Mahi Shabd FF-The Test-Part 11-Pg4

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hi

~Ouma*n*Eijaz~

i was wonderin if i could continue your FF plz since u havent updated in a while? can i thought up sumthing really nice plz i'm gonna add part 7

Part 1

~ They are JUST married🥳 in the show...😳

~My Fan-fic starts a year and half after the marriage where Mahi and Shabd are a couple in love, where Mahi finally realized that Shabd truly does love her...😳

~All the characters are the same as they are in the show but this is Mahi and Shabd;

Mahi:


Shabd:


~Starting the story,

Part 1:

It was late in the morning, the sun shone over a beautiful house. In the house a women ran around fanatically from the kitchen to the dining room back to kitchen and back to the dining room carrying several dishes at a time. She walked back into the kitchen and started emptying the saucepans; she knew he would be here any second now; shouting for his breakfast. She smiled at her self *click* and then dried her hands she lent over the sink to open the window wider. She looked out into the beautiful view and smiled again. *click* .

She walked out into the dining room where the smell of freshly cooked breakfast hit her; she gave a little smile and tidied her self up. She tucked the annoying curl by her cheek behind her ear *click* then she looked up to the clock, she smiled and started counting..

M: 1….2 (she glanced as the open door)..3…4…….
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S: MAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!! MAHIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

A man came running in, he had a towel round his neck and in one hand a drinking bottle, and he was wearing a vest top with matching shorts. His hair was wet and he shouted even louder;

S: MAHIIIIIIII! KAHA HO! I'M HUNGRY!

Mahi rolled her eyes and walked up to him,

M: Arre chilao math isse room main hoon! Decko khaana be ready hai, har rooz ki tarah!
S: Whatever Mahi, you know that it's become a habit to run in and shout your name in the morning.. and wake all the neighbours up!
He walked up to the table…
S: Mmmmmmmmm (taking in the aroma) fresh khaana,
He reached out to grab a paratah.. Mahi wacked his hand away..
M: Abhi nahi!!! Baby tumme pata hai na tumme kya karma hai
Shabd looked at her with a cheeky smile..
S: OOO haan, sorry jaan! How could I 4get!?!
He reached out and pulled Mahi towards him so there was no distance between them, he lent closer towards her face just about to kiss her.

Just in time Mahi pushed him away from her.
M :Oiiiiiii kya kare ho, meri matlab tha…jaa kar shower karo! Jao…Abhi Jaoo… (She points up stairs)
Shabd turned around and made a cute sad face..
S: Mahii pls, deckhoo na, mujhe kitnaa bhook lagi hai, U know ajj
maine early utt kar extra 20 mins run kiya! Socho main kitna tired hoon! Pehle khaana khaane doh phir hum dono (puts his arm around Mahi)..saath shower karenghe
Mahi moved away and made a disgusted face..
M: Whatever..acha bhaatao..tum koi cheez bhulkar to nahi ayee?
Shabd looked around..
S: Nahin toh… Sab kuch to laya hoon, towel hai, kapde hai (gets closer and winks) main hoon.. What could be missing!?!

Mahi gave a sweet smile, and put her hand on Shabds cheek..
M: Camera..

S: Camera..(Shabd makes a cofnsued face)what camera…Kaunsi camera ( Shabd looks away..turning to his food again..dechko khaana tandha hora hai! Kitna bolthi hoo Mahi!!!

Mahi turns him back round..
M: Camera kaha jisse tumne merri tasveere kiche hai ajj subhe!
S: What camera.?
M: Shabd games math kehlo, Camera kaha hai, You know I don't like you taking random photos of me..Wheres d camera..??

S: Arre kasie biwi ho tum, main ek photographer ho kar bhi, tum muhjko ek tasveer kichne bhi nahi dehthe…my works not that bad… Log London se, America se, aathe hai so I can click some photos of them…aur ek tum ho, meri saath, meri ghar, .aur meri room mein bhi rehthe hui bhi..ek photo bhi kichwathi nahi ho!

Mahi rolls her eyes again..
M: Ho chukka hain tumhara!!? Abb Camera ..Where……..?
Shabd looks away and starts getting a plate while standing.. with a glum face on. He told Mahi where it was.. Mahi ran out and got the camera and sat down to look at the pictures.
She smiled as she clicked the button to go to the next photo..
M: Wasie itne bure bhi nahi hain! (She puts a thoughtful face on)
Shabd comes and sits down next to her..
S: Exactly!.. Ok main soch ra tha…ye photo hum study main laga lenghe..

