Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
Thanku bachcha,

so bear with me again.... 😉

Sumit reaches out to Jatin,

Ja : Kahan reh gaya tha?

Su : Kuch nahi, ek musibat mil gayi thi... 😆 😆

Ja : Kya? 😕

Su : Kuch nahi, chod use.... chal kahan chalna hai?

Ja : Wo Cindi nahi hai, uske friend ki party....

Su : To hum kyun jaayen? 😕

Ja : Kyunki she has called us... 😛

Su : Okk lets go... 😊

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Kk : Partyy..... Sure yaar..... chal naa...

Mini : Kumkum, tu yahan meri aur Gaurav ki madad karne aayi hai naa... To party? 😡 Nahi Gaurav main aur Kumkum nahi jaayenge....

Kk : oye yaar.... madad karne ka phal milna chahiye.... sazaa nahi.... hum zarur jaayenge... Gaurav U don't worry, we'll come. 😉

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At the party,

Sumit, Jatin and their friends are enjoying,

Cind : Hey, Sumit u are a great dancer.... Come on..... dance karo naa....

Su : No yaar.....

ja : No kyun? Keh to raha tha.. mauja mauja karna hai.... jaa naa

Sumit goes on the dance floor....

Su : Par I need a partener....

Cind : I can't match up with ur steps...

Ja : Phir kaun?

A voice ,

"Main"....

They turn and see Kumkum standing.... 😉 😉

they dance on mauja mauja,,... enjoying....

In between.... electricity fails.... 😉 Kumkum tries walking and stumbles on asomething, and falls....

But Sumit holds her... 😉 😉

They could not see each other...

They just hold each other... 😉 😉

And the electricity comes.....

Kk : Tummmmmmmmmm 😆

Su : Ohh Nooooooo........ Not again....... 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
😆 😆 😆 brilliantly written verni di[u r elder to me so dont ask the reason for calling u di] 😃 i loved the last scene very much.. 😉 i cud imagine dat..awesome... 👏
plz continue na.. 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
wow..verni u r jst tooooooooooo gudd 😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14


Kk : Kaho kaho....... dhoke se hua....tumne kuch nahi kiya..... 😆 😆 😆

Su : Tumse kuch kehne ka kya faayda.... Tumhe yakeen hoga nahi.... so leave it.... 😆 😆

Saying this, he goes.... 😆 😆

Kk : Tum........ How dare u???? 😡 😡 ... Main

Mini : Kumkum plzz....... apni ladai baad mein ladna... chal yahan se...

Kk : Par abhi to party shuru hui hai....

Mini : Shut uppppppppp 😡 😡

She drags her,.

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Next day,

kk : dekh mujhe job mil gayi hai wahan, jahan kal main interview dene gayi thi. 😛

Mini : Hmm....

Kk : Hmm..... kya main jaa rahi hun office. 😆

She reaches office.....

She gets a seat to sit, she starts working,

A girl : aaj tumhe yeh project sir ke saath discuss karna hai.... Unka cabin wahan hai...

Kk : Main.... Theek hai.... Hey bhagwan, koi khadus boss na ho....

She goes to the cabin.

Kk : May I come in sir?

Sumit was sitting facing other side,

su : Come in.....

Kk : Dekhiye sir, aaj mera pehla din hai.... aur mujhe bhej diya gaya aapke saath yeh discuss karne ko.... aap plzzz naraz mat hona agar koi gadbad ho jaaye to.... wo kya hai mera first time hai.... 😆 😆 Dekhiye yeh job bohut zaruri hai mere liye.... mujhe meri behen ko uska pyaar dilwaana hai.... aap plzz.... mujhe job mein rehne dena even if I do something wrong.....

Sumit finds something fishy, He turns....

Su : Tummmmmmmmmmmmmm 😆 😆 😆

Kk (luks up) : Tummmmmmmmm 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
😆 awesome awesome awesome awesome!!!! 😆
juz loved it..
if possible continue plz...am loving it 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
okk aaj mera mood hai bhi likhne kaa........ 😃 😃

Sumit keeps his head on the table....

Kk : Achcha to tum yahan bhi aa gaye .... tumhari problem kya hai? hunh.....

su : Listen, hum yahan kaam kar sakte hain plzzzzz 😆 😆

Kk : Tum, Tum mere boss hooooo..... no wayyyy 😡 😡

She turns to go,

Su : Tumhe apni behen ka pyaar use diwaana hai..... 😉 😉

Kk : Tumhe kaise pata? 😕

Su : Tum bolte samay yaad nahi rakhti kya bola? 😆 😆

Kk : Maine bola yeh sab?

