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Posted: 18 years ago
Great promo!

cont soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok guys in a couple hours it should be up! its reallllllllllllllly long though! just telling u guys in advance!!
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
that was sooo funny 😆 😆
i liked the way each pair did something different
it was great
👏


thanks soooo much!

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

oh godd! this was very funnnyyy!!
loved angad and kripa's mishap!!
loved josh!!
loved prem for falling of stage!!
loved kayva for picking up anjali!
and loved neev for kissing prachi on the cheeK!
it was tooo cute!!!!

my graduation compared to this was lame!!! 😆


lol thanks hun!! glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

omg wow!
This part was awesome!! 👏
just loved it!!
It was funny and emotional at the same time in a way..
Great part!! 👏
Can't wait till the next part.. 😊


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

ohhhhhhh cool and cute graduation part. can't wait till their marriage continue soon. 👏 👏 👏


hehe thanks!!!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

haha kamlesh patel
lol patel pride!!

love the crazy things that the couples did, my graduation was just a little different, of course we had a stripper too. great time tho

awwww i love how all the girls started crying and the guyz were comforting them, so cute


great part continue soon

congrats
how was ur graduation?

ishuu<33


lol my graduation was so boring that i spent most of it thinking about how funny it would be if this happened or that happened which explains why so many mishaps occured in their graduation!! lol did u really have a stripper LMAO i would love to c my parents expressions if someone did that LMAO!


thanks sooo much!!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part


___________
sana


thanks a bunch!!

Originally posted by: erier101

ROFLMAO!!! OMGGGG THAT PART WAS SUPERB!! i lovedd it soo much!! u have no idea!! lmao!! i can totally imagine the whole thing in my head.. lmao.. memorableee man.. i swear, i have to do something about my graduation, from our rehearsals its so boringgg i need to come up with a plan to spice it up 😉 😆


thanks a lot!!! lol yea my graduation was soo boring and it started off horrible because i was soo close to being late that i ran out the car cuz of traffic and just ran to northwestern cuz thats where they held it and yea that was no fun and i was so hot in that gym!

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

my favorite parts were all the bloopers made my angad-kripa, neev-prachi, kavya-anjali and of course josh! i was laughing and it was kinda hard to control since my dad is here but somehow i managed, gosh i would love to go to a graduation like that, anyways update soon, it was hilarious and yet very cute 😳


lol thats sooo much!!! lol i would love to go to a grad like that too it would be totally memorable!!

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

that was fab!!! do continue oson...I jsut wonder if that could happen in real!! lolz....


lol ohh i wish too loL!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. great part. cont soon.


thanks soo much

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome dear take your time to write 👏 👏


thanks hun and sorry for delay!

Originally posted by: angel_tia

i am sure no ones graduation day wud be sooo eventful!!!!!i was clutching onto my chair leat i fall!!!!!!luvvd the kamlesh bit!!!!it was soo embarassing!even luvvd the last part wer all the gals cry!!!!!!!!i luvv ur story!it is a fairy tale type!!!!and its better that way!!!!!


LMAO thanks hun! a girl can only dream to have a grad like that lol!! lol thanks huN!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

🤣 omg laughing my head off this part was tooo funnyyy!!! hw was ur graduation btw? lol if it was anything like this 😆 😆 😆 lol it was a great part, do continue when u can 👏


lol thanks!! mine was sooo boring! i had to run like 5 blocks there because i was about to get late and by the time i got there i saw my dad and uncle driving by laughing at me cuz i ran for no reason since we got there at the same time!!

Originally posted by: mansi1219

omg omg!!! sry.. i was busy wit moving so wasnt on much... just read the alst few parts!!! OMG!!! the graduation was HILARIOUS!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!! i was seriously laughing out loud... especially the prem one.. omg.. how do u come up wit something diff. for everyone.. just awesome! its soo cute!!! it made me remember my graduation... it was awesome as well!! well mishaps didnt happen.. 😆 but it was awesome! neway... i cant wait for u to cont. cuz i def. loved it!

luv mansi


thanks soo much!! lol i came up with it during my highschool graduation! IT WAS JUST THAT BORING!

