*ISHQ HAI TUMSE.pge 53 biggest update!

Hey all, this is my first FF on kasturi hope you like it

Title: *'Ishq Hai Tumse'*

 character Analysis

 

kasturi:a sweet and simple beauty, lives in Delhi with both her sisters tanu and navneet and her mom and dad. They are very rich…and live in a grand mansion

 

Robbie: heartthrob of every girl in town….a guy with the best voice in India  Robbie the rock star……very rich multi millionaire lives with his mom, dad, both sisters(divya,allana) and 3 brothers(raunak,vikas,areev) in delhi and he has the biggest mansion anyone could  ever imagine…

 

kasturi's dad(jp): a very rich business man rival of sabharwal group of industries..

 

 

Robbie's dad: very rich and rival of chawla group of industries

 

kasturi's best freind piya:loving and sweet married to raunak sabhrwal..and the eldest bahu of sabhrawal kandan...(family)

 

 

This is set in the beautiful grand mansion of the chawla's  and showing the beautiful sights nearby…a very grand view of the sea from kasturi's bedroom a pure beauty  looking out of her balcony watching her sisters play basketball in the pitch….Eyes as shiny as crystals. With a wish sparkling inside them, Sweet pink lips smiling and…….the moment we've all been waiting for...there stood a pretty face….

 

kasturi calls out from her the triple large balcony in her room

kasturi:tanu! navneet! tum log basket ball khel rahe ho…time ka patha hai kya tum logo ko its 12:00pm and your still not in college kitna late hogaye ho tum logo ka mein kya karoo

 

tanu shouts above from below

 

tanu: kasturi di! aaj college nahi hai aaj tho Sunday hai na

 

kasturi:kya!!!oh no! mujhe piya ki engagement  mein jaana tha aaj at10:00am  kese bhul gayi meine tho socha tha aaj Friday hai…shit I better get a move on!!!!

 

Tanu carries on playing basket ball

 

kasturi calls her friend piya

 

piya:hello kasturi!

 

kasturi: hi piya im sorry I really thought it was Friday today aur tumhare engagement mein jaldi nahi aapayi  par you don't worry mein thodi der mein tumhare waha pochti hoon ok piya

 

piya:no kasturi its fine don't rush wese bhi mehndi ka intezaam hojayega aur the engagement  is starting in the evening at 6:30pm okay..

kasturi:haan piya I know par you need me there to help you with the arrangments naa

 

piya:kasturi tum kitni ziddi ho tikhe ajao mein tumhari intezar karoongi ok

 

kasturi:ya ill b there in 2 minutes bye piya

 

piya:bye kasturi…o actually hold on tum saree pehenke aana please

 

kasturi:saree! par piya mujhe saree peheni nahi aati

 

piya:o kasturi c'mon tum ek hot pink saree leke ajaoo mein pehenaoongi akir engagement hai jeans pehenke nahi aasakte ho na aur tanu aur navneet ko definetly leke aana ha

 

kasturi:ok then piya ill hang up bye

 

 

kasturi, tanu, navneet:hi piya!

 

kasturi:kesi ho piya im sorry im late yaar ab chalo lets get on with the decorations

 

piya:hey kasturi itni rush kyun bahot time hai don't worry

 

kasturi:par piya

 

piya:intezaam tho hojayenge par tujhse baat karne ka time nahi milega ab iss din ke baad(and she gets upset)

 

kasturi goes near piya and consoles her

 

kasturi:eisa kyun kehti hai piya mein humesha tumhare saath rahoongi mujhe yaad rokogey na

 

piya: tujhe bhul kese sakti hoon mein kasturi tu tho meri behen jesi hai my best friend par ye baat hee ki ab har roz humari mulaqat nahi hogi….

 

kasturi: haan piya par kya karey jaana tho padega lekin phone karegi na mujhe

 

piya:of course kasturi

and they hug again, tanu and navneet  hug her too and they are all in tears

 

Kasturi wipes piya's tears and her own also

 

kasturi:teri engagement h  hei aaj iss din koi rona dhona nahi ye bahot hi khas occasion hai mere liye meri best friend ki mehndi hai bahot maza karenge hum ok piya

 

piya:chalo kasturi, navneet aur tanu andar chalo

 

 

devika:Robbie! Robbie utho Robbie tum itni der tak so kyun rahe ho yaad heina aaj raunak ke sasural jaana hei hume piya ki mehndi keliye shagun lekar

 

(Raunak is Robbie's older brother)

 

robbie:bhai!!oh no mein bhul kese gaya abhi ut tha hoon mom jus a sec. let me get ready…

 

precap:piya's pyaare 'dewar' robbie is going to meet her pyaari friend kasturi…at thr engagement…

plz leave comments priya!