Su : Jee haan..... warna maine koi detective agency nahi kholi haiiii 😆 😆 😆

Kk : Par tum mujhe kamzor....

Su : nahi samjhunga..... ab kaam karen? 😉 😆 😆

It's evening, Kumkum goesto his cabin for some work,

He wasn't there.... 😛

Kk : Dekhti hun, meri aur photos to nahi le li 😉 😆 😆

he opened his drawer and is shocked to see somethinggg 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
omg once again a brilliant part.. 😃
i am surprised how amazingly u write 👏 👏
continue soon plz 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
kya verni full like cyclon it is going 😆
loved every part of it 👏 👏
cont next
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19

waah Bachcha!! 👏 👏 chal let me continue....

KK removes her bangles from the drawer & remembers the jungle,falling onto Sumit,him giving her his jacket & then following her bangle trail to make sure she was ok & a flush rises in her cheeks 😳

KK: waise yeh khadoos itna bhi buraa nahin hai....kabhi kabhi achhe kaam bhi kar leta hai 😉

she rummages around in the drawer & pulls out an envelope....she opens it to find pics of Sumit & his friends at the College Competition & KK is now rooted to the spot,all the things Rocky said coming back to her...

KK: itna bura???bure se bhi zyada bura hai...pata nahin kya samjhtha hai apne aap ko???shayad Sholay ka Amitabh Bachchan yah phir Jab We Met ka Shahid Kapoor😡😡...main bhi dikhadungi usse😡....mujhse panga liya hai na😡....ab aisa sabak sikhaungi ke woh zindagi bhar yaad rakhega aur kabhi kisi ladki ki taraf aankh utha ke bhi nahin dekhega😡😡😡

she angrily throws the pics haywire into the drawer when 1 falls out....it's a pic of a very pretty girl in Mumtaz hairstlye & clothes 😆

Su: haan haan main kardunga tum fikar mat karo

KK freezes in terror & looks up with wide eyes,angry at herself for being caught....then sees Sumit leaning on the door with one hand on his forehead & the other holding his cellphone...she breathes a sigh of relief,he hadn't spotted her yet...she quickly throws the girl's pic into the drawer,closes it haphazardly & runs around to where she had been seating...

Sumit comes in still talking on the phone...

Su:arrey yaar kitni baar kahunga tujhe main kardoonga 😡 😡 ...vishwaas nahin hai tho project bhi mat diya kar 😡 😡 ...aaj tho mera din hi kharaab jaa raha hai 😡 😡 ...

he gives KK an angry look & KK smiles at him sweetly 😆 😆...he slaps his hand on his forehead..

Su: pata nahin kahan phas gaya main 😡

He ends the call & just about to sit down,notices that his drawer is slightly ajar....in confusion,he tries to remember if he had opened it,but is too stressed to think....then realisation dawns on him & he looks up.....

KK pats her hair & pretends she's looking at her nails,breathing & polishing them,all the while smiling smugly😆😆

Sumit raises his eyebrows & thinks to himself

Agar main isse kuchh poochhoonga tho yeh dhamaal khari kardegi...waise bhi isko mere drawer main kya dil chasbi ho sakthi hai....main hi khol kar bhool gaya hoonga....jab se yeh balaa mere office main aayee hai mera tho dhyan hi nahin rehta kisi cheez par😕😕

Aloud,he says: tho kahan the hum?

KK: tum apni seat main aur main apni seat main...phir tumhe phone aaya aur tum....

Su: SHUT UP!!!!😡...woh sab mujhe pata hai...main project ke baare main poochh raha tha...

KK: tho aisa kaha hota nah😛

Sumit grinds his teeth in frustration & feels like pulling out his hair😆😆...he tries to calm himself down,takes a deep breath &

KK hum baad main khatam kar lenge achha?abhi tum jao aur jho galthiyan maine rectify karne ko kaha hai woh karo...tikh hai??

KK: lekin woh...

Su: JAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOO

KK takes the files & flees from there....

Sumit folds his arms on the table & puts his head on his arms

Yeh sab mera saath hi kyun hota hai??😕😕😕

Just then his cellphone rings........


over to u Verni 😉

Edited by rah_akki - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
continue soon anyone... 😉 😉
mazza aa raha hai mujhe 😆 😆 😆