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

Ok tht was the most hillarious part i have ever read..thanks so much.. 😃


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: mizz_sabah

oOo i just read tha last few parts and they are amazing! The Graduation is hilarious! Hehe Please cONTINUEE


thats a lot!!

Originally posted by: sameira-90

awsome part 👏
continue soon


thanks!!

Originally posted by: za7n4b

a really intresting part cant wait for he next bit


thanks!!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

continuee soonn
2nd comment yeahhh!!


lol thanks!

Originally posted by: geeri

hey really good fan fiction. wht grade r u u in? just want to now cause u said u r graduating.


im going to be a freshman in college! thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: pmrockz

NEW READER!!!

Hey i am a new reader I just Finished reading ur ff, There was REALLY FUNNY🤣(and sad 😭) Parts.

At the funny parts i had to keep my self from laughing, or i'd wake my parents up. (I read it at like....... Midnight) But i woke them up only to hear yells "STOP LAUGHING! WE ARE TRYING TO SLEEP HERE!!!" or " WHATS SO FUNNY??"
😆
Cont soon


lol thanks a lot hun glad u liked it!! LMAO yea i do that all the time and my parents come in my room like GO TO BED AND STOP LAUGHING lol!

Originally posted by: pari213

loved it... 👏 👏 👏


thanks!

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

😆 😆 😆
wow dat was awesum!!!!
and extremely funi lol
keep it up!!
😃


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: sabzz

heyyyyy.....

i am back !!!

my examz were going on thats y i didt came on net and i dit read you few f-f parts !!!

but i read all of the parts on 4th june(when my examz were over) and they all were amazing ..... !!!
👏 👏
you r not feeling well i hope u get well soon ... i will pray!! 😊

continue soon when u get well !!

and sorry for commenting late as i was tired giving paperz !! 😛


Thanks a bunch!! hope ur exams went well! yea i hope i get better soon too so i can start writing more!!

Originally posted by: bubble gum

hey.. im a new reader!! ive been readin ur ff but just caught up wid it! i must say u write really welll! ur too good nd just soo creative!i lik ur ideas of romance nd all tht.. its sooo cute!!!!!!!!! 😳 esp tht basket ball game thingy!aww tht was soooo cute nd it was sooo osm!u so totally rock!btw how old r u??nd plz continue soon! caz ur ff is just soooooooooo cool! 😛 ur a great writer nd keep writin nd it really doesnt luk lik ur 1st ff.. plz continue soon!


thanks soo much!! awww ur too sweet! im 18! lol well it happens to be my first!

Originally posted by: sabye

Loved it. I think its so cute how the pairs act.Im happy theres no more pobs in there lives. 😊


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: cute Aleesha

i read all ur updates and i really loved it.
You r a very good writer Numera. I m in love with ur fanfic 👏


thanks soo much!! glad u like it!! 😊

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great promo. hopefullly u can cont 2day.


thanks a lot!! well supposedly its already tomorrow but yea...

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 promo continue soon

___________
sana


thanks!!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

omg can't wait

of course girls will beat them

hope u can cont.
ishuu


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

wow nice promo..
can't wait to read the whole part 😊


thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

oh man!!
i really wanted to read one more part before i leave to india!! 😭
anyways yeaa so i going tomorrow and i will read ur fan fic and comment on it when i come back in aug! 😃


aww sorry about that!! have fun in india!!

Originally posted by: Krazy_Me

very nice story. Im going to vote u for the best multi couple story 😊


thanks a lot hun!😊


thanks soo much

Originally posted by: pmrockz

Great promo!

cont soon 😳


thanks!

Originally posted by: angel_tia

ok numera
mez waiting!!!!!!!!!


aww sorry about the delay!!


thanks and sorry for delay!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

interesting and exciting promo


thanks a lot!

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ok really sorry about the delay!! ive been so busy and then getting sick, anyways part will be up in like 5 minutes!


