Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07
this is like third time im posting this comment all over again
it dotn post every time i want it tooπ‘
OMG are you serious? π² WHOA! Humz, you didnt have to retype everything you crazy girl πoh wellPart 18:
wow mimz you know what i think well i was i was in love with your Ff but even after reading it after ages its just like
wow you want to start from part 1 and re read it all over againOMG... no way!! Hummy... aweee, you are just SOOO sweet yaar!! Thank youuu!!!!! π³ That is such a huge compliment!!!
so dont ask me how many times Ive been through your FF in my spare time or when im in one of those moods lollol oh gosh.... are you f'en serious? HOLY! I've never reread the parts.. hahahahaha π
and the last few parts are just awesomeaweeh thank youu!!! π³
how kasturis changed
how she knows how to maintain the relationships the few she hasyeah, Kasturi isnt too open relationship wise... but the few people she does have in her life, she likes to keep them close
even without a mother she smiles tries to live her life
and she tries to have a smile and enjoy life shes got musky and raunak and her dad-her dad for a bit
wow its unbelievableomg Hummy, you sound so philosiphical [and i dunno if that's a word π] But yeah, thats basically KC for you... awee, Im so happy you understood her!! π³
your Ff has so many different perspectives and it sends out different messages for us allooh Humz... thank you SOO much!!! awee... I just want to get a variety in there you know... to have atleast one character someone can relate with; be it KC; no mom, dying dad, Raunak;who has ADHD, or even Robbie; who is a super cool super rich Rockstar. In the end, we all are people.
and entertains us at the same time on our fav couple ROKAOooh, thank youuuu Hummy!!! π π€
and you know what mimz if i never knew you the way i do lol i would never believe that a 13 year old teen no pressure that your going to be 14 soon lol
has written an FF such an Ff called Opposites AttractLOL AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! You are soooo sweet Humz... lol hahahaa, I'll be 14 in just a few months, but thank you yaar! That is just SOOO sweet of you!!!
not to mention one of my fav FFz on here lolLOL aweeeee... thank youuuuuu!!!! hehehe, but honestly now; the FF's on this section are like x100000 better than mine!
mimz im proud to know you and to call you a mate
a sisAwee Humz, thank you for being such an amazing Friend/Sister to mee tooo! You are the BEST and I wuv youuu! <3
thanks for being their and entertaining me lol
π€lol anytimee... I'm glad I could entertain you π
okay omg what am i writing lol
let me get back to the partlol okiee dokieee ππ
wow No Entry Zone
wow omg what going to happen in this part
hope their still in the car lollol don't worry.. they're still in the car π
hehe lol wow yh i was going to say what car is it lolLOL hehehe, Hummy.. I knew you'd be the only one asking π
but i guess kasturi was panicking so much she didn't realizehaha yeah
id do the same probably lol
i hate lightening don't ask why heheLOL see, you+kasturi=twins!! π
hmm fine leather seats
built in stereo you got to have that lol
wow cars like that only in a dream
yh id love to sit in robbies car hehe
only a dream hehehahahahhahahahahaahaha, who wouldnt wanna be in his car? ππ
you have to tell me mimz what car is it hehelol a RED VOLVO π
hehe kasturi yh "WOW"
bet robbies proud lollol ohh, he suree is!!!
he reminds me of my cousin their bragging about his car hehelol , my cousins do the same.. it's SO annoying!!!! π‘π
wow you bought "HER" after your first concert
typical lads lolLMFAO!! haha
addressing their cars like a female
but i love my cars too hehehehe, you should've been born a dude 'ey humz? lol Guy Clothes, car lover... what's next? π
i sound like Ive got a car hehe i wishhaha, dont worry.. on your bday, I'll get you a HUMMER π (I've got connections) haha
hehe your first love after music
i wonder what kasturis going to be
above all your music and all???lol his Third FIRST lovee π
and yh kasturi don't like your music hehe
but yh he is the "ICON" of todaylol yeah yeah
only if your FF was real mimz hahawouldnt that be awesome? I'd throw away Kasturi, and put myself in her place.. and I'd put you as Muskaan π
hehe robbie you just gathered that now that she isn't a fan of youlol jeez...took him a while
robbie how can you say shes blunt lol okay she might be hehelol you think? ππ
but yh shes in your car and shes not a big fanNopee
but really robbie what songs do you sing im curious nowhahha.. arent we all Humz, arent we all...π
hehe kasturi you being honest with him
i think you're one of the first people kasturi well after rahul and alllol yessh defoo!
