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Posted: 18 years ago
Lovely chapter Leena! Yashoda seems really nice and sweet! 😛 I can't wait for your next chapter!

Wow Juhi! What a beautiful siggy! 😳 Will use it soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovelly chapter jaguu 👏 👏 👏 and dont you worry i am loving it them too just keep my copule in the things as well lil 😆 ...as you know they are my FIRST FAVORITE couple of TV 😳 ...they seriously 😳 😳 both of them r so adorable that its difficult to choose between them 👏 👏 👏

and now..i can again imagine the moon situation.. so lovely cgapter and ya you have pthers to cover as well.. then this show will be a greater hit jaguu 😳

and james..i am growing to like him as well..as i never really watchd Ronit acting..but saw KS yesterday just to imagine how he would look as James 😉 ..so hats off to u jaguu for making me see KS.. oh..i hated it totally though 😆 but Ronit lookded more like a James then AD..i never get this short form of ekta;s show.. AD..bc..cd.. ef..gh..are they teaching kids..alphabets!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nishtha

lovelly chapter jaguu 👏 👏 👏 and dont you worry i am loving it them too just keep my copule in the things as well lil 😆 ...as you know they are my FIRST FAVORITE couple of TV 😳 ...they seriously 😳 😳 both of them r so adorable that its difficult to choose between them 👏 👏 👏

and now..i can again imagine the moon situation.. so lovely cgapter and ya you have pthers to cover as well.. then this show will be a greater hit jaguu 😳

and james..i am growing to like him as well..as i never really watchd Ronit acting..but saw KS yesterday just to imagine how he would look as James 😉 ..so hats off to u jaguu for making me see KS.. oh..i hated it totally though 😆 but Ronit lookded more like a James then AD..i never get this short form of ekta;s show.. AD..bc..cd.. ef..gh..are they teaching kids..alphabets!! 😆

of cos i will mention aryan & meneka in all of my chapters nishu. they are the main leads remember? without them, there's no Lovestruck.😳😳 well, they are not my first fav couple of tv, i have like first fav couples every other month or so.😆😆 i know yaar.. both anand & divyanka are so adorable, i just can't choose between them either. it takes a long time to spell out both their names in a post, that's why i just call them AnDi.😆😆😃

oh my god.. you actually saw KS just to visualise ronit as james? that's so cute! well, i just love his & prachi desai's jodi. they've got such good chemistry that they became james & priya for me in this FF.😛

🤣🤣🤣 Ad, ef, gh? lols!🤣🤣 that was damn funny! but yes ekta shows are like that.😆😆

btw, thanks for your lovely comments sania & juhi! love you guys!🤗

my latest chapter for all my readers!😳😳

CHAPTER 22

"what is happening between yashoda & rakesh?" meneka asked aryan sadly. "hey meneka! don't be so sad. tomorrow is our wedding day. be happy. I don't want to see a weepy meneka at the altar tomorrow." aryan kissed her softly.

meneka nodded but went into the house looking highly disturbed. aryan thought it was time for him to intervene & started off to meet rakesh. he found him in james's house, sitting by the kitchen having a beer.

"hey man." aryan greeted him. rakesh nodded his greeting & continued sipping his beer. aryan took a can for himself & sat in front of rakesh. "hey rakesh, mind if I ask you something?" aryan asked him. rakesh shook his head so aryan decided to go ahead & take the plunge. "what's going on between you & yashoda?" he enquired curiously. rakesh immediately stiffened. he got up to leave but aryan stopped him.

"don't run away from your problems rakesh. face them like a man." aryan told him sternly. rakesh glared at him but soon simmered down. he sat back down on the chair with a thoughtful look on his face. "you love her don't you?" rakesh was shocked by aryan's question. he blinked at him but didn't reply. he knew the answer even before he answered it.

yashoda was sobbing in her room when meneka came in. she put a comforting hand on yashoda's shoulder. she burst into tears & hugged meneka tightly. "yasho, what happened?" meneka asked her gently. "nothing didi. I just.." yashoda sobbed.

