Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep

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PuIchritudinous

@PuIchritudinous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#3101

muri the gr9......excellently excellent part 👏 & indian idol 2 start ho gaya 😕

manu sis....too cool 👏 👏

& nidhi......ahh....ur a superb writer!!too good 😉 👏 👏 BAD gang ki jo ho 😆

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komal

@komalsirwani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#3102

rajeev ac wrote
ambrina wrote
manuuuuu sis......dats wat i was saying.........her brothers name is MANU

& kimmy timmy.......ur a bachii !!

any time komal hum se doosti karogi tho har waqt khush rahogi

ac yaar ab tum bhi this is not fair 😭 mujhe bacchi bulana band karo warna................................ 😡

ambrina thanxxx so much aur main to har waqt khush rehti hi hoo. 😆

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PuIchritudinous

@PuIchritudinous

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#3103

kimmy yaar dats better than 'teen ager'(3 yrs ki) 😉 😆 😆 & wat is dis warna.........😕

Edited by rajeevAC - 19 years ago

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Sawera

@Kash_Sujal

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Posted: 19 years ago

#3104

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KAHANI SUJAL AUR KASHISH KII
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Recap:RK reach india..n cums to know..tat Mr.Sinha had a heart attack..n is at hospital....he is dicharged after 3 , 4 day as it was a minor attack...Mr.Sinha makes..a will in wich he..gives his whole property..to his wud b grandchildren...n makes Rajeev it care taker...now he is taking over tha bussines....n Kashish is staying wid his dad as he wasn't feeling well........Piyush decides..he is cuming to london wid his family.....

Kashish goes down.....n sees Piyush wid all his family.....
Kashish:hiii Piyush....wat a pleasant surprise...........
Piyush:ohh hii...tum tu begahir batay hii gayiii...
Kashish:haan..woh
Vasu:Kashish..hum bhii yehii hai...tum tu Piyush k saath hii busy hoo....
Kashish:hiii aunty..n uncle...she takes blessing 4rm them.....
Charu:Kashish dii..lagata hai app mujay tu bhool hii gayii....
(Charu calls Kashish dii as they share a sister realtionship)
Kashish:how can i forget u...they hug each other....
Mr.Sinha:itni dayer kahan laga dii....beta
Kashish:papa woh Rajeev kaa phone....
Piyush listening his name felt his anger rising..n interups...
Piyush:acha..hai tum yahan par hii hooo.....Charu kii help bhii hojaye giii..she want to take admission in ur collage....
Kashish:collage....
Piyush:haan..we hav to planned to settle here in India....
Kashish:tat gr8 news.......
Piyush:uncle...papa chatay hai k hum busines merge kar lay....

Mr.Sinha:iss baat mamlay mein...mei kuch nahii keha sakta..tum Rajeev say baat karloo...
Kashish:haan...woh abhii mujay lenay aaraha hai....
Charu:chaloo dii apkay room mein chal kar baat kartay hai...
inkii atay hii business kii baatein shruroo hogayii...n they leave....
Piyush(confused):Rajeev kyun....
Mr.Sinha:abb wohi saara busiess dekhta hai......i hav handed over da business to him...
Vasu:yeh kya..apnay sara kaa saara business kisi gahr koo day diya..itna bharoosa....acha nahii kisi par....
Lalit:Vasushra yeh kya keha rahi..hooo..woh Kashish kaa...
Mr.Sinha(got the point):Nahi Lalit...Vasu..kii baat sahii haii..lekin Vasu..Rajeev..meray betay jaisa hai aur naa hii woh meray liye koi gar hai....jab us par bhoorsa kar k apni beti usay day diii..to business to door kii baat hai....
Piyush:jee uncle app bilkul teq keha rahay hai..par uskoo tu koi.. experience bhii nahii hai...
Just then Rajeev enters n seeing Piyush....
Rajeev(to himself):ohh know yaar...itna acha mood thaaa saara kharab kar diya ......par aya kyun hai yeh...lagata hai baaz..nahi aye gaa...lets see chal Rajeev ab andar chal ,milna to paray gaa hiii....
Rajeev:hiii everyone.....he takes blessing 4rm Mr.Sinha..Lalit..n Vasu....
Vasu:ohh..mine to tum hoo Rajeev....
Piyush:Hii Rajeev ...abhi tumharii hii baatein horahii thi...
Rajeev(raises his eyebrow):meray baary mein...
Mr.Sinha:haan..beta yeh log chatay..hain k humara business merge hojaye.....
Piyush:haan..acha howa tum aagay.....hum abhiiii baat kar
Rajeev was geting irrated by Piyush's behaviour as he knew all this was fake....soo didn't wanted to say sumthin infront of everyoe so he tried to excused himself...n intruped..
Rajeev:Piyush....don't mind...kal office mein baat karay gay....abhii mom ghar par wait kar rahii hongiii..Papa Kashish kahan hai...
Mr.Sinha:woh apnay room mein..hain....
Rajeev:mein abhiii aya...
Rajeev widout giving a look..goes to here room...
In Room
Charu:Dii..tat not fair..appnay mujay apnii shadii kaa bataya hiii nahii...
Kashish:nahii..mein tumhein kya batai mujay tu khud shadii say do din phelay pata chala tha....
Charu:itni jaldi thii jeeju kooo...hain kahan woh....
Rajeev enters 4 Kashish calling out....n enters n is confused to see Charu....
Kashish:yeh loo aagay tumharay jeeju
Charu:ohhh...tu app hoon....
Rajeev:jee koi shak...
Charu:Dii..waqi jaldi mein shadii kiii hai...appnay dekha bhiii nahii sahii tarah...n winks at Kashish...
Kashish:haan..mujay bhiii ab lagat hai....kuch jaldi shadii karliii
Rajeev:Kashish tumhein to mei baad mein batata hoo k kitni jaldii thi..par Mam app apna introduction denay kiii takleef karay giiii....
Kashish:yeh woh Piyush kii behan hai Charu...
Charu:aur appki kii saali...
Rajeev:Kashish tum eek baar hii bata doo kitni aur bhala hai..phelay eek Sameera kam thii abb yeh bhiii...
Charu(sadly):appko mei itni hii burii lagii....teq hai mein apsay mazak nahii karoogii
Kashish:ohh Charu..don't b upset inki to adat hai....mazak karay kii...
Rajeev:jee saali jee..humara rishta bhii tu kuch asa hiii..hai...
Piyush enter 4rm behind....
Piyush:kya baatein chal rahiii haii....
Kashish:kuch nahii bus..Charu koo Rajeev say milwa rahii thi....
Rajeev:so Kashish ghar chalay mom wait kar rahii hoo giii....
Kashish:haan bus...eek min...
Piyush:hum aye hai aur tum jaa rahii hooo..mei sirf tum say milnay aya hooo..
Rajeev(mischeciously):yaar..eek baat bataoo..tum Kashish k bachpan k dost hooo...abhii tak usay achii tarah milay nahii kcuh waqt usay humary saath bbhii guzarnay doon....
Piyush felt let down by Rajeev ........but still sumhow he want tat Kashish shud't goo..n says...
Piyuhs:tum jaa rahii hoo tu Charu kaa collage...
Charu:Dii...app jaa rahay hoo..mein tu bore hojayoo giii...aur collage...
Kashish:tum mujay milnay aajana...aur waiase bhii Rishii bhiii usii collage mein parta haii he wud help u better.....
Charu:Rishii???????????????
Rajeev:Rishi is my borther...mein tu ketha hooo tum humaray saath humaray ghar chaloo..kyun Piyush...
Charu:nahii..mein kal atii hoo...
RK goes down n says everyone bye n now they r in car.....Rajeev thinking..now wat Piyush is uptoo n shud he tell Kashish abt his..truth..here Kashish is not feeling gud tat Piyush aya n she hav to leave soo both r quite.....n this silence is broken by Kashish wen she observes tat they r not going home....
Kashish:Rajeev hum kahan jaa rahay hai..?
Rajeev:pata nahii....aaj ghar janay ka maan nahii haii...chaloo beach par chalatay hai.....
Kashish:teq haii chalo...
they reach the beach n get off...n r now....walking along da shore..n Kashish is worried tat wat happened to Rajeev as he is not talking...to her since they left the house....as Rajeev was da one 4 whom words were never finshed..n 2day he has nothing to say.....

