Pyaar Mein Twist- Part 6 pg.14 --NEW - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

damn this fanfic is like sooooooooooo funny😆

He wan't wearing any clothes😆

I am totally fallin down my chair please continue soon....you could see his butt! Waahahahhahahahhaahhaah😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 mindblowing awesome please conti soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you everyone.. will continue on Sunday!!
thnxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushiyana

thank you everyone.. will continue on Sunday!!
thnxx

Awesome☺️

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
awesome fan fic jaanu!!! shabd and mahi soo cute couple!! amazing fan fic!!! keep it up!!! 👏 😳 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
wow.. excellent FF didi....
keep it up!!
cant wait for more....😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
👏👏👏WOW..I luved it! Continue  soon please!! Shabd in a apron only!!!😳😳

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~

👏👏👏WOW..I luved it! Continue  soon please!! Shabd in a apron only!!!😳😳

Luv ya..

Ouma

😆

PLease continue soon I wanna read more.....

Only a apron😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2: Mahi goes with Jeet on Lunch

The next morning, after Shabd and Mahi had a adorable moment of their 1st anniversary dinner togather. Shabd woke up early in the morning at 6am, took a shower and left for work. He didn't even bother waking up Mahi. Mahi woke up at 11am and saw that Shabd left for work. She said, "to herself, kamaal hai..

Shabd mujhe wake bhi nahi kiya..." So she gets up and goes and takes a shower and brush her teeth, Shabd calls her cell phone, and left a messege. Mahi comes out after half and hour and sees her cell vibrating. She puts a hot red sari on...

(Here is a pix of her red sari):


and she goes downstairs, and calls Mohit (servant) and says, " please mera khaana laago table paar." She sits down and eats garam garam aloo gobi parathas and chai. 

After she was done eating, she left to work (she works at Fashion Clothes Design Store).

It was 1pm already... Mahi calls Shabd at work to ask him if he wanted to have lunch togather... Shabd picks up the phone and says Mahi im in a urgent meeting, please call later, mujhe uub phone please muut karna.. mein bahut busy hu! Mahi holds the phone next to ears and slowly drops it. She says... maine sirf lunch kiele phone kiya tha.... uusko kya hua...?

(Jeet walks into the story)

Then after 2 hours later.. Jeet calls her and asking, " How are you..?" Mahi says im doing great (she said it moody sound). Jeets asks, why are you sounding sad..? Mahi replies, nothing, just too much work. Then Jeet says, Do want to have lunch now..? im starving... Mahi says, sure.... Jeets says I'll meet you at French Resturant in twenty minutes. Mahi says Ok....


will continue tomorrow or next Sunday!!
Hope you like it so far.......
Edited by Khushiyana - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww Jeet so sweet☺️ 

I wonder if he has a weird reason behind this😆

Shabd give some more time to your wife !😛