"Advika-Unique"(LastPart V)Above18yr plzz - Page 6

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey bhoomi..
liked the whole concept..will comment in detail..
sri:-)

I just read this FIC again
i love this
yaar tum ye title mein above 18 year hata do
its no need

Originally posted by: pinka28

I just read this FIC again
i love this
yaar tum ye title mein above 18 year hata do
its no need

Hey bhoomi..
Great one..loved the name-advika!!!u keep names of u r charcters thinking a lot ha?..they have some hidden meaning which fit the story….(as I said before)..n I really liked it..
This story started very differently with nirmit liking a lady n his liking changing to confusion,anger for her as he got to knw she is a divorce,cheated her husband..but he really loved her that's the reason he came back to her,have been with her,understood the "real" her n tried to help her ,also wanted to marry her..he knowed the true side of her…
Advika…a rape victim but surely intelligent too n knows how to get her right and fight back with society and achieve her goal….she thght its good to marry him rather than file a complaint..hmm..n she has taken her part of revenge!!shes been a great mother to tirth too!!!GREAT !!!
Her relation with nirmit was at start was confused,she tried to be a friend with him but when he spoke bad about her,she didn't took it and gave him back..but later forgived
him too n liked too..may be she was not sure about this realtionship but she gave a try and said about her point of view n flashback n ended in a very nice relation with nirmit..
a happy ending..it was..
u r stories go around women n social issues n I really like it!!
One thing I have seen till now is the end of u r stories were happy endings and that too on a very good or funny note..
And also u r poems and quotes at end n usage of the title at appropriate places,,liked a lot!!
And of course the way u point out each character views n description is also so good!!!
U r writings r simple..may be everyone can understand it easily n that's u r plus point!!
Great work..
Good wishes..
Sri :-)

Originally posted by: sri_4

Hey bhoomi..
Great one..loved the name-advika!!!u keep names of u r charcters thinking a lot ha?..they have some hidden meaning which fit the story?.(as I said before)..n I really liked it..

 

Hi Sri,

I am fasinated with the charcter names and if it doesnt reflect the emotion i am wanting them to I cant proceed with the story. So they become a important part in the story..am glad u liked the names and ya meaning i always think over it too...

This story started very differently with nirmit liking a lady n his liking changing to confusion,anger for her as he got to knw she is a divorce,cheated her husband..but he really loved her that's the reason he came back to her,have been with her,understood the "real" her n tried to help her ,also wanted to marry her..he knowed the true side of her?

 

Nirmit is a simple guy he gets angry, he listens to others btu at the same time he has a pure inner soul which doestn make him to belive and knows he cant go wrong whatver it be.. to give chance and let the other not feel hrut by him.. he is sweet and i wish such people existed...

Advika?a rape victim but surely intelligent too n knows how to get her right and fight back with society and achieve her goal?.she thght its good to marry him rather than file a complaint..hmm..n she has taken her part of revenge!!shes been a great mother to tirth too!!!GREAT !!!

 

Advika and what she did is her way her want.. i wont say every girl would want to do that or should do..its ech to her own thinking.. but I felt such ascpect shoudl also be shown not the durga type or fightin g in court kidn of thing...

Her relation with nirmit was at start was confused,she tried to be a friend with him but when he spoke bad about her,she didn't took it and gave him back..but later forgived
him too n liked too..may be she was not sure about this realtionship but she gave a try and said about her point of view n flashback n ended in a very nice relation with nirmit..
a happy ending..it was..

 

Yes she is strong she is confident and she took her time to know this guy and when she understood he is wonderful she knew she wont take more time and loose him .. she truly is a very very strogn ehaded woman.. somewhere she inspires to be strogn and not careabout others but ur own self first..

u r stories go around women n social issues n I really like it!!
One thing I have seen till now is the end of u r stories were happy endings and that too on a very good or funny note..

 

hehehe i had tried hard to do that ending on happy note but in few later i changed but on a general level i personally would want my readers to finsih their story with a smile rather than a confused state.. I have confused with few but not mostly i guess... i enjoy such happy ever after stories but with a slight real touch..

And also u r poems and quotes at end n usage of the title at appropriate places,,liked a lot!!
And of course the way u point out each character views n description is also so good!!!
U r writings r simple..may be everyone can understand it easily n that's u r plus point!!

 

Thanks for the compliment Sri, I dont try to write simple but i cant write other wisse.. my thinkign my words in mind r simple and genral.. i use them to brign my thoguht and if thats a plus point.. feels good.. as that comes with ease 😃. I hope u enjoy readign my stories.. such comment always make me feel what kind of stories are more liked..and do message in btw brign soem thought .. how people think and react to it.. thanks for sharing ur views and for appreciatign my effort..

Great work..
Good wishes..
Sri :-)