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So the show starts with heer sitting in her room seeing a picture and thinking to herself .The picture is of prem 20 years back when he was 7 years old and she was 5 years old . When they were small prem's father and heer's father decided to turn their friendship into a relationship between their families .That day when prem's father lalit juneja and his family were leaving for Canada to start a business their they decided that heer will only marry prem and from that day the destiny decided that these two people are going to create history.

Time pases and now it has been 20 years since the manns are waiting for lalit juneja to come back to his desh and fulfil his promise and that day has finally arrived when the Juneja's are arriving .Heer is in her room thinking about what will happen when Prem will arrive and how will she address him .

Heer's room

H;" Hey vaheguru! kya hoga jab prem aayega, kya kahu gi mein usse, kaise bulao gi mein usse ,kya woh mujhe pasand karega ,kya uske aur mere khyalaat mil payege? kya karu mein ,mujhe to soch ke hi darr lag raha hain. kya hoga? Hey Vaheguru please meri madad karna.

The juneja's are in the car and Prem is thinking about Heer, he is very anxious to meet her and is thinking about what he is going to say ,do and whats going to happen?Then they finally reach the Manns house and everybody meets.

Manns house

HF, Heer's father; "Are teji ,Heer ,Mehr (Heers younger sister) dekho toh kaun aya hai mera dost lalit aya hai are bhai jaldi aao."

Teji;"Are aap log aah gaye, kaise hai aap sub? bauhat intezaar karaya ji aap sab ne."

HF,"are bahar hi khara kare gi ya phir andar bhi le jaye gi ?"

Teji,"haanji aao aao andar aao.Heer putr,Meher pani le aao."

Then meher says to Heer dii ,"Maa bula rahi hai ,lagta hai Prem aagaya.Chalo chale."

Heer says,"haan tu ja mein abhi aati hun."

Meher enters,"Ji namaste."

Preet,"Achha to yeh hai humari Heer Bhabhi ji, Namaste!"

Meher ,"kya."

Preet ,"Haan Bhabhi ji."

Teji,"Are nahi putr yeh to meher hai heer nahi."

Preet ,"sorry,Phir humari bhabhi ji kaha hai bhai un se milne ko taras rahe hai."

Teji ,"Meher ,Heer kaha hai."

Heer,"Yaha hun Maa."

Teji ,"kaha reh gayi thi tuh."

Heer,"Maa woh sab ke liye pani lah rahi thi,Ji namaste."

Prems mother,"namaste aao humare paas betho."

Heer ,"ji"

Prems mother,"hum to apni bahu se mil liye aap bhi Prem se mil lijye,Yeh hai mera beta Prem."

Prem,"JI namaste,"

TEji ,"jeete raho."

Preet ,"toh aap kaisi hai bhabhi ji?(no answer )Heer bhabhi ji ?

Heer,"ji,mein."

Preet ,"Ji haan (Heer feels shy )Toh aapko Bhabhi ji nahi toh phir kya kaho kyun maa?

Prem's mother ,"Haan bhaei bhabhi ko bhabhi nahin toh phir kya bulae ga, kyun Heer."

Heer feels shy and runs to her room.Prem looks at her and thinks wow she is just the girl i wanted.

Heer's room

Meher comes ,"kyun didi aaj toh bauhat sharam aah rahi hai waisa kyun na ho jiju jo aaya hai? kyun?"

Heer ,"chup kar meher."

Next scene the manns are shown their rooms and they all freshen up.

Prems mother talking to prem ,"tujhe kaisi lagi prem ?"

Prem," maa mujhe nahi pata i like her but i want to know her side as well."

Prems mother,"theikh hai ,mein kuchh karti hun."'

At dinner table

Preet ,"are aunty ji yeh khana kisne banaya hai ?"

Teji ,"heer ne kyun putr ?accha nahin laga ?"'

