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wow, I love it. Please continue.
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ANAGAD : KRIPA WHO DEKHO…WAHA EK TABELA HAI…

KRIPA RUNS INTO THE TABELA AND ANAGAD FOLLOWS HER

KRIPA TRYING OT MAKE HERSELF WARM AND ANAGAD REALIZES HOW BEAUTIFUL AND HOT SHE IS. HE KEEPS STARING AT HER

JUST THEN KRIPA SEES …ANAGAD LOOKS AWAY

ANAGAD : WAIT HERE…MAIN FIRE BANATHA HU

KRIPA : OK

ANAGAD MAKES THE FIRE THEY SIT AND LOOKS AT HER

ANAGAD : KRIPA….MAIN EK BAATH PUCHU??

KRIPA : HAAA

ANAGAD : KYA TUMNE MUJHE EN SAALO MAIN YAAD KIYA

KRIPA GETS TEARS IN HER EYES

KRIPA : ANAGAD…TUM MUJHE HAR DIN YAAH ATHETEY

ANAGAD : TUMNE MUMBAI WAPAAS DADI KE PASS KYU NAHI AAYYI
KRIPA : TUM JANTHEY HO KYU

JUST THEN THERE IS A THUNDER AND KRIPA HUGS ANAGAD TIGHT

SHE KEEPS SOME KIND OF COMFORT IN HIS ARMS….HE HOLDS HER TIGHT

ANAGAD : KRIPA MAIN TUMSE BAHUT PRAY KARTA HU

KRIPA : MUJHE PATA HAI ANAGAD

ANAGAD : KYA TUM MUJSE SHAADI KAROGI??

KRIPA MOVES AWAY FROM HIM

ANAGAD : KRIPA….I WANNA MAKE UP FOR ALL THOSE YEARS. I PROMISE MAIN EK ACHA PATI AUR BAAP BANUNGA

KRIPA : MUJE PATHA HAI ANAGAD…PAR KUSHI

ANAGAD : MAIN USSE BAATH KARUNGA

KRIPA RUNS INTO ANAGAD ARMS

ANAGAD : I PROMISE KRIPA…I WILL GIVE U ALL THE HAPPINESS OF THE WORLD.

ANAGAD SEES A TRUCK COMING AND THEY FIND A WAY BACK HOME
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww, that was cute. Please continue.
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ANAGAD AND KRIPA REACH HOME

DADI AND KUSHI ARE IN THE LIVING ROOM WATCHING TV

ANAGAD : KUSHI KYA MAIN TUSE KUCH BAATH KAR SAKTHA HU??

KUSHI : SURE DAD

THEY BOTH GO INTO KUSHI'S ROOM

ANAGAD : KUSHI….I ASKED YOUR MOM TO MARRY ME TODAY…I WANNA KNOW IF YOU ANY PROBLEMS WITH IT??

KUSHI RUNS AND HUGS ANAGAD….

KUSHI : I LOVE YOU DAD
JUST THEN DADI AND KRIPA COME IN

DADI : MAIN AAJ BAHUT KUSH HU


KRIPA TELLS NEHA AND IN NO TIME THE WHOLE TOWN COMES TO KNOW THE NEWS

FIRST THEY TALK A BIT BAD ABOUT KRIPA BUT THEY ARE HAPPY FOR HER

ANAGAD : KRIPA…..IF YOU WANT TO KEEP THE INN ITS FINE WITH ME

KRIPA : NAHI ANAGAD….I WILL GIVE THE OWNERSHIP TO NEHA…SHE WILL TAKE CARE OF IT…I WILL JUST BE A PARTNER

ANAGAD SMILES

ANAGAD : WE ALL WILL MOVE IN WITH DADI….THEN I AM GOING TO BUY A HOUSE FOR US…I AM SURE KUSHI WILL GET ADMISSION IN A GOOD SCHOOL

KRIPA : I LOVE YOU ANAGAD

THEY HAVE A SMALL WEDDING…KUSHI IS ALL EXCITED OF GOING TO MUMBAI BUT SHE IS A BIT UPSET OF LEAVING HER FRIENDS

KRIPA KUSHI AND ANAGAD IN THE LIVING ROOM PACKING

KUSHI IS UPSET

ANAGAD : KYA HUA MERI BETI KO??

KUSHI : PAPA I WILL MISS LENA

ANAGAD : THO YEH BAATH HAI………WE WILL INVITE HER FOR SUMMER VACATION

KUSHI : I LOVE U DAD

ANAGAD : LOVE U TOO BETA

KRIPA : ACHA THO MAIN??

