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Posted: 16 years ago

 Kimi-Hana

 

Hi guys 😃 Its chandni aka Nishi ! I thought about posting this for a long time. And finally got to it (lol), I owe it all to my best friend Shaina  cuz believe it or not, she's the one who taught me almost everything I know ! hehe… And someday, I hope to be as good of a writer as her 😳 So first off, I'd like to dedicate this to God 😳 and my family. Amma, daddy, Jaya paati, and Chandrika 😳. And to all my I-F friends cuz without them, I dunno where I'd be 🤗

 Jani-yeh,Shruti_5, Inpsector Sahib, Sabrina, Anam, Sara, Thameen, mandy, tanishtha, and everyone else !

 

Thanks guys !!!!  🤗And last but not least, my 9 yr old Russian friend, Shaina 🤗spaciba shainushka dear 😳

 

  ***Notes***- For those of you who don't know what Hollister or DeliA*s is- They are both clothing stores 😊 very cute clothing stores 😉

 Also.... This story is very much like anime. If you don't know what anime is, Then please watch something like Gakuen Alice(Alice Academy), Fruits Basket, or School Rumble 😊. I reccomend Veoh.com 😊

   

 

[Funny Clip]

 

   Long long ago, …..in a faraway place called Japan…There lived three best friends. Kimi. Jaslyn. And Sapna.they were the sweetest, most kindest ----

 Kimi-whoa, whoa, *waving hands* Hold it !. I thought this story was about Sapna and her sister !!

 Narrator-brit accent- uh… it is.

 Kimi- well then get to the point ! And take off that stupid hat of yours ! helloo ???? narrator ??? Im talkin to u fuzz-face !

  Narrator- uh o-ok. As I was saying, they were the most----

 Kimi- And put on a smile ! you look like u just saw a ghost !

 Narrator- Kid, cant u see im trying to tell a story here ?? Leave me alone and go play with your little friends. Go on. Run along darling.

 Kimi- (hands on hips) Excuse me !?!??? I'm one of the main characters ! You listen to what I say.

 Jaslyn- Kimi, just leave him alone and let him tell the freak'in story…

Kimi- NO I wont leave until he atleast smiles ! I wont stop unitl I succeed !!!

 Narrator- ugh… ok I will. Now let me do my job ok ?

 Kimi- (baby talk and pinching cheeks)- aaww I see that smile ! Come on now, smile, smile ! Aaww ur so cute. Oh yes u are. Tickle tickle tickle. Coohie coochie cooo.

 Narrator- Aaahhh !!!

 Kimi- You get back here right now young man ! 

                             *chasing eachother*

 Narrator- Aaahhh !! Stop it !! Get away from me little girl !!

 Jaslyn- Oh geez….. oh hello boys and girls. Since kimi-kins (kimi-don't call me that !!) and Mr. Narrator are a little bus chasing eachother, lets hand it over to our sweet Sapna. Sapna !..... Sapna !....

 Sapna- yes !!

 Jaslyn- Why don't u tell us the rest of the story ?

 Nish- W-WHAT ??? I CANT HEAR YOU !

 Jaslyn- ipods……

  (yanks the headphones out)

sapna- Heeeyy…. I was listenging to that.

 Jaslyn- What were you listening to ?

 Sapna- Magic carpet ride.

   *akward silence*

 Jaslyn-….. your too old for that crap….

 Sapna- Yeah I know….

 Jaslyn- Ok Can you Tell these nice people the rest of the story or not ???

 Sapna- Oh alright. But I can't do it right now. Hollister's having a HUGE clearance sale!!!

Jaslyn- holy crap….. why didn't u tell me sooner ?

 Sapan- Well now u know ! Lets grab Kimi and go !

 Jaslyn- yes…. Let's

 *  Kimi and Mr. Narrator join in*

 Narrator- NO Way ! I'm coming to Hollister with you !

 Kimi- (jumps up and down) Yay ! me too !

           *everone gets in car and leaves*

 Kimi- Hey is it the Hollister across from DeliA*s ?

 Sapna- Yeah it is !

 Kimi- Cool ! cuz theres this cute top…. (trailing off)

 Jas- I'm just coming so I can switch the mannequins.

 Kimi-Oh Jas ! you'll get in trouble !

 Jaslyn- Duh I'll get in trouble.

           *they ride off into the sunset*

 Billy runs in….

  Billy- Hey ! Who's gonna tell the story then !

 Jaslyn- Hey get outa here. This is our story. We do whatever we want.

 Kimi- Don't be so mean to the little kid !

 Jaslyn- I'm just stating facts. We don't even know who this kid is.

 Billy- All I wanted was a stoooorrryyy…waaaahhhhh *cries uncontrollably*

 Kimi- Oh don't cry ! Hey you can come to Hollister with us !

 Billy- o-ok *sniff, sniff*

 Kimi- To Hollister !

 Billy- Yay !

 Kimi (whispers to Jas,) "Im realy liking this kid "!

 Jaslyn- Way to go Kimi. Let's bring a 4yr old with us to Hollister. Why didn't I think of that ??

  *they get in car again*

 Billy- Yay ! Hollister !

 Jaslyn- Where's your parents billy ?

 Billy- Yay !

 Jaslyn- Mom ? Dad ?