Preet ,"Achha! aunty ji bauhat achha kahiye itna achha khana mein ne aaj tak kabhi nahi khaya.Achha hai bhai ki shaadi heer se ho jane ke baad hume achha khana khane ko mile ga warna maa ke haath ka bana hua khana kha ke toh hum bore ho gaye hai. kyun papa ?"

Prems dad,"bilkul."

Prems mother,"achha dekhto prem shaadi se pehle hi peet aur tere papa ne to heer ki side lene shuru kar diya aab mera kya ho ga?"

Heer starts feeling shy.

Preet,"bhai dekye toh bhabhi kitna sharmati hai ab aap ka kya ho ga?"

Prem and heer stare at each other. Then when Heer is cleaning the table prems mum (Pm )asks prem to help her and he goes.Then she asks the oldies of the house that ,

"Aap sab ko bura toh nahi laga na ke maine Prem ko Heer ke paas bhej diya."

Hp,"nahi ji hum samjh te ."

Prem goes to Heer,"hi."

heer ."hi"

Prem thinking wat to say and then he says ,"tum kaisi ho?"

Heer ,"theik ho aur tum."

Prem," mein bhi theik hun "

Prem and Heer thinking of wat to talk abt .At the other end the oldies think hey bhagawan dond kitna sharmate kuch karna pre ga and they think to plan something BUt dont know wat to do and that bery moment some one enters .

think who it is ?do reply if you want me to continue or not and if you like it or not.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooooooooooooooooh please continue i want to read the neaxt part
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oh very nice cant wait to se more
pls update it soon
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plz update soon can't wait
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it was mind blowing 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI samyra and its_mee92 is the same as i was posting from my friends account and then i made my own and posted from my account.

So the show starts with all the oldies thinking wat to do .

Lalit,"Are yeh khote de putr mein bilkul akal nahin hai .Kitna sharmila hai ."

Pm,"Chup rahiya aap mere betiey par ilzaam mut lagaye .Itne loogo se ghira hua ho to insaan kaise koi baat kar sakta hai aur pehli baar mile hai to hichkichahat to hogi na."

HF,"Yeh aapna bilkul theikh kaha hume un dono ko waqt dena hoga aur kuchh aisa karna hoga jis se woh dono akele mein baat kar sake."

Then someone enters and guess who is it.Its preet and Meher .

Preet,"Yeh kya ho raha hai ?"
Lalit,"kuchh nahin hum toh bus ."
Preet ,"bas bas bhane bana na band karo Prem bhabhi aur Prem bhaiyya ko milana mera aur Meher ka kaam hai hum un dono ko mila kar hi chhore ge,waisa ma aap ko nahin lagta ke dad ke sir ki tarah un ka demakh bhi kali hai ."
Lalit ,"Dekha Gayatri is Preet ko !Yeh mera beta nahin ho sakta hai mein keh raha hun yeh mera beta nahin hai."
Preet ,"Haan ma Dad sahi keh rahe hai mein unka beta nahi ho sakta woh dekho ujra hua chaman aur yahan haryali.?"
Lalit ,"Nalayak."
Preet runs from there towards the kitchen and lalit follows him.Preet runs and hides behind Heer.
Preet ,"Bhabhi bachaobhabhi bachao dekho na bhabhi dad ko roko na bhabhi please bhabhi ."
Preet behid lalit in front asking prem tocatch preet.
Lalit,"Dekh prem ise pakr pakr ."
Prem trying to catch Preet and prem pushes Heer On prem and she is about to fall but catched by prem .
Lalit,"Dekho gayatri yeh to shaadi se pehle hi biwi ka ho gaya."
While everybody is looking at Prem holding Heer, they both are busy gazing in each others eyes,Heer is astonished by wat happened and Prem is masmerised by Heer's beauty.
Preet,"Bhaiyya, bhabhi hum sab ab bhi yahan mojood hai baad mein Bhabhi kiankhon mein kho jaye ga."
Then they both feel embarrased and come into their senses and Heer runs to her room.Then Prem even leaves.

