Just A ChildhoodCrush NOTE 107 + Updated! 25/07 - Page 38

Hiya Astha...this part was great....plz plz plz cont soon 😉

nce prt1 mind blowin! d promo is scary! i ill b eagraly b w8in 4 d nxt prt! cntd sn!

NIce Part 👏 ! D promo is scary 😕 !! I will be waiting for the next Part!... 😉 Continue soon 😉

awwwwwwwww, "sasurji"? so sweet of the boys, and the way those two turned on rahul and atul offering a helmet, 😆 😆 😆 . shashank is also such a cool dad, the way he teased ammy about his shoes the nxt morning, but i hope ammy won't get too hurt in the fight, do udpate soon, i'm so worried for my jaan 😳 but hopefully seeing ammy hurt will push ridz to confess but do continue, u're climbing to new heights with each update 👏 👏 👏 , i think u should seriously think of publishing ur ff once its finished

hey astha
that part was soooo funny n hillarious i loved every bit of their conv(the three bros n shnaks) 😆
it was soooo funny
n i could imagine that miss singh (moti) running behind armi poor thing 😆 it was soooo funny
but why didnt u pm me im kattif with u 😡
kattif
kattif
kattif 😆
ok fine plz pdate the next opart soon
n do pm me
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*.*Part 13*.*

Armaan slowly opens his eyes to find two blurred faces … his eyes close again … armaanz eyes slowly open again .. he could see the faces close to his face .. he could feel someone's breath on his face … his eyes close again … he opens them again … his eyes go big … armaan quickly stands up before miss Singh & the other fat lady tried to kiss him…

armaan: WTF … what were you thinking lovely & miss Singh
lovely: armaan … coming close to him .. I love you a lot & i… before she could talk miss Singh interrupts her
miss Singh: he loves me
lovely: don't be silly aunt
miss Singh: im not .. he even confessed .. right my jaanu
armaan he bout to say something when he hears a loud cry
lovely crying: what … just den a random girl comes & wraps her hand round armaan neck ..

girl: armaan baby .. I missed you so much
armaan: same here Rita … hearing this lovely gets angry
she grabs hold of da girls arms & pulls her away from armaan …
lovely: what did you say
Rita gets sacred .. & lovely gives her a hard push .. scaring armaan away .. at this point lovely looks with anger in her eyes at miss Singh ..
lovely: aunt back off my man .. he loves me
miss Singh: never .. he loves me .. she gets hold of armaanz right shoulder

lovely: no me .. he holds armaanz left shoulder … they start to pull him to der sides .. & soon the two aunt & Niece get into a fight .. shaking da whole place .. as they push each other .. miss Singh pushes lovely who falls back landing on armaan … not knowing what happened she gets up & gets back to her fight with miss Singh .. poor armaan looks dead .. gets hold of himself .. & makes a runner leaving the two fat wild cats… 😆😆

Armaan is running while passing the canteen door .. he stops as she sees ridhimaz innocent face … awwwh she looked so cute … her hair blowing as da wind blows past … her innocent eyes looking for information in such big books … she drinking water every second … combing her hair with her finger … as her head started to ache .. after writing a note .. she places the pen on her lip tapping it … as she proof reads … his places a cute smile on his lip but it soon turns into a angry one as he sees someone grabbing her wrist … he couldn't see da face due to people coming past him …

ridhima looks up shocked .. scared to find yuvii
yuvi: remember me baby .. he pulls her up … 😒

armaan gets shocked as he hears yuvi voice … how could he left her alone he thought… he started to make his way towards ridhimaz table … angry at seeing yuvi .. touching ridhima … misbehaving with her .. his blood starts to boil as he sees ridhima hurt with yuvi grip .. a tear rolls down her cheek … yuvi is bout to kiss ridhima when … BANG .. he gets punched hard on his left eye by armaan … armaan grabs yuviz collar … & punches him a table … the two get into a fight .. ridhima comes between to stop him when yuvi pushes her & she hits da table … blood starts to form down from her lip … now armaan was annoyed .. he was ready to kill … 😡😡

