Kabhi aye na judaai - Fan Fiction

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Posted: 2005-09-10T15:44:09Z

Kabhi aye na judai revolves around a series of flashbacks, that will puzzle up a murder.

(kyph characters - all the same)

will not reveal the storyline or characters because the whole story is based on a suspense.

This story will be kinda of a narrative with flashbacks.

Hope you all will like this fan fic as well!

lots of love

Soni

Edited by soni595 - 2005-09-22T18:52:03Z
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Posted: 2005-09-10T16:53:00Z

Unfaithful--Part One
(No, supernatural powers are included...--Evee do not worry...because it's not scary)


She stares up at the ceiling, following every shadow in the darkened room.

Bang! The sudden bang of the door signals his arrival.

She sharpens her ears, squeezing the linen sheets as the footstep enchoes draw nearer, silence…icy chills run down her spine…as she realizes that he is a few steps away from the bedroom door….yup…in an instance, his brooding figure, lingered in the hallway, his shadow booming above him,

…unable to stand the very sight of him….she rolls over onto her side…so that she is facing her back towards him.
His tanking shoes make her shudder; she tightens her grips on her now creased sheet. In a few more tack-tacky steps, he was standing over her, the sheet pulled off her.

Fearfully she stared into his angry eyes.
Staring angrily down at her, he clutched her arm and heaved her up roughly and pushed her onto the hard…cold linoleum floor, she shivered….but despite that she didn't break down…she crawled backwards until her back felt the hard wall.

He drew closer and …closer….she could tell from his awfully…smelly breath that he was drunk…he must have gone to the bar again…he leaned in closer…she wished the wall would give away…cause now her head feels like it's glued to the wall….he leaned in closer…..as he did this….a pair of sad eyes filled her mind….she remembered the accident….surveying her surroundings she spotted her favorite solid brass vase…lying so close to her…if she could just reach it….but before she could hold it…he gripped her hands…her whole body tensed up…she hated it when he touched her…yes…she hated it.

Trrring…trrring…the sudden ring of his cell-phone eased her up…releasing one arm of hers…he reached in his pocket to answer his cell….she grabbed this chance….to seize hold of the vase….

as soon as he realized this….yes….the vase was now lying on the floor…covered in red stains…but wasn't it more…than it should have been…it wasn't hard…

Lots of love
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 2005-09-11T00:20:59Z
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Posted: 2005-09-10T17:06:27Z
wow soni!! great job cotinue plsss!
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Posted: 2005-09-10T17:13:03Z
gr8 job
pls carry on!!
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Posted: 2005-09-10T17:16:58Z
Keep up the good work soni
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Posted: 2005-09-10T17:42:20Z
I will continue later...as I am working on a another fan fiction...but I will continue....I have all the energy and all my creative intelligence have woken up after seeing Monday's preview
Hold your breaths for the next part...because it's ...sad
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Posted: 2005-09-10T17:49:51Z
YEH SONI DO CONTINUE VERY INTERSTING PART
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Posted: 2005-09-10T19:31:17Z

Part Two

Continued…

Trrring…trrring…the sudden ring of his cell-phone eased her up…

releasing one arm of hers…he reached in his pocket to answer his cell….

she grabbed this chance….to seize hold of the vase….as soon as he

realized this….yes….the vase was now lying on the floor…

covered in red stains…but wasn't it more…than it should have been…

it wasn't hard…

She tried to get up…but the weight…was too much…

finally hauling him

aside…she half crawled…half dragged herself…

across the room…

devoured of all emotions…she sat silently in the

 guest room….remorse vacant from her eyes…she

breathesd almost calmly as

if nothing…ever happened…but it had….she leans

back against

the wall…now adapted to the darkness…she didn't

 bother to switch the lights on…the accident flashes before

 her eyes yet again….

that painful memory…unwinds before her

eyes again...that will

will probably always be a part of her life….

tagging along wherever she went…she didn't know how

 much time had passed by…a couple of minutes…

hours…

It was had to tell…but it didn't matter to her…

she herself

was a lifeless body…void of emotions…

but yet…why her heart was still beating…that

she didn't quite

understand…maybe because…well probably that's why

she kept on living…

A sudden noise caused her to sharpen her senses…she

listened cautiously…was it a crash…yes…

probably…venting his anger upon the mirror yet again….

one of his old habits

yup definitely…cause the splintering of glass was

heard soon after....disapointment…surged in her

heart…of not doing it

Completely…then a thump…wait what was that…..

she had to find out…she heaved herself up with great

difficulty…yes the sores still ached her back…but she

didn't care

she had to see… she then went inside the bedroom…

at first he was nowhere at sight…then she saw…him….

lying on the floor…like a lifeless serpent….

blood covering

his entire face.  She kneeled down beside him….

and felt nothing

….she heard sirens drawing closer and closer

…but she

 didn't care…she just sat there staring at his lifeless

 form…in a moment her hands were seized behind

her and she was dragged into a muggy looking van

…then they put on these

silver ring kind of things that bound her hands…

what were they called…yes…handcuffs…

one woman with her hair tied in a

 bun and wearing an extremely dull khaki sari

was glaring at

 her and and the man had mentioned something

about

questioning…why?...he didn't say…did he….nope…

he kind of stinks in here…don't they smell it…then

why do I smell this awful stench…they don't even

seem to flinch…cold-hearted they are…I suppose

Left you  mystified huh?

Well to be continued soon

Lots of love

Soni

 

Edited by soni595 - 2005-09-11T00:27:26Z
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