AR scenes..scene11 page77..pyar ki mehndi

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Posted: 15 years ago

Heyaa...guys im sure most of u...knw abt me writin AR scenes....frm a long time....i thought y not...get all those scenes in one post n then cont addin more scenes that i write here....so here are my AR scenes frm the start...n here are they....πŸ˜‰


Scene#1
Armaan:papa sab theek toh hoga na
Shashank:armaan dont worry beta...itz a normal delvery everything will be fine....tum tension mat lo
Armaan:par papa ridhima...ridhima ko toh kuch nahi hoga na...aur mera baby..woh
Paddy laughs:armaan....sir ne kaha na normal delivery hai...na ridhima ko kuch hoga aur na tumhare baby ko...don worry...
Anjie comes laughing:haan haan jeejs don worry waise bhi ridz se zayda dare hue toh tum ho...dekho ridhima ko dekho iss halat mein bhi muskura rahi hai nu...ure sweating
Every1 laughs...
Armaan goes towards ridhima in her room....she takes his hand in hers....n presses it...n blinks her eye...in a "dont worry...il be fine " look...
He puts his hand on her face...n then kisses her forehead...n then puts his hand on her stomach...n says
Armaan:chotu master...don worry...papa hai na...tum ek dum theek se aa jayoge....par dekho tum mumma ko zyada tang mat karna...[ridz smiles lookin at his concern]...aur haan...he goes closer to her stomach...[as if talkin secret to the baby]
mumma ko zyada nakhre mat dikhana...tum jaldi se nikal jaana....aur phir tumhare aane ke baad hum dono milke tumhari mumma ko tang karenge...ohk[ridz hears this and holds his ears]
Ridz:kya kaha tumne...
Armaan:main...meri itni majaal...ke main kuch keh sakoon...main toh....bas apne junior se keh raha tha...ke mumma ko tang mat karna...
He tries hard to look cool...n calm/...but he's too tensed...more tensed than ridhima...
Ridhima takes his hand again:armaan dont worry...tum itni tension kyun le rahe ho...ek delivery hai...sab theek hoga....
Armaan:par ridhima..agar tumhe aur junior ko kuch ho gaya toh...
Ridhima smiles:tumhare hote hue hume kuch ho sakta hai....
Armaan smiles:kabhi nahi...
Ridzy gives a scream suddenly...Armaan gets all tensed...He goes on "kyz hua ridhima??"....n then he says"tum ruko...main abhi papa ko bula kar aata hoon...bas 2 min"...Ridz is screaming n screaming n screaming...armi runs out...n calls shashank...he immdiately comes...ridz is taken to ICU...
whr her operation starts...the operation is goin on inside...but the tesnion is all outside...armaan is sweating...to the core..n anjie is trying to control himm
Anjie:chill jeejs...everything will be fine...[she gets a glas of water...but he refused to drink...hes too worried...she keeps it aside n puts her hand on his shoulder] armaan dont worry....ek din mein hazaro bacche paida hote hai....tum hara bhi ho jayega...
Armaan:par ridhima toh theek rahegi na
Anjie:offooo ek sawaal hazaar baar pooch chuke ho...tumhe dad pe bharosa nahi hai
Armaan:hai par...
Anjie:...ridhima theek hogi armaan...bas ab chup ho jao...Armaan is constantly moving...he's soo tensed...itna tensed toh woh apne life  mein  kabhi nahi tha shayad...he then goes to the temple in sanjeevani n starts praying there..praying for his love...his life...his family...aftera while anjie comes running
Anjie:jeejs...itz a girl....apko beti hui hai
Armaan:what...girl...mujhe beti hui hai[his smile gets wider n wider...he hugs anjie first...n then runs to ridhima..]
Shashank comes out of the OT...he comes to armaan n hugs him
Shasank:congratz beta...tum papa ban gaye...aur main nana
Anjie:aur main maasi...wow...
Armaan:papa kya main ridhima se mil sakta hoon
Shashank:haan beta...jao...ridhima se mil lo..aur apni beti se bhii
Armaan goes inside...he sees ridhima..sleeping...he goes n kisses her on the forehead n says" thanks ridhima...tumne mujhe aaj meri zinadagi ka sabse pyar gist diya hia"...he then goes towards her lil baby girl..and takes her in his hand..hes soooooo sooo hapy to see her...there's a spark in his eyes...a spark which his dad ha when he held him for thr first time...a spark...which he had when he first came to knw ridhima is pregnant...he kisses his baby girl on the forehead....n then says"hello...main tumhara papa hoon....aur papa tumhe bahut bahut bahut pyaar karte hai....i love my dear angel...tumne meri duniya ko aaj poora kar diya hai....thanku ...thanku soo much
for coming to me my angel...papa loves u very very very much"
Ridhima who s awake hears all this this n says: haan haan ab toh tumhara saara pyaar tumhar is baby ka...aur mere liye"
Armaan laughs n comes towards her n says:arre wifey...don worry...mera pyaar tumhare liye kabhi kam nahi hoga..tum dono mere life ke best gifts ho...aaj main is duniya ka sabse khush insaan hoon...aj meri family complete hogayi hai"[he holds her baby in one arm n keeps the other hand on ridzy shoulder]
Ridhima:humari family...completely ho gayi hai[ she says this n rests on his shoulder n both stare at their wondeful angel]

Sorry guys there was a big confusion...but now itz done...ive update all my three scenes...

Scene 1-page 1-AR's first baby

Scene 2-page 2-Ammy takes ridz to meet his parents

Scene 3-page 3-AR seprate

Scene 4- page 5-shashank gets to knw abt AR

scene 5A-page 12-AR on a date[beach scene]

Scene 5B-page 17-AR on a date[beach scene]

Scene 6-page 23-night b4 AR marriage

Scene 7-page 33-AR fight

scene 8:page 43-A's GF bak

scene 9:page 55-a lil surprise

scene 10:page 65-baby hues

scene 11:page 77-pyaar ki mehandi

do comment hope ul like itπŸ˜‰

 

 

 

Edited by komalsirwani - 15 years ago

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shruthinair thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 work yaar.... Post all your new scenes too in this so that wee can read them collectively whenever possible instead of searching it...
Good job πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ keep writing cutey scenes if possible with other jodis too coz am missing them too.
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Posted: 15 years ago
@shruthi...thx a ton shurthi..yeah surely wil keep postin here...glad that u lked my scenes 😳 😳 😳



but guys...i expected soo many comments... 😭 😭 😭
mahandra thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey komal..i remember this scene of urs...shooooo cute..AR's baby 😳 r u still updating the others..there is only 1 scene till now na? 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey natahsa...ive addded all my 3 scenes that ive written here...na...hope uve read all of them...n yea i wll soon be updatin with a new scene... πŸ˜‰ Edited by komalsirwani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww.... komal, it is chooo chweeet...i had not read this before...plz post your other scenes too 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
@chaitra...hey chaitra...uve read them all...glad u like dthem...ya wil post more soon 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
πŸ˜† ...ridzy se zyaada ammy ko tension ho raha hai........and he wants irritate ridz... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .....aawwww.....such a cute cute part!!!!!!komu keep it up...why dont u cont and make dis a ff??
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Posted: 15 years ago

cho cute 😳 😳
thanks for posting πŸ˜ƒ ... i had not read this one 

keep it upπŸ‘

Edited by moreremix - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@prags....thanks prags...glad u lked it
@sam di..aww thx dii...ure comment means a lot.. 😳