Mistake!! AK story!! Part 53 END...pg 71 - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago

ThanQ

I liked ur siggy..the girl resembles Sridevi, actress...I never watched the show but heard a lot as it's rocking....I thot it's historic but it looks like social and present generation? Is it abt the historical figures or something about a new love with similar names?

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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing really cute loved it magnificent
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww sweeeet prt....finally nanina bcame goodie goodie
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing really cute loved it magnificent

ThanQ

Originally posted by: me_iq

awww sweeeet prt....finally nanina bcame goodie goodie

yuh Naina is goodie..let's see how goodie and till when😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
ohh maaa dunt say like tht sis.....meray angad aur kripa ka kya hogaaa 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

ohh maaa dunt say like tht sis.....meray angad aur kripa ka kya hogaaa 😉

nothing ...atleast not like in KYPH...it's horrible seperation...AK in this ff already crossed that trauma😛

Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: vallanki

nothing ...atleast not like in KYPH...it's horrible seperation...AK in this ff already crossed that trauma😛

ohk coool...thx atleast 4 reassuring😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

sweet part.angad is adorable

ThanQ deeya! yes, my Angad is adorable as he got his adorable love back to him😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part: 45

Naina stopped Angad and Kripa from going back to their house. "purson karwa chaut hai, Angad! Kripa ko yahin rehney do. Uski yeh pehla karwa chaut hai. Humarey saat manayegi."

Kripa wondered for her affection "Mom! Mein yahin rahoongi. Actually I was thinking to come back that day. Acha huva aap hi poochli thi. Anittah bhi rahey toh kitna acha hota."

"Wo wahin honeymoon mein vrat rakhney ki vada ki ti. Mein toh pehley hi uski gift dedi. Kya karein Raj toh honeymoon date post karna nahin chahta tha."
Kripa meaningfully looked at Angad and blushed at his naughty expressions.

As soon as Naina left, Angad pulled Kripa close from behind "Abb akal agaya Raj ko bhi. Bechara mere saat saat wo bhi bachelor jindagi gujara tha." Kripa chuckled and hit his head playfully with hers "sab tumhara jaisey nahin hotey." Angad rubbed his nose to her neck as tickling her "your long waiting wish is going to be fulfilled. Maango kya chahiye tumhari pehli karva chaut per." Kripa turned to him hanging her hands around his neck "mera pehla karva chaut toh tumhara aangan mein ho chuki thi. Aur main tumhari liye hi vrat bhi rakhi thi. Haan, yeh such tha ki mein tumhari naam lekar vrat shuru nahin ki thi magar pura din tumhara khayal hi raha tha. Aur mera vrat tuhi toh thoda tha. I was very angry with you but I couldn't realise that was the last karva chaut I could observe. I'm so lucky to have you now. My dream came true. Aur gift ki baat rehney do. First time I got a beautiful gift from you, this time I want to wait for some time. Pehley pura dil bhar pyar karney do." She rested her head on his chest and circled his shoulders. Angad kissed her forehead and nose. Both felt the warmth and satisfaction in each other's arms.

Naina forced Angad to stay back in Khanna house and silently admitted Sur in nearby school. She shred tears when Angad asked for explanation. "Iss buadapey mein yeh bhi nahin kar sakti mein. Meri bachein badey hogaye hai aur apney jindagiyan sambhalney chal padey. Mein meri poti per bhi apna haq nahin jama sakti. Kya kasur thi meri aisi jindagi diye they Bhagwan ne." Angad startled and gulped at her tears. He looked helplessly at Kripa who chuckled at his expressions. That night Angad showed his disappointment on Kripa. Kripa pampered him for an hour explaining him his duty to make his parents happy at old age. She promised him to go to their love den every week. That night Angad tasted the different corner of Kripa's love.

Kripa woke up early and got ready in red silk sari with crushed mustard yellow color border with appliqu and embroidery all over the sari with matching ruby jewelry. She turned her hair into French bun and decorated with flowers and gold chains. Angad caught Kripa alone in Devyani's prayer room "kya kar rahi hai itni subah?" Kripa smiled sweetly "subah? Pata hai time kya huva? 8:30!! Aaj vrat hai Pati Dev! Jaldi sey nahan kar aajayiye aur humey aapkay seva karney ki mouka de." Angad grinned at Kripa's dramatic talk "mera seva toh kal raat hi kardi thi na!!" Kripa blushed "aaj puja ke din aisey baat nahin karti." She about to leave and he pulled her in his arms. She was struggling to release from his arms "vrat mere liye hi haina? Mera kushi tumhari fasting mein nahin hain mera dil bharney mein hai, uss tarah jiss tarah kal raat." Kripa shut his mouth "chup, dadi sunlengi. Kuch toh sharam karo. Tumhara prem puja baad mein, pehla meri help karo, raat tak fasting reh sakoon." Angad gave a quick peck on her cheek "you will and I break your fasting just like first time along with your gift." Kripa made big eyes and he left smiling meaningfully. Kripa blushed in her mind and immersed in her work.

