FF: Diye Pyaar Ke - 2nd Upd pg 18 Aug 9 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

126

Views

20.5k

Users

29

Likes

22

Frequent Posters

-Unknown-22 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#91
Awww Saaymu loved the update...she forgave him hehe..hope all goes well now
angel.41 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Heyy Everyone! Back to update lol hope you like ittt Smile

So... Divya accepted Saagar's proposal of living with him... it's been a month since the shift has happened and Saagar and Divya seem to be cool with it. It is a Friday night and Saagar and Divya are going to some party (not from work) just with a few friends and so they are getting dressed for that.

Divya (putting her make up on in front of the mirror): Saagar,
Saagar (who is putting his shirt on): Yeah?
Divya: What are you going to introduce me to your friends as?
Saagar (looks up to the mirror): Introduce you?
Divya: Yes, introduce me.
Saagar: Umm.. (pauses before saying) my girlfriend..?
Divya (ponders upon hearing that): Hmm... girlfriend.
Saagar: Why, do you want me to call you by some other title lol?
Divya: No no.. just trying to get myself familiar with people starting to call me that.

Saagar is just wearing a casual short sleeved t-shirt with jeans and Divya is wearing this: http://us.st12.yimg.com/us.st.yimg.com/I/edressme_2042_162134160 with some jeans.

Just like that their casual conversation continued in the car and they soon arrived at the place. It's actually an apartment.

Divya (takes a deep breath after closing the car's door): Ok. I can do this.
Saagar (laughs): WHY are you getting so nervous? They're just people, they won't eat you!
Divya: Shut up....! I'm just nervous cos I'm going to be going into a crowd of people I don't even know.
Saagar: Relax! My friends are nicer than you think they are. And friendly too. Don't worry, just stick with me.
Divya: Ok....

Saagar and Divya walk in the apartment, to the lobby, up the elevatorand then by the door. Saagar knocks on the door and one of his friends opens and typically, you hear all this noise in the background and Saagar and Divya are invited inside.

Saagar (after coming inside): Rohit, this is Divya. My girlfriend. (turns to Divya) Divya, meet Rohit.
Divya: Hi..
Rohit: Heyy! Thanks for coming
Divya (smiles a bit): Oh no problem.

Divya and Saagar proceed and they meet with Saagar's other friends. That takes a lot of time but soon after they have time to themselves and they go outside and stand in the balcony.

Saagar: So... not so odd after all, eh?
Divya (showing little interest): Yeah..
Saagar (noticing the gloominess in her voice): Hey, what's wrong?
Divya (sighs a big one): Nothing.
Saagar (knows why she's feeling lonely): Bored much?
Divya (sighs again): Umm.. a little bit.
Saagar (steps closer to her and puts his arm around her shoulder and then slowly says): Sorry, I shouldn't have brought you to a new place so suddenly. Trust me, I've been there.
Divya (looks toward him with a conforting smile): It's ok.

Suddenly a voice from the back calls Saagar and Divya to join them. Saagar turns around noticing the presense and then turns to Divya who says he can go, she'll sit here for a while.

Guy who calls them: Your girlfriend's so boring yaar! Bring her inside so we can have some fun too man!

Saagar immediately turns around after what the guy just said and Divya notices the change in Saagar's expression. He walks to the guy angry at what he said.

Saagar (holds his collar and starts slapping his face and beating him up): Kya bola? Kya bola?!
Divya (tries to interrupt and make him stop): Um -
Saagar (pushes the guy inside still with the same aggressiveness): What did you say!? Phirse bol!

The poor soul who Saagar was hitting so viciously kept trying to escape or atleast protect himself from the attack but it seemed like Saagar's grip on him was too strong. Everyone in the party stops and notices what's happening, moving away from them. Divya eventually comes inside and tries seperating the two.

Divya (trying to realease his grip off the other guy): Saagar stop it! Forget it! Jaane do naa!

Saagar eventually leaves him but with a jolt causing the dude to fall to the ground all hurt.

Saagar (points his finger at him with an angry look, pauses for a sec, breathing heavily): Watch your language next time.

Saagar and Divya make their way home, Saagar calms down but now Divya is mad at Saagar for misbehaving at the party. At their apartment..