but as a normal girl who probably didn't look at or care that robbie was a rock starhaha, thats something new for Mr.Rockstar π
hehe classical
okaylol i hate classical music.. it was SP painful writing about it π€’π
kasturi i agree with robbie
classical isn't what i kind of tend to listen to either lolLOL hehe same heree! lmao
but yh some music well most is about drugs.. money.. sex...truee... *sighMusic now has lost it sense to how it used to be
yeah, I know.. sucks π
hehe robbie that face π€’but cuter when you make it lollol hehee......
and omg she said robbie
wow oh yh she addresses him by his name lol
not sir heheLOL no ways!! I am so sick of hearing "sir" .. at first it was cute, but it's kinda awkward after your married and all π
their in college together
only if the serial was somewhat like this hehelol I'd love Kasturi even more!
yh Robbie music has lost it soul you as an artist should know thatmhmm
but thats not with every kind of song innit mimz their are song with true meanings rather than money.. drugs.. sexYeah, you're right Humz. There are a lot of songs with true meaning π
robbie your going to prove her wrong about what?
wow musichehhehehehehhhe Yepp!
omg i thought you'd play a song in your stereo or something
but wow
your going to sing to her π²haha, of coursee! What else do you need? A romantic car, romantic wheather [forget the storm π] and a super sexy rockstar singing to you... ππ
wow wait man you're going to sing to her
i wonder what
wow
and that to a song which does have a meaning i wonder what Im curious now lollol bee curious! haha i cant wait to read what you thought of the song π
hmm well robie your singing to her
omg kasturi his singing one of his songs just for YOU
wow Ahhh your so luckyisnt sheee?!! I was jelous writing this part π
so that he can change the opinion you have about him ... well he means his music hehehahaha...!
aww how sweet
wow kasturi what you going to say to that lollol YEAH Kasturi, whatcha gonna say? π
is it going to be a tough one hehe
aww robbie saying that:
" Taking up challenges is what I do best!"haha... π³
i can imagine him saying that lol with his million dollar smile - killer smile ππOooh my gosh.. *blush blush* π
a guitar from the back seat
wow robbie your going to play your guitar at the same time π²Yeeepppers!! ππ
Typical haha kasturi he is a rockstarhaha, i mean.. it's normal nowadays π
and thats good he had his guitar in the back his going to play and sing for you lollol he is just so WOW!
and wow thanks to taht rainstorm
btw mimz very orignal idea manlol you really think so? ...hehe shmanx π³
where do you get them from hehe πwhats the secret huh lolLOL after watching soo many movies/teleshows.. I've become filmy π
im joking
nah very orignal and its like a teen idea which attracts me to your FF more hehehehe aweee, well you cant expect a 21 year old writing it na? ππ My vocab is just too childish.. darn! π
hard core rock music lol kasturi i used to hate rockI still doo... but at times, its kinda soothing ..in a very LOUD hardcore way π
but i liek some music of that now lolhaha ooh Hummy
wow robbie a calm tune
omg i still cant believe a rockstar robbie singing for kasturi in the car lol
magical πlol soo very magical ππdreamy
πππsooo very dreamy π π
wow mimz i think im not reading right
Nickelback
wow no way
wow
omg
no way no blimming way
wow
wow
wow
nickelbackhaha.. yess way! I LOOOVEEE Nickelback!!! AAAGH! π
imagining robbie singing their song and that too one of my fav nickelbacks songs π²I love "Far Away"π²NOO WAY! You like Nickelback too?! OMFG you could've told me that before π I LOVE them!!!!