yuvi started to plead for his life as he wasn't in da state to fight armaan so more .. armaan hurt him so much .. if he touched him again yuvi would be dead … but armaan didn't listen … he gave him a punch again when he hit his head on where all da drinks were kept .. yuvi looks up .. he grabs a bottle … as armaan comes & turns him around … yuvi smashes da bottle on armaanz head… 🥺

ridhima screams: ARMAAAAAAAAAAN …. She rushed towards him as armaan starts ti lose control … he outs his hands on his head .. everything started to get blurred … da whole room started to spin for him … he was fainting … armaan is bout to collapse on da floor when ridhima grabs him … she places his head on her lap .. crying non stop … she is tapping his face.. she was going crazy…

ridhima: armaan .. armaan get up … please .. armaan …. As her finger touch the back of his head … her face changes colour .. she brings out her hand to see … Blood … 😲

ridhima: ARMAUUUUUU 😳 …. Blood was coming running down from da back of his head …
ridhima: SOME ONE CALL DA DOCTOR .. CALL DA FUC**** AMBULANCE .. SOME GET HELP 😭😭 … for ridhima it felt her world has been destroyed 😔… she was in such a bad state she herself didn't no what to do … a small smile appeared on her face as she show armaan gaining his sense… he slowly .. slowly got up .. walking towards yuvii … ridhima tried stopping him .. but she knew armaan was stubborn enough .. that he would stop .. he punches yuvi again …



yuvi … starches armaan with da ends of the broken bottle .. which left deep cuts on his body .. he is bout to stab armaan with da bottle again just den some one holds his hand causing him to stop … yuvi looks up to find shalzy … with AA & RM .. atul & rahul are bout to kill yuvi .. but as they see armaan losing control .. they rush to help him … he falls in der arms .. weak … shalzy eyes get moist seeing armaan like this .. a tear rolls down her cheek … she looks up at her brother with anger … she slaps him really hard

shalzy: im ashamed to call you my brother
yuvi: shalzyy
shalzy: shalzy dead … GET OUT …
Yuvi: listen sis …
shalzy lost her anger … she pushes yuvi : I SAID GET OUT NOW … yuvi left in anger … shalzy turned to armaan .. as he got up .. she run into his arms ..
shalzy: im sowii armaan I misunderstood you that time .. I can't belive my bother … im sorry …


armaan comforted her ..
armaan: buh how come you .. I mean .. my brothers .. muskii .. anjali .. how come you lot knew what was happening …
shalzy: I was passing by & I saw everything so I went to get them guys to help you … she said unhugging him … im sorry armaan …
armaan: is okii .. he didn't get da chance now to speak .. he had lost all his power to stay strong .. & he collapses in ridhimaz arms .. muttering her name .. his lips go purple .. his face goes white … .. while she sobs hugging a injured armaan.



Preview: armaan is in the hospital .. ridhima taking care of him …teacher on da strike .. 5 days off uni again … the other were glad… they could take propa care bout armaan .. juhi worried bout her son .. rohit comforts her … padma & shashank concern bout armaan .. The parents worried bout their children .. Armaan gets out his bed feeling the pain but still doesn't morn … ridhima sleeping on da sofa a lil away from da bed …

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sowii ii havn't proof read it so please bre with all my mistakes 😆
promo

armaan gets out of his bed … walking towards the sofa ridhima is sleeping on in pain .. he bends down .. he places a kiss on ridhimaz forehead … creasing her head …
armaan: I love you ridhima .. ii love you a lot … 😳

ridhima wakes up.

Narrate: armaan confesses his love in reality.. or this is just a sweet dream that ridhima is dreaming bout which she wants in real😳

cuteness personified.it was soooooooooooo sweet.........d whole figt b/w r Ami n Yuvi....preview n promo were so enticin .........luved it like nything.
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awsome part
it was sooooooooooooo sweet part
and i loved the preview and promo
do update soon
cant wait for ur next part
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wow yaar, to gud n don't worry abt mistakes the part is really good 👏 keep it up... wow i can't wait for next part...... n armi is bleeding 😭

really cute prt! i loved d prt n d promo! lookin 4ward 2 read d nxt prt! i hpe dis tme its real! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!