Saahir....Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part...11/29 - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part kashish...👏

haila kashish ko asthma hai....koi baat nahii sujal hai naa uskii care karne ke liye..😉

gr8 part anywayz.........👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow an awesome part hope the misunderstandings bet them are cleared fast
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Posted: 17 years ago

cute part girl 😛 😊 😛!!!!...kashish should have told sujal that she has asthma problems...bechara kitnna pareshan hogaya tha...yaar kabhie tou apnie ego ek side pey kardey...aur insano ki tarha baat karle yeah dono 😊....cute yaar..in that haterd in their heart their is also concern!!!.....par inki ego 😕!!!!!!!.........the bus scene was funny 😆...kaesay behave karra ha tha sujal when kashish came n sit next to him 😆...kashish kie kismat main wohie seat likhie hue thie 😉!!!!!!.........love the part where sujal kashish kou goud mainn utha ta hai 😉...kya kare kashish kie sandal tout gae thie 😉...aur becharie chal nahie parahie thie thik say 😭...thodie madad tou lehie saktie hay apne pati kie 😉!!!!!!....kashish sharmatie bhie hay mujhe pata nahie tha 😉...but cute!!!...i wonder kitni sandal lie hogie kashish nai ????????..........awesome going gurl.....continue soon plzzzz

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Posted: 17 years ago
great part. they love each other but still in the denial mode. kab realise karenge yeh dono.
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow kashish very nice part 👏.............and that scene wen sujal picked kashish so lovely😳........................bt y they denie always that they both av feelings for each other.jaldi confess karwo.......plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-15

Ab agli subaah dono pass ke seher ko dekhne ja rahe the.......pass ke seher me jane ke liye unhe train pakadna padta hai..........lekin somvar ki subaah thi aur sari business ki traffic.....train ko dekhte lagta hai uspe aap chad paye to aap laucky hai aur agar aapko chain ki saans lene ko mile to aur bhi achcha hai........Sujal aur Kashish dono train me jate hai........jaise bhi karke dono khone me ek jagah khade rehne ke liye dhundh lete hai.........ab train shuru hoti hai aur zatke lagne se Kashish Sujal pe jake girti hai.......Sujal Kashish ko apne haath se sambhalta hai........Kashish apni palke upper karke Sujal ko dekhti hai lekin woh dusri aur dekh raha hota hai..........Kashish bhi us taraf dekhne lagti hai jaha Sujal dekh raha hota hai......waha pe kuch log kashish ko ghur ke dekh rahe hote hai.......Sujal Kashish ko apni jagah aur khud Kashish ki jagah khada reh jata hai taki woh log Kashish ko na dekh paye..........Sujal ek haath se Kashish ko pakad ke rakhta hai aur dusre hath se train ke pipe ko.......Kashish Sujal ka coat pakad ke khadi hoti hai.......Kashish aaj pehli bar Sujal me ek insaan ko dekhti hai........Kashish ke chehre pe ek ajeeb si muskaan aa jati hai .......jab unka stop aa jata hai.........Kashish jane lagti hai lekin abhi bhi Sujal use chod nahi raha hota.........

Kashish: Sujal chodo muje........jane do........kya kar rahe ho......

Sujal: tum muje thanks kehne ke badle mujpe chila rahi ho.........

Kashish: thanks aur tumhe kabhi sapne me bhi nahi..........aur tumne meri madad ki kyun ki yeh tumhara farz hai aakhir pati ho mere.........

Sujal: pati nahi tumhara contract pati hoon me..........aur yeh maine jo tumhari madad ki woh insaniyat ke nate........

Kashish: haa haa tum to aisa hi karoge.....agar meri jagah koi dusri ladki hoti tab bhi tum aisa hi karte ...........hai naa.........

Sujal: are main sir uski train me madad hi nahi karta balke use uski manzil tak chodne jata.........aur waqt milta to coffee pe bhi le jata.......

Kashish: tum jante ho tum kya ho..........you are sickman.........

Sujal: haa janta hoon lekin tum bhi kuch kam nahi........tum ek sickman ki itni kareeb khadi ho ki tum bhi sickwoman ban jaogi.........

Kashish: apna muh bandh rakho..main ja rahi hoon mere raste.......

Kashish train se utar jati hai........aur Sujal uske piche jane lagta hai.........

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woh dono sadak pe chale ja rahe hai........jab Kashish ek bahot hi purana church ko dekhti hai aur Sujal uske samne wale Sports bar ko.........

Kashish: waha kaha ja rahe ho......hum us church me ja rahe hai...........

Sujal: no way........main sports bar kaise miss kar sakta hoon.......kitne din bad koi game dekhne ko milega......

Kashish: thik hai main ja rahi hoon church me......tum jao apne stupid se sports bar me.........

Sujal: jaisa tum chaho.........