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Posted: 18 years ago
okie!!! post it soon!! oh nd 5 mins r over 12 hours ago! 😆 nd gt thm married soon!! nd i luved d promo!👏 👏
Edited by bubble gum - 18 years ago
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Chapter 41

After their graduation is complete, the wedding preparations are now in full swing. The women of both households are going crazy and with them are their present and future husbands. Naina and Gayatri are busy stressing about minor details, like hall arrangements, food, guest lists, etc. They have gotten Dilip and Surya to book a big hall for the shaadi. For now, their first celebration for the shaadi is the sangeet, which is coming up. The girls have been busy shopping with their grooms, looking for saris, lenghas, and sherwanis. The guys feel so bored, being dragged to all these clothing and jewelry stores. It is exhausting. In any case, the girls eventually pick out their outfits for each occasion and matching outfits for the guys as well. Soon enough the days for celebration arrive, starting with the sangeet.

The sangeet is to be held at the Sharma House, since the engagement was held at the Khanna House. The Sharma House is decorated quite lavishly with Gayatri and Surya supervising the arrangements. The lights outline the outside of the entire house. There are lights everywhere including candles and chandeliers. There are two tents set up on either end of the house and big area in between for dances. There is a stage decorated as well. Now since this wedding is of multiple couples and there is no definite boys and girls side, the guests would be divided into boys against girls.

The girls get ready, while the boys lollygag until the last minute to get ready. The girls blow away the boys in their very hot outfits. Kripa wears a light blue lengha with heavy silver embroidery on the lengha, with a deeply cut back. Anjali wears a light green lengha with a wide neckline exposing her collar bones. Prachi wears a light purple lengha with a deep back and a lace tie at the top. Angad wears a dark blue shirt with a black suit. Kavya wears a dark green shirt with a black suit. Neev wears a dark purple shirt with a black suit. The contrasts of the pairs made them all look absolutely perfect together.

As soon as the guests arrive they evenly distribute themselves either with the boys' side or the girls' side. Oh and aunties dancing doesn't count for either side because their random dance moves honestly doesn't score anyone points. Dilip and Surya come in the center and announce, "Thank you all for coming to the sangeet of our children! Now we are going to have all three couples compete with each other, then the girls vs. the boys!!! First will be Neev and Prachi!! Then Kavya and Anjali!! And last but not least Angad and Kripa!! So everyone enjoy and have a good time!!"

Neev and Prachi both get up reluctantly because it's pretty awkward going first. They go back stage and are really jittery. There is a spotlight that hits the stage while the song plays from Ta Ra Rum Pum.

Chica chica chica that's my chica girl
Ain't nobody that be going better than my chica girl
Chica chica chica that's my chica girl
Ain't nobody that be going better than my chica girl
The DJ starts singing as Neev and Prachi make their way to the stage.
Tum Hi Tum Ho Jo Raaho Mein
Tum Hi Tum Ho Nigaaho Mein
Kis Din Toh Mere Dil Ko Khona Hi Tha
Tumhe Dekha, Tumhe Chaaha, Tumhe Dhunda, Tumhe Paaya
Tumhe Paake Huwa Hai Jo Woh Hona Hi Tha
Chalo Abb Jo Bhi Ho, Tum Haa Yaa Naa Kaho
Mere Dil Mein Tum Hi Tum Ho
Ab Toh Forever
Neev starts singing while circling around Prachi. Prachi blushes seeing the
look in his eyes. Prachi starts walking away while he keeps following her like a total stalker. While just flips her hair with attitude and keeps walking away.
Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam, Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam
Neev gets irritated by her attitude and pulls her close to himself. Prachi frees herself from his tight grip and then points towards him while dancing like she is warning him.
Kabhi Koshish Bhi Mat Karana Mujhe Paane Ki
Mujhe Na Paa Sakoge Tum
Banaake Surat Ghumoge Tum Deewaane Ki
Kahi Pe Na Rahoge Tum
Prachi dances in front of him a little seductively, while Neev's mouth just seems to drop looking at her this way for the first time. Prachi was always the more conservative type, yet right now she is anything but conservative.
Chalo Abb Jo Bhi Ho, Tum Haa Yaa Naa Kaho
Mere Dil Mein Tum Hi Tum Ho
Ab Toh Forever
Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam, Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam
Neev shrugs his shoulders and continues to stalk his Prachi like a love
sick puppy.
Bahot Hai Chaahanewaale Mere Duniya Mein
Tumhe Dekhu Toh Kyun Dekhu
Jamin Aur Aasamaan Mein Faasale Jitane Hai
Samajha Lo Dur Utani Hoon
Prachi flips her hair and points to all the people that like her then looks at Neev up and down in an arrogant manner as if saying "I'm too good for you"
Chalo Abb Jo Bhi Ho, Tum Haa Yaa Naa Kaho
Mere Dil Mein Tum Hi Tum Ho
Abb Toh Forever
Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam, Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam
Neev rolls his eyes at Prachi and sighs looking at how snobbish she is acting. Neev finds Prachi's behavior rather amusing, enough to make Neev laugh out loud watching her like this for the first time.
Tum Hi Tum Ho Jo Raaho Mein
Tum Hi Tum Ho Nigaaho Mein
Kis Din Toh Mere Dil Ko Khona Hi Tha
Tumhe Dekha, Tumhe Chaaha, Tumhe Dhunda, Tumhe Paaya
Tumhe Paake Huwa Hai Jo Woh Hona Hi Tha
Chalo Abb Jo Bhi Ho, Tum Haa Yaa Naa Kaho
Mere Dil Mein Tum Hi Tum Ho
Abb Toh Forever
Neev pulls Prachi close to himself and twirls her into his arms. He moves his face closer to Prachi with every word. Prachi just looks at him really shocked.
Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam, Bring It On....
Jaana Abb Toh Forever, Bring It On....
Ab Forever Sanam
Neev keeps spinning Prachi over and over until the end of the song. The only thing that is keeping Prachi from falling on the ground is Neev's strong grip and Prachi holding onto his neck with her eyes closed.