THEY BOTH HUG KRIPA….WE LOVE U TOO

EVERYONE HAS PACKED….AND THEY ARE READY TO LEAVE

EVERYONE IN THE TOWN COMES TO SEND THEM OFF…THEY CRY BUT ARE HAPPY FOR THEM

THEY ALL REACH MUMBAI

DADI TELLS THEM TO WAIT ….AND SHE DOES THE WHOLE PUJA RITUAL

KUSHI : WOW INTA BADA GHAR??

ANAGAD : DO U LIKE IT??

KUSHI : I LOVE IT

KRIPA : EVERYTHING IS THE SAME……….KUCH NAHI BADLA

KUSHI GETS SETTLED IN HER ROOM

ANAGAD AND KRIPA IN THEIR ROOM

KRIPA IS UNPACKING EVERYTHING

ANAGAD COMES FROM BEHIND

KRIPA : ANAGAD CHODO MUJE

ANAGAD : KYU…MAIN APNI WIFE KO PYAR KAR RAHA HU

KRIPA : MUJHE KAAM HAI

ANAGAD : TUM…APNA KAAM KARO MAIN APNA KARUNGA

KRIPA : VERY FUNNY…ANAGAD TUM ABHI TAK AISE HI HO

ANAGAD : KAISE

KRIPA : ACHE

ANAGAD HUGS HER AND KISSES ON HER NECK

JUST THEN KUSHI COMES IN………….SHE COUGHS

KUSHI : AAPKA LOVE SCENE HO GAYA THO MAIN ANDHAR AA JOA

KRIPA AND ANAGAD ARE A BLUSHING

KUSHI COMES AND SITS ON THE BED

KUSHI : DAD….MY SCHOOL ADMISSION??

ANAGAD : SO SOON…….

KUSHI : I DON'T WANNA MISS CLASSES

ANAGAD : TEEK HAI WE WILL GO TOMORROW AND FIND OUT

KUSHI : MOM…..CAN WE GO OUT FOR DINNER TODAY

KRIPA : KUSHI DADI HAS MADE SOMETHING FOR US TODAY WE WILL GO TOMORROW

ANAGAD : HEY WE WILL HAVE A SMALL PARTY TONIGHT AND I AM GONNA CALL THE PRESS AND ANOUCE MY WEDDING

KRIPA : OKAY….BUT WHAT ABOUT YOUR FAMILY

ANAGAD : KRIPA THIS IS MY FAMILY…YOU KUSHI DADI….I DON'T NEED ANYONE ELSE


DINNER

KUSHI : WOW DADI THIS FOOD IS AWESOME

DADI : YOU LIKE IT BETA…WE WILL MAKE FOR YOU EVERYDAY

KUSHI : DADI LOVE THE CAKE

DADI : ITS YOUR PAPA AND MAMMA'S FAVORITE CAKE

KUSHI : COOL

KRIPA : KUSHI GO AND SLEEP NOW…YOU GOTA BE READY FOR SCHOOL TOMORROW

KUSHI : OKAY MAMMA….G'NITE EVERYONE

EVERYONE : G'NITE KUSHI

DADI : KITNI PYARI BACHI HAI

ANAGAD : AAKHIE BETI KISKI HAI

KRIPA : ACHA…….

EVERYONE SMILES


NEXT DAY KUSHI IS REALLY EXCITED ABOUT GOING TO SCHOOL. ANAGAD AND KRIPA GET READY AND TAKE HER TO THE MOST POPULAR SCHOOL IN MUMBAI

AS SOON AS ANAGAD GOES INTO THE SCHOOL EVERYONE RUN TO HIM FOR AUTOGRAPH

THEY GO TO THE PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE

PRINCIPAL : MR. ANAGAD KHANNA WELCOME

ANAGAD : THANKS

PRINCIPAL: HOW CAN I HELP YOU??

ANGAD : I NEED ADMISSION FOR MY DAUGHTER IN TIS SCHOOL

PRINCIPAL : SURE

THE WHOLE PAPER WORK IS DONE AND THE PRINCIPAL SAYS KUSHI CAN START FROM MONDAY

ITS WEEKEND SO SHE CAN BE HOME ON FRIDAY AND SATURDAY

THEY LEAVE…ON THE WAY HOME KUSHI SHOPS FOR BOOKS AND OTHER SCHOOL STUFF

ANAGAD : HO GAYA????

