FF[pyaar ishq aur mohabbat] part 12pg 24 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
Wowww...AWSOMEEEE first updatee...
hope its love at first sight..
Pls update soon..
--Nelly
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Nelly34

Wowww...AWSOMEEEE first updatee...
hope its love at first sight..
Pls update soon..
--Nelly

thnXX nelly di so much<<

i also hope its love at first sight**** hehe well lets seee<3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#23

Chapter 2

As Sagar and Vidya were looking into eachothers eyes, people were giggling at the way their position were. Sagar snapped out of it as soon as he heard sum girls giggling. He carried Vidya up but was stil into her eyes. Vidya snapped out of it also and hesitated to talk to him.

V- ummm...thnk you sorry maine dekhna nahin ki aap yaha.....Vidya looks down.

S- uhhh,, no its ok aap ka koi galthi nahin thi. Sagar still remains to look at her and finaly Viday looks up.

V- main jao?

S -haa, ...uhh.. jaye. Vidya looked a lil tensed and irritated.

V- agar aap mujhe chorde tub main jaongi na? She looked at him in a questionable way. Sagar noticed he stil had his hands on her back. He immediately let go and scratched the back of his head.

S- umm, srry!

V- its ok. She starts to walk away but drops her bracelet which was on her hands. As she was walking her hair was flowing throughout the wind. Sagar looked at her walk away and fortunately Vidya looked back at him. As she turned around to see him, Sagar immediately looked back and pretended he was walking away. Vidya stood there and then walked away. Sagar has spotted her bracelet and oicked it up. He smiles and then walked away.

It was time for classes to start and Vidya looked around the hallways to see which class she was to go in. She was struggling to find the room she was supposed to be in. SHe had finally found the room where her assigned class was. SHe entered the class and found out that this was the right class. She sat down and opened her books and started to listen to the teachers lecture. Even though al the people were nealry asleep, Vidya was awake and listened to the whole lecture.

It was then time to go home. Vidya was at the entrance of the building waiting impatiently for Shalu. SHe decided to take her mp3 player out and listen to sum music. As she was listening, she nodded her head to the music and dropped her purse. When she went down to pick it up, she saw another hand in favor to help. She looked up and saw it was Sagar, the same guy she bumped into this morning. He picked her purse up and gave it to her.

V- thanks!

S- its no problem, koi baath nahin, vaise aap subha min aap ka bracelet bhoolgaya tha, amin lekar ayi isse. Vidya thankfully looked at him. He had a pleasant smile on his face.

V- thnk you soo much, aap nahin jaanthi ki aap ne mujhpar kithna bara ehsaan kiya!

S- hey hey its ok, yeh koi ehsaaan nahin tha, jus meri help tha. Just then Shalu comes along and goes towards Vidya.

Sha- eyy Vidya main aagayi ab chal? Shalu walks forward, Vidya smiled at Sagar and was about to walk away when her dupatta caught Sagars shirt. She got pulled by her dupatta and looked back. She had an innocent look on her face and Sagar looked at her in passion. He then untied her dupatta on his shirt and let it go. SHe still stood there looking at him.

Shalu from far away yells out her name.

Sha- Viyda chalo na! maa intezaar karehonge! Vidya snaps out of it and starts to run away. Sagar then turns around and touches his shirt.

S- Vidya.....he smiles and then gets back to reality and lightly slaps his head.

Precap- Shalu askinng who that guy was Vidya was talking to. Chinu notices Sagar is lost in his thoughts.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Aww...this was cuteeeee....

Tahmina..thanks...can you make a bigger font please...please..I am sorry I am being such a crybaby...

I loved the story...Saagar to totally fida... 😆 😆 😆

Please update soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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GREAT! AAMZING! LOVED IT. I JUST LOVE IT SIMPLY. THIS IS PROBABLY LIKE THE 2ND BEST FF SINCE TERE MERE PYAAR IS THE FIRST BEST. I LOVE IT!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Isha

Aww...this was cuteeeee....

Tahmina..thanks...can you make a bigger font please...please..I am sorry I am being such a crybaby...

I loved the story...Saagar to totally fida... 😆 😆 😆

Please update soon...

lol of course ill make it bigger, its kk<<3 nd thnXX 4 likin it so much<<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: bmtd11

GREAT! AAMZING! LOVED IT. I JUST LOVE IT SIMPLY. THIS IS PROBABLY LIKE THE 2ND BEST FF SINCE TERE MERE PYAAR IS THE FIRST BEST. I LOVE IT!

aww thnXX moomoo<3 cant wait 4 ur update<3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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tamz that was too too good man ur a awesome writer got to admit man....please countinue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
SUPERB i loved it omg continue son plzplzplz 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
awesome job!, can you make the writing a bit bigger? thanks! 😃

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