Prachi then opens her eyes to see Neev so close to herself and freaks out! She starts screaming, which causes Neev to let go because of the shock from her outburst. Prachi falls flat on her butt while everyone laughs at their silly behavior. Prachi turns red from embarrassment. Neev scoops her up in his arms and carries her off stage, then gently places her on the ground. Prachi feels like everyone is watching them, which is making her really conscious. Then Kavya and Anjali make their way towards the stage confidently to dance and sing to from Kaal.

O mahiyaa O mahiyaa O mahiyaa O mahiyaa
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
Some girls come on stage to serve as backup dancers and they sing. Anjali and Kavya make their way on stage.
O aaja mahi dhunde yeh ankhiyan
Tak tak rava hai main thakia
Jogan banke pal pal main tarsu
Mil jao tum mil jaye duniya
Ho 0 0 0
Anjali starts singing and dancing to the beat. She keeps staring at Kavya
while singing with passion in her eyes and a smile on her face.
Tu hi deewangi tu hi awaargi
Rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi..
Kavya sings with passion as he looks into Anjali's eyes longingly.
He notices the same passion in her eyes.
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Anjali and Kavya both start dancing while Anjali sings facing Kavya.
Kavya smiles naughtily thinking about the lyrics and begins to roll his
tongue in his mouth. Anjali notices and when she gets a chance, she
smacks his arm because of his inappropriate thoughts.
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
The back up dancers sing while Kavya spins Anjali closer to his body and
sways with her passionately to the rhythm.
O maahiya O maahiya O maahiya
O maula mera dil na toote
Maula mera pyar na roothe
Maula meri preet na choote
Ishq mera faryad lagaye
Kayva sits on the ground while folding his hands in front of Anjali while
singing the lines as if begging her.
Maula mujhe kutch na suhaye
Maula sudh budh ud jaye
Maula hothon pe duaaye
Ishq mera faryad lagaye
Anjali looks at the audience and turns red seeing Kavya on the
ground. Anjali pulls at Kavya's ear and makes him stand since he is
completely embarrassing her.
Oo ruh ki tajgi husn ki sadgi
Rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi
Kavya twirls her into his arms roughly as a consequence for yanking
at his ear.
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Anjali whispers to Kavya in order to snap him out of his trance.
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
Kavya finally releases her when he hears the back up dancers singing.
Alla yeh barse ankhiyan
Alla roshan kar duniya
Alla daman main ho khushiyan
Hai wari main tujhpe jaoo
Kavya looks deeply into Anjali's gorgeous eyes and looks at her
lovingly. Anjali blushes seeing his intense stare.
Hai alla mera deewanapan
Alla ho gayi bairagan
Alla mil jaye ranjan
Tere dar se khali na jao
Anjali goes behind Kavya and holds onto his chest while swaying to
the music and sings to him lovingly.
Ho tu hi deewangi tu hi awaargi
Rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi
Kavya pulls her from behind and traps her in his arms. He nuzzles into
her neck as he sings.
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Tauba tauba ishq main kariya
Anjali sings while being wrapped in his embrace and swaying with
the music.
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
Feel the fire my desire take me higher soniye
Your my pleasure only treasure you forever Soniye
The backup dancers continue to sing, making the couple feel even more
passion for one another.
Tauba tauba tauba tauba
Feel the fire, Tauba tauba, My desire
Tauba tauba tauba tauba
Kavya twirls Anjali one last time and as soon as Anjali's body collides with this the song comes to an end. Anjali starts struggling to get free from his grip, but Kavya seems to be lost in her.

