My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 33

To everyone who reads my fan fic:


Sorry i couldnt update yesterday cuz of thanksgiving i wasnt home..... and i tried to update from my cuz's house... but stupid thing didnt let me login!!!! and @ home my internet is giving me trouble!!!

Now to see how commited i am..

i will update all 10 fan fics and they will be long!!!!!


SO bare w/ me.. i live in cali.....so about until 10-11 p.m. my time... all of them will be done!!! and back on page 1!!!! sorry for the inconvience!!!!!!!



----guli aka vanita!!!!

Part 82

The show has been a success

They have been house full!!!

All the fans have gone crazy just seeing them two!!

Kripa watches it on TV!

She smiles when she sees him

Om is in her lap

And Kripa keeps telling him that Papa is on TV!

He claps…..

Pooja comes out

She sees

She is smiling!!!

Both of them watch!!!

After each show…

Some people come back stage… and get their autograph!

They are thrilled to see them!!!

After about 10 mins they leave!!

A: Wow what a crowd!!!

J: This is the life!!!!

A: Yes it is!!!

A security guard comes

They say there is one more fan that wants to see Angad…

Angad is tired!!

But he says since its one…let them in

They come in

It's a small little girl….

A sees her

She is smiling at him

She is in a wheelchair….

A kneels down

A: Wats ur name???

Girl: Anjali!!

A: Nice to meet you Anjali!!!!

She smiles at him!

Anjali asks for his autograph

He gives it!!

She is happy!!!

Anjali: For you.. u will forget me… cuz ur famous….. but for me.. I will always remember this! Thank you!!

A looks at her!!!

A: I don't think I can forget you!!!

Anjali: That would be great! But even if you did…. It wouldn't matter to me!!!!

She waves goodbye and leaves!!

A was touched by her!

Later on..

A calls up Kripa

Kripa tells him that she saw his show

A what u think?

K: U couldn't done better!! And I didn't like ur clotehs!

A: Whats wrong w/ them?

K: Everything.. and ur voice.. are you sick??

She is messing w/ him!

A: No I am fine!

She keeps telling him that kinds of things

And he keeps believing her

She laughs

A: Kripa??? That wasn't cool!!

Kripa: I am sorry!!! But I just wanted to see what you would say!!!

A: Yeah…. I believed you too!!!!

K: I am sorry!

They keep talking

She misses him so much!!

A: I don't miss you that much! There are plenty of women here!

K: Wat?

A: Of course!!

K: U better not!

A: I already made a friend her name is Anjali!

K: Anjali?? Who's Anjali?

A: My new friend!!!

K: Let me come there and give her a piece of my mind!

A laughs!!!

Kripa keeps questioning him on her

Angad keeps making up stuff

She is believing it

He laughs…

A tells her to she really was!!!

Kripa is like thank god!!!

A: see what comes around goes around!!!!!

He laughs!!!!

Both of them talk

Kripa wants him back home asap!!!!

K calls up Pooja…

He asks her how she is doing

She says fine.. but misses him!!

He says he will be there before you know it!!!

She hopes so!!!



The End!

Part 83

The month goes and they are returning home

Everyone is happy!!

They cant wait for Angad and K to come home!!

Kripa is happy!!

They get ready for their arrival

Angad and K come home

Everyone sees

Kripa is upstairs

Angad hugs everyone

SO does K

K hugs Pooja!!

Pooja hugs him tight

She missed him so much!!!!!!!!

She is happy!!!

Kripa comes out

She sees Angad

She smiles

ANgad looks up at her

Kripa comes running down

SHe jumps on him!!!!!

SHe is happy!!!!!

Angad: I am back!!!!!!!

The guys eat!!!

Feels nice to have a home cooked meal

They talk about the tour

Later that night

Kripa and Angad are cuddled up together!!

She 's happy!!!

Angad kisses her!!!

Kripa: I missed you so much!!!!!

Angad; I did to!!!!

They smile at each other!!!

Meanwhile K puts his arms around Pooja

She closes her eyes!!!!

