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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey all, this is my first FF on kasturi hope you like it

Title: *'Ishq Hai Tumse'*

character Analysis

kasturi:a sweet and simple beauty, lives in Delhi with both her sisters tanu and navneet and her mom and dad. They are very rich…and live in a grand mansion

Robbie: heartthrob of every girl in town….a guy with the best voice in India Robbie the rock star……very rich multi millionaire lives with his mom, dad, both sisters(divya,allana) and 3 brothers(raunak,vikas,areev) in delhi and he has the biggest mansion anyone could ever imagine…

kasturi's dad(jp): a very rich business man rival of sabharwal group of industries..

Robbie's dad: very rich and rival of chawla group of industries

kasturi's best freind piya:loving and sweet married to raunak sabhrwal..and the eldest bahu of sabhrawal kandan...(family)

ishita:robbie's college freind

kasturi's sister tanu:

This is set in the beautiful grand mansion of the chawla's and showing the beautiful sights nearby…a very grand view of the sea from kasturi's bedroom a pure beauty looking out of her balcony watching her sisters play basketball in the pitch….Eyes as shiny as crystals. With a wish sparkling inside them, Sweet pink lips smiling and…….the moment we've all been waiting for...there stood a pretty face….

kasturi calls out from her the triple large balcony in her room

kasturi:tanu! navneet! tum log basket ball khel rahe ho…time ka patha hai kya tum logo ko its 12:00pm and your still not in college kitna late hogaye ho tum logo ka mein kya karoo

tanu shouts above from below

tanu: kasturi di! aaj college nahi hai aaj tho Sunday hai na

kasturi:kya!!!oh no! mujhe piya ki engagement mein jaana tha aaj at10:00am kese bhul gayi meine tho socha tha aaj Friday hai…shit I better get a move on!!!!

Tanu carries on playing basket ball

kasturi calls her friend piya

piya:hello kasturi!

kasturi: hi piya im sorry I really thought it was Friday today aur tumhare engagement mein jaldi nahi aapayi par you don't worry mein thodi der mein tumhare waha pochti hoon ok piya

piya:no kasturi its fine don't rush wese bhi mehndi ka intezaam hojayega aur the engagement is starting in the evening at 6:30pm okay..

kasturi:haan piya I know par you need me there to help you with the arrangments naa

piya:kasturi tum kitni ziddi ho tikhe ajao mein tumhari intezar karoongi ok

kasturi:ya ill b there in 2 minutes bye piya

piya:bye kasturi…o actually hold on tum saree pehenke aana please

kasturi:saree! par piya mujhe saree peheni nahi aati

piya:o kasturi c'mon tum ek hot pink saree leke ajaoo mein pehenaoongi akir engagement hai jeans pehenke nahi aasakte ho na aur tanu aur navneet ko definetly leke aana ha

kasturi:ok then piya ill hang up bye

piya:bye kasturi

kasturi gets ready and takes her sari with her then she informs her sisters and the 3 get into kasturi's car and kasturi quikly rives over to piya's place…wearing skinny jeans and a casual top(but she is gonna change later)

Kasturi and piya hug each other

piya: kasturi!tum agaye hi tanu, hi navneet

kasturi, tanu, navneet:hi piya!

kasturi:kesi ho piya im sorry im late yaar ab chalo lets get on with the decorations

piya:hey kasturi itni rush kyun bahot time hai don't worry

kasturi:par piya

piya:intezaam tho hojayenge par tujhse baat karne ka time nahi milega ab iss din ke baad(and she gets upset)

kasturi goes near piya and consoles her

kasturi:eisa kyun kehti hai piya mein humesha tumhare saath rahoongi mujhe yaad rokogey na

piya: tujhe bhul kese sakti hoon mein kasturi tu tho meri behen jesi hai my best friend par ye baat hee ki ab har roz humari mulaqat nahi hogi….

kasturi: haan piya par kya karey jaana tho padega lekin phone karegi na mujhe

piya:of course kasturi

and they hug again, tanu and navneet hug her too and they are all in tears

Kasturi wipes piya's tears and her own also

kasturi:teri engagement h hei aaj iss din koi rona dhona nahi ye bahot hi khas occasion hai mere liye meri best friend ki mehndi hai bahot maza karenge hum ok piya

piya:chalo kasturi, navneet aur tanu andar chalo

They all go in and help piya out with the decorations

devika:Robbie! Robbie utho Robbie tum itni der tak so kyun rahe ho yaad heina aaj raunak ke sasural jaana hei hume piya ki mehndi keliye shagun lekar

(Raunak is Robbie's older brother)

robbie:bhai!!oh no mein bhul kese gaya abhi ut tha hoon mom jus a sec. let me get ready…

devika:jaldi karo robbie we have to go…

precap:piya's pyaare 'dewar' robbie is going to meet her pyaari friend kasturi…at thr engagement…

plz leave comments priya!