Anjali gets annoyed by Kavya because everyone is staring at the couple and is fully aware of Anjali's attempts to get free. They are all silently giggling. Anjali then stomps on his foot and walks away while Kavya falls to the ground holding his foot, then eventually limping off stage. Well now its Angad and Kripa's turn to light up the stage so they make their way towards the stage to perform to from Dhoom 2.

Ohhh Baby Ohhh Baby Ohhh Baby
Ohhh Baby Ohhh Baby Ohhh Baby
Kripa comes on stage and starts swaying her hips to the music.
Angad stares at her while she comes towards him and looks at him seductively.
Teekhi teekhi teri aankhiyaan
Chuke Chuke Behkati hai
Dekh dekh na yun mujhko
Hosh hosh le jati hai
Teekhi teekhi teri aankhiyaan
Chuke Chuke Behkati hai
Dekh dekh na yun mujhko
Hosh hosh le jati hai
Angad points at Kripa's eyes as he circles around her. He moves his finger
down her neck and then turns her around. Kripa gets chills running down
her spine at his electrifying touch.
Deewana dil kahin kho jaye naa
Humse khata koi ho jaye naa
Angad points to his heart and then at Kripa while dancing. Kripa laughs at Angad's funny dance move. Angad pulls Kripa close to himself.
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniye
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniye
Angad then pushes Kripa away from himself as he sings. Kripa looks at him shocked for his sudden move that catches her off guard. She looks
at him angrily while Angad just smirks.
Arre chod chod mere raho ko
Tauba tauba dar lagta
Aisi waise teri baaton se
ishq visk sa lagta hai
Arre chod chod mere raho ko
Tauba tauba dar lagta
Aisi waise teri baaton se
ishq visk sa lagta hai
Kripa pokes Angad back hard as if challenging him. She makes a sarcastic scared face, which makes Angad a little mad.
Deewana dil kahin kho jaye naa
Humse khata koi ho jaye naa
Kripa pulls Angad close to her body, while Angad's hand start to make
their way down her back.
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniya
Kripa feels Angad's hand going too far down and then pushes him away
grinning, while she sings. Angad looks at her angrily and really annoyed.
Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh baby
Ohhh baby Ohhh baby Ohhh baby
Kripa sticks out her tongue at Angad and signals with her thumb down,
showing he lost.
Roke na ruke mere yeh kadam
tute na kahin jana har kadam
Angad starts walking towards Kripa with his hands in his pockets,
totally casual.
Rehne de zara thoda fasla
Badal ban gaye maan hai manchala
When Angad comes near Kripa, she pushes him away, which then
makes him really mad. Kripa laughs at his fuming expressions.
Deewana dil kahin kho jaye naa
Humse khata koi ho jaye naa
Angad sings uninterestedly because he is even madder at Kripa now.
Kripa actually finds this quite amusing.
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
Angad looks at Kripa passionately wanting Kripa to come close, but Kripa turns her head left and right. Angad gets frustrated with her. Angad pulls her violently and twirls her several times, dancing with her romantically and very close.
Na mein hosh mein
Na tu hosh mein
Behke na kahion dona josh mein
Angad twirls her away which makes Kripa's head spin as she grabs it and tries to keep her balance.
Sene mein kahin
Shola sa jale
Yara Ishq mein kiska bas chale
Angad walks around her and then turns her to him as he sings. Angad
continues to look at her furiously
Deewana dil kahin kho jaye naa
Humse khata koi ho jaye naa
Kripa holds her ears in apology with her lower lip pulled out. Angad
laughs and pulls her near him.
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
Angad watches Kripa as she deals with her inner battles to have Angad
touch her or not. Kripa looks at Angad so passionately which is
unnerving to even him since they are amongst so many people.
Teekhi teekhi teri aankhiyaan
Chuke Chuke Behkati hai
Dekh dekh na yun mujhko
Hosh hosh le jati hai
Angad winks at Kripa which brings her back from her day dream and
taps Kripa to makes sure she is feeling okay because of all moments to
show her passion she chooses when they are crowded by people.
Chod chod mere raho ko
Tauba tauba dar lagta
Aisi waise teri baaton se
ishq visk sa lagta hai
Kripa goes close to Angad and starts singing, while settling closer
to him in his arms.
Deewana dil kahin kho jaye naa
Humse khata koi ho jaye naa
Angad puts his arms around her as he sings. He feels Kripa snuggling
into his chest.
Touch me don't touch me
Come touch me don't touch me
Come touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Aah touch me soniya
They both sing looking into each other's eyes and then hug, bringing
the song to an end.