Divya (pacing up and down with anger): WHY did you have to hit himm?
Saagar (standing by the window looking out): Because.
Divya (sick of hearing him say that for the past 5 minutes): Aaghh! You know..... you..you are imposssible to deal with! It's like talking to a five-year old after eating ice cream from the bucket!

Divya walks to their room and Saagar follows her trying to placate her "Divya, come'on... I said I was sorry!" and as soon as she goes into the bedroom she slams the door and coincidentally hits Saagar on his nose.

Saagar (holding his nose in pain): Ouuuchhh!
Divya (hears the ouch, opens the door): Oh noo I'm so sorryyy! (goes up to him to see his nose) I didn't even see you coming behind meee!
Saagar (still rubbing his nose from the injury): Wow Divya... you don't have to be so hard on me!
Divya (feeling guilty now): I know I knowww! Sorrrryyy! I'll get you some icee!
Saagar (upon hearing ice): Oh no nooo it's ok its not that bad!
Divya: What do you mean its not badd, you don't want it to swell do you!?

As soon as Divya bring the ice to Saagar he moves his hands from his nose exposing his so called 'bruise'. The surprising thing was that there was none. He was faking it with her.

Divya (gasps): You liar! Nothing happenedd!
Saagar (starts laughing): I tricked you!
Divya (puts the ice back and comes back to him): You're so bad I'm not talking to you!
Saagar (puts his arms around her waist with her back to his chest): Ok ok ok sorry sorryyy! (still laughing)
Divya (slightly trying to escape from him): No it's not ok!

Saagar starts tickling her like a little kid leading her into the bedroom and the both fall to the bed and start laughing like little kids at a sleepover. The only thing missing I guess was the popcorn.

Divya (laughed a bit too much): Ok ok stoppp my tummy hurts now...! lol

But they still continue laughing until finally they stoppp and lie down on their respective positions on the bed, calming themselves down. They both sigh to calm themselves helping each other to stop laughing. For a minute or so theres silence in the room while Divya whlie lying down, plays with her fingers resting on her stomach. Saagar turns his body so his elbow is on the pillow and his hand underneath his head.

Saagar (looking at Divya in some thoughts): What.
Divya (turns towards him): Hmm?
Saagar: What're you thinking?
Divya: I am thinking....(pause) whether I should tell you or not.
Saagar (getting curious): Tell me what?
Divya: I don't know how you're going to react.
Saagar (gets up and sits on the bed with his legs folded): Okay seriously, tell me.
Divya (looks towards him): Tell you?
Saagar (with a duhh look): Yeahhh.. Divya takes his hand and puts it on her tummy. What, you're hungry?
Divya (thinking: omg hes so stupid): Oh my God. (throws his hand away)

After a moment Divya thinks of making another attempt of telling him.

Divya: Ok let's try again. (takes his hand again and does the same)
Saagar (thinks for like a true minute)

And then suddenly he gets the clue. He gasps in amazement and takes his hand away still with shock. "Are you - !" Divya sits up to catch his right reaction, and has a hopeful smile on his face. There's silence for a minute again. "Since WHEN?!" he asks. Divya, new to this as well says "Umm.. since this morning lol?" Saagar (to Divya's surprise) begings laughing ecstatically and pulls Divya into a hug which Divya gives in to. And then they both simply sit there laughing together in the hug as if theres no end.

The next morning....

Divya wakes up to find the spot next to her empty. Still in her sleep, rubbing her eyes she walks out of the bedroom into the main room/kitchen and sees Saagar up making breakfast with some balloons and flowers on the table. Divya surprised to see this still thinks it was so sweet and cute of him to do that.

Saagar (turns to see Divya beside him): Morning mom.
Vidya : I'm not a mom yett. (yawns) So tireddd.... (she rests his head on his shoulder and closes her eyes)
Saagar (plants a kiss on her head): I made coffee... you should be proud of me.
Vidya (not in the mood for coffee): Can I get some chai today lol?
Saagar (knows he has to make it): Umm sure.
Vidya: Thank youu, I'll go brush my teeth and then shower.


