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Posted: 8 years ago
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Huey there all the lovely people.
Here is another OS

OS : Zidd


"This is all a big misunderstanding" Kanak screamed out at everyone present on the wedding venue, "I thought this was just a play, I won't marry this guy, I don't even know him or anyone here, let me go" she started to pull away from the ladies and the startled gaze of her supposed groom.
"Stop", he said and she froze, first time he said something amidst all that happened there and a doomed silence fell in everyone. She looked on to him, pleading her case and ready to fight at the same time.
" I have chosen you and would marry you only, he said in an authoritative manner.
"No" replies Kanak in an equally commanding voice, she wouldn't be faltered by this man. "All this is sign from Bholenath God, you have been chosen for me, you belong with me" he tried a bit convincing manner. "I didn't get the signs not by SMS, phone call not even a letter, your God seems partial to you" Kanak replied. "Don't talk about God like that", he said between his teeth. "Then let me go", she said handling her desperation to leave and fueling his anger. "You can go all you want, but Tomorrow, next month, next year, even a decade later this would remain the same, you are mine and would remain so" he said Coolly. A short laugh escaped Kanak unconsciously, then started laughing at him loudly "you are plain simple mad, you have concocted a story in your head which will remain in your head" she turned to leave. She moved only a few steps when she was pulled back, he had held her swishing duppata and made her stop. She turned to bash his atrocity but was pulled instantly into his arms, he stood over her, over shadowing her. "What is this, ye Kya kar rahe ho?", Kanak was enraged, "leave me now" she commanded him and tried to push him away with all might. "Listen to me very carefully, karne ko mey bht Kuch kar sakta hoon, but ye meri sharafat hai", he said to her with quiet forcefulness. "Tm sirf ek gali k third class gunde ho ko kisi bhi rasta chalti larki ko shadi karne or majboor kar rahe ho" she taunted. "Tm samjh nahi rahi ho, ye sanket hai Bholenath ka, tmhara aur mera Milna..." he said.
"Aaj nahi,kal nahi, kabhi nahi... tm aur mey kabhi hum nahi ho sakte, apni bakwas mey Bholenath ka apmaan mat karo" she replied.
She twisted and writhed in his grip, and managed to get free while he absorbed her lasted reply, she freed her hand away with a jerk, and was about to move when he picked her up and took her to the mandap. She wriggled violently, bit into his arm and shoulder repeatedly, screamed for help from the dummy people standing and watching everything unfold.
"Pehle sirf Bholenath ka sanket tha, par ab tm meri zidd ho, aur tmhe pana meri zidd hai, ye Uma Shankar ka vachan hai" he said and walked on for the pheras. Kanak realized the gravity of the situation, she was helpless, and this guy was insane. She came back to herself when he put her down for putting sindoor and mangalsutra.
She stepped back on disbelief while he was putting sindoor, but he pulled her back in place. She closed her eyes when his hands went on her neck for mangalsutra... and when she opened them there was only fire and anger, "aaj mey bhi tmhe vachan deti hoon, chahe Kuch bhi ho jaye, par mey tm se door jaa kar rahon gi, tmhe aur tmhare ahankar ko choor choor kar doon gi, ye meri zidd hai", she pushed him and walked out.


Rocks and chappals are always welcome 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow ...nice i like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's amazing blue..
U know wat..u shud write an FF on our show..it'll be great reading your work
Edited by Anjali33 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"I didn't get the signs not by SMS, phone call not even a letter, your God seems partial to you" Kanak replied. 🤣cant stop laughing.

Listen to me very carefully, karne ko mey bht Kuch kar sakta hoon, but ye meri sharafat hai", he said to her with quiet forcefulness.
☺️guttermind activated.

Zid:
Ek zid wo hai jo dur na jane de..(uma)
Ek zid wo bhi jo pas na ane de..(kanak)

Ishq naasur ho chala hai ae dil..
Tu kyu zid pakde khada hai fir..
Ya to tu krde use fanah ishq me..
Ya fir krde use mere yaar ke kaabil...


Nice story blue..i love it!

Edited by Waiting4you - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Short and sweet story. Nice , blue !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Blue

It's interesting but nor completed yet!

Any chance of update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasa.123

Hi Blue

It's interesting but nor completed yet!

Any chance of update.



Hey there
You dig up the oldies and I don't even realize it.
According to me it's somewhat complete... both of them stubborn to get back to each other.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Hey there
You dig up the oldies and I don't even realize it.
According to me it's somewhat complete... both of them stubborn to get back to each other.


We didn't see Kanak's Zidd yet?


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasa.123



We didn't see Kanak's Zidd yet?




I knew you would bring it up 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



I knew you would bring it up 😆



What's the answer blue please?

Edited by manasa.123 - 7 years ago

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