After the couples' dances are complete, Dilip and Surya take an audience poll for who had the best performance. The loudest applause would win and undoubtly it happened to be Angad and Kripa. Angad and Kripa take a bow and stick their tongues out at Kavya, Anjali, Prachi, and Neev, while they just roll their eyes and laugh at Angad and Kripa's childish behavior. Dilip and Surya then announce, "Now we will have the girls and boys compete against one another! First will be the GUYS!" The boys groan because they have to dance again while the girls laugh at their expressions. The girls begin taunting the guys. Anjali says, "What happened? You guys are accepting defeat even before we started…very bad!" The girls start laughing until Kavya says, "We will see who will be the loser soon enough!" Anjali reples, "Sure…loser!" Kavya replies, "DAM* STRAIGHT…wait what?" The girls laugh at Kavya while Kavya just walks away to meet Angad, Neev, Prem, and Josh in the back to perform. The guys pick the song from Garam Masala.

The guys come on stage one by one all surrounded by girls. They start
blowing kisses to all the girls in the audience while Kripa, Anjali, Prachi, Mukti, and Aaliya get really mad. The guys grin at the girls expressions.
(Angad) Teri aankhein garam masala
(Kavya) Teri baatein garam msaala
(Neev) Uff yeh nakhra garam masala
(Prem)Mere dil pe dhadkano pe
(Josh) Tuhne jaadu kar daala
(All together)
Kiss me baby kiss me baby hoth tere mai ka pyala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby tu hain mera garam masala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby hoth tere mai ka pyala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby tu hain mera garam masala
The guys sing to their sweethearts while the girls look totally shocked and
embarrassed. The guys keep going closer to their own lover's face
making the girls feel really awkward because of all the people there. The
guys know they are totally making the girls feel weird, but that's why
they chose this song in the first place, so that they could watch their
funny expressions and laugh about it later.
Mushkil hain kitna mushkil andekha woh kar paana
Dekhe jo tujhko dekhe ho jaaye woh deewana
Angad sings to Kripa looking at her beauty. He bends down on his knee
and spreads his arms out humorously, Kripa just hides her amusement
and blushes.
Teri rangat garam masala
Rang tera garam masala
Kavya sings to Anjali, while giving her a kiss on her cheek and looking
her up and down, then gesturing she looks perfect. This causes Anjali to blush.
Teri chahat garam masala
Ang tera garam masala
Neev moves around Prachi and hugs her from the back as he sings.
Prachi feels really shy at this point.
Mere dil pe dhadkano pe
Tune jaadu kar daala
Prem taps his heart and points towards Mukti as he dances around
her. Prem keeps pulling on her dupatta and bothering her one way
or another.
Kiss me baby kiss me baby hoth tere mai ka pyala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby tu hain mera garam masala
Josh starts coming closer to Aaliya, wanting so badly to kiss her
because she looks breathtaking. Aaliya turns red because of the lyrics.
Ha yeh teri shokh adaye yeh teri mast jawani
Ek din tu ban jaayegi mere sapno ki raani
Angad check out Kripa's every curve while she stands there feeling really
arrogant because of Angad's lyrical flattering.
Ishq tera garam masala
Husn tera garam masala
Kavya looks at Anjali lovingly, while Anjali tries to avoid eye contact
because the song is making her feel weird since their parents are there.
Tera dil woh garam masala
Jism tera oh yah
Neev looks at Prachi up and down as he sings. Prachi looks at him with
eyes wide from shock. She feels so self conscious now and glares at Neev.
Mere dil pe dhadkano pe
Tune jaadu kar daala
Prem looks at Mukti romantically as he sings.
Kiss me baby kiss me baby hoth tere mai ka pyala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby tu hain mera garam masala
The rest of the guys join Josh in singing these particular lines without paying attention to the reaction of their parents.
(Angad)Teri aankhein garam masala
(Kavya) Teri baatein garam msaala
(Neev) Uff yeh nakhra garam masala
(Prem) Mere dil pe dhadkano pe
(Josh) Tune jaadu kar daala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby hoth tere mai ka pyala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby tu hain mera garam masala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby hoth tere mai ka pyala
Kiss me baby kiss me baby tu hain mera garam masala
The guys continue to stare at the girls intensely which makes them unsettled. The girls all start to feel conscious and really nervous under the guys' intense gaze. The girls feel shaky because they know the whole audience is watching the girls' reactions to the song.

