FF Bin Tere Jeena Nahin Parts 1- 23 (1) - Page 3

Tazo baby I am here too 😃 ...dekh it's 1.34 in the night....ek ankh mera already band hai...but thot ek se phad loongi...but jab lenght dekha to pasine aa gaye...so ab to kal hi phadoongi 😆 😉 if i am home...warna parso...but phadoongi zaroor 😆

Wohoooooooo...Billiiiiiiii you are again back with a bang!!!!! 🥳 🥳
First of all...Congrats on the new FF 👍🏼 👍🏼..A great storyline..To be frank, when I read the title I thought you have written the FF based on the current track with Ganga..

Its a very beautiful and emotional start with Bani shifting to Mumbai along with Pia n Rano after her fathers' death. Its good to see a different storyline that she n JW are not known to each other..

Oh God!! 😡 Will Pia ever change?? Same self-centred, KMH chipku.. 🤢 🤢 Thank God you have got AD into the picture..They do make an awesome pair 😆 😆 😆

Ab yeh Rano keeeche 2 Romeos??? Yaar I want only Ran-Ran..Please take away that GFN duffer boy away..Infact he will be apt for Raashi..

Now coming to our hero-heroine..wow..love at first sight!!! JW is a goner seeing the petite figure..fair complexion..draped in a black saree with sleeveless blouse... 😳 😳 I liked the way he ignored Pia completely..Loved how Rano supported her future BIL!!!

JW wanted to thrash Tarun for the part, but now he feels just right 😉 😉 😉 aur kyun na ho..Cindrella jo mil gayi..Its just that Cindrella jootha chod ke nahi gayi...sirf naam chod gayi hai!! 😳 😳

I think Roshini is a trouble with a "T" for our jodi.. 😡 😡 I just want to strangle her. 🤬 🤢 Hope Tarun does something to stop that photo to be printed.or else even I will kill him 😉 😆 😆

As usual a lovely part...in fact awesome start..the best was the title of the part "bahon mein chalo aao"..now waiting to see how our prince tries to find his cindrella... 😍 😍

Take care...love
Rama

Awesome start, loved it. 👏 👏 👏
Lol Pia gate chrashing is soo expected of her.
Roshini was all over Jai and the poor guy was so uneasy.
Finally Jai found someone from whom he could not take his eyes off. 😳
Jai is really a fast mover asking Bani for a dance. What wrong with Pia the guy is not interested in you girl 😡 leave him alone.
Poor Bani was scared of lamb.
Roshini is such a jerk 😡, good that Jai gave it back to her.
Looks like Rano has both Ranveer and Sahil falling for her. But hope RR end up togather.
Oohh Bani left before Jai could talk to her again.
Hope he finds her soon.

Kiran

WOW Taz,😊

great update👏

really loved it & no u havnt lost ur touch bt u hav gain more touch by updatin ur FF😊😊

OMG!!! Pia came to uninvited party & that 2 she drag her sis in it too😆😆😆 i knew it shes shameless girl😆

i really laughed at that poor guy😆 poor him coz he doesnt knw PIA & still sayin ya ya ya..........😆

WOW!!! Jai wasnt leavin Bani😉😉 the way u mentioned Jai wasnt leavin her i was thinkin he might marry her in this party😆

way to go TAZ👏 Jai was ignorin Pia totally & asked to dance Bani with him😳

humm so Sahil spilled drink on Rano😉 & Rano spilled it on Ranveer😉😉

i think u must made a triangle love story between Sahil- Rano - Ranveer😉😳coz after wat u mentioned it in the FF i think Sahil & Ranveer both started to like Rano & so now later it depends on her whom to choose (i mean ofcourse you😆 as u r a FF writer😆)

hummm i think Jai gonna find out abt this chick😆 i mean Bani😉 & i hope he soon proposes her be4 Pia😡😡 comes between them & i hope u soon finds some1 4 Pia😡

hey mann!!! wr is my hotty chick😉 - Pushkar😆😳

plssss plsssssss continue soon im waitin

bye n tc

Nice start. Liked the chemistry between Jai and Bani.

Billlllllllllllllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!

Tum aa gayi, kitna intezaar tha, in fact, I was at a wedding today and I was thinking about you! 😃 😃 See you and I have sixth sense, I was thinking of how fun KDKP was. And here you are with BTJN.. 😃 😃

I loved the 1st chapter, Jai aur Bani are already in love, Jai tho kaam se gaya!! OMG, it was so cute that he couldn't get enough of her and searched all over for her and ignored the wicked witches of the west (Mumbai is west nah?)

Tarun is here too, Taz ka FF hai, Tarun hoga nah?? 😳 😳 😳

Man, descriptions of Jai and Bani were to die for! 😳

So aadmi kuch garam lag raha hai, got to wait and see if he is going to melt under the ministrations of our Bani madam! 😳 😳

Waise bhi, ad-bhoot bhi hai idhar, 😲 actually I like this fellow, make him a good guy, a funny guy but a good guy. And Tarun-ji ko bhi...please?

Rano ki kahani kya hai? Sahil ya Ranveer? 🤔 Hmm, I like Ranveer infinitely better (Not the psycho kind which Rashi likes) 😉 😉 😉

Billi, I can't wait for the second chapter, ab bahut mazaa ayega!! How cool would it be to have a masti filled FF again on the forum! I missed you soooooooooo much!!!!!!

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I was thrilled to pieces seeing u started a new ff !!! And such a long satisfying part - early Christmas present 😉
Pia being her usual brazen hussy self - gatecrashing a party!! Luckily, Jai miyan has already gone latoo for Bani Rani - very nice start, Tazoo...Can't wait for more..
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whew.....that part made steam come outta mah ears.....(mind you i haven felt so red in s*x ed classes) 😳 wellll gr8 part and taz....what a lovely christmas surprise for all(i mean in advance)just keep it coming.....cuz u rock......

JB 4EVA...

lots a love
suppi 😉

hey Taz,

u started a new 1 n it's amazing loved d discription of every1..

bechari Pia went to phasao a rich guy but phasa kaun Adbhoot ,Andeekha, Anjaana...... AD (good 4 her)

Aur Jai n Bani ke liye kya kahoon they wr simply awsome... pehli nazar mein pehla pyaar ho gaya

do continue soon
benazir

Wow...what a start.....really lovely..😛


JW is bowled at first sight...😆😆


And he's ignoring Pia....good....that's what I want...😉


And you've got Adbhoot for Adbhoot sundarata...😃😃


So, no worries.....continue soon.....


PS. Keep up with the length.....😛