FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

That was really good... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
It was fantastic...
I really love it...Please continue soon
Can't wait for the next part

You are doing a wonderful job.. 😊
Great story.. 😊

Thanks for such a good comment..Thank you I'm glad that you love my story <3

Love you and keep smiling!!πŸ˜ƒ

Love Rina

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Thanks for such a good comment..Thank you I'm glad that you love my story <3

Love you and keep smiling!!πŸ˜ƒ

Love Rina

I really mean it..It was really good..Great work..πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Super..!!!Continue soon because I really can't wait...it so romantic and the story is just really good....

I wish you all the best and keep it up

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

I really mean it..It was really good..Great work..πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Super..!!!Continue soon because I really can't wait...it so romantic and the story is just really good....

I wish you all the best and keep it up

Aww thank again again and again..Thank you because you like my ff and the story of my ff. I will continue very soon so just wait a little. Love you

Love Rina

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Posted: 16 years ago
Here is the next part!!!Enjoy
Recap: Vidya is pregnant. Sagar and Vidya had a romantic night!
Chapter 16

It was Chinu.
Sagar – Chinu kya hua tum subha meri kamre mein?
Chinu – Sagar hum aapne biwio ke kuch gift de saktehe. Like woh hume bohut bara gift diya hain aur humne kuch nahi diya..
Sagar – Vidya ko ek gift dongi main aaj par main nahi janti tum kya dena chatiho tumhari biwi ko?
Chinu – I don't know please give an idea.
Sagar – Kyun tum Shalu ko kuch din bahar lekar jao?
Chinu – That's a brilliant idea. I'm going to talk with dad.
Sagar – Aab yaha khari raongi ya aapne kamre mein jaonge? Laughing...
Chinu – Sorry bye and thanks for such a brillant idea.
Sagar – You're most welcome…
Vidya comes out.
Vidya – Kisse baat karahi te aap?
Sagar – Chinu se baat karahi te...
Sagar goes to Vidya. Vidya was about to wear her mangalsutra but Sagar took the mangalsutra.
Sagar – Aaj main penao.
Vidya just nods and agrees.
When he was done he just kissed hers neck.
Sagar and Vidya goes downstairs with hand in hand and looking each other too.
Sagar's mum and dad were waiting for Sagar and Vidya.
Sagar's mum – Vidya Sagar ao. Both goes and takes blessing.
Sagar – Dad aaj diwali hai na. Everyone forget about the diwali (fesitival)
Sagar – Bharat aaj main kuch dongi diwali par.
Bharat – Ok I will be waiting for my gift. Both laughed.
Every diwali Singh parivaar have a pooja. Sindoora does the pooja.
Sagar – Vidya jao waha par betho. Sagar saw that and stopped Sindoora.
Sagar – Sindoora didi Vidya yeh pooja karenge. Punditji ne kaha is ghar ki laxmi matlab iss ghar ki dulhan. Iss ghar main Vidya dulhan hai. Aap ek behen nahi hai aap ek bhai bhi hai..smiled.
Vidya goes and sits. She is doing the pooja. Sindoora on other hand is burning so much that she must have a glass of water.
Vidya is done with the pooja. Now everyone is celebrating the diwali (festival)
Sagar – Vidya yaha aajao. Vidya goes to him.
Vidya – Kya hai? Apne hume kyun bolaya?
Sagar and Vidya is playing with the fireworks and looking at each other. Bharat saw that and comes.
Bharat – Mami chalo hum dono yeh kareh and give a nasty look at Bharat because Vidya was playing first with him and then he took Vidya.
Vidya goes to Bharat and play with him with the fireworks.
Sagar just stares at Vidya. She is looking so beautiful today. Chinu comes.
Chinu – Sagar tum kyun Vidya ko haar waqt dektiho. Hum hain na. Both laughed.
Chinu and Sagar goes to theirs wife and take them inside because of the noises the baby can be scared.
Bharat – Mamu aapne kaha ke aapne hume koi gift denge. Kaha hai woh gift?
Sagar – Oh shit main lati hoon.
Sagar brings the gifts.
Sagar – Yeh lo Bharat tumhari gift...and gave presents to everyone.
Bharat – Mamu aapne Vidya mami ko kuch nahi diya…How bad!
Sagar – Nahi Bharat main kesi bholti Vidya ko. Yeh hai Vidya aur junior ke gift.
(Guess what?)
It was the property. Every property junior ki naam!
Sagar – Main yeh sab property junior ki naam kardiya.
Sindoora get the biggest shock ever in her life. Sindoora is now feeling dizzy and goes and takes a glass of water.
Sindoora – How could it be so? I thought that Sagar will forget about the property. Nobody has said anything about the property.
Everyone is so happy. Vidya on other hand has teary eyes.
Sagar – Vidya aab tumhe maloom para ke main kitna pyaar kartiho junior se.
Vidya hugs him.
Vidya – Ha!
Sagar's dad – Sindoora tum waha kyun ho yaha aajao.
Sindoora – Hum aate hai papa.
Then Aniket comes in to theirs conversation.
Aniket – Wow Sagar you have done a brilliant job. Keep it up and take special care of your wife and your little baby. They are more important.
Sagar – Thank you jiju. I will take good care of Vidya…with a naught smile.
Vidya is little confused. She knows that Sagar is going to do something. He is up to do something but what?
Sagar is thinking - Vidya and I are going to have the best night today and Aniket jiju had said that I must take good care of Vidya. So watch out Vidya. I'm going to do something. Someone knocked on the door. (Guess who?)
It was …Tushar and Sangeeta.
Chinu – Tushar Sangeeta tum dono yaha.
Tushar & Sangeeta – Happy diwali.
Chinu – Happy diwali too and hugs Tushar.
Sangeeta and Tushar goes in and takes blessing.
Tushar goes to his pyarisi bhabiya and hugs.
Sagar – Tushar Sangeeta I and Chinu have surprise to you both. Tushar and Sangeeta are confused…
Sangeeta – Kaisi surprise?
Both Chinu and Sagar goes to theirs wife's stomach and knock.
Sagar – Junior dekho kaun aya hai.
Tushar and Sangeeta had an open mouth.
Tushar – Congratulation bhabhiya and you both.
Sangeeta hugs Vidya and Shalu.
Sangeeta – Congrats…
Shalu & Vidya – Thanks.
Sangeeta – How many mounth.
Vidya – One day.
Shalu – Two days.
Sangeeta – Wow…
Sangeeta goes to Sagar and Chinu and takes theirs ear…
Sangeeta – Aab tum dono kuch nahi karongi just take care if you do something yeh Sangeeta hai. Tum donoko chorongi nahi.
Tushar – Me too.
Sagar and Chinu make a sad puppy face. Shalu and Vidya are laughing like crazy.
Everyone was laughing and had fun with Sagar, Vidya, Chinu, Shlau, Sangeeta and Tushar.
Tushar – Aab meri pyarisi bhabhiya yeh lo tumhari diwali ki gifts. Aur Mr Sagar and Mr Chinu ke liye to maine kuch nahi leya kyun ki Sangeeta janti thi Sagar aur Chinu ki pasand na pasand aur main jantithi meri pyarisi bhabhiya ki pasand na pasand.