~~index~~  

part 1-page 1  

part 2-page 1   

part 3 -page 2         

part 4-page 3      

part 5-page 4  

part 6-page 5

part 7-page 6

part 8-page 8

part 9-page 9

part10-page 11

part 11-page 13

part 12-page 14

part 13-page 16

part 14-page 18

part 15-page 20

part 16-page 22

part 17-page 24

part 18-page 26

part 19-page 28

part 20-page 29

part 21-page 31

part 22-page 32

part 23-page 32

part 24-page 33

part 25-page 36

part 26 page 38

part 27-page 40

part 28 page 41

part 29-page 44

part 30-page 45

part 31-page 47

part 32-page 49

all nxt parts page 53

 

priya!!😳karan..karan...karan!!!!!!!!!karan K.A.R.A.N!!😆totally KARAN!!!!!!=)

Edited by sweet_dreams22 - 15 years ago

Woowww tats a wonderful start yaar... Keep continuing and I luv to read FFs abt RK's luv story😃

Krishi

Hey dear Very nice Starting 👏..as kishu said humhe RoKa ke pyar ko dekhna aur read karna aacha lagta hai 😳😆

Continue Pleaseee😛

Manpreet

another budding writer..wow!!!! 👏

Excellent starting...seems like an interestin ff, very different from the real serial..loll!!! cnt wait for the nxt pat when ROKA will meet! Edited by nehagupta_9 - 16 years ago

wow this place is rocking with the ff's great job  i like your writing style to the point.. i wish i could do that😆 and i like where you started from...sounds like rk scenes will be beautiful and coming up quickly..update soon...👏👏👏

robina

wonderful start do continue soon!!!!

thnk you all so so so so😆much!

ok guys heres the nxt part

recap-kasturi and robbie are both attending piya and raunaks engagement

 

Part 2

 

Robbie:mom! aapne pehle kyun nahi bataya ab tho mein rehearsals keliye late hogaya dekho na 3:00pm bajgaye mom..!!!!!

 

devika:robbie tum ek chote bache nahi rahey ho ab ki mein tumhe har waqt inform karti raho akir meri bhi tho bahot kaam hai aur aaj tho piya ki ring karidne gaye thi isliye mein ghar par nahi thi tho divya ne tumhe kyun nahi uthaya

 

divya:mom aap yaha par chila kyun rahe ho piya bhabhi ki ring karidli na

 

devika:tum kaha thi divya apne bhaiya ko uthaya kyun nahi

 

divya:mmo I was out ab sorry na

 

robbie:tu humesha bahar rehti hai budhu kahiki ab jaa bhi yaha se

 

divya:im sorry na bhaiya ab chalte hoon

 

devika:ab jaldi uthke jaao robbie cmon make a move aur pir niche ajana ok

 

robbie gets ready and goes to rehearsals, then finishes rehearsals and cumz back home and meets raunak

 

robbie: bhai aaj tayar rehna shaam ko bhabhi ki yaha jaana hai na!huh..'wink wink'

 

raunak:robbie tu bhi na! jaa mujhe bahar jaana hai

 

robbie:bhai! arey ruko mein kya pehenoo

 

raunak: mujhe kya patha tu jo pehena chahata hei wo pehen lena ok

 

robbie:alright jeans and shirt…..ok

 

raunak:perfect! bye robbie

 

 

piya gets a call from raunak

 

raunak:hello piya

kasturi snatches the phone

 

kasturi:arey shaadi se pehle hi baat karna chahte ho humari saheli se

 

raunak:tho aap saali ji

 

kasturi puts the phone on mike and jokes around with raunak for some time and piya is laughing through the conversation…

 

raunak:ji haan jiya ji ye kya jadoo kardiya hai humari saheli par har din 24x7 aapka tasweer lekar har jaga ghumti rehti hai

 

piya tries to snatch the phone from kasturi

piya:kasturi phone do ye kehrahi ho tum,

kasturi burst out laughing and then after all gave the phone to piya but she was singing whole throughout their conversation

 

kasturi(sings): thoda sa pyaa hua hai shaadi hai bakhi,

 

piya:kasturi! chup kar, raunak ye kasturi bahot shararti hai isski baatein mat suuna aap

 

raunak:kya piya kasturi ne galat hi kya kaha hai

 

piya:aap bhi!

