Kripa finds out the truth! (fan-fic)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kahaani Ka Ek Naya Mor- Kripa finds out the TRUTH! (fan-fic)

This part of the story takes place after the scene of the house-auctioning where Kripa has announced to Pritvi as well as Angad's family that she has decided to get married. The scene commences with Kripa's engagement preparations being in full swing at the Sharma residence. In the background, there is singing heard of "mehndi laga ke rakhna." The Sharma residence is overflowing with people anxiously preparing and awaiting the engagement ceremony tomorrow afternoon which will link the well-known Bose family and increasingly famous Sharma family in a sacred bond. Kripa, who is standing amidst the chaos selecting her lengha from a selection brought to her house, is surprised at seeing Angad and Aliyah enter her house. She stands up abruptly and strides to meet the newly arrived guests.

Kripa:

Aree Angad tum yahaan? Maine toh socha tha ki shayad tum apna mooh chupane ke liye Mumbai chhor chuke hoge.

Angad:

[grim and downcast eyes holds a bunch of flowers waiting for Kripa to accept]

Vo Kripa, Aliyah aur mai to sirf tumhe congratulate karne ayee the.

Kripa:

[Rejects the flowers and pushes them back to Angad]

Oh, toh mujhe barbaad karke aur aapne barbadi ke baad tum naya pyaar jatane ayee ho? Dobara mere tamasha banaane ka irada hai kya?

Aliyah:

(attempts to fume back): Kripa, vo…

BUT Angad holds up his hand requesting her to silence herself

Angad:

Kripa, mai tumhe congratulate karne ke saath saath tumhe good-bye kehne bhi aaya hoon. Hum saab ne Mumbai chor dene ka faisla kar liya hai.

….BAAM…..(Kripa stares at Angad wide-eyed)

Angad:

Hum saab aaj raat ko jarahe hain. Shayad phir humari mulakaat na ho. Tumhe Khanna house mubarak!

[Kripa feels a hurricane brewing inside her. She is unable to understand her emotions, which are very much of sadness, since she was the one who wanted Angad to be ruined. Unable to control the slight swelling of her eyes, Kripa looks away.]

Angad silently walks away with a grief-stricken Aliyah. He turns away from Kripa and wipes away a tear in his eye. As he starts walking towards the door, he slowly turns back:

Angad:

Kripa, ek baat aur (puts on his puppy dog expression). Patani ki mujhe yeh kehna bhi chaiye ya nehin maghar phir bhi kehna chahta hoon. Main janta hoon ki mujhse bahut galtiyan hui hain. Kuch aise galtiyan jinke koi mafi nai hoti. Jinke sazaa shayad maut se barker honi chaheyen. Par agar tumare dil main meri liye zaara si bhi jaaga ho..toh use nikal dena. Please mujhe bhool jana. Bhool jana ki humare beech mein kabhi bhi kuch tha. Itni naafrat karna mujse ki mai kabhi bhi tumare khayalon mein naa aaon. Shayad mai isike kabil hoon. Please, yeh meri tumse aakri request hai. (he holds up his hands together in front of Kripa (haath jor ke) eyes burning with tears. Then leaving the flowers next to Kripa's feet, Angad and Aliyaah walk out of the Sharma house.

Kripa, standing expressionless, tries to blink away tears forming ever so slowly in the corner of her eye.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey P
whats up
liked the starting of the story
keep it up
will definitely wait for the next part
love KP
Edited by keshp15 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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The Sharma's Residence

Gyatri (looking hurried): Kripa!

Kripa: (staring outside the window) Haan Ma.

Gyatri: Kahaan ho tum? (Looking about, she finally spots her daughter) Tum yahaan kya kari ho?

Kripa: Kuch nahin ma..as aisa-hi..

Gyatri: Acha vo sab chhor, yeh bata ke tumne apni janam patri kahaan raki hai. Maine pundit-ji ko bulaya hai..tumari aur Pritvi ki shaadi ki dates nikalni hain na.

Kripa: (confused look) Janam patri..hmm…kahaan rakh di maine.

Gyatri: Kripa! Tum Bhi Na!

Kripa: Maa…mujhe yaad aa gaya. Actually, maine outhouse main, bed ke neechai kuch important documents rakhe the. Udhar hi hoga.

Gyatri: (suddenly with a worried expression): Kripa! Tum wahaan kaise jaa sakti ho?