I kow gals this part was a little boring..but hope to bring some intersting things next time....
Plz doo cooment.....
(Sawera)

Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago

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rajeev1

@rajeev1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#3105

uff....ac tum saron ke peeche pari rehan story na likhna kabhie..... 😆 .....

amna that was brilliant..wah kya concept hai....cha gayi.....
manu i love the first story....its brilliant.....

aur kiran...janab...kya baat hai apki... 😉 ..kal ki baatein abhi bhi yaad hain na....uff kitna sach kaha tha meine.......par yahan to tumne kuch game hi badal di...kyun yaar.......abhi bhi waqt hai soch lo.....muje bata dena phir mein yaahn ake baat kar sakti hon on your behalf.... 😆 ......kidding...cheekhna mat shuru ho jana....lolzzzz......

mariam great going and lklk ....i love the love story.... 😉

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PuIchritudinous

@PuIchritudinous

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#3106

saweraa.....galz ko ye part bilkul borin nahi laga 😡 ab mat kehna!!u write sooooooooooooo well......kitni baar kahoon!!as usual dis part was also fantaaastic 👏

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PuIchritudinous

@PuIchritudinous

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#3107

lolllzzy dadi......wat bout u?? 😉

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#3108

Originally posted by: rajeevAC

woohooo......adi dada.....aap ko bkwl ka full-form pata hai?? agar u know to wo galat hai itz......"bachon ke ghar mein 0 watt ka bulb lagao"............toooooo kab aa rahe ho & acha bulb lana !!

&wo tomatoes jo hain na....wo na............'rotten' hote hain actually😆

AC jee app apnay ghar bula rahi hain tu zarror aygay😉...aur bulb bhii leta ayoo ga...waise ghar aa hii raha tuu too bulb aur waat dono akhtay hii laga doon gaa😆...rotten tomatoes..woh tu phir apkoo marnay kii kaam hii aye gay....😃Ac baki saaro nay tuu bhai bana kar respect diii..appka tu kya kehan seedha dada😳

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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PuIchritudinous

@PuIchritudinous

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#3109

offhoo....watt apko bulb ke sath automatically mil jayega so alag se lane ki no chinta 😆 😆 😆
& haan adi dadaji......rotten tomatoes ke saath eggs bhi free hai...cool na...to now "AAP HO NA" so khao khao...maze urao 😆

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#3110

Originally posted by: komalsirwani
adil bhaiya 😉 (i hope i can call u tat cause i'm very small)i dont hav ne big bro so can u be my big bro.if not tat atleast frnds i promise u i'll be a gr888 friend. 😳

Komal i wud luv to b ur Big b...aur bahi bhii tu dost hotay hai agr app samjoo tu...so ab 2 in one..Big b n friend also...😊 i hope we wud b gr8 friends n aswell ur bro & sis😳

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