"don't cry yashoda. I know how you feel. cheer up. tomorrow is my wedding, so smile okay?" meneka tickled yashoda. yashoda cracked a sad smile & nodded her agreement. meneka put her to sleep & heaved a sigh of relief when she heard yashoda's gentle snores.

meneka glanced at her hands & the ornate mehendi designs smiled back at her. meneka went to bed lost in thoughts of her future married life. little sparks of excitement fluttered around her heart. she met aryan on the way to her room.

he came up to her, resting his hand lightly against her waist. smiling at her lovingly he gave her a light peck on the cheek. "good night, mrs aryan." he told her sweetly & meneka grinned widely. both of them entered their rooms eagerly awaiting the next day.

"wow! you look so beautiful!" yashoda exclaimed as she saw meneka in her full bridal attire. meneka was wearing an elaborate pink lengha with matching jewellery. her thick dark hair was plaited in a long braid, jasmine floweres hung from the braided tresses like fragrant curtains.

meneka's big eyes sparkled with happiness & yashoda could see that it was that special day that meneka had been waiting for. "you don't look half bad yourself yasho." meneka winked at her. yashoda blushed & examined herself in the full length mirror.yashoda was dressed in a simple light green lengha & jasmine flowers adorned her shoulder length hair.

yashoda felt she looked the best during that day as the green in the shimmering green lengha brought out the sparkle in her dark eyes. "hurry up & bring the bride to the altar! the pandit is calling for her!" a woman announced breathlessly & meneka hurriedly got ready.

yashoda brought her to the wedding altar & on the way, she saw rakesh. he stared at her open mouthed taking in her ensemble. yashoda ignored him. she didn't want to speak to him ever again. aryan beamed as he spotted meneka. she looked absolutely stunning.

"you look gorgeous!" aryan whispered to meneka as she sat down beside him. "you don't look half bad yourself!" meneka whispered loudly & the priest glared at her in annoyance. aryan was dressed in a white sherwani that brought out the twinkle in his eyes.

he was grinning at everyone the happiness of uniting with his soulmate evident in his mega-watt grin. "what a perfect couple!" the onlookers whispered amongst each other as they saw aryan & meneka sitting side by side, smiling away like there was no tomorrow.

the auspicious time came for aryan to make meneka his wife. they took the 7 rounds around the sacred fire, aryan put sindoor on meneka's forehead & put on the beautiful diamond studded mangalsutra on for her. yashoda happily blessed the couple with the flowers while rakesh ogled at yashoda openly.

james hugged aryan when they both touched his feet for blessings. "may you both stay happy forever!" he blessed them with tears in his eyes. after the wedding feast was over, it was time for the bride & groom to leave for their nuptial night.

rakesh volunteered to send them home & yashoda also joined the newly married couple in the ride back home. yashoda was made to sit beside rakesh but tried her best to ignore him.

the newly weds observed that little exchange between rakesh & yashoda with amused smiles. when they reached the chawl, people crowded around the car trying to get a glimpse of the newly weds.when aryan & meneka got out, people rushed to them with wishes & gifts.

by the time, everything got sorted out it was nearly 11 into the night. both aryan & meneka heaved a sigh of relief as they retired to their room for the night. meneka gaped open mouthed at the elaborate decorations that had been done to the room. aryan's room now looked colourful & smelled like a fragrant garden.

"wow! the decorations are so pretty!" meneka exclaimed despite herself. "but you're even more pretty." aryan whispered into her ear & pulled her close to him. "finally, I'm Mrs Aryan." she sighed into his sherwani. "yes you are Mrs Aryan." he kissed the top of her head. "hey where are you going?" aryan asked her sadly as meneka slipped away from him. "I just need to change into something more comfortable." she smiled at him reassuringly.

