SU FF(ACHPM):Ek Mohalle Ki Dastaan..pg 34(30/3/09) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Fazila~

👏 👏 👏 very good....infact excellent........wow surbhi...gr8 work 😉

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Originally posted by: dhams-123

great work yaar!!! kya khub likha hai... u r inspiring mi to write one of my own 😉 ...

thanks a lot 👏

ohh that would be great.....why dont u start writing!!!!!it would be lovely to see one more member who would write a fanfic......plzz do write😛

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Originally posted by: kshreya2002

wow! that was great surbhi!

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Really good stuff Surbhi, truly!

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Really good stuff Surbhi, truly!

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its really good surbhii.. please continue

Originally posted by: smartly_yours

its really good surbhii.. please continue

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Chapter 7-Meeting with urmi's mausi

Urmi and sandeep entered the station and saw a train on the platform...
S-main enquiry mein pochkar aata hoon
Urmi nodded.
Sandeep went to the enquiry officer
S-suniye...ye kanpur se aane waali train hain kya?
The officer said:kanpur se?are nahi...wo train to dedh ghanta(1.5 hrs) late aayegi
Sandeep was shocked
S-kya?dedh ghanta?
The officer:ji
S-theek hain...thank u
Sandeep left and went to urmi
U-kya hua sandeepji?
S-urmi,train dedh ghanta late hain
Urmi got shocked too..
U-kya??????
S-ha
U-to ab kya kare?
S-kya kare se kya matlab...humhe yaha wait karna padega
U-dedh ghanta......sandeepji?
S-ha to aur kya kar sakte hain
Sandeep's mobile rang...He picked it up...
S-hello?
It was rasik on the line
R-are sandeep....kya hua...station pohche ki nahi?
S-ji uncle..pohch gaye...lekin train dedh ghanta late hain
R-kya dedh ghanta??????Everyone surrounding rasik got worried...
S-ji
R-to ab?
S-main aur urmi yahi par hain...jaise hi train aati hain main aapko khabar kar dunga
R-theek hain
U-kiska phone tha?
S-tumhare papa ka
U-ohh
S-chalo..baithte hain
U-hmm....
Urmi and sandeep sat on a bench near by...
S-waise urmi...tumhari mausi ka naam kya hain?
U-Sapna!!!
S-hmm.....
U-kyun?
S-nahi aise hi
U-sandeep babu...hum dedh ghanta yaha karege kya?
S-main bhi yahi soch raha hoon....
Sandeep saw a man selling juices
S-urmi,juice piyogi?
U-theek hain
S-main lata hoon
He bought the juice carton and gave it to her:
U-aap nahin lenge?
S-nahi
Suddenly urmi realised a man standing near the platform at a distance staring at her...urmi felt uncomfortable
S-urmi ho gaya juice to main ise phaik.....he saw urmi looking tensed
S-urmi kya hua?
U-sandeepji...wo.......He looked in the direction where urmi was looking and saw the same man constantly looking at urmi.
Anger was fuming from sandeep's face and he got up.Urmi caught his hand and told him to sit down:
S-urmi..mera haath chodo!!!!!!
U-sandeepji...rehne dijiye na
S-kya rehne do...wo kabse tumhe dekhe ja raha hain..aur main kuch na karo
U-chodiye use......shakal se koi gunda lagta hain...
She saw the man coming towards them and got scared.She caught sandeep's arms tightly.
S-urmi tum daro mat...main ho na yaha!!!!!!
When he came near them...sandeep realised that,that man was his old friend Rohit
S-are rohit tu?
Ro(looked confused at urmi)-are sandeep kabse tujhe waha se dekh raha tha...mujhe laga tune mujhe pehchana nahi...isliye chala aaya..kaisa hain tu?
S-main theek ho...aur tu?
Ro-fasclass...
Sandeep saw urmi looking at him angrily.She was shocked that the man who was staring at her was actually sandeep's friend and sandeep didnt even recongize him
S-ahem...rohit ye urmi hain..aur urmi ye rohit hain...mera old friend...college mein ek saath padhte the
Urmi and rohit shook hands and smiled
S-rohit..baith na
Rohit sat next to urmi on the bench
Ro-are urmi tum itni dari hui se kyun lag rahi thi?
U-wo...actuallyand she told him everything
Ro(laughing)-ohh.....to tumne socha main koi gunda ho jo tumhe kabse ghoore jaa raha ho
Urmi got embarssed
Ro-are main to tumhe sandeep ke saath dekhkar harain tha
Sandeep also got embarssed.
Ro-ab batayenge sandeepji....ki ye yaha tumhare saath..........
S-umm...wo......
Ro-rehne de...main samjh gaya.....
S-kya?
Ro-yehi ki mujhe inhe urmi nahin urmi bhabhi bulana chhaiye
Urmi blushed.Sandeep smiled.
Ro-waise aap log yaha kya kar rahe hain?
Sandeep told him abt urmi's mausi.