Its so beautiful!
Mahi rolls her eyes.and gets up..
M: NOOOO…NOOO no..
S: Main par, …..kyon..
M: Ghar main aur kitne photo meri laagoghe?? Har jhaaga is ghar main sirf main to dihkthi hoon!!
S: I know..I love it..har jagaa sirf Mahi Mahi Mahi! (He ruffles his hair)
Mahi shakes her head..and walks off..
M: Uhh Whatever..(She starts walking up the stairs…with the camera in her hand)
Shabd turns around and starts shouting..
S: FITTEY MU TERA…TUMKO MERI FEELING KI KOI KADAR NAHAIN..Main kitna loving hus…………………..
Mahi walks into their bedroom Shabds voice starts fading away.. she jumps on the bed..and starts flicking through the photos again smiling… She really did have the best husband in the world… She looks up to see the photos of her on every wall…she turns around to face his "side of the bed" she gave a warm smile as she took in his scented smell from the light blue bed cover. She flicked through the photos on his camera again.
M Nice..Nice…Ok…Whatever (she laughs)..Ok..Nice…(commenting on the photos)

She suddenly stopped when she got to a picture of a woman who she didn't recognize…she got up and looked closely at the picture… she thought to her self.

Who was this? …………………………………

Part 2

2 weeks later; Mahi had totally forgotten about the women's picture she saw on Shabds camera. She presumed that the lady was some model that Shabd had worked with.
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It was around mid-day and the sun had become hotter then ever. Mahi had become fed-up of carrying 3 big shopping bags in each arm. The cause of all this shopping was the party Mahi and Shabd have thrown for Veer and Raji's baby boy. Mahi decided enough was enough she needed to sit down, she walked in to the nearest coffee shop. As Mahi walked into the coffee shop she bumped into a lady, in one moment Mahi had dropped all her shopping bags causing all contents to tip out side. Before taking a look at who it was that had barged into her; Mahi gave a little whine and immediately attended her shopping. Meanwhile the lady she had barged into looked down at Mahi with out saying a word, she was more interested in the shopping that was scattered all over the floor. She was in particular reading the invitation card, which had on it in big thick blue writing " You are invited to celebrate with the Khurana family at…." . Mahi got up, breaking the lady's concentration. Mahi was not happy, she had a annoyed expression on her face and it sounded in her voice as well..
M: Excuse me, app dekhar nahi chal sakthi?

The lady replied back, but in a clam voice..
L: I'm sorry it was an accident, ok..

M: Ok fine if it was accident but u didn't even have decency to help me pick up the things I dropped instead you stood watching!?!

L: Maine kaha na I'm Sorry, and why should I help, they dropped out of your hands Mrs. Shabd Sareen…

Mahi glared at the women, how did she know her name!
There was something strange about her, Mahi was sure that she had seem this lady somewhere before, but couldn't' force her self to remember where she saw this women..

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Meanwhile at the same time but in the studio Shabd was busy taking snaps of a model. He took photos of her from different angles and encouraged her at the same time. While he was taking snaps a man walked up to him with an envelope in his hand.
M: Sir, this for you (he handed the envelope to Shabd)
S: Ye Kya hai? Kisne diya?
M: Pata nahi, reception ki desk par kisne rakha tha..
S: Urrrrm Ok
Shabd looked down at the envelope, it had had his name on, but before his name someone added on to it "my"
S: Ye kaun ho saktha hai, (he opens the envelope)

Shabd turned the envelope around and peeled off the top flap; bits of a cut out picture tipped out on to the clean floor. Shabd became even more confused he bent down and picked a few bits up he looked at them carefully failing to understand what he was to do with these bits of cut up paper. He looked into the envelope again inside was a small bit of paper folded up, he unfolded the small piece of paper and read it out loud…
S: Iss uljaan ko tum suljaoo, (Shabd looked up in to the air with a confused face) hmmm…….

Out of no where the model spoke, she had been listening and watching Shabd for the last few minute since he stopped paying attention to her,
M: I think its puzzle, put the bits of paper together… shayad kuch milegha..

Shabd looked up to the model with a cute smile,
S: Thanks..

Shabd taking his time carefully arranged the bits of paper as he carried on Shabd realized that it was a photo, photo of someone's eye, a pair of eyes that seemed familiar to him. Where had he seen them he questioned himself, he concentrated but his concentration broke when his phone started vibrating in his blazer pocket. He received it straight away,

S: Hello,
It was Mahi; who had found a nice window seat in the coffee shop, she was holding the invitation card in her and in the other her phone to her ear..
M: Lagtha hai ajj janab busy nahi hai…? Warna toh kaam par meri phone bhi nahi pick up kathe ho
Shabd smiles,
S: Shpping Karli?

Waiter comes with Mahi's order, places it on the table;
M: Haan! Main to tak gayi hoon ye shopping bags utta the utta the..(In a tired voice)
S: Arre itna tired math hoo! Ajj party main to hum dono ko bahut dance karna hai..
M: Hmmm (not really interested, looking out of the window)
The waiter who was still standing next to Mahi, took his chance and without making any noise took the invitation card and walked off..
S: Hmm ka matlab kya hai, meri saath dance nahi karma hai kya..?
M Hmmm (she gives a little smile, she loved to annoy him)
S: Chalo agar asie bhaat hai toh, wait one minute….. Soniya yahaan par aao
Shabd called up the model, who was busy putting lip gloss on.
Son: Yes..
Holding his phone away from his ear so Mahi could hear..
S: Acha Soniya tum ajj free ho na..?
son: Yes But kyon..
S: Ajj meri ghar main ek party hai, tum zaaroor aana, hum dono bahut dancing karenghe..(Amused expression on his face)
Son: (excited) Yes Sir definitely! Main zarror aaonghi..
Mahi listening to this, sits up immediately,
M: Shabd abhi bhaatao, kaun hai who, aur who kyon aayighi MERI PAR….
S: (shouting) Bye Mahi, Main kitna busy hoon, bahut bhaat karthi ho tum, chalo Soniya lets continue! (Ends the call)
Mahi shakes her head with a frown on her face,
M: Dance to meri saath karonghe Shabd…(laughs and hits her head)..Whatever…