KUSH: YES DAD

KRIPA : KUSHI YOU WILL NEED A DRESS FOR WEEKEND PARTY

KUSHI : WHY CAN'T I WEAR JEANS??

KRIPA : BECAUSE THE PRESS WILL BE THERE

KUSHI : WHY???

ANAGAD : BETA I AM A PUBLIC FIGURE…I AM GONNA ANOUCE THAT U R MY DAUGTER…

KUSHI : OH K

ANAGAD : SHE LOOKS CONFUSED

KRIPA : SHE WILL GET USE TO IT

THEY ALL HAVE LUNCH AND GO HOME

THEY ALL SIT IN THE LIVING ROOM HAVING FUN WITH DADI

DADI AND KRIPA SIT ON ONE SIDE…ANAGAD AND KUSHI ON ONE

KUSHI IS WATCHING TV…SHE LOVES THE NEWS CHANNELS

KRIPA : GOD THIS GIRL…TV TV

KUSHI : MOM PLZ…

ANAGAD : LET HER WATCH….MY BETI WILL DO WHATEVER SHE WANTS

KUSHI : KUSHI I LOVE U DAD

ANAGAD : LOVE U TOO BETA

KUSHI PUTS HER HEAD IN ANAGAD LAP AND WATCHES TV

SHE FALLS ASLEEP EVENTUALLY

ANNGAD : YEH THO SO GAYI

KRIPA : WAKE HER UP….SHE WILL GO AND SLEEP IN HER ROOM

ANAGAD : NO…I WILL TAKE HER

SHE CARRIES KUSHI AND TAKE HER TO HER ROOM

DADI : BAHUT PYAR KARTA HAI TUMSE KRIPA

KRIPA : MUJE PATA HAI DADI

DADI : HE SEARCHED FOR YOU EVERYWHERE

KRIPA : KAASH…AIN YAHA RUKH JATI…PAR DADI…THINGS WERE DIFFERENT THEN

DADI : MUJE PATA HAI BETA

JUST THEN ANAGAD COMES DOWN

ANAGAD : SHE IS SLEEPING

DADI : YOU GUYS GO TAKE REST…TOMORROW IS A BIG DAY FOR YOU THREE

KRIPA GOES TO HER ROOM…ANGAD IS ON THE BED STARING AT HER

KRIPA : AISE KYA DEKH RAHE HO??

ANAGAD : KUCH NAHI

KRIPA WALK TO THE BATHROOM AND ANAGAD HOLDS HER

KRIPA : ANAGAD CHODO MUJE…I NEED TO TAKE A SHOWER AND SLEEP

ANAGAD : MAIN AAJAOO

KRIPA : KYU??

ANAGAD : U KNOW U MIGHT GET BORED

KRIPA : CHODO MUJHE

SHE GOES TO TAKE SHOWER AND WHEN SHE COMES BACK…ANAGAD IS SLEEPING

KRIPA COMES AND SITS NEXT TO HIM…BENDS DOWN ON HIS FACE

KRIPA : I LOVE U

ANAGAD GETS UP PUTS HER UNDER HIM

ANAGAD : ME TOO

THEY KISS………LIGHTS GO OFF




NEXT DAY MORNING

KRIPA : ANAGAD UTO….

ANAGAD : PLEAE SONE DONA PLEASE

KRIPA COMEON ANAGAD PLEASE

THEY BOTH GET AND TAKE SHOWER

ANAGAD : KUSHI KAHA HAI??

KRIPA :SHE IS PROBABALY SLEEPING..I WILL GO WAKE HER UP

ANAGAD : MAIN BHI AATHA HU

THEY GO TO KUSHI'S ROOM

SHE IS HOLDING A PILLOW AND SLEEPING PEACEFULLY

KRIPA : KUSHI UTO

KUSHI : MMMMMMMMMM

KRIPA : COME ONGET UP

KUSHI : PLEASE MOM…..5 MINS

KRIPA : NAHI UTO

ANAGAD SITS NEXT TO KUSHI

KUSHI MOVES AND PUTS HER HEAD ON HIS LAP

KUSHI : DAD MAMA KO BOLO NA MUJE SONA HAI

ANAGAD : COME ON BETA….WE NEED TO TAKE YOU OUT GET UR DRESS AND STUFF

KUSHI : DAD MAIN JEANS PEHNOONGI

ANAGAD : NO BETA…WE WILL GET YOU A KNEW DRESS GET

SHE FINALLY GETS UP..