Kashish: aur haa.........beer itni hi pina jitni sambhal sako.........kyunki mujse yeh umeed mat karna ki main tumhe uthake hotel leke jaungi..............

Sujal: hum tum ladkiyon ki tarah nahi hote jo ek bottle me hi tali ho jaye.........jab tak che saat bottle nahi pite ........uska maza nahi aata.........

Kashish: thik hai.......agar khud sambhal na sako ko rail ki patri pe let jana........is duniya se ek boz kam ho jayega.........

Sujal tum bhi us church ke bell pe tang jana..........yaha pe bahot shanti fel jayehi..........

Kashish: upper jane ke bad bhi woh tumhe wapas bhej denge kyunki tum jaise janwar ki waha pe to koi zaroorat nahi hogi........

Sujal: haa haa .......aaj church me bhi God aur father tum jaisi junglee billi ko dekh ke darr jayenge..........

Kashish: tum apni had par kar rahe ho.......

Sujal: abhi to maine kuch kiya hi nahi......ek bar ghar chalo phir batata hoon main kya cheez hoon........

Kashish: achcha to tum cheez ho...........muje laga tum insaan ho........nahi tum insaan nahi janwar ho.......

Sujal: tumse baat karke main apne sport bar ki maza khatam nahi karna chahta........so good bye.........

Kashish: good bye to you too.........

Dono apne apne jagah chale jate hai..........

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Sujal sports bar me aadhe ghante se betha hai...........abhi tak sir ek beer ki bottle ko khatam ki hai..........

Sujal: aadha ghanta ho gaya......yeh Kashish abhi tak aayi nahi.........kahi gayab to nahi ho gayi........ghar pe jawab dena muskil hoga..........chal sujal dekh aakhir woh abhi tak wahi hai ki..........

Sujal church me aata hai to Kashish bhagwan ke samne bethi huyi hoti hai jab Father uske pass aate hai..........Sujal piche se chupke se unki baat ko sun raha hota hai.........

Father: hindustani ho........

Kashish: jee Father...........

Father: pichle aadhe ghante se dekh raha hoon.......tum roye ja rahi ho....kya baat hai beta......muje kaho main tumhari madad karunga........

Kashish: Father.......meri shaadi meri sabse badi muskil hai...........main apne pati se pyaar nahi karti.......

Father: to kyun ki tumne us insaan se shaadi.........jise tum pyaar nahi karti.......

Kashish: Mama ki khushi ke liye...........papa ke sapne ko pura karne ke liye........per ab bahot dukh ho raha hai ki main apne mama papa ko kitna bada dhoka de rahi hoon...........unhe lagta hai main khush hoon lekin main khush nahi..........main kab tak apni galti chupati rahungi...........

Father: to apne pati se pyaar karo.......aur ek khushal zindagi ki shuruaat karo.......

Kashish: Father muje nahi pata main kya kar rahi hoon......main yeh bhi nahi janti ki main kabhi kisi se pyaar kar paungi ki nahi...........maine to apne haath se apni zindagi ko dav pe laga diya hai........aaj mere pass koi nahi jise main apne dil ki baat apne dukh bata saku.......

Father: aisa nahi kehte God hamesha apne bacho ke saath rehta hai..........ab khush raha karo......apni shaadi pe yakeen rakho..baki sab God thik kar dega.........

Kashish: Thank you Father......aap se baat karke dil halka ho gaya.........

Father: God bless you my child.............

Father waha se chale jate hai.........Kashish apne aanshu poch ke Church se bahar jane lagti hai jab woh Sujal ko dekhti hai lekin bina kuch kahe woh bahar nikal jati hai.............

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Sujal: tum andar ro rahi thi na.......

Kashish: tumse matlab......

Sujal: main janta hoon tumhari rone ki waje yeh shaadi hai.......lekin tum ghabrao mat tumhe aur nahi rona padega...........ghar pahonchte hi jaldi se hamara divorse ho jayega......

Kashish: yeh shaadi sirf mere aanshu ki waja nahi hai........meri zindagi me aisi bahot si baatein hai jispe me aanshu baha sakti hoon...........

Sujal: muje nahi bataogi........

Kashish: us baat ke liye tum mere liye sirf ek ajnabee ho..........aur main ajnabee se apne sukh aur dukh nahi batti.................

Sujal: lekin tumhe dekh ke lagta nahi ki tum khush nahi zindagi se......mera matlab tum khush dikhai deti ho muje.......

Kashish: haa kabhi kabhi parivar ko khush rakhne ke liye aapko khush hone ka naqaab pehnna padta hai.........aur ab to saaloin ki aadat ho gayi hai.........

Sujal: iska matlab tumhare dil me kuch aur chehre pe kuch aur.........

Kashish: tum khud samajdar ho samaj jaoge.........abhi main apni zindagi ko yaad karke bore nahi hona chahti .......is liye main woh samne wale Spa me ja rahi hoon......so excuse me.........