A few tables away, a lady was carefully examining the invitation card, the same lady who had bumped into Mahi..
L: Party eh, hmmm

Part 3

Finally it was party night at the Sareen house, but it wasn't the party yet because the Khurana's hadn't arrived nor had the guests. Everything had been arranged to the plan, all the furniture in the huge hall had been removed to create room for the party, a baby's cot had been placed in the middle which had 2 blue pillowcases, a blue duvet and other blue bedding to match. The outside of cot was decorated blue with a few little balloons here and there. All decided by Mahi. DM (dadi ma) was ordering the servants to go and do this and that.

Upstairs Mahi was getting ready, she was wearing a turquoise sari with sequins, zardosi work and white piping work as well. (Sari looks like this, just imagine Mahi instead....)

Mahi was spraying perfume while standing in front of the mirror. Meanwhile Shabd happened to walk in whistling, he took a glance at Mahi and carried on walking until he stopped, he looked over at Mahi again. An immediate grin came across his face, he stood there admiring her beauty, she looked this beautiful all the time but today she was glowing. He gave a little cough to get her attention.. ehem ehem..
Mahi turned around to notice Shabd wearing nearly the same color as her, but a darker shirt, with the top few buttons undone; his sleeves were rolled up just before where his elbow came. She turned back round, and pretended to be fiddling with her bangles.

M: Who aagayi?

Shabd gave a another smile, he got her attention..

S: Kaun…? Veer, Raji aur chootte sab abhi nahi aye, aur guests bhi nahin aye, kyunki abhi 6:45 hai.. 7 nahin..

M: Pata hai, main to tumhari who..urrm kya naam tha…So…haan Soniya, woh aagayi…dance routine practice karli tum don ne..

S: Whatever…

M: Kyon last minute cancel kardiya hai kya..

S: Haan urrm tum kuch asia hi samjhlo (cheeky smile came across his face, he walked towards Mahi)

M: Hmmmm, matlab.. (Stopped fiddling with her bangles and looked up to see Shabds reflection in the mirror…)

S: Sach kahoo Mahi! Bechari tumhari phone par bhaatein sunke daar gayi..

Mahi laughed and thought to herself, chalo atleast bhootni ko baghadi…
She looked back up to see Shabds reflection, he smiled and winked at her… she looked down and gave a shy smile, suddenly she realized that half her blouse was had slipped of her shoulder and was resting on her arm. She knew she didn't tie the dori tight enough...

Instantly she lifted the blouse back up to her shoulder and tried to tie the dori again with a frown on her face…

She looked in to the mirror to see; Shabd was still watching her fascinated...

She wondered if was he going to just stand there and watch or was he going to help any time soon...

Shabd stood in front of the wardrobe, watching Mahi struggle with the dori, with a smile on his face, he thought to himself, he'll let her struggle for a few minutes more until he would come to the rescue…
Mahi got fed-up; if he wasn't going to offer then she would order him to…

M: Shabd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Frown on her face...)
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Mahi narrowed her eyes at him, Shabd at once understood, that she wasn't in the mood to play games... he walked up to her and took the two separate dori's out of her hand… he looked up at her in the mirror, Mahi had a relived expression on her face.

Shabd took the two doris and pulled them together and started to knot th…………

M: SHABBDDDDDDD!!!! WAIT, OUCH OUCH…SHABBD..

Shabd looked up straight away,
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S: Kya hua????
M: Let go, two tight…Back hurts…..she gave another little scream..(she jerked..)

S: Ok Ok... (He let go the doris at once, they both spread apart opposite each other, leaving the blouse to slip across Mahi's shoulder again. She lifted it back up...
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M: Kitna dhook ra hai...
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Shabd was a bit amused…how that could have been painful???

But he took another look at her back, and there in front of him was 1 thick red line, a thick red mark!

Ouch! He thought to himself, maybe he had pulled them to tight...

S: Sorry….

Mahi didn't answer she started rubbing her back while holding the blouse with her other hand...