OK guys... that's all for now
Manusha_Divz thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#93
Wooooooo...i was waiting for sooooooooo long for an update...loved it..aww she is pregers.............please continue soon..dont have us waiting for so long.............
svforever thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#94
OMG! She's gonna be a mom! Yay! But how's her bro gonna react? Please update soon!
Saniiii thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Fatastiiccc update... im glad you updated after such a long time... pleaseeee cont veryy sooooonnn.....

angel.41 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#96
Hey everyone I'm back with an update!

Thanks for all your support you guys lol I really appreciate it 😊 ❤️

Previously, Saagar found out Divya was pregnant. From his reaction he seemed happy about it. At least for now.. here's the next part.

Saagar made breakfast for Divya while she went and took a shower. After coming out of the shower she comes to the the table and seats herself on the barstool to drink Saagar's hand-made chai. While drinking,

Saagar: So what should we name the baby?

Divya (who almost chokes on her coffee): lol What?

Saagar: The baby, what should we name it. I say if its a boy we can name it Rajdeep. If it's a girl, we can name her... uhm.... *thinks about it*

Divya (seems a bit uneasy): Uhm you know, it's only been like a few days. *looks up to Saagar questionably* I think I should get the gynaec to check me so we can be 100% sure.

Saagar (thinks and then after a while): Okay. That sounds good.

Divya: Do you wanna go after breakfast?

Saagar: Sure. *puts his mug in the sink* I'm done. I'll go get changed.

Divya sips the rest of her coffee and eats a bit of a muffin. She's most certain that she's gonna have a baby, but those tests aren't always 100% accurate, right, she thinks.

After having breakfast Divya and Saagar head over to the doctors to get a checkup done. They arrive at the clinic and see lotsa people sitting around, some sneezing, some coughing, and a few who dozed off. They both walked to the front desk, Divya in the front followed by Saagar.


Divya: Hi, I'd like to meet my doctor Dr. Pandher.

Receptionist: Sure, can I get your health card please?

Divya: Yep. *searches her wallet for her card* (she can't find it) *then turns to Saagar and stares at him*

Saagar (notices her staring at him): What.

Divya: I think you have my card.

Saagar (immediately takes out his wallet): I do? *looks for it* When did that happen.. *finds it finally*

Saagar places the card on the counter and the receptionist takes it. "How come I had your card?" Saagar asks Divya, putting his wallet back into his pocket. Divya looks confused too, "I have noo idea lol."

Receptionist: Ok so Dr. Pandher is inside with a patient right now, if you could take a seat she'll be with you soon.
Divya: Sure no problem.

Saagar and Divya take a seat where there were two chairs available right beside each other. Theres a little table in the middle and a stack of magazines is there. Some people are reading some of the magazines, while others are watching the movie being played on the screen in the top corner of the room. Saagar stretches forth and grabs a magazine titled "Parenting Early Years." He flips it open and begins scanning through it; most of the things are what the moms need to know but then he comes to an article called "Parenting at 20, 30, and 40." He skims through to the part that talks about moms aged 25 and 29 and sees a part that says that moms at this age might be worried about their body and the fact that it will change during pregnancy. He reads the rest out of curiousity and then slowly turns to Divya who is doing something on her phone. He taps her on her shoulder to get her attention and she turns her head towards him.

Saagar: You know, you don't have to worry about your weight alot. That's normal during pregnancy and every mom goes through it. And it's not like you're gonna stay like that forever. *smile*

Divya (confused): lol Whaat?

Saagar (shifts himself): Okay I'm just saying... that in this article it says that moms aged 25 to 29 usually worry alot about how their body shape is going to change during pregnancy and you know.. all that emotional sutff. But I just want you to know that I don't care if you get fat - *Divya's face turns worry-like* - well no I don't mean fat, but you know.. I just want to let you know that I will love you no matter what. Even if you turn out to be like this after nine months. *points to picture of a lady in the magazine*

Divya (laughs after looking at the magazine): Honey, that lady's having twins.

Saagar: Sooo? We could be having twins too you know..

Divya: lol Well... *knows that it is a probability* we'll see. *warm smile*

After about a few minutes the nurse calls Divya and Saagar inside. She leads them to a room seperated by a room, followed by another room where the doctor talks with the patients. She's a female doctor by the way. The nurse (who is like an aunty for the both of them) takes Saagar aside to the "Information Desk" and shows him some books and brochures he should read to know more about pregnancy. There was a seperate section for fathers.