Sujal: kya tum Spa me ja rahi ho to main kya karunga........

Kashish: muje kya pata tumhe jo karna hai karo...........main tumhe ek rasta batati hoon woh jo samne woh insaan violin baja raha hai use beth ke suno.........aur haa kahi durr jane ki sochna bhi mat......bye..........

Kashish Spa me chali jati hai...........aur Sujal woh musician ke pass...........

Sujal: hi.........i am sujal......

Musician: hi I am Joe.........

Sujal: Joe........are u married.....

Joe: no......

Sujal: good........never married in life otherwise you will become like me..........marrige is not a good thing.......but wife is a very good thing to scare someone..........

Joe: but marrige is the final destiny for love.......

Sujal: but my marrige has no love no luck.........it is been seven days of my wedding and i am already bored with this wedding and my wife..........but dont tell anyone this secreat.......

When kashish comes..........

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Kashish: lo pakdo ise......

Sujal: kya hai yeh.......

Kashish: Spa ka bill aur kya.......

Sujal: haa lekin yeh to pure 700 dollors hai........kya kar rahe hai andar woh........ki itna bada bill.........

Kashish: woh tumhare kaam ka nahi.........ab jao aur jake bill bharo........

Sujal: unhone kiya kya tumhare saath.......lagta hai usne tumhe pura badal diya.......kyunki pehle tum junglee billi lagti thi ab to tum bhootni lag rahi ho.........

Kashish: woh to dekhne wale ka nazriya hai.........main khubsurat dikh rahi hoon aur main khubsurat mehsoos kar rahi hoon......ab main yaha pe beth ke yeh music sunne wali hoon........jab tak tum yeh bill bhar ke nahi aate...waise tum chaho to yaha pe khade rehke police ka intzaar kar sakte ho.......woh log aake tumhe uthake leke jayegi........

Sujal: ja raha hoon........bahot aayi Spa wali..........

Sujal bill pay karke aata hai.........

Sujal: ab chale........

Kashish: nahi abhi mann kar raha hai ki is music ko sunti jau........

Sujal: thik hai yaha pe beth ke apni puri zindagi yahi sunna...........main ja raha hoon........

Kashish: tum kabhi thik se baat nahi kar sakte........

Sujal: tum bhi kabhi thik se baat nahi kar sakti..........

Kashish: thik se aur woh bhi tumse.........

Sujal: to main kyun tumse thik se baat karoon.........ab chal rahi ho ki.........

Kashish; chal rahi hoon ........chilane ki zaroorat nahi..chalo.......

Sujal aur Kashish wapas apne hotel ke liye nikal jate hai.............

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Posted: 17 years ago
dear the parts you have posted is so sweet..yeh sujal , kashish bi na.. ek dum bachche hai...shaddi hogayi unki lekin abhi bhi dil se tho bachche hii hai.. aur unki yeh attitude is so achcha.. i really love their fights.. itna cutely ladthe hai woh dono.. is ladayi ke peeche bhi kahiin na kahiin un dono pyaar hai... actually sujal , kashish kii problem yeh hai kii dono ke dil mein ek dusare ke liye pyaar hai.. lekin woh dono hii is pyaar ka izhaar nahii karna chahthe..aur na hii is pyaar ke ehsaas ko mehsoos karna chahthe hai.. woh dono tho totally ziddi hai.. patah nahii kab sudhrenge dono.. waise dear dekha jaue tho sujal , kashish kii yeh ladayi is very cute too.. woh jis tarah baat , baat pe ladthe hai.. ek dusare kii tang kheenchthe hai.. ek dusare se counter argue karthe hai... i seriouly laugh my heart out.. jis tarah sujal ko kashish kii parwah thi jab usse asthma ka attack hua tha... jis tarah sujal was protecting kashish on the train..... all this shows they care for each other.. bas jatathe nahii.. are koi un dono ko samjao kii bas ek baar woh ek dusare se pyaar jataye bas.... zindagi heaven ban jayegi..waise the Church scene was nice.. i hope kashish takes the Father's advice seriously.... waise jab kashish ne sujal ko apne spa ka bill diya hoga..bechare kii hawaa nikal gayi hogi.. haha.. main gir-girke hassing sujal ka haal sochke.....😆 dear please jaldi se continue karna..me waiting for the next part eagerly..😊
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
very very nice part.....👏 plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part
i really enjoy their cute fights it shows a different side 2 them
poor kashish crying hope she listens 2 what the father said and gives her marriage a chance
i liked the train scene shows sujal does care 4 kashish but doesnt show it
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice fiction yaar really nice...loved their fights..awesome...their fights will be changed into love for sure...u are a great writter kashish...always love ur stories becouse ur writing style is really different...pls post the next part soon..bye!!!

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