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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Jul 19(6 days ago) raj had gone to bring the car......
naina was waiting outside......soon he was there........

naina was about so sit inside........when raj shouted-"na"

naina-"wat?"

raj-"wait"

naina was already screaming when she became quiet suddenly as she saw raj coming to her side.........he opened the door f the car for her and asked for her hand....n said

raj-"maan......plz...."

he made her comfortable there and then went 2 seat himself.....

they drove..........

maybe the drive was a bit 2222222 long............

but both of them were enjoying t
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
finally they neared home.......naina was vry tired......she quietly rested her head on his shoulders ......

n raj was vry happy 2 accept dat move f hers....!!!!!!!

finally they reached......

"naina.......vr home......."

"naina????naina??"

there was no reply

naina was fast asleep

"not again"-raj laughed.......      

raj kya bola tumne????itna acha natak kar rahi thi......socha tha......frgt t.....gudnit.....bye"

rajveer was suprised 2 c her awake

he quickly followed her..........

"naina.......ruk......."

"wat now?"


"kya socha tha tumne??"he said moving his fingers through her hair........


naina understood the game........she saw raj approaching .......

"kuch nahi raj.......kal milte hain.......bye.......gudnit.........."she shouted as she pushed him away n ran inside

"uffffffff".......dis wat t for raj

he 2 went inside.....

but no one was aware dat they were being followed...............     

oye ali jaldi jakar yeh ladoo navin ko de de".......pooja said.......

"thik hai pooja hum jakar unhe de dete hai.......magar aap yaha sambhal lengi na?"-ali asked.......

"oye kyun network jaam kiye batha hai.......ja na ........main yaha pe hu".......she replied

every1 was very busy

the wedding was approaching .........n there was a lot 2 do

the whole house was full of people ........relatives from both sides...........

there was a lot of noise and confusion all around............       

no 1 had time for anytng else.........

but the bride and the groom.....wre far from being busy!!!!!!!!!!

well seeing every1 so busy and both of them left wid no work.........was quite a delight for both of them!!!!!

both naina and rajveer got 2 spend a lot more time together.........

every1 was happy.......

but there was one man who couldnt tnk of anytng else but ........how 2 stop this wedding.........

huda was sitting alone near a tree in the woods............

he was hidding......as the police was after him.........

but even after all the events dat took place dat day.........

huda was firm in his decision..........

he always believed in himself..........

he got everytng he wanted........................

n knw he was convinced about gtng this thng 2       

he wanted her........at any rate..........no matter wat happens..........but

he quite confident bout his victory...........

not aware dat the 1 he wanted was madly in love wid some1 else.........n would do anytng for dat 1 person............

he thought he knew naina quite well.......

but he was wrong..........

naina would do anytng 2 save her love,her life......her evrytng...........

either constructive

or




DESTRUCTIVE............      & nbsp;




raj and naina were now sitting together........

hands in hands........

they wre lost........................

suddenly naina spoke up.........

"raj"

"hmmmmmm?"

"do u hve any news about huda?"

raj was silent     
attitude27 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#53
hey dats it for today guys.......long update.......but im nt gtng enough comments........so the next one after a lot f comments
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey shreya

too good dear

waiting to read what wil Huda do ?

can waiti pl post
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
nice story dear plz do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
naina understood

"i knw he l come........."

raj looked at her...................

"im sure bout t..........i knw him........."

rajveer sighed........

"i dnt care naina"

"but i do"

frgt but t naina...........old tngs........."

naina understood

"i knw he l come........."

raj looked at her...................

"im sure bout t..........i knw him........."

rajveer sighed........

"i dnt care naina"

"but i do"

frgt but t naina...........old tngs........."

"no raj........."       

"toh kya kare naina?tell me?"

he shouted shrugging her shoulders.........

"kuch nahi karna hai raj..........kuch nahi.......jo karna hai main karongi.......tumhe kuch nahi ho sakta........"

"naina-"

"huda ye nahin janta ki main tumhare liye kya kar sakti hoon..........."

"naina......kya bol rahi ho"

he shouted............      

"no raj its imp.......i tnk i should go n talk 2 him.......i knw whre he l be..........

im quite sure"


"wat?watz wrng wid u naina?"

silence

"ul go n talk 2 him?r u crazy?"

"if i dnt then........"

"then wat?"      then......

he cant do anytng 2 any1........

"i dnt knw anytng raj..........i will go 2 him......."

"stop it naina........u dnt knw him......."

"i do.........dats y......"

"toh tum nahi mano gi.......rit?"

"rit"       "ok fne then il aslo go wid u......."

"no u cant"

"so u tnkk il let u go alone"

"no"

after a long silence.......raj says-"ok alekh will go wid u"

"when do u wnt 2 go?"

"today........now......."       ; 


"wats the matter raj.........y r so u tensed?"

"alekh........actually........"

"look raj .....be fast......i knw smtng s wrng"

"alekh actaully naina......naina......"

"naina ,wat?"

"naina wnts 2 meet huda"

"wat?"     
"ya"

"wats wrng wid her?"

"wait il tak 2 her now"

"alekh ruk.........there s no point.........nahi manegi......"

"vo toh main bhi janta hoon........par baat ko talna abhi zaroori hai raj"

"but........."

"wait let me tak 2 her

naina...............u hve yr marriage now.........after dat u hve 2 go back 2 wrk ..............apni post par.........aur naina ko bhi toh jana hai..........itna kaam hai........aur huda ......i understand naina raj .....but how cme u allowed her?"       

"kya karta alekh.....aise ajeeb batteen kar rahi thi........."

"wat?"

"voh kuch bhi kar sakti hai mere liye alekh .........aur huda.......pehle hi........wat f smtng hpns 2 her?"

tears come out.......

"raj .........dnt cry........"

raj smiles n says-"kya karo alekh pehle main bhi nahi rota tha.......kuch khone ka daar nahi tha na.........par jab se naina......."

"ok ok i understood "

they smile

"wats hpng over here?"..........navin enters.......       

raj......kya hua tuhje.......ro raha tha na?"

"nahi navin........woh"

"oye.....shutup.......kise jhoot bol raha hai........main tera best frnd hoon.........mujhe sab pata hai.....rukh abhi teri problem solve karta hoon"

"naina.........naina.........."...........navin goes away shouting.......

"navin..rukh........."

"natanki sab log...........ja ab apni premika ke paas."

alekh starts laughing       
naina was sitting all alone in her room tnking...........

when some1 entered..........

it was navin...........

"naina....naina......"

naina turned 2 see navin looking very angry........

"kya hua bhai..........any problem?"

"problem?"       
attitude27 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#57
yoginishahakari@thankz a lot for yr support
attitude27 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#58
yoginishahakari@thankz a lot for yr support
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
hey too good

really a nice cute FF

pl continue soon
attitude27 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#60
yoginisahakari@thankz a loooooooot.......for always supportng