Shabd felt a bit guilty, he moved Mahi's hand away, and gently moved her hair to one side. Shabd ran his fingers down Mahi's back across the big red mark, he watched Mahi in the mirror as she closed her eyes. He then lent closer and kissed her where the red mark was, Mahi closed her eyes tighter, he carried on and kissed her again, his hand slid down and tightly wrapped around Mahi's stomach…

Mahi blushed and quickly turned around to hug him, Shabd smiled as he smelt her freshly washed her. He whispered "I'm Sorry"

Mahi lifted her head away from Shabd's shoulder and took a few steps backwards looking down smiling at the floor. Shabd arms were still wrapped around her, he tied the dori again. This time not as tight. He then lent in kissed Mahi on the cheek gently, she gave another smile. Shabd kissed her again he couldn't help himself she felt so soft it warmed him inside. Mahi looked up, they both got locked in each others eyes, both got lost reading the love in each others eyes.

They both moved towards each other, their lips nearly touching.

Suddenly…they heard a tring tring tring…they both looked towards the phone.

Mahi instantly pulled away from Shabd and ran towards the phone, he grabbed her just in time, she could read his face which was saying "don't go".

She blushed and pulled her arm away to attend the phone.

sneak peek
~ Part 4: Music, dance and more romance… everyone goes upto find a note in the babies hand regarding …….!

Part 4

Mahi had picked up the phone, it was only the guard, asking if he should let in the guest, the party had finally started.
The Khurana's had come with Jr Veer (can't actually think a name for the baby!)
Everyone adored the little baby there were many discussions about which side the family the baby looked Durga arguing mostly that Jr Veer was just like her son. Well Mahi argues back saying that Jr Veer had Rajji's eyes, discussions or light arguments should I say continued on who the baby looked like the most. Everyone had bought the baby presents from little toys to clothes to even money, Rajji and Veer politely thanked them all. Exchanging smiles at each other at times. After a little while you can say that Jr Veer got bored of all these adult fighting over him, he had falled into a deep sleep, Rajji gently picked him up and gave him kiss on the forehead, Mahi and Rajji went upstairs and securely left him to carry on sleeping Mahi and Shabds bedroom. Rajji sat by her baby admiring while Mahi, closed the windows, suddenly amobile phone started going off, Mahi turned around,

M: Oooo so sorry, uff phone kaha, (she hurried around the room trying to locate the phone before Jr Veer woke up)

R: Jaldhi Mahi!
M: Wait wait,

She stopped right in front of a chair which had Shabd's blazer left on it, typical she thought to her self, she shacked her head and received the phone, when she was getting the phone out she accidently pulled out a few other things from his pocket, but instead of picking them she picked up the phone..

M: Hello, (she said in a low voice)

There was no reply..
M: Hello…(who ever it was had put the phone down on Mahi, Mahi frowned)
R: No answere?
M: Haan, joh bhi tha, mujhse bhaat nahin karna chahthe the, chalo akhir ye kaun tha (she checked the received calls list, the number was private, she thought to herself, a private number that didn't answer to her voice..hmmm..)

Mahi then bent down to pick up all the things she had dropped, which were just a handkerchief, a memory card from Shabds camera and an envelope, she turned around and read what it said ..(my Shabd..)

Mahi read it again jut to check if she read it right, who's Shabd she thought to herself! She opened it up, and again all the little bits of cut out paper fell on the floor; Mahi became confused, just like how her husband was earlier!

There was knock on the dorr, Rajji who was watching Mahi a little confused, and was patting Jr Veer at the same time got up and opened it..
It was DM, asking why it was taking them so long and to come and join the party everybody was dancing and having fun, Mahi turned around, quickly stuffing all the paper into the envelope,

M: Urrm, I'm coming,
R: Haan chalo Mahi,

DM, blew a kiss to the sleeping Jr Veer and all 3 walked downstairs.

Mahi walked over to Shabd who gave a smile and handed him his phone
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M: Next time, kahi par bhull math jaana, (frown on her face)
S: Whatever, (Shabd was enjoying the party to much, Jeet was singing..)

Both standing next to each other watched Jeet singing, Mahi looked up to Shabd's face who was enjoying himself, thought to herself was doing anything wrong by keeping it a secret that she had once loved Jeet. Would it ever cause a problem between them in the future?

After Jeet had finished his signing, he declared that it was now time for couples to dance, starting of with Veer and Rajji, the spotlights moved over to them, Rajji looked down shyly. Veer gave a big grin but then realized what Jeet had just said, before he could do anything it was too light an eager Jeet had ran upto Rajji and started pulling her towards the centre of the big hall, Rajji shaking her head saying No.

J: Aapko dance karna hoga, aapki party toh hai, kaise chalgha, bhabhi c,mon (holding the microphone to his mouth still so he could be heard)

Rajji stopped, she could feeling her self blushing, Durga glared at her, Jeet looked around, where had Veer vanished too?)

J: Bhaiyaaa!!!!! ~ Police Offi….(someone tapped him on the back)

Jeet turned around to see Veer, Jeet knew it was his que to move into the audience…
Veer smiled at shy Rajji and lifted his hand towards her, Rajji was blushing more then ever now, he whispered to her,
V: Would you like to dance?
Rajji looked away and nodded, the song Vaada Raha began playing..
They danced all the way through the song, a few other couples came to join, everyone watched admiringly.