S-waise tu yaha kaise?
Ro-main teri bhabhi ko lene aaya tha
U-are wah!!!!to aapki shaadi ho gayi hain
S-ha.....ise college mein hi ek ladki pasand aa gayi thi
U-waise aap dono dost lagte to nahin ho?
Ro-main samjh gaya...bhabhi aap kya kehna chahti hain
U-kya?
Ro-yehi ki main itna romantic ho aur ye jisse dur dur thak......waise bhabhi isne aapse kaise kaha.....i am sure bahut time lagaya hoga
S-rohit..tu bhi na.....kuch bhi bolta hain
Ro-kyun galat kaha maine bhabhi?
U-bilkul nahi......bahut intezaar karvane ke baad hi inhone kaha ki ye mujhse pyaar karte hain
Sandeep and urmi looked at each other lovingly and smiled.....
Ro-ahem ahem......
They came back to reality and urmi blushed a little

A train passed by them and stopped at the platform and sandeep noticed that it was 11:30 and it was the kanpur train..
S-urmi,ye tumhari mausi ki train hain........
U-kya dedh ghante beet gaye?
Ro-ji ha bhabhi.......acha main chalta hoon......meera mujhe dhoond rahi hogi
U-meera?
S-ha iski wife
U-ohh
Ro-chalo bye bhabhi and sandeep apni shaadi mein bulana zaroor
Urmi again lowered her eyes and sandeep smiled....ha zaroor
Rohit left and sandeep said;
S-chalo tumhari mausi ko dhoondhte hain
Someone called from behind,"urmi"
Urmi turned and saw her mausi there......She smiled and ran towards her and hugged her:
U-mausi.............
Sandeep came to her and touched her feet........
S-namaste mausiji
M-are urmi ye kaun hain?
U-mausi...ye sandeepji hain
M-acha to ye sandeep hain.....handsome hain.....achi jodi hain
Sandeep got confused and looked at urmi and was thinking kya urmi ne inhe sab kuch bata diya hain
S-umm......chale mausiji.
M-ha ek min.beta....main apna samaan laati hoon
S-ji
She left to bring her suitcase.Urmi also was abt to go with her when sandeep caught her hand and brought her back.
U-sandeepji..ye aap....
Sandeep was angry at her
S-tumne kya mausji ko humhare baare mein bata diya
U-lo to ye baat hain......mujhe laga......are ye baat mausiji ko tabse pata hain jabse aapko bhi nahi pata
S-kya matlab?
U-dekhiye mausiji aur main..dost ki tarah hain....bachpan se lekar aaj tak hum dono mein kabhi koi raaz nahin raha...to main unse ye baat kaise chupati ki mujhe...(lowering her eyes)kisise pyaar ho gaya hain.dont worry wo mummy-papa ko nahin batayengi.........trust me
S-theek hain
Her mausi came.
M-chale beta
S-ji chaliye........

They left from the station to CG............

 

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Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago

awww. that was sweet surbhi 😊

but I dont understand why ppl were so shocked abt train being late for just 1.30 hr. 😆 .. tho' definitely liked the idea of it.. 😛

hmmm...that was good...waiting for the next part.