Now the next scene is between the oldies and Preet and Meher.
Preet,"Dekha mera plan ,kaise kaam kar gaya ."
Gayatri ,"Haan bhai sahi kaha tu ne, waise sach mein mera preet aap se zyada hi samajhdar hai."
Lalit,"Haan bhai ."


THe next scene is that Preet meher and the oldies are planning and they decide to go out for somedays leaving prem and Heer alone in the whole house.

Hf,"Chalo bhai tum logo ko hum tum sab ko kahin bahar le jaatey hai ghumane ke liye chalo Chandigarh chalte hai ."
Eveybody gets excited but then Teji says ,"Par ghar par kaun rahe ga aur kaun dhyaan rakhe ga ?"
Hf,"Are apni Heer hai na."
Teji ,"na baba na Heer akele itne bare ghar mein kaise rahe gi ?"
Gayatri,"Are prem hai na woh ruk jaye ga na Heer ke saath .Kyun Prem tujhe koi problem toh nahi na ? (and he nods no)Toh phir theikh hai Prem Heer ke saath reh jaye ga."

Then they all leave for Chandigarh leaving Prem and Heer alone .Prem goes to drop All of them to the station .Then he comes back and its night time and it starts to rain.
The bell rings and its prem
Heer,"Aap ah gaye Sab ko chhorr diya aapne ?"
Prem ,"Haan chorr diya."
Heer ,"aaye khana kha lijye,"
Prem ,"haan aaya."
When he comes the light goes and Heer is scared .

Now you will see the most romantic scene ever.

Edited by samyra - 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhh very nice
uffffffffff pls do continue soon
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wow nice please update soon.
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Recap:Prem and here were left alone in the house and the lights went out.

The lights went out so Heer was extremely scared as she didnt know wat to do and she was alone with Prem .Prem figured it out that she was scared so he lit his lighter and said
Prem,"Heer fikr karne ki koi baaat nahin hai mein hun yaaha par ."
Heer ,"Ji"
Prem ,"Achha mujhe batao ke candles kha par rakhi hui hai ?"
Heer,"Kitchen mein ,"
Prem,"THeikh mere saath chalo aur mujhe candle do ."
Then they fil the whole house with candles and then they hav their dinner.
Prem ,"Umm mujhe toh bauhat bhook lagi hai khana kha le."
Heer," ji theikh hai ."
Then they both had candle light dinner.Then Prem started talking
Prem,"Tumhe andhere se ab tak itna darr lagta hai Heer ? Tum bilkul nahi badli waise ki waisi ho darrpokh?Waise ek baat puchho agar tumhe buraa na lage toh ?"
Heer,"Puchhho."
Prem,"Tumhe bura toh nahin laga na kehumare parents ne humari shaadi teh kar diaur ab woh hume milane ki koshish kar rahe hai?"
Heer,"Nahin ma ne mujhe pehle se hi yeh sab bata diya tha aur tumhe toh bura nahin laga na?"
Prem ,"Nahin mujhe bilkul bura nahin laga .Waise mein ne maa se kaha tha ke hum dono ko ek dosre ko jaane ke liye thora waqt milna chahye."
Heer,"Umm ab mein ek baat puchho ?"
Prem,"haan zuroor."
Heer,"Tum ciggarrette pete ho?Nahin Batana hai toh mat batao mein toh bas aise hi,woh tumhare paas lighter tha na isi liye,"
Prem,"Nahin nahi tum se kya chhupana tumhare saath zindagi guzarni hai aur isi liye ek dosre ki har baat jaanna zaroori hai,woh lighter mera nahi Preet ka hai actually us kiyahi aadat chhurane ke liye main ne us se yeh le liya."
Heer,"Sorry mein ne tumhe galat samjha."
Prem ,"nahin tumhe sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi mujhe to balke achha laga ke tum ne mujh se poochha.Umm chalo ek dosre koapne baarey mein sab kuchh batatey hai.Pehle main shuro karta hun mujhe..............
and the whole night they spend talking and then they finally went to sleep .Heer slept on prems shoulder and prem slept on Heers head.then they woke up in the morning and embarrsed of each otherthey went into their rooms.they freshened up andwhen heer came down she saw Prem making the breakfast she tried to stop him but he insisted then they had breakfast.
Heer,"Prem yeh kya kar rahe ho mein bana deti hun ."
Prem ,"nahin mein bana raha hun ."
Heer,"Par tum kyun bana ruhe ho mein banati hun na"
Prem,"Mein bana raha hun aur waise bhi mein itna bura nahi banata hun ."
Heer was thinking of that will he let me make breakfast after marriage or not
Prem,"Fikr mat karo shaadi ke baad tu hi banana mein tab tumhe mana nahi karunga ."
Heer started to feel shy.
Prem ,"tum kitna sharmati ho Heer! aur tumhari isi ada pe mein diwana hun ."
Heer,"kya."
Prem,"Haan heer mein tum se bauhat pyar karta hun."
And she is shocked to hear that .
Prem ,"kya tum mujh se pyar karti ho?"
Heer,"Haan."(And then thy both hug)