--Veer --Vaada raha(Vaada raha pyaar se pyaar kaAb hum na honge judaa) - 2Yeh meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda --Rajji--Chaahe tumhe kis kadar mera dilTumko nahin hai pataYeh meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda…(song continues)

The song to an end, Veer and Rajji had their foreheads touching each other, the lights came back on everyone clapped and laughed, Brij had huge smile on his face how happy he was to see his daughter happy!

Immediately the second song started playing..
(The song is Keh Raha Hai from Babul, it's a really nice song, its not slow because I don't think slow songs would suit MS much, its more of a bubbly song, if you have it play it while your reading this.. your'll enjoy the song I love it!)

The song began, Mahi who was still clapping suddenly had her hand grabbed buy Shabd who pulled her to the centre of the hall, Mahi in total shock looked around, everyone had began to cheer, Mahi looked at Shabd her face wore and expression that pleaded him not to make her dance, she had totally changed her mind now…Shabd began whistling. (the song has a whistling bit in it..) Dm watched with a big grin on her face..

Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam

~ Shabd began to sing…he walked around Mahi and was leaning against her, Mahi who was behind him facing the other side, gave a nervous grin to the guests..
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Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam

~ Shabd this time grabbed Mahi's hand and pulled her to face him, he was still singing..

Hum ishq mein mar jaayenge
Kuch bhi sanam kar jaayenge

~ He bent down on his knew, lifting his arm out…
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Chhodenge na daaman yaar ka

~ He got up quickly and grabbed her hand…
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Wada raha wada raha wada raha pyar ka – 2

~ He twirled her around and around, Mahi laughed, a bunch of people came to join them..
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Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam
~ Mahi sang still being twirled around by Shabd…

(The music played and MS did a bit of slow dancing… when Shabd came across this pretty girl and left Mahi half way through the dance, she folded her arms and watched him, about to walk away..)

Dooriyan na ab zara ho jaana

~ He moved towards her
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Saanson ke darmiyaan

~ He pulled her towards him and his face gently touched hers..
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Chhedti hai dhadkano ko pal pal
Mausam ki narmiyaan
~ He smelt her hair..slow dancing…

To aaja chaahaton ki shabnam pi le
Lamhon mein sadiyon ko ji le

~ Mahi moved away and began to run, she ran around Brij and Dm and Rajji…moving away from Shabd who was trying to grab her..suddenly he disappeared.. Mahi looked around…

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Keh raha hai pal suhaana jaane jaa khaake sanam

~ Someone tapped her, it was Shabd, he gave her smile and began to twirl her round again.

(The song continued, MS danced and Mahi sang..)


Keh rahaa hai har fasaana jaane jaa khaake kasam

~ Mahi and Shabd danced…as Mahi sang..

Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam
~ SHabd sang both still dancing..

Hum ishq mein mar jaayenge
Kuch bhi sanam kar jaayenge
~ Shabd took a few steps backwards and ruffled his hair while singing.

Chhodenge na daaman yaar ka
~ Mahi ran up to him while singing put her arm round him..

Wada raha
Wada raha
~ He picked her up and started spinning her around..
Wada raha pyaar ka
Wada raha
Wada raha
Wada raha pyaar ka...

~ He put her down and both started laughing, everyone cheered, and DM did that Nazar thing…😳

Jr Veer had began to cry. Soni went upstairs to go and get him, she walked into the room, where he was screaming, she smiled and said aww, she sat on the bed where he was, she looked down surprised as she noticed he was holding a little piece of paper, she took it off him and read it,
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~ Shabd; I left you a few years back, not knowing what I had done,
I ruined my life the moment I walked away from you thinking I had better thing in store,
When things went wrong, I felt I could handle them,
but as time went by I realized that I only needed you,
I'm back again, this time I promise I won't leave you…

Soni read with a frown,
So: Yeh Kya hai????

Part 5

The party finally came to an end, Soni had decided to keep the piece of paper to her self, she was confused with what she should do, if she showed it Mahi then problems would arise between MS, but she didn't want that to happen (flashbacks of MS dance) but if she didn't tell Mahi then she'll be betraying Mahi because if something did happen between Mahi and Shabd then Soni will be responsible because she never warned Mahi.

Soni stayed up all night walking from one end of her room to the other trying to figure out what was the best thing to do. She sat down on the edge of her bed and looked at the piece of paper again she read it again; she had to talk to Shabd before doing anything.

Meanwhile at the Sareen house Mahi was fast asleep, but Shabd was in his study with the envelope again that had the cut pieces of paper in it, he glued each piece down on a piece card, fitting them together so he get the perfect image. It took him a while but he got there, when he looked down at the final piece he couldn't help thinking he had seen the eyes somewhere, his seen so many models, but these eyes belonged to someone he was familiar with, he got up and walked up to his shelf and started flipping through the photo albums. His bound to find this girl somewhere…as he flicked through, the phone started ringing, he looked at his watch.. who could be calling at this time.