Kripa: (determined expression) Kyon Maa? Vo ghar to aab hamara hai. Main jab chahoon jaa sakti hoon aur mujhe kisise koi daar nahin.

Gyatri: Acha..teek hai, tum kehrahi ho to jao. Par, please jaldi vapas aana.

Kripa: Ok maa!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow...that wa sreally great....plz continue

~sweta~
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow...what a great start...luved it!! plzz continue soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Guys..
Thanks to all that actually read my fanfiction and an extra bit of gratitude to those that commented! Seeing so much creativity circling inspired me to start my own fanfiction..so hope you guys enjoy and keep posting your views.
Love you all,
Preeti
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Posted: 20 years ago
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The Outhouse- Conversation between Angad and Aliyah

Angad is sitting drinking like a madman. His face is drenched with his own tears and he is wearing an expression of utmost lifelessness. Aliyah is tragically watching her brother's state and is sobbing inconsolably. In a fit of fury, she gets up to speak with Angad.

Aliyah: (ranting)
Bas Karo Brother! Aur kitna aapne aap ko dukh doge. Bahut ho gaya! Aab Bas!

(she breaks down into tears)

Angad:
Kya hua Aliyah? Yeh tum achanak kyon rohri ho? Tum to jaanti ho ki Kripa…

Aliyah (irritated):
KRIPA! KRIPA! KRIPA! Brother, mai jaanti hoon ki aap Kripa se bahut pyar karte hain aur main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki us ke saath bahut galat hua. Magar, aap apne aap ko kab tak doshi theraoge?

Angad (typical Devta like behaviour):
Nahin Aliyah, Kripa ke saath hui-ui zaati ko main nahin bhoola sakta. Mere dil pe uski ek ek dard ka boj, uski eke k tadap ka ehsaas hamesha rahega. Aaj jaane ke baad bhi, mere dil mein sirf aur sirf Kripa hogi. Meri zindagi ka maksat sirf uske khushiyan aur meri aapni barbaadi hoge.

Aliyah (stubbornly trying to reason with her brother):
Brother, mujhe yeh nahin saamaj aa raha hai ki aap ke paas khone ke liye aur bacha kya hai. Arre, Kripa ke liye kya kuch nahin kiya aapne? Aapne khood ka career barbaad karke aapne Kripa ko success dilvai. Kadam, Kadam pe aapne khud ke kwab kuchalke, Kripa ke sare armaan pure kiye- yahaan tak ki aap ne aapne ghalwalon se bhi moo pher liya…aur

Angad (now getting out of control):
ALIYAH BAS! (more softly) Please aab yeh baat yahaan par khatam honi chaiye.

Aliyah:
(also softly) Nahin Brother baat aabhi khatam nahi hui. (Bursting with Anger) KYONKI YEH SAB KARNE KE BAWAJOOT, KRIPA AAJ BHI TUMSE NAFRAT KARTI HAI

-------------------------------------------BAAM------------- ------------(Angad's horrified face!)

Aliyah:
KYONKI YEH SAB KARNE KE BAWAJOOT, KRIPA TUMHE AAJ BHI DOSHI MAAN TI HAI

----------------------------------------BAAM---------------- -------------------------------------------

Aliyah:
KYONKI YEH SAB KARNE KE BAWAJOOT, KRIPA AAJ TUMARI NAHIN, PRITVI KI HONE JAARAHI HAI

(An entirely heart-broken and defeated Angad softly and tiredly replies to his sis):
Acha Aliyah….

Aliyah: (breaking down completely and sobbing helplessly) NAHIN BROTHER, BAAT AAB KHATAM HUI!!! Aur aab mai sirf aapse yehi request kar sakti hoon, ki aap Kripa ko….

(Aliyah stops midway and stares at the doorway as if she has just seen a ghost!!!)
Seeing Aliyah's reaction, Angad slowly and nervously turns his head and only to see a thunderstruck KRIPA!!! Kripa has heard THE ENTIRE CONVERSATION and is standing immobile and pale. Angad stares, also dumbstruck waiting for some type of reaction from his beloved. Feeling her eyes burning and her head dizzy, Kripa remains motionless. Our lovers' eyes lock in a moment of true passion.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 gr8 part, continue soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow..this sounds pretty cool 😉

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