P: Feels good to have you back!!!!!!!!!!!!

K: I wasnt gone for that long!

P: One month!!! thats a long time!!!

K smiles!!

K: Now i am back! i wont go anywhere!!

P: You better not!!!!

K: I wont!!! I promise!!

He kisses her!!!!!!!




The End!

awwwwww.....so sweet!! I can imagine Kripa running and jumping into Angad's arms!! 😆 😳

that was a sweet part guli 😳
please write soon

caught up! absolutely fab!!!!!!!

Part 84

Next Morning

Angad and Kripa are sleeping peacefully!!!

Pooja gets up

She hears Om so she takes him from his crib!!

Om smiles!!!

And he is happy!!

Pooja takes care of him and feeds him etc…

K turns and doesn't find Pooja

He gets up and goes out

Pooja: Good Morning!

K: why did you wake up so early?

Pooja: Becuz!!! Who told you to wake up?

K: you weren't there so I had to!!!

He sits on the couch

Pooja gives him tea!!

Pooja plays with Om

He tells her to be careful

She says she is fine

Kripa opens her eyes slowly

She sees Angad

She smiles!!

She touches his face….

Angad smiles!!!

Angad: Wat are you doing?

Kripa; Nothing!!!

Angad opens his eyes slowly

He gets more closer to her!!

Angad; I haven't had such good sleep for ages!!!

Kripa: really?

Angad; Yes!!

Kripa: How come?

A: becuz you weren't there!!!

Kripa: I had beautiful and peaceful nights!!!

A: What?

Kripa; Yes!!! I was like yes!!! No Angad and his snoring!

A: What? I don't snore!

Kripa: Yes you do!

A: No I don't!!

Kripa; yeah u do! U just don't know it!

She laughs!!

A: very funny!!

Kripa sits up

A: Why you up??

Kripa: becuz.. I have to take a shower

A: Stay for a while

Kripa: Why?

A: Becuz!!!!

He comes closer to her!!

Kripa: Don't u have anything better to do?

A: Nope!!!

Kripa: Come on let me go!

A: No!!

Kripa: Please!!

A: Why do u want to leave me?? Don't u love me?

Kripa doesn't answer

A: Kripa??? Kripa???

Kripa: Huh??

A: I said don't you love me? What are you thinking?

Kripa: If I love you or not??

A: Kripa????

She laughs!!

He smiles!!!



The End!

that was a nice part
keep up the great work

Part 85

Kripa and ANgad are spending so much time together!!!!

That one month was like whoa!!!

Josh comes over!! W/ Aliyah!!

Kripa and Pooja hug her!!

They sit and chat!!!

They are talking and laughing and what not

The TV is on

Angad looks at it and is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is looking at him

Then they look at the TV

Kripa: Angad? Wats wrong???

The news is on

K comes out..

He sees everyone and decides to join them

Then he sees the news as well

ANgad; Josh... look

Josh: What about that?

A: Anjali??????

Kripa: Anjali?? Who's Anjali??

Josh: Oh my god! The autograph girl...

On the news they are showing it live that she is being held hostage

Angad is shocked!!!!!!

SO is JOsh!!!

Kripa: who is she???

A: Remember when i was talking to you.. and i was pretending that i met a nice girl... when we were joking around..

Kripa: Yeah

A: SHe's the little girl!!

Kripa: Wat???

Angad remembers her words about how she will remember this day... but he will forget who she was!!

ANgad: I have to help her

Kripa: Wat?? No!

A: Kripa i have to!!!! She's handicap!!!!!

Angad leaves from there!!!

He arrives at the place

Everyone is shocked seeing him

They try to gather around him....

But he tells everyone to back off!!!!

They do!!

A tries to peek from the window

Anjali is crying

He remember the person that brought her

He's the one thats doing this!!!

Angad is trying to get inside!

He thinks of a way to get her out!!!!

But how??

Cuz if something goes wrong....

Then she might be in danger!!!!!!



The End!

wow great part!
i hope angad thinks of something quick!
please write soon