He walked picked up the phone;

S: Hello,

So: Shabd Jiju..

Shabd was confused but gave a little smile..

S: Aree Soni, tum isss waqt, Mahi toh..

So: Shabd jiju, mujhe appse bhaat karni hai,

S: Mujhse, kyon kuch hua?

So: Nahin kuch milla, app ki ghar main, main itni confused hoon, app pls mujhko kaal mil sathe hai.

Now Shabd was very confused, why in the world did Soni want to meet him, he always had a feeling Soni didn't like him much, but then why did she want to meet him. He agreed to meet her tomorrow morning. Shabd put the phone down and started flicking through his photo albums again..

There was a knock on the door, Shabd turned around…in a hurry he dropped the photo album on his desk. He knew it was Mahi and she wouldn't be happy if she found out he was doing work at this time.

Mahi opened the door and peered through, her eyes half closed.. she spoke in a tired voice..

M: Shabd kaun tha aur is waqt, fitte mu uska..

Shabd laughed a nervous laugh..

S: Urrm Mahi, chale koi nahin tha..

M: Agar koi nahin tha, toh phone kyon bajthi?

Shabd rolled his eyes, Mahi was not in the right state of mind, she was half asleep, she could hardly stand up straight..

S: Neend se utti kyon tum,

He rolled her eyes, and walked up to her, and picked her up.

S: Now I have to pick you and take you to bed..patta hai tum kitne heavy ho?

Mahi hardly awake replied back..

M: Fitte Mu..

S: Whatever..

He walked down the corridor towards their bedroom, holding Mahi and then when they entered their room he placed her on the bed and put the bed covers over her about to sneak off to his study again. But even though Mahi was half asleep, she knew what he was going to do, she grabbed his arm,

M: Math jao, soh jao,

She tugged his arm.. Shabd rolled his eyes..

He sat down next to her, and waited for her to fall asleep, while he sat down looking at her he couldn't stop thinking about Soni, why did she want to speak to him, he a had a gut feeling it was about the photo.

*****

It was the next morning, Shabd got out hsir ed sports car and walked up to the park where Soni told him to meet her. Soni who had a confused expression on her face walked from one to the other holding the piece of paper in hr hand..

S: Soni,

She turned around to see Shabd.

Meanwhile back at the Sraeen Mansion, Mahi had finished clearing the table DM helped her. Mahi looked at the clock she had nothing much to do she deicded to go upstairs and frame some of the photos from yesterdas party.

Back at the park, Soni glared at Shabd..Shabd looked back at her,

S: Yeh? Yeh ky hai?

SO: Parre (read) kar dehklo

Shabd looked at her confused…

*****

At the Sareen house Mahi sat down, she had everything she needed, she pcikd up the first picture which was Jr Veer, she gave the photo a lil kiss and started framing it.

*****

Back at the park, Shabd read the piece of paper, he was confused he read it again and again, looking at in horror…

Soni looked at him, confused..

*****

Mahi began to frame her fourth photo; the last one, which was a photo of her, Brij, Moni, Soni, Prince and Rajji.

*****

Shabd looked at Soni, unable to say anything..

S: Soni, yeh tumme kaha milla?

So: Kaal Party main, yeah kaun hai…kya chahthi hai?? App jhaanthe hai usko

****

Mahi, looked at the rest of the photo, she decided to put them in a photo album, the only place where she would find photo albums was in Shabds study, she got up to go there.

*****

Shabd: Yeh toh, Shayad yeah Re..Reema hoghi..

Soni looked confused, she confused him.

So: Reema??

Shabd looked at the piece of paper, flashbacks came into his mind, the photo of those eyes, it was Reema's eeys..

*****

Mahi who was in the study, got a phot album out of Shabds cupboard she looked at his desk, no surprise, it was a mess, she went up to it and then noticed the card which had the eyes glued to it…

M: Yeh Photo phir se (she remembered the envelope that she found in Shabds pocket)

Part 6

Shabd looked at Soni regretfully, and told her everything about Reema, a past which was sort of haunting..Soni looked at him horrified..

S: Shabd yeh ladki Mahi ko to kuch kareghe nahin..

Shabd looked away, even he didn't know what was to happen, what if Reema became too obsessive and took things far? Last time he was lucky she left him, but now she is back and it didn't sound like she was just going to leave, he gently whispered.

Sh: I don't think she'll do anything…

Soni let out a sigh of relief…. But Shabd hadn't finished…he added on yet…

Soni looked at him,
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S: Matlab! Mahi ko sab kuch bhaa..

Sh: Nahin…Please don't tell her anything..agar usko ye sab pata chalegha toh phir..

S: Agar kal kuch hojaye…. Ye Reema agar Mahi ko kuch karle..to phir??

Sh: Kuch nahin kareghe…karna se pehle who mujhse ek baar milleghe….

Back at the Sareen mansion later on, Mahi had done everything she possibly could, it was getting sort of dark, she sat on the sofa, waiting..and waiting for Shabd..he did phone her and tell her he'll be late..but she didn't feel to good about it, she wanted to see him now..

