SU FF(ACHPM):Ek Mohalle Ki Dastaan..pg 34(30/3/09) - Page 2

Originally posted by: love_urmi

I hope u write for ACHPM then we will get to see U/S all time

ohh thats a big hope ur hoping love_urmi......anyway,thanks😊

That was absolutely astonishing !!!! wonderful....too good .....I too wish if you could write for ACHPM ...we would get to see this u/s romance onscreen !!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Originally posted by: mithie14u

That was absolutely astonishing !!!! wonderful....too good .....I too wish if you could write for ACHPM ...we would get to see this u/s romance onscreen !!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

thanks mithie......so sweet of u........glad u liked it...😳😛

Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago

I like your FF. Whenever I read your FF, I feel that I am reading the original story.

Originally posted by: emon

I like your FF. Whenever I read your FF, I feel that I am reading the original story.

ohh......thank u soo much for the sweet complement,emon.......glad u all liked it😊

hey cool fanfic! really..awesome!

Originally posted by: luna_lovegood

hey cool fanfic! really..awesome!

thanks a lot,shruti😊

Chapter-6....A new meeting

Next morning,normal routine for everyone in the mohalla...the 4 deewane playing pitho...ratiramji singing at his cafe...sukhaji on the DVD shop and rangila making a pan......
Scene shifts to sandeep's house and we see sandeep drinking tea and typing something on the computer.There is a knock on the door...and our dear urmi enters.

S-are tum?aao na!!!!!
U-are wah!!
S-kya hua?
U-aaj to aap bahut ache lag rahe hain
Sandeep smiled
S-tum bhi na,urmi
Urmi smiled too.
U-aur main?
S-kya?
U-main kaisi lag rahi ho??
Sandeep decided to pull her leg
S-aap to humesha hi achi lagti hain
Urmi looked at him and they stared at each other......
U-jhooth!!!!!!!
Sandeep got up from his chair and went near her,
S(smiling and looking straight in her eyes)-tumhe to pata hain na...main kabhi jhooth nahi bolta
Urmi smiled
U-kya baat hain sandeepji...aapka mood bahut acha hain aaj??koi khaas baat??
S-ha...hoga hi...aaj koi khaas aane waala hain,na?
U-kaun??
S-meri mausi saas
Urmi looked surprised and blushed a little.
U-sandeepji...aap bhi na!!!!!
Sandeep smiled...
S-acha ye sab baate chodo....chale dair ho gayi hain....9 baj gaye hain...
U-are ha,.....station tak ek ghanta bhi to lagta hain...chaliye

They went down....and saw sukhaji waiting for them with a taxi...
Suk-are sandeep,urmi...chalo jaldi dair ho rahi hain
S-ha
He and urmi sat in the taxi and went to the station.
During the journey,they sometimes looked at each other,sometimes outside.
S-acha urmi ek baat batao.......tumhari mausi kaisi hain?
U-matlab?
S-matlab swabaav se?
U-thodi se mohphat hain...lekin dil ki bahut achi hain
S-wo pehli baar aa rahi hain na colonel gunj?
U-ji
They stopped at a signal and urmi saw a couple eating ice-cream from the window and smiled.
Sandeep saw her smiling and asked:
S-kya dekh rahi ho,urmi?
U-us couple ko dekhiye sandeepji...kitne pyaare lagte hain!!!!

The driver,till now,noticed the love between urmi-sandeep and he thought they r married:
D-lekin aap dono se zyaada nahin!!!
Urmi-sandeep looked at the driver.
S-kya?
D-ji sahab...aap dono ki jodi kitni achi lagti hain....mashallah!!!!!!aap dono ka pyaar humesha salamat rahe.....
They both blushed.

They reached the station and got down from the car.Sandeep gave the driver money...but he didnt take it:
S-are le lo bhaiya...
U-ha bhaiyaji...le lijiye na
D-nahin behen...aap dono ka aapsi pyaar dekhkar mujhe apni biwi ki yaad aa gayi,,,jo mujhse bahut door hain
U-kaha hain aapki biwi?
D-Allah ke paas
Urmi and sandeep were shocked
D-bahut saalon pehle...allah ne mujhse meri biwi ko cheen liya tha...us biwi ko jise main jaan se bhi zyaada chahta tha...isliye jab bhi main meri gaadi mein kisi pyaar karne waale ko dekhta hoon...to unse paise lene ko ji nahin chahta
Urmi had tears in her eyes.
D-khair...bhai waise to main aapka koi nahin lagta lekin agar aap mujhe kuch dena hi chahte hain to main kuch maang sakta hoon?
S-ha ha...maangiye na!!!!!!!
D-aap dono humesha saath rahiyega...kabhi apne pyaar se juda nahin hoyega....aur inhe(pointing towards urmi)bahut pyaar dijiyega
Urmi and sandeep smiled and urmi blushed
Seeing her blush,the driver said:
D-aur ha...agli baar jab aap meri gaadi mein aaye to aap dono ke saath ek teesra mehmaan bhi hona chahiye
Urmi and sandeep both blushed......and urmi had gone all red
S-ji...humhari abhi tak shaadi nahin hui hain!!!!!!!
D-ohh...hahaha......theek hain to agli baar meri behen ke gale mein mangalsutra aur maang mein sindoor hona chahiye...theek hain bhai
Urmi smiled.
U-bhaiyaji...aapka naam kya hain?
D-mustafa,behen...aur tumhara?
U-urmila aur inka sandeep
D-ache naam hain
U-acha bhaiyaji hum chalte hain
D-ha..jaao
U-thank u bhaiyaji
D-humesha khush raho

They left to search for urmi's mausi........

 

hope u liked it!!!!!!plzz post ur comments and suggestions😊

Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago

👏 👏 👏 very good....infact excellent........wow surbhi...gr8 work 😉

great work yaar!!! kya khub likha hai... u r inspiring mi to write one of my own 😉 ...

thanks a lot 👏