Naina invited her kitty party friends also along with Gayatri, Misthy for the vrat and evening ceremony. Dadi arranged for puja essentials as her routine. Kripa cooked with her own hands for the break of fasting. She took her thali with all essentials and walked onto terrace. Gayatri, Naina, Misthy and Kripa were waiting for moon to come out. Suryaban, Dilip, Shabbir and Angad stood beside them waiting to finish the custom. Dadi got ready with her part of ceremony.

Slowly the moon came out of the winter clouds. Everyone lit the lamp and looked the moon through the sieve. All husbands moved in front of their respective wives. All women saw them through the sieve to fulfill the custom. They religiously sprinkled water on their respective husband's feet, prayed with flowers. They touched the feet and all men gave the water to the women and broke the fasting. The men fed the sweets and hugged their wives in their own styles.

Angad bit his lips mischievously and winked at Kripa. Kripa warned him with her eyes for not carrying away with his mischief. Angad put one red velvet box. Kripa opened it as Angad held the thali. There was a set of ear chains, and a tikka with diamond stones. "Yeh bahar dikhaney ke liye. Andar ki gift kuch aur hai. Dinner ke baad dedoonga." Kripa blushed and shook her head and ran into the house. Angad laughed proudly for his own momentous romance.

Everyone started having dinner. Sur was busy with the guest kids and Kripa with others. Misthy announced her pregnancy and everyone congratulated her. Angad raised his eyebrow at Kripa as if questioning her for her turn. Kripa gave sharp looks and escaped from his sight. He took some chances to touch her and whisper about his desire. Kripa all the time escaped from him by nudging in his stomach and warning not to embarrass her in front of guests.

It was 11 in the night when everyone left Khanna house. Gayatri took Sur to her house as she had some short break from school. Kripa entered her bedroom after finishing the final touches of winding up the event.

Angad was flipping pages in a magazine and grinned at Kripa. Kripa smiled as greeting him and walked to the dresser to remove her make-up. Angad hugged her from behind "You were tired, relax. Let me take out everything." Kripa sighed with relief and leaned back to Angad. Angad slowly removed her sari first. He turned her and kissed her throat and upper chest. He slowly moved to her cleavage and unbuttoned her blouse. Kripa now realised his interest in removing her make-up and blushed. She posed as a sculpture allowing him to remove everything that was not part of her body. He kissed wherever he wanted while doing his job. Kripa moaned while his kisses instigating her to possess him. She pressed his head running her fingers in his hair.He stopped her to move from her pose "let me enjoy, Sweety! Your work is just allowing me to do my job, don't get in the way." Kripa giggled and arched by stretching her hands up in the air. By that time she was just left with her own body. He removed his clothes and snuggled her groaning with victory. She giggled for his warm breath in her neck curve "can I touch you now with my own hands?"

Angad licked her throat "yes, darling!" She circled her hands around his neck "I'm so lucky to have this romantic husband." He kissed her lips groaning as he was agreeing with her. He lifted her to the bed "don't let me sleep tonight" whispered in her ear as immersing in her embrace. Kripa boxed his ear "it's so difficult to wake you up after you are done." Angad moaned "it's not my fault. Tum nasha aisi deti hai." Kripa proudly smiled as melting in his arms.

Six months passed in their beautiful, lovely, understanding family life. Naina cleverly could manage to convince Angad to stay back in her house. Sur was enjoying her school by bringing atleast one exciting story for the day. Dadi was enjoying her daily pujas with Kripa's devotional songs. Angad was growing more romantic and was calling Kripa from office every other minute just to hear her voice. He could manage to excuse himself for those 'energy charging calls' while he was in the middle of important meeting with his clients too. He never forgot to call her while driving home for which Kripa got used to spare her time as his calls were lasting half an hour to one hour. Sur took her share of their night time for her bed time stories by her beloved 'papa'. Angad was always seeking help from Kripa but in vein. Kripa teased him "ek bachi sey hi itna irritate horaha hai, aur doosara hogaya toh?" Angad grinned "yeh sab irritation wo doosara bacha ke liye hi hai, my darling!!" Kripa blushed as his lips managed to take its routine nip on her lips.

One fine morning Misthy delivered a baby boy and invited Khanna family for the naming ceremony of the boy two weeks later. Angad asked Kripa to buy something for the boy and Naina suggested for a baby keepsake book. Naina dropped Kripa for shopping on the way of her kitty party meeting. While Kripa was buying some educational books for Sur too in Walden Book House she came across Harshini and Aaliyah together.

Kripa wondered to see them "Hi, Harshini! Hi, Aaliyah! How are you? I was thinking you must have left for America!!" Harshini and Aaliyah exchanged looks and sarcastically smiled at her. "Why are you thinking of us? Itna time kahan tha tumhari paas? Kyon Angad bhi chod diya tumhey?" Aaliyah arrogantly taunted her as Harshini chuckled. Kripa felt embarrassed for their sarcasm but didn't change cheer from her face.

She noticed both having bulged belly's and couldn't control her happiness. "Aailyah! Harshini! Congratulations! I'm very happy for you both." She innocently greeted them. They gave sharp looks at her without responding to her greetings. Kripa's face fallen as realised her mistake by talking to them.