 Billy- Hollister !

 Jaslyn- Where did you come from ? Your parents have to be here somewhere.

 Kimi & Billy- Hollister ! Hollister !

 Jaslyn- This is gonna be a long ride…

 Kimi & Billy- Hollister, Hollister !

      * they ride off into the sunset again*

[ Funny Clip]

 

Alex- Oh my gosh ! I just had the weirdest dream ! I dreamt that we were stuck in the past. And… we were in japan…. With samurais and stuff !

 Ashley- (hitting herself w/ a pillow) ah-bam-ah-bam-ah-bam-ah-bam-ah-bam

 Sapna- uh… hate to break it to you but that wasn't a dream.

 Alex- oh. (disappointed)

  Sapna- What else did u dream ?

 Alex- Oh it was nothing.

 Sapna- Come one ! tell us !

 Alex- well everything was colorful… and made out of cotton candy ! and there were bubbles flying everywhere…. And flowers were singing. Caitlin was there ans she finally told me-

  Ashley- waaayyy to much information.

  Sapna- (laughing and rolling until I catch my breath) *clears throat* that was NOT funny……

 Ashley-  …. Hehe…. Bubbles….cottoncandy… hehe…

  Ash & me- and Caitlin !

     *laughing all over again*

  Alex- ugh…why did I have to tell them in the first place ?

  Me- Aaww we're sorry

     (Sapna tries to hug him but he just stands there)

 

                5 minutes later….   

 

 

Ashley- Alex,….what are you doing now ???

Alex- I'm practicing my speech. So when they find us, I'll know exactly what to say. (says like he's a genious)

Ashley- How can you even think of that right now ?!? And how do you know they're gonna find us !?! We'll die in here. Our bodies will rot and--- ( cuts off)

Alex- Hey, things could be a lot worse.

 Ashley-  Uh …. We are stuck in 16 century Japan all because we just had to go find sapna's  sister…and u know the worse part about it ??? *tearing up* They aren't going to find us. It's been 3-4 weeks ! We're stuck in this 'underground prison' living on….. rotten fish….. that too in the past :S ! We'll be lucky if we even make it out alive.

 Sapna- (on ground, on her side holding her stomach) You guys….. stop fighting….

 Alex- (standing now) Oh come on, why do you have to be so dramatic ?!!

 Ashley- I'm NOT being dramatic I'm just showing the facts !

 Sapna- guys……

 Ashley- I mean, what's the chance of them finding us ?? Huh ? Like 1 in a billion ?!!!

 Alex- ugh for once in your life could ya just shut up ???

 Ashley- Oh, so  you have a problem with me talking ? Is that right Irish boy ?!!

 Alex- I'm not Irish !!

 Ashley- Well you have to face it someday you know.

 Sapna- I said stop fighting !! (no one hears) (and wondering how it changed to this subject)

 Alex- You little.... !

 Ashley- What ? What are you gonna do about it ? Push me ?

Sapna- GUYS !!!! BE QUIET !!!!

 Ashley & Alex- YOU BE QUIET !!!

 ***Guard bangs on door signaling them to be quiet. And slides food to them.

Sapna looks at it and pushes it away. Ashley takes a bite, turns and throws up. Alex slowly puts it in his mouth….***

 Alex- Hey,… this tastes pretty good ! What is it ?

 Sapna-  more rotten fish…. Except with a new color ;)

 Ashley- ( who finally recovers from throwing up, throws up again).

 Alex- Well this is some pretty good fish

 Ashley- (thinking back) Hey… how did we get in here anyway ??

 Alex- Stupid. It was a time machine remember ??

 Ashley- No dufus I meant how did it start ?

 Alex- *burps* Yeah....how did it start ? Like from the beginning… *burps again*

 Ashley- eeewww stop burping !

 Alex- You stop talking

 Ashley- No way—(cuts off)

Sapna-Guys ! ok… I'll tell the story of how we ended up here… from the beginning. But you guys have to promise not to fight.

 Alex & Ashley- Promise

Sapna- Ok. It all started long ago… well I guess that's in 300 yrs since we're in the 1700s. But anyways, it all started in Summer of 2007… in Japan…. when I was in the 8th grade :D

 

  Ok guys !! that's all for now 😊Would you like me to post more ?? Like I said, things are a little slow right now but it gets better 😉

 

 Hope you enjoyed it !

 

Chapter 2- Page 4 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nishi, wow! I didnt know u could write this good!!! awesome job!! 👏 I loved it! do post more! 😃 Edited by shruti_5 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^^ thanks sooo much !!!! i havent got around to telling all my friends yet so sorry i didnt tell u earlier !! 😃 😃 😃 yes i will post more !! 😃 😃 😃 im so glad u liked it ! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Nishi....lyk i told ya b4....ur story totally rocks...really cnt w8 2 read more....gr8 job honey.... 👏 😉

luv ya
Jani
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Posted: 16 years ago
no probz honey 😉....mwah mwah....Jani jaan
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^^ lolzz 😆 😆 ok im gonna post half of the next chapter ok ? 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice story! that was really cool 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
mercy 😳 😳 what did u like about it ? 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
whoa 😊 but anything in particular ?? i liked the billy part alot 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
my fav bit was the bit with Kimi chasing the narrator😆