BREAKFAST TABLE

ANAGAD : I HAVE CALLED THE DESIGNER HE WILL BE READY FOR US

KUSHI : WHY CAN'T I DRESS

KRIPA : CUZ YOU WILL END WEARING JEANS

KUSHI : TUE SOME STILL

ANAGAD : WELL U WILL HAVE A CHOICE THERE

KUSHI : OKAY

ANAGAD KRIPA AND KUSHI TO THE DESIGNER…THEY DECIDE ON THEIR CLOTHES FOR THE EVENING


THE ANNOUCEMENT

IT WAS A HUGE BALLROOM IN A 5 STAR HOTEL

THE ENTIRE KHANNA FAMILY AND THE PRESS WAS THERE

DADI MAKES THE ANOUCEMENT

DADI : LADIES AND GENTLEMEN…AS YOU KNOW….ANANGAD HAS BEEN AWAY FOR A WHILE NOW….BUT HE HAS A REASON FOR STAYING AWAY. HE HAS BEEN WITH HIS WIFE AND DAUGHTER IN NORTH INDIA.

EVERYONE IS SHOCKED

DADI : THAT'S RIGHT……..HE HAS A FAMILY AND OW I THINK IS THE RIGT TIME TO ANOUCE ……….PLEASE WELCOME….MR. & MRS. ANAGAD KHANNA AND THEIR ONLY DAUGHER KUSHI KHANNA

ANAGAD IN A BLACK SUIT….KRIPA IS A MAROON SARE AND KUSHI IN A PINK SALWAR WALK DOWN

THE ENTIRE PRESS IS SHOCKED

KHANNA FAMILY IS DUMBSTRUCK


ANAGAD KRIPA AND KUSHI ANSWER ALL THE PRESS QUESTIONS AND THEY ARE HAVING FUN AT THE PARTY

NAINA COMES

NAINA : TUM FIRSE AA GAYI MERE BETE KI ZINDAGI MAIN

KRIPA IS JUST STANDING…JUST THEN ANAGAD COMES

ANAGAD : MOM YEH MERI PATNI HAI….PLEASE GIVE HER SOME RESPECT IF U EXPECT THAT FROM US.

NAINA : YEH KISI AUR KI BETI KO LEKAR …TUMHE FASA RAHI HAI

ANAGAD : MOMMMMMMMMMM STOP….EK AUR LAFOZ BHI KAHA THO ACHA NAHI HOGA

KRIPA RUNS FROM THERE

ANAGAD : MO MAINE SOCHA IN THE SALO BAATH AAP BADAL JAYENGE PAR NAHI……..STAY AWAY FROM ME AND MY FAMILY

NAINA LEAVES

ANAGAD GOES TO KRIPA

ANAGAD : KRIPA I AM SORRY….MEIN MOM KI TARAF SE BOL RAHA HU

KRIPA : NAHI ANAGD ISME TUMHARI GALTHI NAHI HAI

ANAGAD HUGS KRIPA

ANAGAD : KRIPA I PROMISE I WIL TAKE CARE OF YOU AND KUSHI. YOU BOTH MEAN MORE THAN Y LIFE

KRIPA : KISSES IN HIS CHEST…I LOVE U

JUST THEN PRITHVI MISTY COME IN

PRITHVI IS HAPPY TO SEE KRIPA….

PRITHVI : MAIN ITNA PARAYA HO GAY THA TUMHARE LIYE???

KRIPA : PRITHVI AISI BAATH NAHI HAI

PRITHVI : BY THE WAY MEET MY WIFE SIMONE

KRIPA : HEY SIMONE NICE TO MEET YOU
MISTY IS STILL SINGLE…YOU KNOW THE DESPO MISTY WAITING FOR ANAGAD

MISTY FEELS A BIT JEALOUS BUT SHE IS POLITE

MISTY : HEY KRIPA KAISI HO??

KRIPA : MAIN TEEK HU MISTY….TUM KAISI HO??