~~index~~

part 1-page 1

part 2-page 1

part 3 -page 2

part 4-page 3

part 5-page 4

part 6-page 5

part 7-page 6

part 8-page 8

part 9-page 9

part10-page 11

part 11-page 13

part 12-page 14

part 13-page 16

part 14-page 18

part 15-page 20

part 16-page 22

part 17-page 24

part 18-page 26

part 19-page 28

part 20-page 29

part 21-page 31

part 22-page 32

part 23-page 32

part 24-page 33

part 25-page 36

part 26 page 38

part 27-page 40

part 28 page 41

part 29-page 44

part 30-page 45

part 31-page 47

part 32-page 49

all nxt parts page 53

priya!!😳karan..karan...karan!!!!!!!!!karan K.A.R.A.N!!😆totally KARAN!!!!!!=)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woowww tats a wonderful start yaar... Keep continuing and I luv to read FFs abt RK's luv story😃

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey dear Very nice Starting 👏..as kishu said humhe RoKa ke pyar ko dekhna aur read karna aacha lagta hai 😳😆

Continue Pleaseee😛

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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another budding writer..wow!!!! 👏
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Excellent starting...seems like an interestin ff, very different from the real serial..loll!!! cnt wait for the nxt pat when ROKA will meet!
Edited by nehagupta_9 - 17 years ago
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wow this place is rocking with the ff's great job i like your writing style to the point.. i wish i could do that😆 and i like where you started from...sounds like rk scenes will be beautiful and coming up quickly..update soon...👏👏👏

robina

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful start do continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnk you all so so so so😆much!

ok guys heres the nxt part

recap-kasturi and robbie are both attending piya and raunaks engagement

Part 2

Robbie:mom! aapne pehle kyun nahi bataya ab tho mein rehearsals keliye late hogaya dekho na 3:00pm bajgaye mom..!!!!!

devika:robbie tum ek chote bache nahi rahey ho ab ki mein tumhe har waqt inform karti raho akir meri bhi tho bahot kaam hai aur aaj tho piya ki ring karidne gaye thi isliye mein ghar par nahi thi tho divya ne tumhe kyun nahi uthaya

divya:mom aap yaha par chila kyun rahe ho piya bhabhi ki ring karidli na

devika:tum kaha thi divya apne bhaiya ko uthaya kyun nahi

divya:mmo I was out ab sorry na

robbie:tu humesha bahar rehti hai budhu kahiki ab jaa bhi yaha se

divya:im sorry na bhaiya ab chalte hoon

devika:ab jaldi uthke jaao robbie cmon make a move aur pir niche ajana ok

robbie:ok mom

robbie gets ready and goes to rehearsals, then finishes rehearsals and cumz back home and meets raunak

robbie: bhai aaj tayar rehna shaam ko bhabhi ki yaha jaana hai na!huh..'wink wink'

raunak:robbie tu bhi na! jaa mujhe bahar jaana hai

robbie:bhai! arey ruko mein kya pehenoo

raunak: mujhe kya patha tu jo pehena chahata hei wo pehen lena ok

robbie:alright jeans and shirt…..ok

raunak:perfect! bye robbie

robbie: see you bhai!

piya gets a call from raunak

raunak:hello piya

kasturi snatches the phone

kasturi:arey shaadi se pehle hi baat karna chahte ho humari saheli se

raunak:tho aap saali ji

kasturi puts the phone on mike and jokes around with raunak for some time and piya is laughing through the conversation…

raunak:ji haan jiya ji ye kya jadoo kardiya hai humari saheli par har din 24x7 aapka tasweer lekar har jaga ghumti rehti hai

piya tries to snatch the phone from kasturi

piya:kasturi phone do ye kehrahi ho tum,

kasturi burst out laughing and then after all gave the phone to piya but she was singing whole throughout their conversation

kasturi(sings): thoda sa pyaa hua hai shaadi hai bakhi,

piya:kasturi! chup kar, raunak ye kasturi bahot shararti hai isski baatein mat suuna aap

raunak:kya piya kasturi ne galat hi kya kaha hai

piya:aap bhi!

kasturi:dekha piya humare jiya ji bhi humare saath hai paksh deti hoon shaadi mein joote nahi churaooni om jiya ji

tanu:kya keh rahe ho di joote tho churane hi padenge

kasturi(whispers so raunak doesn't hear)idiot joote tho churaoongi hi na pakka..

tanu:o sorry

piya:ok raunak mein rakti hoon

raunak:bye piya and I ….luv…you

piya gets embarrassed bcuz the phone is on loud speaker

kasturi, piya's other friends, tanu, navneet: oh ho! I luv you

piya:dhat!!!!!, ab rakiye raunak!

raunak:ye saaliyan bhi!acha bye piya

then robbie arrives with something for piya to her house…

ding dong!!!

kasturi:mein jakar dekti hoon

she goes to the door and opens it and there stood someone with a bouquet of flowers covering his face

robbie removes the bouquet from his face and drops it after seeing kasturi and he got lost in a world of his own just simply staring at her

kasturi after calling him abt 4 times he doesn't listen then she clicks her finger at his face

kasturi:hello! who are you kaun hai aap

robbie:wo…piya bhabhi kaha hai?