The next scene is that the phone rings and disturb Prem and Heer while they are huging and its Preet and Meher and they start to talk
Preet,"Aur bhiyya bhabhi ke saath maza aah raha hai na ."
Prem,"Yeh kya keh raha hai tuh?"
Preet ,"Bano mat bhaiyya main ne aap dono ko saath milane ke liye hi yeh sab kiya aur itna achha plan banaya ."
Prem ,"Kya plan?toh yeh tera plan tha ."
Preet ,"Aur kya! aur is plan mein ghar ke sab log shamil hain."
Prem ,"Par tum logo ka toh plan flop ho gaya Heer toh kuchh nahi bolti aur aisa kuch nahi hua jaisa tum soch rahe ho.Balke mujhe Heer bilkul nahi pasand ayi."
Preet,"Kya ?Achha khair hum wapis aah rahe hai ,bye."
Prem,"Bye."
After hearing this hear gets dissapointed and goes to her room crying.
Prem follows her and says
Prem,"Heer mujhe muaf kar do. Mare wuh matlab nahi tha."
Heer,"Toh kya matlab tha tumhara pehle mujh se kaha ke mujh se bauhat pyar karte ho aur phir apne bhai se kehte ho ke mujhe bilkul pasand nahi karte ."
Prem,"Tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho."
Heer,"Nahi mein ab tumhe sahi samajh rahi ho .Tum ne mujh se jhoot bola.Tum mujh se pyar nahi karte.Aur mein tum pe yakeen kar bethi.Mujhe kya pata tha ke mein jis ka itne saloon se intezaar kar rahi hoon woh mujhe bilkul pasand nahi karta .I hate you ,I hate you."
Prem ,"Keh diya jo kehna tha ab meri baat suno agar tum mera itna sallon se intazaar kar rahi thi toh main bhi tumse milne ke liye bechain tha.Aur ha mein tumhe khud se zyaada pyar karta hoon.Mein ne yeh sab isi liye kaha keh mein unhe thhora tang kar sako kyunki unka yeh plan tha keh woh hume yahan akele chhorr kar chale jaye bus isiliye."
Heer now ashamed of herself says ,"Mujhe muaf kar do Prem mujh se galti ho gayi .I am extremely sorry."
Prem,"Nahin Heer tumhe muafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi galti hum dono ki hai ."
Then they both hug and make a plan to trick all the family members by saying that they dont want to get married and they dont like each other.
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Now the Manns and the Junejas are back to their house and they are thinking what to do .While they are busy talking Prem and Heer are looking at them and having fun.