At the end of the song the boys start running after the girls to get their kisses and the girls see the herd coming their way so they all start running in all directions. In order to get the rowdy boys in control, Dilip comes on stage saying, "Boys kuch zaada ho raha hai! Kuch to shaadi ke liya baacha ke rakho baadmashon!!" The guys stop at once hearing Dilip and start blushing from embarrassment since the whole audience brokes out laughing. The girls then make their way towards the stage to perform to from Dhoom 2.

Sexy lady on da floor
Keep you coming back for more
Sexy lady on da floor
Keep you coming back for more
The girls come on stage and now feeling really conscious because of the
previous song. Then again that is the guy's plan, which is to get the
girls nervous enough to lose. The girls try to put on a confident face, while glaring at the guys for messing with their heads.
(Kripa)Chori chori kiyaa re, dil ye dil liyaa re
(Anjali) Jaadu se jaadu kiyaa……kiyaa re
(Prachi) Jaagi soyi rahoon, khoyi khoyi rahoon,
(Mukti) Uski yaadon mein, uske khwaabon mein
(Aaliya) Jhoome jiyaa re………crazy kiya re
The girls dance seductively while continuing to glare at the guys. The
guys just grin knowing they are bound to mess up because they are
still embarrassed from before.
(Kripa)Naa usko pataa, naa uski khataa
(Anjali) Main uspe mar gayi, zaraa usko bataa,
(Prachi)Dheere dheere ikraar mein,
(Mukti) Kabhi kabhi intezaar mein ,
(Aaliya)Uske hi pyaar mein
(All together)Jhoome jiyaa re…crazy kiya re
The girls start dancing, well trying to be seductive, but as soon as they
would see their love winking they would get messed up with the
dance movements.
(Kripa) Main yahaan bhi gayi, main wahaan bhi gayi,
(Anjali) Sochaa pal pal use, main jahaan bhi gayi
(Prachi)Din ho yaa raat ho
(Mukti) Woh mere saath ho
(Aaliya)Jab uski baat ho…jhoome jiyaa re……crazy kiya re
The girls start crashing into each other, while the whole audience makes
noises because it looks like the girls are getting hurt while "dancing". The
guys just try to hide their amusement because they know they are going to get it as soon as everyone goes home.
(Kripa)Chori chori kiyaa re, dil ye dil liyaa re
(Anjali)Jaadu se jaadu kiyaa……kiyaa re
(Prachi)Jaagi soyi rahoon, khoyi khoyi rahoon,
(Mukti)Uski yaadon mein, uske khwaabon mein
(Aaliya)Jhoome jiyaa re………crazy kiyaa re
The girls have stopped trying since there is absolutely no way they
can win now. They just could not concentrate without feeling everyone
watching their every move with close examination. As soon as the
song ends the girls give the guys icy cold glares. The guys are scared
looking at their evil looks.

