Re-cap : Ajay and Alaana share their feelings for each other.
4 more weeks pass. Finally, Puru has recovered enough to come home. π His slipped disc issue had settled down and his hip was also almost healed. But he still had to have the cast on for a couple more weeks. Devika and the kids were completely exhausted during his 6 weeks stay in the hospital!! π₯± They are happy and relieved to see Puru back home, safe and sound. π
Robbie and Kasturi plan to visit the TajMahal, the Sunday after Puru comes home. Robbie tells his aunt his plans, which she heartily approves. π But...........it was not so simple for Alaana to talk to her mom, like Robbie did! She and Ajay were also planning to go out that Sunday!! She had promised this to him and so did not want to break it! π³ After they had acknowledged their feelings to each other, Ajay had bought her some or the other gift almost everyday!! π Each gift had been more expensive than the other!! But she had steadfastly refused to accept any of his gifts and in lieu of the gifts would take a rose from him everyday!! π³
Taj Mahal was a 4-hr drive from Delhi.......for some π π Robbie was planning to make it in 3 hours!! π He picks Kasturi up from her studio and they both drive out on his bike. π
Robbie buys their tickets and they walk through the entrance, once again mesmerized by the beauty and magnificence of that monument! π Both of them had come here several times before, but today they were expecting to see it in a different light and to feel it differently!!! π³
Next week was Dussehra. And his chachi had arranged for a Devi jagraata and chandi path in their house as a offering of thanks to God for bringing Puru back to the house safe and sound. π She has asked him to invite Kasturi! π³ π He was intending to tell his whole family then, specially his uncle about him and Kasturi. Robbie turns to her and says
Robbie : Kas, agle Sunday chachi neh ghar mei jagraata rakha hai. Woh chah rahi thi ke tum bhi aao. I also want you to come. I want to introduce you to my uncle. Are you free that day? π
Kasturi replies : Haan. Agar nahi bhi hun toh, I will make if free! π
She was very happy that atleast from Robbie's family there will not be in any hurdles! But it would not be that easy in her house! She could not introduce Robbie rightaway.......she would have to work on her family a bit before she let him meet them! π
They tour the monument, getting lost in its time and its pace! The monument dedicated to love, seemed to stengthen their love and their resolve to feel this way towards each other forever and ever! π³ Robbie and Kasturi quietly walk around, letting the intensity and history of that place seep into their souls!! Slowly, the tour ends and they wound back to reality. They decide to get a portrait photo done with the TajMahal as the background. After the photo session, they quickly search for a restuarant as they both are starving.
They both burst out laughing π€£ π€£ π€£ π€£
Tune O rangeele kaisa jaadoo kiyaa..........
That trip had helped them to grow accustomed to each other and so it is a happy Ajay and Alaana that are driving back, when they have a flat tire. They stop at a road-side repair shop. While the mechanics replace the spare, Ajay and Alaana sit together on a platform at a nearby tree, chatting. There is a lull in the conversation when Alaana's thoughts get occupied with the words of the song that was playing out of the radio in that repair shop.
(This beautiful song is from the movie Kudrat. Love this song a lot! π Beautifully sung by Lata ji! Here is the Youtube video for it........Tune O rangeele)
hey pragg ....wow dear both parts are very nice and beautifull written π...mujhe AA jodi ka romance bahut aacha laga π³...mujhe andaja nahi tha ki itna jaldi ijhaar hoga ..wo bhi jhagra karte huye π.....i love this idea ...u know pragg ...mujhe ajay bahut aacha laga aur mujhe yee bhi maloom hai ki tum kuch essa nahi karogi ki wo alaana ko dhokha de ..lekin darr hai ki kasturi ki baat aate hi kahi ajay ko apni ameeri na nazar aa jaaye ...kyu ki kahi robbie ko dur karte karte ...apne ko alaana se dur na kar baithe ...u know mere dil meh yee khayal kyu aaya ...cos jis tarah se alaana ne ajay ko kaha tha ki main ek seedhe shadhi ladki hoon ....toh kahi robbie ko uski garibi ka ehsaas dilate ...alaana ka dil na tod de ..kyu ki wo jo robbie ke baare meh kahega ...wo alaana ke liye bhi hoga ...am scared yaar ki kya hoga jab robbie aur ajay ko ek dusre ke baare meh maloom hoga ....tum jaldi se likho ...cos i can't wait
ab aate hai RK par π³......tum jis passion se unke baare meh likhti ho ...ki ek baar nahi baar baar read karne ko dil karta hai π³....robbie ne tattoo se kasturi likhwa liya π...u know ..mujhe read karte hi bahut khushi, ek sharm aur hassi aayi ππ³..pata nahi kyu ....so ab kasturi jagrate meh jaayegi ...bas uska sab par expression aacha dale ..kahi kuch garbard na ho jaaye ..it was such nitce part. i wish u had elaborated more on AA. i just love their jodi. u know alaana's life is like a fairy tale, like cinderella. and i just love ajay's character. he's like sooooooo different. wat robbie did was kinda filmy. wat just saif did now for kareena for publicity. reminded me of their story. anyways, if ur have trouble imagening roka's romance, u can luk at ur avatar, pretty sure that'll help a bit. and u should elaborate on alaana's clothes more. u barely describe her outfits these days. continue with the ff soon. and i'll be waiting. and don't forget to write about AA in the next part. it's like a compulse now in ur ff.π but no pressureπ
Originally posted by: stars_shine
HEYYA PRAGZ!