"no don't. jewellery makes it even more fun." he laughed cutely. "you sound like you've experience in this field!" meneka pulled his ear playfully. "oh really… so you want to see my level of expertise?" aryan tickled her mischievously & meneka fell into his arms giggling madly.

the atmosphere suddenly became intense. aryan looked into meneka's eyes & she drowned into the depths of them. "I love you meneka.." aryan hugged meneka even more tightly & she rested her head on his shoulder. the night was just beginning for them.

comments are welcome!😳😳 man.. i tried out some flirty writing in this chapter for AM & it turned out to be so rubbishy.. haiz..😭😭

Edited by jigglypuff726 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
omgosh, the chapter rocked!! One of the best chapter yet! I've read a lot of FF on Indiaforums, but your fanfic is truely the best!!! Yayyy, they got married!!!! 😳 I loved all those cute scenes between AM! 😳
Can't wait for the next chapter! 😃
Edited by sania_12 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yipeeeeee!!!! Aryan and Meneka are married! 😃 We should definetly have a party or something for them! 😳 I just absolutely LOVE this chapter!! It's just amazing!! 👏 Leena, you're undeniably the BEST FF writer I've ever seen! Hat's off to you for writing the most AWSOME FF ever! 👏

heehee, those moments between Aryan and Meneka are just so cute!😳 Yashoda and Rakesh also make a very cute couple 😳 James is such a sweet brother, he cares so much for Aryan and Meneka. I'm beginning to like Rakesh too, he's soo tough on the outside, but you can tell he has a soft spot for Yashoda on the inside. 😳

I just can't wait till you post the next chapter! I'm dying to read it!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Omgggg, you write it choo cutely yaar... Aryan and Meneka are adorable!! 😳 😳 Teehee... really nice chapter.. can't wait for the next one! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh..gosh i missed out on it.. yesterday as was not keeping well.. 😕 😕 but again a fantastic chapter.. aww. so sweet to see aryan chemistry with james and rakesh

too good 👏
even yashodha and rakesh seems so cute.. how sweet and different 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks sania!😳😳 you seemed to really enjoy chapter 22.

thankoo juhi! i'm again so happy to see how my fanfic made you happy.😃

ammmu, thankoo yaar. heehee.. i write cutely? thanks a lot. that's like one of the rarest compliments i get.😆😆

omg nishu! i hope you get well soon yaar. take care of your health.🤗 i was wondering why you never came to read my fanfic last night, now i know why. hopefully this new chapter will make you feel better!😳😳

CHAPTER 23

while aryan & meneka enjoyed each other's company in the room, yashoda sat outside the house playing with little rekha. yashoda was feeling bored after meneka left her all alone after they reached home. yashoda had taken a liking to rekha the moment she was introduced to her. little rekha was a special girl & yashoda enjoyed her company immensely. they both were in a middle of card game when a man came over. "excuse me miss… are you meneka's sister?" he asked her. yashoda nodded her reply.

"mr james wants to see you. can you please follow me?" he invited her politely. yashoda left little rekha's side & followed the man to a car. "is he waiting in the car? I thought he was at home." yashoda realised that fact too late. a hand covered her mouth & dragged her into the car. yashoda struggled with a man inside the car & her heart stopped when she heard a deafening gunshot outside the vehicle.

a man fell against the car window & yashoda recognised him as the man who had led her to the car. the mirror was splattered with blood & as yashoda stared at it in horror, the car door swung open. rakesh stood there gun drawn aimed straight at yashoda. "move." was all he said & yashoda clambered down immediately. the assaulter inside the car was also dead by the end of a minute. rakesh turned to yashoda angrily. "what do you think you were doing?" he yelled at her. he didn't let yashoda reply but went on ranting. "you could have been killed. why are you so stupid?" he raved at her still hopping mad.