Receptionist: ... So this book right here *brings the book and flips through it* is actually gonna be useful during the latter portion of the pregnancy but it has a little about the first two trimesters as well. *gives it to Saagar to keep it* You can take this with you. *Saagar takes the book and starts skimming through it* ... This your first child?

Saagar: *smiles* Yeah..

Receptionist: Congrats.. *Saagar says thanks* When did you guys get married?

Saagar: *Looks up to the receptionist and hesitates a bit and then softens* Actually.. we're not married.

Receptionist (seems a bit surprised but seems okay with it): Ohh.. *tries to make it not such a big deal* That's arryt. *Saagar looks up to her and smiles.* Actually, please don't take me the wrong way, but would you mind if I gave you some advice?

Saagar (begins paying a bit more attention, closes the magazine): Sure, go on.

Receptionist: I'm very happy for the both of you, and I'm sure you'll make wonderful parents. But in the midst of all this, you must remember to keep the mother happy as well. Myself being a mother of two children would know. And this is not just because she's a young mom, but because she's a woman as well. *Saagar begins to think a bit* Har aurat ka sapna hota hai ke ek din uska bhi ghar ho, parivaar ho, ek pati ho jo uska dekhbhaal kar sakey. Marriage makes a woman complete. *The receptionist seems to have been lost in her own talks that she didn't think to realise how Saagar would take all this* I mean.. I don't mean to lecture you, please..

Saagar: No no, I fully understand.

Receptionist: And then, being a mother before getting married isn't wrong, I personally think. But on one hand, we women must consider what the eyes of other people tell us. And as a mother I wouldn't want any other woman to go through that agony. *After a long pause* Trust me, I've been through it.

Saagar: *Looks very serious at this point* *Suddenly, the other door opens and Divya walks out saying bye to the doctor and begins walking towards Saagar as he stands there and looks at her, considering what the lady just told him*

Divya (now beside him, entwines her hand with his): Shall we go? *warm smile*

Saagar (at a loss of words): Sure. *looks at the receptionist remembering what she just said and saw what she really meant by the look in her eyes, and then walked out*

The drive home was a quiet one even though the radio was on. Saagar had a million questions running through his mind. Was the lady right about all of this? Should they think about getting married? How is that going to affect their relationship? Would Divya be ready for this?

Was he ready?

They both got home and just spend time here and there doing things. Saagar was totally lost in whatever he did, he even drove Divya and himself to the wrong place for lunch, but still the place was okay. It was about evening-ish and both Divya and Saagar had ate and were just sitting on the couch watching a movie. Divya sat hugging Saagar.

Saagar: So when did the doctor say she'd let us know?

Divya (adjusting the volume): She said in a week I think, she'll call to let us know. And then we have to go back to the office.

Saagar (pondering): I see. *They both sat there, watching the movie; Saagar caressed her head softly and still sat there thinking.*

***
For that whole week, Saagar was in deep thought. Wherever he went, he could only think about one thing: what that lady had told him. And the same questions kept bugging him.

Finally, almost a week later their visit to the doctor Saagar had made up his mind.

He bought the wedding ring. <http://www.budgetdiamondsonline.com/products_pictures/25/225/1.jpg>

He decided to propose to her the next night on a special dinner.

And the most important thing. He didn't want Divya to feel he was just marrying her becaue of the baby. He wanted to let her know that he loved her no matter what the circumstances.

Finally, the doctor called and Saagar and Divya went to her office. They were both seated in the seperate room and Saagar closed the door behind him.

Doctor: So, how has the happy couple been?

Divya (blushing): Good lol. *Saagar gives her a warm smile*

Doctor (sorts out her files): So Divya, any morning sickness this past week?

Divya: Um, not really actually. Suprisingly.

Doctor: Mmhmm. *Opens Divya's file* Okay so, the results were in yesterday but they came in late so I called you guys today. And I don't know how you guys will react to this, *both Saagar and Divya look at the doctor seriously* but the test results were negative. *Long pause, the doctor stares at the both of them* Divya you're not pregnant.

Divya (herself doesn't know how to take this): Oh.

Saagar (sees Divya's face and notices the glow from her face is now gone): Are you sure?

Doctor: I'm hundred percent sure. I'm just curious about the tests you took yourself Divya. How accurate do you think they were?