So so so so so so sorry for the delay! Will post my comments for both parts as soon as I read this one~edited:woohoooo...i'm first! don't think i've ever been first on your FF pragz! sooooo cool! LOLokay...lemme start off by apologizing! I was one of the first few people to read the last part, and i even reserved a spot for comments! I thought I edited it after reading, but then yesterday I discovered that I hadn't! I'm so so so very sorry for that Pragz! Hope you're not mad! Star...........I totally understand and I can never be angry for such things! π God knows, I myself am a late latif and never give my comments on time! So, don't even worry about it!Okay so last part:They made up!!!...That wsa the best part ever! I know!!! πI loved the talk between Robbie and Devika....so emotional and yet so realistic! Just like a real mom and son! I also liked how she rationally analyzed the situation and didn't shy away from admitting her own mistake. She seems to be a very respectable woman. This talk was something that they had always avoided! Finally came the situation where they could not go past it! And what made it so emotional was the suppressed sentiments!!!next, I loved that Kasturi finally got the sense to call and apologize to Devika. It migth not have been her fault, but she still had to apologize if she loved Robbie enough. True. But I was glad that she had also tried to maintain her sense of self-respect and not just meekly agreed to everything that Robbie asked her to do! I don't think he would have ever forgiven her if she hadn't. I also liked the talk between Kas and Devi. Very to the point and natural. They seem to be developing a bond now, which is great for the future. Yes, their conversation was definitely to the point because I wanted to keep it natural! After having a misunderstanding, 2 people who do not know each other much, cannot just start talking like old firends, right? πHa ha ha...I was so going to ask, "why didn't devika wish her?"...but you covered that in the next part! π πThis part:I loved the "we'll celebrate your b'day again...just the two of us.." part...and esp. the "you can turn 22 again"...LOL...hilarious! and cute at the same time! I think that made Kasturi feel very special!I didn't first understand why Kasturi didn't tell Robbie taht she called devika, but then when he found out from Devi herself, I was like, " Oh yeah!"...I loved that! It was so cute that he called Kas instantly and was so happy and relieved! The way I perceived that was, she did not want to mention it and make him feel that she has done him a favor by doing it. So, she let him find it out on his own! πNow, coming to AA jodi:Man! This Ritu character made me hate her with just a cameo! So cheap! The words she used, the looks she gave, a total vamp in the making! I really felt for poor Alana there. To a certain extent Ritu was right in being upset with Alaana based on the information she had. But, getting personal with her and then making some cheap suggestions was way out of the line!Her anger at Ajay was totally justified, and yet, so was his attempt at helping her. True, both of their actions were justified!His "I love you" was so abrupt, I was like, "Whoaaaa"....and I bet that was Alana's reaction as well! But very well depicted Pragz! Loved it from top to bottom! Thanks Star.............I also realize that was a little too soon.......but I just did not want to drag the story and wanted to get to the next phase. πI liked that Alana took her time to respond, and how hestitant she was with her own admittance of her feelings. In fact, did you notice the similarities between the brother and sister?? π³ Both of them weighed the situation before they committed! π But I was so happy for Ajay when she finally said it as well! I could imagine the wide grin he would have had. I am very very happy for him too! BTW...just out of curiosity, I don't personally think the Alana and Ajay in the show would be the perfect actors here, so do you have anybody in mind? Just so I can start imagining with real faces! For Ajay.........I imagine Vivaan Bhatena. π³ I imagine him when I write. But for Alaana, I imagine the same girl that plays Alaana in the serial.......Preeti Gupta. I find her very elegant and beautiful.πOkay, the romance.....uffff! So cute and lovely! I can't wait for more AA jodi romance...its almost as cute as RoKa! Infact some of the readers prefer AA more than RK!!! π²Okay continue soon! I can't wait for Kas' second b'day! Thanks Star for the wonderful comments! πLove, and apologies again,STAR βοΈ
Originally posted by: Herman_4u
hey Pppppppppppp di, Hey Hermooooooooooo π
woo hoooooooooo, their first hug, omg, it was soooooooooooooooo gudddddddddddddddddddddddd, full of excitement, Well, I am glad you liked it! π³ I was not so sure when writing it but after reading your comment, makes me feel much better!! π i really really really love ajay and alaana, but specially ajay. they're my fav couple in this ff. Ahaa! I am not sure how to react to this.........because now I will have to put a lot of ectra effort on them for your sake! π If not, I was planning to not spend much time on them! i enjoyed this part sooooooooooooooooooooo much. i just loved it. u could also feel the nervousness while reading the part, especially alaana's feelings. Oh, I am so glad you were able to feel it! Because I was trying to present Alaana as very nervous and unsure!!! i just luved the small arguement b'w them, and then watever happened after that, Cool! π i could just imagine ajay working out, sitting on his bed on the laptop. it made him luk hot. hehhehehe. Yes!!! I can imagine Vivaan looking all hot too!!! π³ i luved the part. continue AA's romance di. OK, I guess now I will have to! πloveharmanπ
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