She turned on the telly and started flipping through channels, the house was empty apart from Mahi and Shabds siter, who Mahi felt didn't like her very much..

Mahi flicked through, until she came to a channel that was playing Keh raha hai..(from that dance thing..lol) Mahi stopped she smiled as she re collected those memories of her and Shabd dancing.

Instantly everything went dark, the tv switched off, Mahi sat up, she looked around,
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M: Yeh kya hua..lights ko..

She got up, she couldn't see a thing, but she new her bedroom quite well now, she made out where everything was..she muttered as she walked around slowly feeling everything..

M: Lights ko aaj jhaana tha, woh bhi jab koi ghar main nahi hai….

She got to the lights and tried to turn them on, but like she assumed; the lights were gone, it was silent and dark, Mahi felt a shudder but she ignored it. She started feeling around, to find the drawer where the candles were..

*************

Soni sat in her bedroom, pacing up and down again, was it right of her not to tell Mahi everything, her life could be in danger, she sat down on her bed, why was it always Mahi, can't she stay happy or is she always meant to be getting these life changing shocks in her life??

What if something did happen to Mahi because of Reema…Reema…she remembered what Shabd had told her about Reema…she shuddered…she looked up…pls save Mahi from any trouble she pleaded..

****************

Mahi had placed candles everywhere in the room, the room was full of a warm orangy glow, she sat down and smiled out her self, if Shabd was here he would have surely made this a romantic moment.. She looked around at the candles, the room was filled with smell of scents Vanilla, Strawberry..etc..

Mahi enjoyed it, Mahi suddenly noticed a shadow, a shadow that she thought had just moved, she looked to the other side if there was anything there, but it was empty..

Mahi roled her eyes, she was imaging things, she looked down to chck the time, suddenly the room was filled with the noise of something breaking, Mahi jumped, what the hell, she got up to see one off the vars in front her room was broken.. bits of china was scattered all over the floor, she bent down to pick a bit up, Ouch she gasped, one of the sharp edges had cut her finger, she looked down, she saw another shadow move, it looked like it had stepped inside her bedroom, Mahi was certain now that someone else was in the house… Could it be Shabds sister..

M: Kaun hai…bollo kaun hai..

It struck her, could be Shabd playing a joke

M: Dehko Shabd agr yea koi prank hai, then Fitte Mu, meri haath kaati hai,

She moved closer towards on the tables which had candles all over it, her intention was to get one of the candles..

M; Shabd sun rahe ho, dehkoo kitna dhook ra hai, aur kitna khoon behra hai..

--: Aur bhi behaghe…jab main tumme khatam karlonghi

Mahi's eyes widened, an unknown voice echoed in her ears, there was someone else in the room, she turned around..

M: KAU…

Before she could finish she screamed, a sharp knife was pointing right at her face, she couldn't make out who was holding it, a lady from the voice, a lady with long hair..Mahi screamed even more, the knife seemed to be getting closer and closer..

ok tha all was written by ouma.

ouma your FF was so good tha i really want to add a piece i hope u dont mind.

Part 7

suddenly she screamed- tum kaun ho aur mujhe kyum marna chati ho

person with knife tells her- kyun tumhe shabd ne batiya nahin?

M- kya baathiya still scared out of her mind

the person tells her- mein tumhe mardalongi kyunki tumne mujhse sab kuch cheenliya

M- kaun ho tum?

Person- reema

M- kaun reema???????

R- shabd.....

this mahi got really scared cuz she lifted the knife was comin at her. mahi moved away started running to get away from enemy. she hid behind shabd desk in his study. the person came by a few times n finally gave up. but mahi was too scared to move. she thought wat if she is still there.

a few hours later the lights suddenly came on in the study, it was shabd who turned on the lights.

S- Mahi Mahi Mahi

he callin 4 her since he couldnt find her ne where else he was scared cuz things scattered broken every where. he came by the desk n saw this scared girl silently weepin.

S- mahi yeh kya hua yahan aur tum itni gabrahi kyun ho?

M- seeing shabd she got up n gave him a hug a told him not to leave her alone like tha eva again.

S- i wont i promise

shabd look at n says- your bleeding hold on let me go get the first aid kit

M- get scared once again n say dont leave plz mat jao

S- mein kahin nahin jaa raha hoon woh kit yahi hai humare kamere mein.

(he had took her to their room)

M- teek hai

then she suddenly remembered tha reema thing. shabd about to help her clean her foot when she grabbed his hand

M- yeh reema kaun hai?

shabd shocked totally. imediatly thought that soni told her about reema.

S- tumhe reema ke baare me kisne baataya?

M- yeh mera sawal ka jwab nahin

Shabd looking as guilty as eva was bout to lie but then didnt- woh o ek model hai.

M- sirf ek model? woh to keh rahi thi ke mein usse sab kuch cheenliya aur issiliye woh mujhe mardena chathi hai. aur at the the she said your name.

shabd eyes eyes filled w/ anger at reema

he had to tell her everythingabou reemahe said sum thin he hadnt mention to soni.