Hope you guys like my part…Hope so.
Keep smiling and have a great time…Love you all

Love Rina

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow that was really good... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Great part 😊 I love it
Fantastic πŸ‘ πŸ‘

You are really good... 😊 It is wonderful
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

wow that was really good... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Great part 😊 I love it
Fantastic πŸ‘ πŸ‘

You are really good... 😊 It is wonderful

Thank you..I'm very happy that you loved the part..I'm going to say you're such a good great person...thanks for comment Love you

Love Rina

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Thank you..I'm very happy that you loved the part..I'm going to say you're such a good great person...thanks for comment Love you

Love Rina

it was really good..it was just fantastic..πŸ‘ πŸ‘great part...I also must say that you are also a great and nice person...I really like your FF and you do a great job..😊

Take your time but please continue soon...Because I can't wait...but take also your rest and time...I will be waiting

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

it was really good..it was just fantastic..πŸ‘ πŸ‘great part...I also must say that you are also a great and nice person...I really like your FF and you do a great job..😊

Take your time but please continue soon...Because I can't wait...but take also your rest and time...I will be waiting

How sweet to think about me...But I can't take rest because when I see you all enjoying my ff so how can I break your feelings about my ff..I will continue soon as possible but it will take time. I'm busy now soo I will update today I PROMISE I WILL...KASAMH SE

Love youπŸ€—

Love Rina

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Posted: 16 years ago
omg.....im impressed...u talented writer.... πŸ˜‰ u updated to early man. πŸ˜† ..so im waiting for another update and u noe wat that means right πŸ˜› ....lol and im serious im waiting...as i am addicted 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

How sweet to think about me...But I can't take rest because when I see you all enjoying my ff so how can I break your feelings about my ff..I will continue soon as possible but it will take time. I'm busy now soo I will update today I PROMISE I WILL...KASAMH SE

Love youπŸ€—

Love Rina

Ahhh...that is really sweet of you..but you must also take some rest..and think about your self...Take your time I will wait for the next part...😊 You are really sweet...

Take some rest...you have to promise me that you will also think about your self and take some rest...allright...😊

Love you

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