 

kasturi:dekha piya humare jiya ji bhi humare saath hai paksh deti hoon shaadi mein joote nahi churaooni om jiya ji

 

tanu:kya keh rahe ho di joote tho churane hi padenge

 

kasturi(whispers so raunak doesn't hear)idiot joote tho churaoongi hi na pakka..

 

tanu:o sorry

 

piya:ok raunak mein rakti hoon

 

raunak:bye piya and I ….luv…you

 

piya gets embarrassed bcuz the phone is on loud speaker

 

kasturi, piya's other friends, tanu, navneet: oh ho! I luv you

 

piya:dhat!!!!!, ab rakiye raunak!

 

then robbie arrives with something for piya to her house…

ding dong!!!

 

kasturi:mein jakar dekti hoon

she goes to the door and opens it and there stood someone with a bouquet of flowers covering his face

 

robbie removes the bouquet  from his face and drops it after seeing kasturi and he got lost in a world of his own just simply staring at her

 

kasturi after calling him abt 4 times he doesn't listen then she clicks her finger at his face

 

kasturi:hello! who are you kaun hai aap

 

robbie:wo…piya bhabhi kaha hai?

 

kasturi:kyun

 

robbie:hello mein apne hone wale bhabhi se milne aya hoon aap puchne wali kaun hote hai

 

kasturi gets angry

 

kasturi:xuse me! mein zaroori nahi samhjti aapko itna info dena milne aye hai mil lijiye…

 

piya:arey robbie kese ho?

 

kasturi is standing there while piya cumz down the stairs talking to robbie

 

robbie:bhabhiji kese hai aap

 

piya:bilcul tik

 

robbie:ye aapke liye ek chota sa tohfa

 

piya:isski kya zaroorat thi mr. rock star

 

kasturi looks at robbie strangely when piya sais mr. rockstar

 

robbie:aapka rockstar bilcul tik hai bhabhi anyways ab mein chalta hoon

 

piya:lekin robbie itne jaldi aao na baitho kasturi jao robbie keliye kuch le aoo

 

robbie:kuch nahi bhabhi pls

 

but kasturi already brought something

 

kasturi doesn't look at him and holds up the glass in front of his face

 

he takes the glass and holds her hand which Is also around the glass and then she looks at him and he raises hi eyebrows and she takes her hand off the glass

 

robbie:bhabhi ab mein chalta hoon shaam ko milenge

 

piya:ok robbie bye

 

robbie:bye bhabhi and yeah bye aapko bhi(he puts his hand forward)

 

kasturi:its kasturi and bye(angrily)

robbie returns home and now its 6:00pm and everyone's getting ready first piya makes kasturi wear kasturi's hot pink sari and then kasturi makes piya ready in a hot pink lehnga.

 

ding dong

All the mehman have arrived in piya's place and ding dong

all the girls run down and tanu, navneet and kasturi stay with piya to get her down

the ladke waale have arrived and everyone is happy…..

 

Piya's mom:jao jakar piya ko lekar aao, (and they all greet each other)

 

kasturi geta piya down and raunak winks at piya and piya feels shy and looks away they are coming down the stair kasturi looks amazing!!!and very gorgeous

 

robbie to himself: wah! kya lag rahi hai she is sooo pretty

 

They all come down and everyone has some entertainment and all the guests are chatting amongst each other then kasturi announces that piya and raunak should dance on stage and they dance to 'bole chudiyan'and when they finish

 

kasturi picks a chit out of the jar for who gonna dance next then she picks out robbies name

 

kasturi:robbie!!!!!!!!!???(not happy)

 

then robbie comes on stage and pick out a name

 

robbie: kasturi!!!!(happily)

 

song plays and kasturi has to go along with it so does robbie and they dance together

http://ww.smashits.com/music/hindi-movie/play/songs/2200/Hun gama/21531/Hum-Nahin-Tere-Dushmano-Mein.html

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Kyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya

precap:kasturi goes to get the ring and bumps into robbie and robbie catches her…

plz leave comments

Edited by sweet_dreams22 - 16 years ago

priya 🤗 long tym huh 😆 well ur ff is so cool lv ur writing skills nd keep writing more 😉

hi mani! 🤗 long time no see!thnk you so much im so glad you likd it..... 😆 😆