mimz no way
i think im reading wrong haha no I am not am I dreaming????lol nooo Humz, you're wide awakeee.....!! πThis time, This place
Misused, Mistakes
Too long, Too late
Who was I to make you wait
Just one chance
Just one breath
Just in case there's just one left
'Cause you know, you know, you knowI love you
I have loved you all along
And I miss you
Been far away for far too long
I keep dreaming you'll be with me
and you'll never go
Stop breathing if
I don't see you anymoremimz wow you put the lyrics in too
thankslol anytimeee! I've got 'em memorized πomg im not dreaming hahatold you so π
wow i love this song
one of my favreally? mineee tooo!!!! Hehe.. stop copying mee!! π
and by a band which i like love lol hehe NickelbackNickelback!!! <3
yh this song lyrics
omg mimz i don't know what other song you could have picked
but this is one of my fav songs from Nickelback and the lyrics to it has a true real meaningaweeh thank you Hummy!!!! π³ I'm so happy you liked it!! I wanted a different song, but honestly.. once I thought of this one, I couldnt put any other π And thats why I love Nickelback soo much.. it's their songs.. so much meaning! Have you heard "If Everyone Cared" .. if not, watch the video on Utube.. it is FABULOUS! πtheir awesome fits in the situation I bet kasturis just blown away alright
lol downright right πOn my knees, I'll ask
Last chance for one last dance
Cause with you, I'd withstand
All of hell to hold your hand
I'd give it all
I'd give for us
Give anything but I won't give up
Cause you know, you know, you know
I love you
I have loved you all along
And I miss you
Been far away for far too long
I keep dreaming you'll be with me
and you'll never go
Stop breathing if
I don't see you anymore
So far away
(So far away)
Been far away for far too long
So far away
(So far away)
been far away for far too long
But you know, you know, you knowAll I wanted
I wanted you to stay
Cause I needed
I need to hear you say:hmm.. I think imma go listen to the song right now! haha brbwow robbie looking in to her eyes π²
so like unimaginable
only if that did happen
and kasturis in his car with his cardigan on π²hahaha.... isnt that something.... π³
That I love you
(I love you)
I have loved you all along
And I forgive you
(and I forgive you)
For being away for far too long
So keep breathing
Cause I'm not leaving you anymore
Believe it
Hold on to me and never let me go
Keep breathing
Cause I'm not leaving you anymore
Believe it
Hold on to me...never let me go
(Keep breathing)
Hold on to me...never let me go
(Keep breathing)
Hold on to me...never let me gowow omg
i still cant get over you used this songaweee.. hehe, im glad you liked it!! I didnt know if I should put in this song,, [btw, im listening to it right now π]
robbie sang it for kasturi
love this song lolhehe, mee 2!! π
wow and im happy you used it for roka in this scene lollol really?!! omg.. thank you so much!! I didnt know if ya'll would like it on RoKa π I wanna make a VM on this song.. infact, I think I will! π
im soo happy you know
hehe the glow in kasturis face i bet he didhaha... yep yep!!not only her face mimz my face is glowing right now hehe remember my baby pick and you go am I playing with powder lmao I'm glowing more than that
π²Really?!! haha I remember that pic! And you're like "Noo.. I was born white" π You looked CHOOO Cuuteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! haha I cant imagine you glowing more then that! Wow...! πim so shocked you used this song lolhehe get over it Humz!! π
yhp you did mission accomplished lollol Yippeee!!
wow yh if robbie singing this
just to imagine does show robbies passion for the music he has
unbelievablehaha.. I wanna see him actually singing it in the show!!!!! π
and wow kasturi closer to him hehehaha.. this time, she's coming closer π
wow like a book yhp robbies like thatlol hehe...
omg love this part
every word every sentenceawee, thank you so much Hummer!!!! π€
mimz you don't know how happy i am that you used this song hehe
okay ill stop just about that now :plol awee Humz, if I knew you'd be this happy, I'd put all of their songs in this FF! πif I can
Hahahhahahaha
yhp every chapter led to another which did unveil the REAL RobbieI guess that's truee.. I hope I unfold the real Robbie soon!