that's when yashoda lost it. "listen rakesh. I've had enough of your sullen mood swings. tell me were you made this way or did you get into an accident that affected your brain? you're always blowing hot & cold. I don't know how people can bear with you. your tongue is so sharp, no wonder you don't get along with anyone. aryan found his love but you? you can never find true love. you don't need it anyway. your ego is big enough. anyway thanks for saving me." with that yashoda walked away from rakesh. his mouth was hanging open in shock. no one had talked to him that way before. rakesh felt as if the air was knocked out of him. he returned his gun to it's usual place in his back pocket & walked back home slowly.

meanwhile aryan & meneka were basking in martial bliss. "aryan…" meneka snuggled up to his chest. "yes dear." he replied. "I want a baby boy just like you. I've even decided what to name him. jeeva." meneka told him sweetly. "no way. I want a sweet little baby girl like you. and she'll be called deepa." aryan argued with her good naturedly. "boy." "girl" "boy" "girl" the argument went on for a while till aryan stopped it. "okay. let's make it fair. we'll have twins. one girl & one boy." he kissed meneka's forehead gently.

"what?? do you know how difficult it is to give birth to one baby? you want me to push TWO babies out? no way! why don't you help me by giving birth to one?" meneka's nostrils flared in indigance. "aryan.. what are you laughing at?" she asked aryan who was shaking with laughter by then. "nothing.. nothing.." he was trying hard to contain his amusement. meneka pushed him away from her slightly annoyed. "hey! where are you going?" he asked her still smiling. "I'm going to sleep in the hall." she replied stiffly.

that time around aryan really burst into laughter. "you're going to sleep in the hall like this?" he pulled her to him before she could escape. meneka was only wrapped in the thin bedsheet. "don't be angry meneka. I was just teasing you." aryan told her softly. "I'm sorry aryan. I was too sensitive." meneka blushed in embarrassment.

"did anyone tell you how cute you look when you're all fired up?" aryan kissed her yet again. meneka melted into his arms & aryan carried her back to bed. "let's not worry about bringing the babies into this world yet. let's first worry about making them." aryan remarked cheekily & covered her body with his gently. meneka gasped in happiness & hugged aryan even closer to her. she wanted to hold onto that moment forever.

yashoda felt depressed. she was feeling terrible that she had spoken to rakesh that way but his tone was just too much for her to bear silently. yashoda was hurting even more rakesh as she uttered those harsh words to him. she loved him. yashoda loved rakesh. but she felt that the relationship would go nowhere. she & rakesh were two ends of a pole. they could never unite.

yashoda was pretty sure that rakesh would never talk to her again. knowing that if she stayed on, it would cause more heartache to both of them. yashoda decided to leave as soon as possible. she would talk to meneka about it the first thing in the morning. tears wetting her pillow, yashoda tried to sleep but remained awake just like rakesh.

this chapter was quite a challenge to write cos i've to keep on going back & forth between AM & RY.😆😆 hope you all liked it! comments are welcome!😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
well i am back again..and i am awake only to read this 😳 😳 n I LOVED IT..you know whats the best part of your fanfic is..the screeplay..its better than many..shows going on and i am not praising you for false,thats the truth.

about the chapter i knwo how difficult it would be for youto keep MANY 😉 things in mind 😆 😆 and i am glad that they are just perfect..Rakes reminds me of..Sanjuy dutt dont u think..
marvelous chapter and better writing!! 👏 👏

still not well.. 😕 will be better tomorrow sure..as i have to take rest try to many things togethre 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great chapter once again!! 👏 👏 👏 Nishu is totally right, the storyline for your FF is way better than the storyline for ANY other show I have ever watched. 😳

I just luved those cute moments between Aryan and Meneka! 😳😳 I actually like Rakesh now, he and Yashoda would make such an adorable couple! 😳

Can't wait for the next chapter! 😛 😳

Awwwww... Nishu I really hope you get well soon! 🤗
Edited by ~*Juhi*~ - 18 years ago

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