Fan Fic Kumud and Garv - Page 3

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Princess M thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Scene 7: Garv fianlly confessed amd kumud does too but doesn't say I love you... hehe.. garv and kumud are hugging and lost in thier whole world while the crew walks in and simran is scared 😆. kshitij is cookin soemthing fishy... 😉

Scene 8:
Kshitij: Kali sim and priya go get what u r suppose to...
the grls live and the guys are just waiting there waiting for the grls..
grl come back with somehitng in theri hand...
they all gather around

Kali: here we go...
KShitij: grls rmb u guys get kumud and we wil get garv
Nakul and Harry.. let's go
they all move towards the lovely couple...

Kumud and Garv both are like ouch really loud. and realize they they been caught..

Kumud: what was that for
Kshitj: u two look soo cozy... so we thought we throw ice down ur backs... and let u know that there are other people in this house.. and we all come in whenever we like.
Kumud besome shy a little and loks down..
Garv: kshitij I cna't believe u did that
Kali: sorry we didn't want to walk in the room but what happend last nite we had too...
Kumud: there is something called knocking
Simran: I screamed cuz i saw u too hug but no reaction from u guys and laughs..
Harry: plus there is something called a lock
Kumud is soo embarassed and garv knows that.. so agrv give this signal and everyone leaves the room..
Garv and kumud alone
Garv: hmm that harry for the pointer... next time I will lock the door...
kumud looks a garv and she is blushing... and she tires to run out of the room:
garv: kumud why would u go out? everyone is out there...
Kumud: What?
Garv: (walkin towards her) you know u can come in my arms cuz i will never let u go..
kumud: shutup idiot
garv: what u called me an idiot?
Kumud: yeah what u gonna do
Grav: u wait and see... he goes towards kumud
Kumud: scream ahh garv and runs aroudn in her room.. and falls on the bed...
Grav to falls on the bed on top of her..
They both stare at each other and
Kumud: Garv I love you too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
garv is very happy and he still on top of her and he is holding her and slowly kisses her.
Kumud also kisses him back and they stop... and they decicde to go outside.. with everyone.
Kumud and Garv together: I love you!!
garv kissesher forehead and says kumud ur my life... u r my heart and u r my soul.. and they go outside.. where the crew is sitting... Kali is soo happy for her sister that she cna't stand still and thinks finally kumud finally u have no idea how happy i am... Sister I love you... and I am happy for u... both of our dreams are coming true...(she says this from her heart)
Princess M thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
everyone i mentioned twists ad turns in upcoming scences... they will be coming... but Kali is a good person and soo are the other character i mentioned above... unnamed characters previously are bad...and i mite use a actual kkusum stoty line for a scence... like someone doin a mentally challanged role.. or something.. but if u wnat to give me ideas plz doo.. it's for a grl... and has to happend with an accident... soo ne ideas plz let me know... Thanks... I hope the love scences btwn kumud and garv are nice... i don't want to keep talkin bout them.. cuz i also wanna involve other characters in the story like kali and nakul, kshitij and priya. and simran and harry.. soo yeah ne suggestions are welcome...:)
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Posted: 18 years ago
great work please contiue soon 😆
Angelic_J thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
That was so cool dude👏 Keep up the good work😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow too good please do continue it 👏
Princess M thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
I will update it tomm... sorry I have a test to study 4...
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Posted: 18 years ago
good job........hey your online right now can u updTE IT SOON.

thanx by the way how did your test go.
Princess M thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
i will do it tomm.. sorry... my test went well.. thanks for asking... i thinking bout an idea pluz a twist... soo yeah... ne ideas let em know...
Princess M thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Ok I am updating it now.. sorry for the late updation...
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Posted: 18 years ago
its excellent. i wanna thank ritika to send it to me. gr8 princess m. u are gr8