the flashback are very interesting....
but right now the story feels to be incomplete and confusing. i think that we will understand it better once to finish all the flashbacks.
waiting for the next update.....please don't stop writing this ff.
Originally posted by: fanatic 21
fabulous.............. 👏 👏
loved d flashback......
par yaar woh jo naina ne kaha dos lines wer reallly funny...matlab sahi mein uski satak gayi thi 😆
good lines n nice thrill even dis time
thanx 4 liking them i am too happy that u enjoyed them
lov dolly
Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
thanks for the update....
the flashback are very interesting....
but right now the story feels to be incomplete and confusing. i think that we will understand it better once to finish all the flashbacks.
waiting for the next update.....please don't stop writing this ff.
thank god at least koi to hai
u know even i feel the story is dead slow and becoming confusing and stupid,, can u believe mere vo do din hi nahin khatam ho rahe,, i want to speed things up really t right now i am completely streessed out i have got my major on 20 july ,, i'll update now only after that bt this time i'll seriously bring the story back on a faster track
thanks 4 this awsome feedback😳
lots of lov(and yes don't fear i am not going to stop writing this fic,, i am actually thinking of boring u people to death with it😆)
dolly😳
thank god at least koi to hai
u know even i feel the story is dead slow and becoming confusing and stupid,, can u believe mere vo do din hi nahin khatam ho rahe,, i want to speed things up really t right now i am completely streessed out i have got my major on 20 july ,, i'll update now only after that bt this time i'll seriously bring the story back on a faster track
thanks 4 this awsome feedback😳
lots of lov(and yes don't fear i am not going to stop writing this fic,, i am actually thinking of boring u people to death with it😆)
dolly😳
Behna marte to hum bhi nahi fir chahe tu bore kar ya full excitement de !!!!!!!! Third flashback to dollu tune pakka Aamir dekh ke likha hai I am dead sure abt that tabhi to saare flashback main bhaga bhaga ke aadha kar diya hai bechare raj ko !!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Fourth flashback was the best the best the best the best !!!!!! ok ok ok absolutely hillarious !!!! Ab to tune proove kar diya doll ke Raj bina waje ya thuke koi kam nahi kar sakda !!!!!!!! Naina di rhyming scheme superb si , is tarah lag reha si ke English di Phd hune hune khatam kiti hai !!!!!!!!! Jaldi jaldi agla part post kar and all the very best for your Majors !!!!!!!
as the luck would have it my pc has finally crashed down .. i had written tthe story the whole story and it is all wiped up,,, i am sitting on sim's pc to brief u all abt the traghic demise of my computer,,, aaj uska antim saskar tha😭
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