kasturi:kyun

robbie:hello mein apne hone wale bhabhi se milne aya hoon aap puchne wali kaun hote hai

kasturi gets angry

kasturi:xuse me! mein zaroori nahi samhjti aapko itna info dena milne aye hai mil lijiye…

piya:arey robbie kese ho?

kasturi is standing there while piya cumz down the stairs talking to robbie

robbie:bhabhiji kese hai aap

piya:bilcul tik

robbie:ye aapke liye ek chota sa tohfa

piya:isski kya zaroorat thi mr. rock star

kasturi looks at robbie strangely when piya sais mr. rockstar

robbie:aapka rockstar bilcul tik hai bhabhi anyways ab mein chalta hoon

piya:lekin robbie itne jaldi aao na baitho kasturi jao robbie keliye kuch le aoo

robbie:kuch nahi bhabhi pls

but kasturi already brought something

kasturi doesn't look at him and holds up the glass in front of his face

he takes the glass and holds her hand which Is also around the glass and then she looks at him and he raises hi eyebrows and she takes her hand off the glass

robbie:bhabhi ab mein chalta hoon shaam ko milenge

piya:ok robbie bye

robbie:bye bhabhi and yeah bye aapko bhi(he puts his hand forward)

kasturi:its kasturi and bye(angrily)

she hand shakes him unwillingly

robbie returns home and now its 6:00pm and everyone's getting ready first piya makes kasturi wear kasturi's hot pink sari and then kasturi makes piya ready in a hot pink lehnga.

ding dong

All the mehman have arrived in piya's place and ding dong

all the girls run down and tanu, navneet and kasturi stay with piya to get her down

the ladke waale have arrived and everyone is happy…..

Piya's mom:jao jakar piya ko lekar aao, (and they all greet each other)

Girl: ji maaji kasturi usse lekar arahi hai

kasturi geta piya down and raunak winks at piya and piya feels shy and looks away they are coming down the stair kasturi looks amazing!!!and very gorgeous

robbie to himself: wah! kya lag rahi hai she is sooo pretty

They all come down and everyone has some entertainment and all the guests are chatting amongst each other then kasturi announces that piya and raunak should dance on stage and they dance to 'bole chudiyan'and when they finish

kasturi picks a chit out of the jar for who gonna dance next then she picks out robbies name

kasturi:robbie!!!!!!!!!???(not happy)

then robbie comes on stage and pick out a name

robbie: kasturi!!!!(happily)

song plays and kasturi has to go along with it so does robbie and they dance together

http://ww.smashits.com/music/hindi-movie/play/songs/2200/Hun gama/21531/Hum-Nahin-Tere-Dushmano-Mein.html

Hum Nahin Tere Dushmano MeinHum Nahin Tere Dushmano MeinKyon Humko Deewana Banaya BanayaKyon Humko Deewana Banaya Hum To Hai Tere Doston MeinHum To Hai Tere Doston MeinKyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya ChurayaKyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya Hum Kahin Ek Din Yuh Ek Bahek Milgaye TheIshq Ke Pyaar Ke Mastane Dil Kho Gaye TheFaasle Mitgaye Nazdeek Aane Lage HumBekhudi Yuh Badi Saason Pe Chane Lage HumHum Nahin Tere Qatilon MeinHum Nahin Tere Qatilon MeinKyon Zulfon Mein Hum Ko Fasaya FasayaKyon Zulfon Mein Hum Ko Fasaya Haan Hum To Hai Tere Doston MeinHum To Hai Tere Doston MeinKyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya ChurayaKyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya Yeh Mera Dil Gaya Bas Dillagi Dillagi MeinBhool Ke Yeh Jahan Dooba Teri Aashiqi MeinSochta Hoon Sanam Ikraar Kaise Karoon MeinPyaar Ke Dard Ka Izhaar Kaise Karoon MeinHum To Hai Teri Dhadkano MeinHum To Hai Teri Dhadkano MeinKyon Dard-e-Jigar Ko Badaya BadayaKyon Dard-e-Jigar Ko BadayaHum Nahin Tere Dushmano MeinHum Nahin Tere Dushmano MeinKyon Humko Deewana Banaya BanayaKyon Humko Deewana Banaya Chaahate Sab Jise Main Woh Haseen Chandni HoonYeh Bas Jaanlo Kiske Liye Main Bani HoonAarzoo Kya Kahen Samjho Zara Tum IsharePyaar Ke Khel Mein Jeete Koi Koi HareHum To Hai Teri Baazon MeinHum To Hai Teri Baazon MeinKyon Ilzaam Hum Pe Lagaya LagayaKyon Ilzaam Hum Pe Lagaya Hum Nahin Tere Dushmano MeinHum To Hai Tere Doston MeinKyon Humko Deewana Banaya BanayaKyon Humko Deewana Banaya Kyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya Churaya

Kyon Tune Mera Dil Churaya

(ps:did not write the lyrix myself)

precap:kasturi goes to get the ring and bumps into robbie and robbie catches her…

plz leave comments

Edited by sweet_dreams22 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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priya 🤗 long tym huh 😆 well ur ff is so cool lv ur writing skills nd keep writing more 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi mani! 🤗 long time no see!thnk you so much im so glad you likd it..... 😆 😆

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