She turned to leave and Damini entered there. "Kya Aaliya! Kya karrahey hai aap donon? Did you get the baby keepsake book that you were searching for?" Damini's eyes fell on Kripa before Aaliyah answered her. She gulped with dirty looks as Kripa greeted her for curtsey. Three women turned to walk out of the store silently. Prithvi approached them and his face lit on seeing Kripa.

"Hi, Kripa! How are you?"Prithvi greeted her when Kripa was hesitating to greet him as she already had bitter response from the three women. Kripa smiled and shook her head as she was fine. "Congrats!" she gathered courage and he blushed, "thanQ, hope you are doing fine too." Kripa answered in the affirmative with eyes.

"How is Sur?" his voice cracked with heavy tone. Kripa filled tears "theek hai. Going to school." Prithvi shook his head "convey my wishes to her. I'm missing her." Kripa felt embarrassed "Jo huva tha wo bhul jaaney sey humarey jindagiyan aagey budh raha hai, Kripa! I'm happy now. Such much ek pita ban raha hoon. Abb sur ki bahut yaad arahi hai. Whatever I did to you was done out of mind. It was really good decision that we were separated. Mein bahut kush hoon." Kripa smiled faintly "good, Prithvi! I'm happy for you." Prithvi bid bye and left as the three women were feeling out of place.

Kripa memorized whatever happened a while ago and bought her stuff and headed home. Angad was home and relaxing on the bed along with Sur. Sur was explaining whatever she did the whole day in the school as sitting on his tummy. Kripa kissed Sur and caressed her head and walked to the closet to change into casuals.

Angad sighed and dramatically commented "khaas mein bhi ek minute ke liye Sur ban jaata." Kripa giggled as stood facing the closet and gave side glance to him. She picked her clothes and walked to the bed. Angad grinned expecting her kiss to him. She ran her tongue to outline her lips and walked into bathroom giving naughty looks at Angad from corner of eyes. Angad moved Sur aside and ran to her way. He moved his mouth biting inside lips and looked at her from corner of eyes. Kripa blushed and showed Sur with her eyes. Angad gestured to move into bathroom and he stepped inside. Kripa folded her left hand and rubbed back of ear with right forefinger as rolling her tongue inside mouth.

Angad grinned and pulled her inside and closed the door. "Angad! kya kar rahey ho? Sur hai bahar. Din pe din romantic aur naughty hotey jaa raha hai. Chodo mujhey, bahut kaam padi hai." She whispered as trying to release herself from his hands. Angad circled her "how can I release you so easily? Can I help you change your clothes?" Kripa blushed and chuckled "you need an excuse, that's all. Waisey itni jaldi ghar kyon aaya tha?"

"I missed you" He dropped her sari and unbuttoning hooks of blouse. She looked into his passionate eyes with her half closed eyes. Angad understood her positive gesture and pressed closer. He nibbled her swellings and bit her tips. "Don't be so wild, Angad!" she muttered under moan and pressed his head to her chest. He moved his hands to her hips and slowly savored her completely.

Both ended on bath tub edge. Kripa was in his lap circling her legs around him. She whispered adorably "Wild lover!" after he satisfied loving her as she shook his head. He opened his eyes and kissed her lips "I become wild when I don't see you for more than my specific time. I couldn't talk to you for a while. I didn't get you on the mobile phone too. You were out for shopping. Waisey kya kharida tha itni deir tak?" His hands were caressing her back and she tracing his lips.

She hesitated for a moment and looked into his eyes "wo aaj mein..mein..Harshini, Aaliyah sey mili thi." She paused and he twisted his eyebrows. He kissed her hands and pulled her close and softly enquired "kuch kaha tha?" Kripa moved her head sideways "kuch nahin". She about to get up and he stopped her "stay for some more time. Batao, kya huva tha?"

She ran fingers on his cheeks "wo donon pregnant hai. Shayad char paanch mahina hongey. They are still upset with me. Prithvi bhi aya tha. Bahut badal gaya hai. He was very polite with me. He is feeling guilty and apologised too. He asked for Sur. Bus wahi huva tha." Angad fell in thoughts and rubbing her ear lobes. Kripa thought he was upset. She caressed his nose with hers "kiss soch mein padgaya hai?" Angad tied his lips and shook his head and sighed. "Kuch nahin, tum kab preggy hogi?" he caressed her bare stomach. He softly pressed her abdomen and kissed her naval. He kissed her tips and lips.

"Kapadey mein pehnadoon?" he asked in her mouth while rubbing her tongue with his. Kripa shyly shook her head and hid her face in his right curve of neck. He pressed his head to her cheek "I love you, Kripa! Keep your phone on or call me when I couldn't reach you. Tumhey toh pata hai na mera call timings? I missed you a lot" Kripa shook her head as agreeing. He put her clothes one by one pampering her with his nips and kisses.
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww cute part
and angad loves her alot
"kaash mein bhi ek minute ke liye Sur ban jaata" that was funny 😆


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~Sana~

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