KanUm SS : Kashmakash - part 3 updt

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Hey there all the lovely people.
Me is back with a short story. It's super weird. But do read and let me know if it should be continued or not. It will be continued only on demand šŸ˜‰



SS : Kashmakash

"Mohabbat mein nahin hai farq jeene aur marne ka,
usi ko dekh kar jeete hain, jis kaafir pe dam nikle..."


"Say something dammit" Kanak cried to US but he just stood there, expressionless without blinking staring at the wall in front of him. "Silence, it's always silence... have you got nothing to say... you always have lectures to deliver, but with me it's always silence, I hate it.. I hate you" she cried. And his heart broke in silence which she couldn't hear. He had a million things to say to her, but there was nothing left now. He had given up, on her, his life.
She had to go. It was end of discussion, he had forced her into this relationship and today he would set her free, even if it meant death to him. He couldn't live with himself or with her anymore, this was all a lie.
"You can stand like a stone, but I am not going anywhere", Kanak screamed at him, she huffed and sat down on the foot bench near their bed. She was hurting because US had shut her out completely for days now.. She wasn't like him.. she could never be... he was on a different level than her, they were poles apart, if he was the rising sun she was the setting sun. With time they were getting along in their own way, slow paced yet steady. relationship works with understanding and misunderstanding is the longest distance between two people. She knew now, they both would work out their marriage in their own way... but today he just came to the room and announced that Kanak was to return to her home and she would never come back here. His words crisp and clear fell like boulders on her, at first she didn't understand what it meant, and when realization struck he was gone and cold was left in his wake.



To be continued...



Rocks and chappals are alll welcome šŸ¤— šŸ¤—

Like, criticize and comment all you want... 😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Waiting for next update

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Great OSšŸ‘ Since the continuation of the OS will be on demand, I am demanding that you continue šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Interesting , please update soon
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Blue..Plzz continue (rhymingšŸ˜†)
It was great n I wud love if u continue it
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Blue if this is super weird, am in for all the weird things coming our way... 😊 pls continue...waiting for next chapter
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Itna thanda response

But thank you to all the people who made time to read and comment. Much appreciated guys 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey there all the lovely people.
On special demands chotu sa update is here.


Part II

With each sob and tear that rolled out of her, he died bit by bit. He wanted to soothe her, calm her, but the self control he had mastered over the years prevailed and he held ground. She wanted answers, he had none. She wanted reasons, he couldn't explain them. She wanted to stay, he won't allow it. He had already done more damage he couldn't do it anymore. He would let her go, she had no place with him.
He stayed away from home, to clear his mind and stay away from Kanak and her presence. He returned late at night only to be informed by Massi that Kanak didn't come out of her room the whole day and she hasn't even eaten anything. She had tried coercion but Kanak didn't speak a word and sulked in their love nest - their favorite place in the whole world, the swing in front of Shivji's statue.
US went to his room with food... he hadn't planned on seeing her tonight or any time now, yet he couldn't leave her distressed like this. He opened the door to an empty room, he looked around and found Kanak sitting in the far of corner of the room. Her eyes swollen and a silent dread on her face. She didn't move when he came near her, just stared into air. He held the plate in front of her, she didn't respond. After a while he made a bite and held it near her mouth and said "kuch khaa lo". Kanak looked towards him and his hand and turned away her head. For minutes he held his hand outstretched, and finally said "please Kanak khuch khaa lo". That was the final straw for Kanak. She lashed out on him, all her energy focused on beating and placing punches on his chest.


To be continued...



Rocks and chappals are always welcome šŸ¤—

Please bear with the small baby update. Bigger one coming soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing..Finally tumko update krna hi padašŸ˜† next one soon plzz
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Bahot chotu tha..i want to read more...
Bas abhi ap update kro...

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