S- mahi reema mmujhe se pyar nahin karti she's obssed w/ me. woh kise bhi hadh tak jaa sakti hai pechli baar mein bach gaya tha kyun ki kuch bana chathiti. woh ladki bahoot hi zyada ziddi hai. aur yahan ak ke jab usko ek diamond ka necklace ke liye us jewler dhamki di kyun woh dene ko razi hi nahin tha.

M- kya tum usse pyar karthe the?

S- nahin. tum hi mera pehla pyar ho aur akri bhi

they hug each other. the episode end there.

i hope u guys liked my part.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hii... thats so sweet of you to her Ouma.. But i think she's lil unactive!
Can you plz not make the 1st post too long.. its hard reading and scrolling down!

Thank You

Yana😳
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I think Ouma is a little bit busy with her family😊

But I really liked Part 7 it was really interesting👏

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Part 8-

shabd starts comin home b 4 dark. he feels its not rite to leave mahi at home lyk tha.
but he still feels tha mahi isnt safe. so one day he comes home and says...

S- mujhe lagta hai ke tumne aaj kal bahot hi tension leke ghoom rahi ho. issiliye meine socha hai ke hum donu kahin jaa rahe hai.
M- lekin aapka kaam aur mujhe koi tension nahin hai. waise bhi mein kahin nahin jaana jaati hoon.

now w/ a serious face

M- tum yeh sab isse liye kar rahe ho na?

shabd knowing wat she sayin but trys to lie

S - kis liye?
M- reema ki wajah se. dekho shabd agar usn aisi koi harqat ki to hum police ko karenge ya usse samjh yenge. shayad woh samajh jaye. aur waise be jab tum mere saath ho to kuch nahin ho sakte.
she starts to fiddle with his shirt button. n he wrapps his arms round her.

shabd understood wat she was sayin but still felt they should leave 4 a few days. so he convinces mahi n they go on the disney cruise from Key West, florida. Mahi had always wanted to go on the disney cruise(the only place i could think of since disney world is only 2.5 hours aways.)

on the cruise they spent time lost in each other they hardly noticed any thing.
they went snorkling together they were enjoying every momment of their trip one day when they were going to for midnite swim in the pool. shabd says u wait here i go get your shirley temple drink.

M- kehti hai teek hai lekin jaldi ana.
S- smiles n says teek hai
n he leaves

tab aachank koi mahi ke peeche aatha hai aur usse doobne ki koshish karte hai. mahi ne usse push kiya aur jaldi se bahar aajati hai.

tab usse yaad aaya reema ke bare mein. she looked at reema n remembered she is the mahi ran into while she was shoppin.

M- tum kyun mere peeche padi ho
R- kyunki tumne mujhse mere shabd cheenliya
M- woh tumse pyar nahin karta
R- usse mujhse pyar karna he hoga
M- u cant force him to lyk u
R- woh mujhse pyar karta..

meanwhile- shabd is gettin drinks n the bartender gives shabd a letter. he says he'll read it later.

shabd goes back to the pool.
S- Mahi yeh lo tumhara drink

Mahi turns to look at him then back at the pool but now reema was no where in site.


*** how will mahi react at reema's statement the one where reema says he did love reema. and wat was written in the letter wait for Part 9***
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Posted: 18 years ago
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like wow madd lot! great job 😃
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hey...this soo good..waiting for part9...lol.well done 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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may b tommorow i'll continue on ur request
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg u r awesommmmmmmmmmmmm i love it 😛
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Originally posted by: miss gill

omg u r awesommmmmmmmmmmmm i love it 😛

thank u

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Part 9

Mahi is now scared so bad, shabd says tum itni sacared kyun ho.

M- woh yahaan bhi agayi
S- Kaun? (had a feeling she was talkin about reema)
M- Reema
S- usne is baar kya kiya.
M- is baar mujhe woh doobane ki koshish ki lekin bhar aagayi.

Shabd gets scared too thinking she had followed them here. he tells himself how could i have under estimated her. he mahi back to there room.

Mahi hadn't told shabd tha reema said tha shabd use to lyk her.

M (to herself)- shabd ne mujhse jhoot kyun bola ke woh reema se pyar karta tha. ussne yeh baat chuppayi kyun?

shabd sits down b side her n ruffles her hair

M (to herself)- nahin mein istara nahin poochogi ke agar woh karta tha ke nahin mein kuch aur tareeke se baatha karti hoon.

they both slept in each others arms

around 3 o clock shabd got up since he thirsty while going bac to bed he saw the letter. on the letter once again was written my shabd:
mere pyar shabd tumhe kya laga ke tum yahaan aajoge tho mein tumhara peecha chodogikya? tum kitne bade fool ho.
shabd aaj nahin tho kal tumhe waapaas mere paas aaoge, aur uss mahi ko tumhe se door jana hi padega whether u lyk it or not.. i'm back...

tumhari pyari,
reema
PS. i love u

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