πkasturi finally lol
robie you got a new fan KASTURI lollol Yepp Robbieee!!
which might not make a difference to you now but i think it will later onhaha.. major difference π
aww robbie
you got lots of fans but you need a friend
aww
wow
i love that line πThank you Hummz!! Not to sound conceited or anything.. but I liked that line too π³πmimi im a : fan of yours 0 a friend- and a sis of yours i hope lol
Aweee of courseee! I'm so lucky to know you Humz! You're honestly the bet person I've ever interacted with!!
yh kasturi you finally finished rejecting himhahaha Oh yeah!
robbie i think your plan is workingit is....
aww kasturi
robbie she takes you as her friend
promise not to use her
robbie i know your just playing right now
but urgh i dont even want to think how kasturi would be if she found out the truthyaar Humz.. I dunno how imma write that part... π It's gonna be so sad!!
im sure robbie your wealth doesn't have feelings
but kasturi might change you the way you are
just mightmaybee just maybe!
wow robbie lol you got snacks in the back
looks like your cars got everything
hehehehe, perfect for you 'huh Humz? π
you got tvs in the back? lollol I sure hope so! π
a toast to your new friendship
awwheheheheh yep! *Cheers*
omg kasturi you've missed your test lol
hehelol i feel bad for her.. but then again, I'd miss a BILLION tests to be with Robbie π
a marriage proposal π€£robbie you make me laughlol does he? π
hehe kasturi dirty look heyhaha, Kassy stop with the glares!
well robbies self observed
but yh kasturi your saying YOU at the moment
but later on you'll be saying YES πLOL LOL!!! π
evil mother π²devika might be evil but come on robbieI know Robbiee...tisk tisk
πrobbie how can you say that and i wish your mom when kasturi does meet her they both do get on perfectlylol you know whats funny? I was planning on that .. hahha, Devika and Kasturi meeting each other!! π It's coming!! π
hehe a lot of crdeit for dealing wiht robbie lol
Cruella Deville π€£π€£LOL hahaa.. just watched 101 Dalmations πhaha the real devil i hate her. arghh. devika better not turnout like her. with the long nails and a tall person with the heels. arghh i hate her hehe.
lol really? I loveee her!! π She makes me laugh out loud π But dont worry, Devika isnt necessarily evil in my FF.. she has nothing against RoKa π³Mimz you crease me. lmaolol do I? π
hehe robbie you make me laughlol im glad!!
wow robbie dont call your mom a bit π²... π
wow kasturi yh how can robbie even think like thatSad...
and yh you not having a mom i think thats why your so defensivethats exactly why!
omg no way robbie how can you even say that you wish she was deadYeah... thats just going too far!
it wouldnt make things easier for youYeah.. you would have NO $$
i know you must be syaing taht in a joking way but robbie come onYeah Robbie.. sometimes what you say comes true.. π
aww kasturi are you okay
wow flashbacks of your mom
your hands shaking π²
aww kasturi you okay???She isnt okay Humz
yh robbie NO ENTER ZONE
wow
aww robbie what you doneYou've Hurt Her Robbie!! π‘
and you reach over her shoulder you say sorry thats a start aww
wow katsuri you angry like that"BECAUSE MY MOM IS DEAD! She is NEVER coming back! And my dad-, who I love more than my own life, is DYING of blood cancer! EVERYONE I CARE FOR IS LEAVING ME- and here you are, the most unsatisfied, ungrateful person I have EVER met!"
wow kasturi
kasturi
i feel like hugging youπ€
bless
NEVER πAwee.. she says thank you Humz! π³
kasturi youve been through way too much
your mom going and now knowing about your father too
knowing you got no one else..sad reality isnt it? π
no brothers no sister - well raunak and musky theiryeah, but nobody can replace blood now can they?
and i guess thats why robbie their but i cant even imagine the truth part
this sentence
is all mixed emotions
says it all
EVERYONE I CARE FOR IS LEAVING ME
that sentence πawee.... Hummy.. dont cry π
aww kasturi wow you got out the car in the rain and stepped out in the cold rain
and wow you slammed robbies baby her lollol yeah she did- thats the least he deserves!!mimz you know what
what Humz?