Then Dilip and Surya make their way towards the stage again to announce the winners of the boys vs. girls competition. Obviously it is the boys who won, although the girls performance was rather amusing as well.

The guys then start gloating about their victory in front of the girls like wagging meat in front of a dog. The girls are ready to seriously do some damage to their faces. Angad says, "Who's the loser now Kripa?" Kripa quickly replies, "Loser says what" Angad asks confusedly, "What…wait NO YOU'RE THE LOSER!!" The girls laugh and move away from the guys, while Angad continues to scream behind Kripa, "YOU'RE THE LOSER!!" while she ignores him completely. Neev pats Angad on the back saying, "Intellect I tell you, these girls are too smart for us to handle!!" Kavya says, "True…but NEVER let them know that!!" The guys laugh and take their seats in the men's section.

Soon the function comes to an end with everyone slowly leaving. Everyone is exhausted by all the singing and dancing. All the guys want now is go straight to bed and dream about their marriage, but of course there are still some days left for the marriage. Two days later would be the haldi rasam, one step closer to marraige.

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So that was the next part!! i tried, sorry if it sucked but its cuz im still sick so yea! anyways i'll try to continue sooner! hopefully i get better soon cuz it totally sucks being sick!! oh and realllllllllllllly sorry for delay!!



Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey tht was just toooooo good! nd take care of ur health! health cums first! if ur sick u shuldnt hve posted it today! but thanks anywayz!!!!!u rock! loved this part! the choice of songs was too good!ur osm!take care of urself! nd take ur tym to post d nxt part! 😛 gett well soon!nd i luved this part! 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh that was awesome....loved it..............and there's was this little thing which I kinda found amusing....


Angad points to his heart and then at Kripa while dancing. Kripa laughs at Angad's funny dance move. Angad pulls Kripa close to himself.
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniye
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniye
Angad then pushes Kripa away from himself as he sings. Kripa looks at him shocked for his sudden move that catches her off guard. She looks
at him angrily while Angad just smirks.
Arre chod chod mere raho ko
Tauba tauba dar lagta
Aisi waise teri baaton se
ishq visk sa lagta hai
Arre chod chod mere raho ko
Tauba tauba dar lagta
Aisi waise teri baaton se
ishq visk sa lagta hai
Kripa pokes Angad back hard as if challenging him. She makes a sarcastic scared face, which makes Angad a little mad.
Deewana dil kahin kho jaye naa
Humse khata koi ho jaye naa
Kripa pulls Angad close to her body, while Angad's hand start to make
their way down her back.
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniya
Touch me dont touch me
Dont touch me soniya
Kripa feels Angad's hand going too far down and then pushes him away
grinning, while she sings. Angad looks at her angrily and really annoyed.
Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh Ohhh baby
Ohhh baby Ohhh baby Ohhh baby



The scenes which you had Andad and Kripa do were almost similar to the ones which I used to imagine to be like in my original-thought-style.......not like in Dhoom.........and I wasn't sure if I would have it on any ff of mine or will.......but yah I used to imagine something like the above mentioned.....I was so shocked when i read something like that.....I mean that was so close to how I imagine and then how could someone else also imagine something totally which no one have seen before since imagination is a VERY VERY big thing.......it hardly haooen that 2 ppl imagine similar thing at certain topics..........well I hope that doesn't sound confusing but do continue soon it was awesome!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh.......that was so great part .......!!!!! 👏 👏 👏


continue soon ---get well soon ~~ 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
NUMERA UR AMAZING! 👏

if dats how u write wen ur sick then i dont wanna kno bout wen ur well...lol. i love the song and dance sequences, they were awesum...i imagined them in ma head was laughing my a** off. lol. 😆

GET WELL SOON and cont wen can but getting better is first priority, kay? 😊

I LOVED ANGAD AND KRIPA. i think the gurls shouldve won but da boiiz can bask in their momentary glory. CONTINUE SOON plz...im addicted to this ff!!!! 😉

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww....tht was sooo cute!!..plz continue!

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