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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
"antng wrng?"

"tumne raj ko kya bola hai?"

"kya bola?"

"did u tak 2 raj ?"

"raj se???"

"yes"

"kaun si baat?"       


"i hve no idea bout dat naina ............usne mujhe

nahi bataya..........suno naina .........tum meri sis

ho......main tumhara acha hi chahonga.......raj ko koi

aisi vaisi baat mat bol diya karo......kisi ko kuch

batata nahi hai.....chup chap sab sehta rahta

hai.........."

"wat hpnd?"

"i hve never seen him cryng naina........main use sabse

ache se janta hun............par"

"raj was cryng?"

"ya.........listen watever d matter s.......i just knw

1 tng ki i dont want u 2 hurt raj............i cant

see him like that........"

naina got up 2 leave.......

"naina"
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
"hmm... bhai?"

"i wnt u both 2 be happy ............aur jo tum dono ke

beech mein aayega........chahe voh huda hi kyun na

ho.........i wnt leave him...............its a


promise............so u better take care.........bye"

n navin left saying this.........leaving naina

shocked.......       


then alekh entered........

"alekh bhai ko yeh sab?"

"pata nahi naina......."

silence

"wat do u tnk he doesnt knw antng?"

"he knws evrytng naina..........

bout u.......

n also bout raj
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
hey nice prt man...naveen supporting raj.,...u r really gud..plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
hey too good

pl continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
hey where are u?

pl update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
meri maan naina yeh huda ka chakkar chodh

aur khush reh raj ke saath

raj hai na tere saath kuch bhi nahi hoga

aur tu bhi toh hai"

"par..........alekh......."

"par var kuch nahi naina..........dekh nahi rahi kya ho

raha hai..........aur tu mere pe vishwas karti hain ki

nahin?"

"karti hoon"       

toh phir chodh ye saab aur aur chal"

"kaha?"

"u n raj r gng out"

"wat?"

"yups... ab ja aur ready ho ja..........jaldi se.........main raj ko batata hoon"

"ok "

"ok........jaldi kar.......main chalta hoon"

"alekh"
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
"alekh"

"ab kya?"'

"thnakx"

"tnakx vankz kuch nahi baas mere ko promise kar ki ab toh us baare mein kabhi baat nahi karegi"

silence

"kya soch rahi hai?"

"kuch nahi................promise"
...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
both rajveer n naina got ready...........n went downstairs.......

both saw each other n winked..........

raj was looking stunning.......he was in his casuals.......

naina 2 was looking gorgeous.......n was also in her casuals..........as they were gng out for a movie.............

they both reached the theatre.......in bout half an hour...........they both chatted on the way.............................

the movie was about 2 start in bout 5 mins......

so they decided 2 go inside........n get themselves seated..........

when they got in there.........they realised dat alekh

had got them corner seats..........     

both of them looked at each other n laughed...........

they seated themselves........

the movie started..........................

it was a good 1............n they both were enjoyingt...............

raj suddenly whispered..........

"gud na...........alekh got us corner seats.........i love him for dat....!!!!!!"

naina glared at him........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
shutup raj n watch the movie"

"kya naina........had ho.....!!!!"

rajveer said getting a bit irritated.........

quickly naina held his hands.......................n rested her head n his shoulders..........

both of them were happy now..........no worries.........no tension.........ntng...........just the 2 of them...........lost in each other.............      

the movie was gud na?........naina asked...

"ya vry gud.......i enjoyed t"

he winked at her while sayng dis.........

cme on now letz go home quickly..........

ya

they left for the house........

they were there in bout 15 mins...........       del ete   


they both got down...............n went inside.............

navin wasnt there .........he wasnt waiting for them today............

both were surprised.......

he was in shalini s room............both were having their dinner

"oye kab aye tum log?"

"bas abhi.......bahiya......"

"navin aaj tu hamara wait nahin kar raha...........aise toh har din tension........i mean........"

"ab raj woh baat ye hai ki......woh ab navin tension free ho gaya hai............tum jo ho........naina ke saath..........aur
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
tumhare baare mein toh use kabhi tension hoti hi


nahi............kyunki tum apna kyalal ache se rakh

lete ho ho........"   "ya shalini s rit.........ab

chodo ye sab aur jao........hve yr dinner n go 2 sleep

quickly............kal teri mehendi hai

naina....................."

"oye ha........bhul hi gayi thi"

"acha naina chalo"

sayng dis they left...............

downstairs both took over their food n went n sat in


the verandah outside........

they could see the stars there in the sky..........

when raj suddenly spoke...............      &nbs p;


"wat if smtng happens 2 me naina?"

"naina"

"wat"

"r u listening?"

"no im nt"

"listen naina.........im n d army.......wat if sme day......"

naina got up ......

"wait"    


"eat yr food raj........"

"no.........1st u listen 2 me.........letz be practical........"

"practical?u call dis practical??"

"stop behaving in a childish manner naina.........n sit down......."