this part just showed me how like I did get in an argument with my dad and I didn't talk to him for like over 3 days shall I say but yh instead of me apologizing to him he apologized to me and It makes me realize how like at times how lucky I am just to have both my parents with me some people who do not have their mom or dad I can't even imagine how their life is and i don't even want to imagine my life without my parents every morning I wake up and I see my mum and dad's face and it just makes me realize how lucky I really am and how I always ask for stuff an I get it and sometimes I act like a brat lol and don't listen to my mom when she wants me to go places lol init mimz but were really lucky and I'm privileged to read such a great part mimz
Aweee Hummy!!!! π€ Thank you so much for sharing that with me yaar! I know, it always happens with me and my parents, I told you about mine and my moms arguement ya? Well.. when I was writing this part, it made me realize how truly lucky we all are to have parents to support us. I mean, at times even I admit, I dont acknowledge what they do for me and my siblings.. but they do a lot! And I'm jsut happy if this part could open up a fe eyes you know...This part blew me off the hook shall I say - You rocked totally And mimz you proved today no matter what scene you're given. Just about every scene *cough* you'll be able to writeAWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! OMG thank you SO much yaar!!! *BIG HUUUUUG!* that means sooo much to mee! I never imagined I'd get so much support from Opposites.. and I'll never look back at this journey.. it's been overwhelming for me! π³And write soo well unbelievable MIMZ your really a star βοΈ
Oh humz... thank youu! You're my star, and the star of all Kasturians! Thank you for being you! π³And to be honest with you the last scene so emotional how kasturis defending robbies mom and his like wtf who cares its just unbelievableawe, thank you Hummer!!!! π³ It just goes to show that he takes things for granted while she treasures every moment spent with her dadAnd how people say you'll find out some ones real worth when they're not their it's like kasturi without her momOooh Humz, that is like one of my most favourite quotes!! And yeah, exactly it.. lets just hope Robbie realizes before it's too late!And how she defended devika soo much it brought tears in my eyes and that paragraph when Robbie does go in to the NO ENTRY ZONE its so emotionalOoh!! Dunt cry Hummy!!!! π I'm so touched that you connected with that part!!It brought tears in my eyes.Whilst I was listening to the great song you put in the part one of my fav songs lol Wow mimz I'm hooked on this song again lol I just blue toothed it to my phone too hehe again
hehe, glad I could reconnect you with Nickelback! I'm getting their AUTOGRAPH πππmimz aww and robbie talking so sarcastically about his mom omg it remind sme and brings back tot he fact how us teenagers actyeah, us teens are downright spoiled π But they gotta love us no? ππbut wow mimz i cant get over the shock all the things that happend in this part and cant get over that a 13 year old writt this orignal part part 18 mimz just showed how much you can write and how you can write with such emotionhaha, aww Hummy you're too cute!! Thank youuu!!! Thanks SOO much! *blows a kiss*just WOW
youve dazzled me alright
lol, who's been reading too much twilight now huh? πheheokay mimz id die if i didnt know what was going to happen in the next part like if you left it at just a cliff hanger but you gave a sneak preview
hehe, I had a feeling you'd say that! Thats why I put in the preview!!πthanks sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for that am soo happy taht things do patch up between them liek kind of and kasturis okay and she clams downMhmm, she's defo a bit calmed down... but let's see what happens next!and wow i think form now on each and every part is going to be a WOW part 4 meLOL I only hope so Humz!!aww robbir saying like his the one who should say sorry aww robbies actually well his faking this friendship you know but all this his telling kasturi his actually telling a friend not a fanYou spoke the words right outta my mouth! He's telling a friend. Not a fan. π Perfectly said!and i cant believe it but his actually telling his personal life to kasturi which not much people will know about yh rahul will know right? but his telling KASTURI just wow π²Yeah, Rahul knows! But yupp- this is definately the biggest step he's taken.. and that too... telling Kasturi!and wow that anger for his mum is nothing compared to what he has for his dad omg wow why does he hate them soo much?
You'll seee...well read πtheir must be more than a reason for thatOh yeah..you know you know you know...................
i wanted
i wanted
i want you to update Part 19 please
i need to hear you say
i need to hear you say
you will update soonnnn
part 19 soon
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LMFAO!! haha, thats like almost better than the original version π And that is defo the most pleases I've ever gotten.. haha, I'll update soon hummy! Lemme get my hmwrk donee! haha, I've got a science fair project that I've kept stalling πyour hummer need to read what happens nextlol my hummer wont wait too long!along with every one else
and im extremly sorry for my commnet
i dont even know what ive writt in their lol
lol no problems! I lovee your comments!! πplease update soonawesome part
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thank you Hummer!! I will! Glad you liked it!!love hummer - hummy
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