though she is 22 years old her father considered her as a little girl. Despite from father her mother wanted her to be matured girl. Kanak never had very big dreams like the IPS dream her mother had. But she got the talent of her farther from genes. So Kanaks dream was very simple like make every ones lives so sweat with delicious sweats and food manufactured by their Kanak sweats and baverages production company' while supporting her Brothers to handle the VedAnsh Hotel and restaurant. But actually her Vansh Bhaiya had to handle it because Ved bhaiya was busy with his Police duties. So her mum Sandhya made a proposal for Ved to get married to an Indian girl in England. Ved dated the girl Payal from the web and eventually both fell in love. That incident impressed the Rathi family a lot. So Sandhya needed to reach her DIL as soon as possible. Even after 30 years of their marriage Suraj's and sandhya's love was still as the same . with the help of Kanak , Suraj planned a Ship Journey to England from India to impress his wife in a fresh way. . Suraj gave a list of passenger ships to Kanak to choos. SARASWATHI NAUKA' was her choice for that...

HE;

Umashankar is the eldest son of the wealthy Brahmin family,Toshniwal. Who was an Ayurvedic doctor and a well educated guy in many other fields like Commerce, Business management ,European languages, Indian culture, history, Hindu religion, literature and etc. At the age of 29 After his father's death US became the main heir to the entire wealth including three factories, five companies ,two cargo ships and a passenger ship named on his elder sister's name Saraswathi'. US's main assistance Gabbasa informed him that they should attend for an business meeting at London within four weeks. Despite from an air journey he wished to enjoy the nature with a journey floating on water. SARASWATHI NAUKA' was his choice for that...

Good start...Saraswati nauka ...noce name choice too...desperately waiting for them to meet ...

Originally posted by: Kanak-123

Good start...Saraswati nauka ...noce name choice too...desperately waiting for them to meet ...

...i am in...do post update quick

good one...waiting fr further update

Thanks dear...some romance in the ship ...good concept...can't wait for the next update...

Ok..it's very interesting from now itself!!

Very well written with interesting backdrop,

sorry for the late update guys...😉

Chapter 2

It was the second day of their sea journey. Kanak could woke up before the sun rays kiss her cheeks. She opened her eye lids and looked at the phone. It was still 5a.m. She put a glance around their room, which was well furnished with an attached bathroom and the big window facing to the ocean. What else to be needed for a luxury trip ? That's why they called it the floating heaven.

" Kanak.. get on baby . How about the last night? Did you sleep well "Sandhya called her while coming out from the bathroom.

"Ha Mumma.. but Where is my Papa?"

"He just went out to order the breakfast. Go beta... have a wash and come . go go"

She had a bath and got ready with her red long skirt, sleeveless white blouse , the pink over coat and the red shawl . And put some makeup with red lipstick and rose powder.

"Mumma see how beautiful your beti is?"

"Ha ha beta. come and see who is chatting with me"

Kanak rushed to her mother and peeped to the laptop.

"Hi Meena chachi.."

"Hi my cute baby..."

"How are you chachi?.. oh how about Vansh bhaiya , Golu Bhaiya ,Ved bhaiya , Vikram chachu , babho and Babasa?.. I miss you all."

"Don't worry beta we are fine. Icant describe how we miss your selves" Meena replied.

"I know meenakshi you may take care of them more than myself " Sandhya replied with a thankfull tone.

"Chachi, take care of them from bad girls. Cause they are not smart like me"

"Ha ha beti ... I'll do...Jeethani ji, your sons are very lucky to be handsome...but...my poor Golu!" Said Meena with a shattered voice

"Oh Meenakshi don't get sad. He is a cute boy . I'm sure one day our Golu would become a handsome boy."

"Ha jeethaniji me too hope so"

"Meena chachi , I think you may have lots of things to chat alone... So, shall I go upper deck for some time. Please mumma! "

"Jeethani ji , let her go out. She must enjoy isn't she?"

"OK beti enjoy yourself. But take care . Don't talk much with male strangers. Ok!"

"Ok mumma love you... Bye chachi... bye mumma"

"Bye Kanak"

The morning breeze flew away kissing every bare part in her body. She closed her eye lids to feel that tickle some more.. how nice! Feeling like birdy... There were only two or three people roaming around the upper deck. Suddenly a very handsome yogi caught her eyes.

WOW

her senses lost for a while..

"wow what a hot man. He is perfect!... being shirtless at this odd time...oh god he may feeling so much cold! Even he is wearing a dhothi like cloth instead of a pair of trousers... oh ho that means he may be a poor guy... And a key is hanging on his shoulder.. what that mean? He may be very caring about his belongings since he has to work hard to earn something ... that's why he is looking so fit... But why should I stare at him? No no I should not care about him."

Kanak moved some steps away from him. Suddenly she realized a new plan...

"Idiot kanak stop, I can take help from him to get some advices for my Golu bhaiya. Should I talk with him?.. No no I can't mumma said me to be away from strange boys... That's unfair! For the sake of my chachi's happiness I should take courage and order him like a Queen!"

Kanak stepped towards him . Uma finished his Surya Namaskar and put on his Kurtha. suddenly a he felt a mesmerizing Sandalwood fragrance nearby him.

"Excuse me Mister!"

Uma turned to that side and looked at the Source of heavenly sandalwood fragrance caught his soul...

"Yes... You are Miss? " He replied with smile

"I am lady Kanak, from Pushkar. You boy should help me for something"

Uma got puzzled. Why she is addressing me as Boy' ? Doesn't she know who am I ?

"Sorry Little miss I think you have misunderstood myself!

"No Mister I just not asked you to help me to carry some luggage. I just need you to give some advices for my brother to get hot...( what the hell? Embracing😕) No .. no... sorry I mean to get fit like yourself. "

Uma just thought for a while. "This girl may be misunderstanding myself as a servant boy or a 3^rd class passenger... Poor girl she may surely doesn't know that I am the owner of this ship. However it's very funny to talk with her. Lying is against my Dharm . But without lying I could be friendly with herself. I have never this much attracted to a girl till now. Uma beta lets cuddle this princess with your talks!"

"OK mam I think he may be fat like yourself " He franked.

"Fat? Me? Shut up how dare you to say that! Do you know who am I? " Kanak scolded with a irated voice

"oh forgive me madam ji ! Who are you? "

Kanak thought for a while, I should lie to scare him for his bad comments.

"You crazy boy, be remember that I am the future wife of this ship owner Mr. Toshniwal!

( to be continued...)

nice update.interesting continue soon the next part