Lag ja gale..... Kanak-uma OS - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Tiara!! It was a fine piece of excellence..So no joote chappal or tamatar allowed

i told you in last post i may write a new piece so i wrote it...i know i have grammatical error...i am working on it...😳
Thanks for reading it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice os dear... do write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: YongShinSurYa

nice os dear... do write more...

definately...what would you like to read?😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thankyou😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hiya Tia, what a delightful OS... you use a situation which is on the cards int he story line.. her running away.. and their meeting after wards. I loved your reference to breaking glass./pottery/ceramics.. where I live its seen as a good omen!.. so you blended it well with him appealing to her to alleviate his anxiety.. and lucky for him,she gives way and grants him solace.
loved how you touched upon his emotions.. the scene was well written and I enjoyed reading it. I would like you to follow the drive for creative writing within your self and spread joy across our forum..
yes like the classic song laga ja gale.. pity they don't make such haunting melodies any more!... love hammie
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hiya Tia, hey hammie😳 what a delightful OS...Thank you.😃.. you use a situation which is on the cards int he story line..i had imagine this last and so pen it down.her running away.. and their meeting after wards. I loved your reference to breaking glass./pottery/ceramics.. where I live its seen as a good omen!.. so you blended it well with him appealing to her to alleviate his anxiety.. and lucky for him,she gives way and grants him solace.exactly what i felt ...perfect my mind reading😆
loved how you touched upon his emotions.. the scene was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks emotional scenes is my forte I would like you to follow the drive for creative writing within your self and spread joy across our forum.. Thanks again. I love writing. Its my hobby😃
yes like the classic song laga ja gale.. pity they don't make such haunting melodies any more!... love hammie.
Yup me too miss them...these are moms favourite..no matter where you are you will smile

and thanks for such big and worthy comment😳
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