Divya (hesitantly): Um, I'm not too sure doctor, I took them for the first time.

Doctor: Okay, that's arryt. *hands them a copy of the report* So you guys keep this, and if anything comes up again then please do not hesistate to come to our office. We'd be glad to serve you guys again.

Divya and Saagar stand up to leave and the doctor walks them out. "Take care of yourself Divya," the doctor said. Saagar held Divya's hand as they walked to the car to comfort her.

Saagar thought about his plan and how well it would fit in the current circumstances. Was it right to move on? They both entered the appartment and Saagar could tell the somewhat sad look on Divya's face as she walked herself to the balcony and stood there pondering. Saagar came behind her comforting and hugged her softly, and Divya slowly retreated and hugged him back, crying in his arms.

The next day...

Divya woke up like it was another normal day and Saagar noticed that she seemed a bit less upset, which to him was a good thing. Tonight was the night he'd propose to her.

That evening, Saagar told Divya he had to meet some business consultants in the evening and thus had to leave early, so Divya should come home with Sameer. But that was just an excuse to get time to set everything up for the night.

Sameer dropped Divya off and saw her to the elevator, and Divya made her way down the lobby to their apartment. She put the keys in the keyhole and turned the knob to a room full of darkness except for a table set up in the balcony with dinner ready to be served and candles lit all around the appartment. Slowly, Saagar creeped out from outside and had this nice smile on his face, welcoming Divya to dinner. "How sweet," Divya thought. She dropped her bag on the sofa and walked to where the dinner table was and stood there smiling, thinking there was some mischief of Saagar's in this.

Saagar (gesturing to the table): Welcome Ms. Divya Raj Sarin. *Divya giggled while Saagar pulled out her chair for her and she sat down* As you can see, today in the menu we've got some aloo mutton with naan and garden salad as a side dish, together with some delicious pasta with some alfredo cheese on top. We've also got some butter chicken since it is one of your favourites and of course, some chinese noddles.

Divya (laughs at how cute he is): Saagarrr...? *Saagar seats himself* You didn't have to do all this.

Saagar: But I wanted to. And I know you deserve it. *soft smile, Divya stares at him intently* Come'on, let's eat!

The next few moments simply show their interaction and the fact that Divya appreciates all of this from the bottom of her heart. Suddenly, a fierce wind blows the candles sitting on thier table (only means of light) out.

Divya: Oh no..!
Saagar (takes care of the situation): That's okay, I'll go turn the lights on inside. *Gets up and goes inside*

Divya sits calmy waiting for him to turn the lights on, but it's been quite a while and they still aren't on. And there's no sight of Saagar either. So she decides to go inside and see where he is. "Saagar?" she says, walking around. Suddenly a tiny candly appears in front of her and she sees Saagar's face. Kinda startles her as well. "Woah..! Don't you ever do that again Saagar what if I tripped on you and the candle - " she is interrupted by the box presented in front of her in the little light. It's the ring box. She loses her speech. She doesn't know how to react. Slowly, Saagar moves his face closer to hers and places a kiss on her cheek.

Saagar (after a few seconds): *soft smile* Will you marry me?

Divya has no reaction for a minute, but then she slowly puts her arms around Saagar and hugs him tightly.... and slowly whispers "I thought you'd never ask...."

The song Mera Dil from Salaam-e-Ishq begins to play.. shows clips from Saagar and Divya's honeymoon and the time they spent together apart from that.

----
That's all for now... I've been working on this for the past 2 hours lol kinda thot I'd make up for whatever we lost.. I will do the song part in detail in the next udpate.. for now, enjoy! 😊
Tariii thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#97
im sorry i had missed the previous few updates, i hadn't known. But now i am caught up and speechless. I just love it. i always await for your stories. your writing is great, keep up the great work and continue sooonn :D
Manusha_Divz thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#98
OMG..awesomeeeeeeee update and so long too..so u made up for it.....do continue soon..too bad there is no baby..sniff..but they r engaged now..yipee
Saniiii thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#99
wOAH... I missed this FF very much.. glad you updated ... i really loved it.. please continue sooon. !!
bmtdluver thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
aaah!! it was shoooooooo cute!! had really missed this ff!! luved the udpate!! yaya!!! theyre gnna get married!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".