JUST THEN KUSHI COMES

ANAGAD : EVERYONE THIS YEH MERI BETI KUSHI…AND KUSHI BETA…THERE ARE OUR FRIENDS

KUSHI SAY HEY TO EVERYONE

KUSHI : PAPA …LETS DANCE

ANAGAD AND KUSHI ARE ON THE DANCE FLOOR

PRESS IS TAKING PHOTOS

DADI IS HAPPY

THE PARTY ENDS LATE AND THEY GO HOME


MONDAY MORNING

KUSHI IS UP BEFORE EVERYONE

SHE RUNS INTO ANAGAD AND KRIPA'S BED ROOM AND SLEEPS BETWEEN THEM

MOM GET UP…DAD GET UP PLEASE…TODAY IS MY FIRST DAY

MOM GOD YEH LADKI…ANAGAD GETS UP KISSES ON HER FOREHEAD

KRIPA : GO GET READY…IN THE MEANTIME WE BOTH WILL OK

KUSHI KRIPA AND ANAGAD GET READY AND THEY ARE DRIVING KUSHI TO SCHOOL

AS THEY ENTER THE SCHOOL THEY SEE THE PRESS OUTSIDE

ANAGAD : OH GOD…WHY ARE THE PRESS HERE
THE PRESS COMES RUNBING TO THEM TO AKS THEM QUESTIONS

THE PRESS IS NOT ALLOWED TO GO INTO THE SCHOOL

ANAGAD DROPS OFF KUSHI AND THEY LEAVE

BUNCH OF GIRLS AND BOYS GIVE HARD TIME TO KUSHI

GIRL : OH YEA…WELCOME MS. KHANNA

BOY : GUYS WHO KNOWS IF SHE IS OR NOT

GIRL : COME ON YAAR SHE LOOKS LIKE ONE

BOY : THO ANYWAYZ….SING A SONG ..LET SEE IF U CAN SING LIKE YOUR DAD

KUSHI LEAVES FROM THERE

IN THE EVENING THE DIVER COMES TO PICK UP KUSHI

KUSHI RUNS INTO TH HOUSE….ANAGAD KRIPA AND DADI CALL BUT SHE GOES TO HER ROOM

ANAGAD AND KRIPA GO TO HER ROOM

KRIPA : KYA HUA KUSHI??

KUSHI : MOM MUJE YAHA SCHOOL NAHI JANA

ANAGAD : KYU

KUSHI : SAB MERA MAZAAK UDATHE HAI

ANAGAD : INTNI SI BAATH…YOU ARE A BRAVE GIRL KUSHI….IF SOMEONE SAYS ANYTHING GIVE THEM A PROPER REPLY.

KRIPA : COME ON CHEER UP NOW

ANAGAD : AAJ HUM APNI PRINCESS KO…DINNER PE LE JAYENGE

KUSHI : NO PAPA THAT'S OK

ANAGAD : NAHI AAJ APKA PEHLA DIN HAI…IN SCHOOL I WILL TAKE U OUT

DADI KUSHI ANAGAD AND KRIPA GO OUT FOR DINNER

THE PRESS IS THERE TOO

KUSHI : GOD THESE PEOPLE R THERE EVERYWHERE

ANAGAD : REMEMEBR KUSHI…YOU ARE A DAUGHTER OF A PUBLIC FIGURE. ALL THESE THINGS ARE COMMON. YOU WILL GET USE TO THEM. JUST DON'T LET THEM EFFECT YOU OK

KUSHI : OK DAD

KRIPA : OK LETS GO KUSHI HAS SCHOOL TOMORROW AND ANAGAD YOU HAVE RECORDING IN THE MORNING

ANAGAD : YES MAM


KUSHI GOES TO SCHOOL, SHE HAS SETTLED DOWN. SHE IS QUITE FAMOUS IN SCHOOL AND EVERYONE STARTS LIKING HER FOR WHO SHE IS. SHE WORKS FOR THE SCHOOL NEWS PAPER. SHE IS VERY GOOD IN STUDIES AND OTHER ACTIVITIES

ANAGAD GOT BUSY WITH HIS RECORDINGS AND KRIPA JOINED HIM TOO. SHE DOESN'T DO CONCERT BUT SHE IS HIS FEMALE LEAD SINGER.

DAYS GO BY KUSHI IS IN COLLEGE NOW. KUSHI GET ADMITTED INTO JOURNAISM IN MUMBAI UNIVERSITY

PREVIEW : DRAMA STARTS NOW
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Posted: 18 years ago
you atre hust a fantastic writer keep it up girl
besides wich drama is going to start anyways
please xont
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great...plz continue soon and keep up the great work
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow wat a lovely part plez continue soon yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kripaloveangad

you atre hust a fantastic writer keep it up girl
besides wich drama is going to start anyways
please xont



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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 fan fic!!keep it up n continue fast
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great...i just read the whole thing and its awesome i love the gilmore girls....awesome job hun...plz continue soon 😃