Lalit,"Hai raba !YEH TUNE KYA KIYA ,ab hum kya kare ?"
Gayatri,"Aap kyun fikr karte sab theikh ho jaye ga."
Hf,"Teji tum ne Heer se puchha ke usse Prem kaisa laga ."
Teji ,"ji puchha tha par uss ne bhi Prem jaisa hi jawab diya."
THey keep discussing wat to do and then decide to talk about it tomorrow.

Heer's room
Heer is sitting in front of the mirror and thinking about Prem and then prem enters .
Knock Knock!! Heer then turns.
Heer,"Prem tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?tum pagal toh nahi ho gaye ne.koi dekh le ga."
Prem,"Tum kitna bolti ho Heer .Kisi ne nahi dekha mujhe yaha aate huye .Aur dekha bhi toh kya ho gaya ."
Heer,"Par tum itni raat gair yaha kyun ?"
Prem ,"Kyunki mujhe tum se milna tha .Kya karo jab se izhaar kiya hai tum se door rehna mere liya namumkin kar diya hai."
Heer (while feeling shy )."Tum kitne besharam ho gaye ho ab jao yaha se ."
Prem ,"Pehle mujhe I love You kaho ."
Heer,"Nahin bilkul nahi."
Prem ,"toh phir theikh hai mein nahi jao ga ."
Heer,"Please jap na please."
Prem,"Nahi pehle kaho."
Heer ,"Theikh hai! I love ."
Prem,"AAge."
Heer,"I love ."
Prem ,"ha aage."
while dragging prem outside
Heer,"I love you."and throwed him outside her room.

In the morning all the family is having breakfast except heer who is actually sleeping because she slept late as prem was diturbing her and didnt even let her sleep as he continuesly disturbed her in her dreams.And Prem was gone for work so he was also not there on the dinner table.

Gayatri,"Heer kaha reh gayi ? usse nashta nahi karna?"
Meher,"Ji woh so rahi hai ."
Teji,"Kyun kya hua uss ki tabiyat toh theikh hai na."
Meher,:"haan ma."
Teji,"acha."
Lalit,"Ab in dono ko kaisa milaya jaye."
Hf,"kuchh sochna parhe ga. kya kar ab?"
And at that very moment Heer comes down and Prem enters.
Preet,"Hume fikr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Bhai aur bhabhi humare samne natak kar rahe hai kyun bhaiyya ,kyun bhabhi main theikh keh raha hun na ?
Lalit ,"Yeh tou kya keh raha hai?kya yeh sach hai Prem aur Heer."
Prem and Heer felt embarrased and then Heer was about to run away but Preet catched her.
Preet,"Are bhabhi ab kya sharmana waise yeh idea kis ka tha?i am sure aap ka hi hoga kyunki bhai bauhat boring hai."
Heer,"NAhin yeh Prem ka plan tha aap sab ko tang karne ka."
Then after realizing what she said she ran to her room.
Gayatri ,"Prem tuh kab se itna shararti ho gaya haan ?"
Prem ,"nahin maa aisi koi baat nahi hai ."
Gayatri ,"achha matlab tuh Heer se pyar nahi karta.Kyun?agar aisa hai toh theikh hai teri shaadi Heer se canceled."
Prem ,"nahin maa."
Gayatri ,"Badmaash."
Lalit ,"Chalo bhai mithai khilao."
Teji,"ji abhi lai."
Prem,"Maa mein heer ke paas jao?"
Hf,"haan haan bilkul."
Lalit ,"Ab hume in dono ki shaadi jald se jald kar deni chahye."
Hf,"Are tu ne toh meri mun ki baat chheen li."
Lalit,"toh phir theikh hai pandit ji ko bula ke sagaai ka mahurat nikalte hai."

To be continued............
Wait for more heer prem scenes and do reply.

Hope you like it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really nice! I'm so impressed! You continue extremely fast! Continue soon!

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