FF: Now u will pay :) Last part 17 pg 31

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*This ff is 2 Isha: for the name of one chara., Nirali: makin me write it, Hinnu: blackmailin, Maddi: cause ur the best, all them again: bein the bestest of friends, n my niece Mansi: baby get better n come home soon, ur foi loves u!!!
Charasters:
*Jai- After losin everythin his a drunk.
*Bani- Now better then ever. Loves Sameer n Pari. Out 2 destory every1 that hurt her.
*Ranveer- Loves family. Close 2 Varun n says his the first born child 2 him. Does not talk 2 Rasshi anymore.
*Rano- Love family. Close 2 dau. Mahi. Loves Ranveer.
*Rohit- Love family. Lives in WM with his wife n kids. His dau. is his life.
*Anu- There 4 her family. Loves her son Nakul so much. Sad that her family is not the same anymore.
*Nattu- Married 2 Laxmi n has 4 kids, now.
*Laxmi- Married 2 Nattu with 4 children. Doesnt talk 2 her mother anymore now. Lives 4 her family.
*Pushkar- Married 2 Preety n have 2 kids. Love his dau. Ved the most. His family is life 2 him.
*Pretty- Is now married 2 Pushkar. Closest 2 son Sohum. Happy with her family.
*Adi- Does not talk 2 Sahil or Jigs anymore. Even if there is no relationship with his son , his granddau. gets his love. Lives 4 his family.
*Dadi- Tries 2 make her great-grandchildren happy.
*Massi- Passed away.
*Sahil- Now married 2 Rasshi n has a dau.. Cheated Rano. Doesnt care 4 Varun.
*Rasshi- With Sahil n has a dau. Cheated Ranveer. Is not nice person.
*Tarun- Has a son with Pia n married 2 her, now.
*Pia- Her son is Taruns n married 2 him.
*Jigs- No relations left 4 her, now.
*Karuna- Has nothin left, now even Laxmi does not like her.
*Roshni- Is good n will help Bani.
*Sameer Nathan Walia- Jai n Banis son. Older twin of Pari. 5-years-old. Really protectivy over his sister. Loves her a lot. Looks go on his daddy, but sweet like mommy.
*Pari Kisa Walia- Jai n Banis dau.. Younger twin of Sameer. 5-years-old stubborn like her daddy, but looks go on mommy.
*Varun Ranveer Bali- Ranveer n Ranos son. Really Sahils n he knows, but to him Ranveer is the only one who can b his daddy. 6-years-old. Does not like Sahil. Loves Ranveer n is the closest 2 him. His baby sister Mahi is his life.
*Mahi Sia Bali- Ranveer n Ranos dau. 3-years-old. Loved by every1 there. Just like her mommy n closest 2 her. Loved her brother really so much.
*Nihita Chopra- Rohit n Anus dau. 7-years-old. Apple of her daddys eyes.
*Nakul Chopra- Rohit n Anus son. 5-years-old. His, his mommys heart-beat.
*Garv Kisna Walia- Nattu n Laxmis son. Older twin of Gia. 4-years-old. Really loves his brother n sisters. Like daddy, loves jokes.
*Gia Kaajal Walia- Nattu n Laxmis dau. Younger twin of Garv. 4-years-old. Loves brothers n sister. Just as her daddy, loves jokes.
*Rahul Veer Walia- Nattu n Laxmis son. Is the older twin of Ria. Loves brother n sister. Sweet like his mommy.
*Ria Veena Walia- Nattu n Laxmis dau. The younger twin 2 bro. Rahul. Really loves his brother n sisters. Sweet like her mommy.
*Sohum Abhi Shukla- Pushkar n Prettys son. 4-years-old. Loves sister. Has his dads looks n is just like him, but is his mothers little boy.
*Vedika Arya Shukla- Pushkar n Prettys dau.. 3-years-old. Loves brother. Is just as her mother, but is her dad's princess, wat V says V gets, V is called Ved by every1.
*Kushi Sonia Bali- Sahil n Rasshis dau. 5-years-old. Loves her gradnpa n his just like Adi.
*Parth Ishan Sablok- Tarun n Pias son. 5-years-old. Sweet unlike his parents.

This ff started after Rano goes 2 meet Bani:

Rano comes in n c's Bani n a woman is attackin her. Bani is just there trin 2 stop her. Rano now has tears cin her sister like that n goes 2 help.
Rano: Let her go she pushes her hard
Bani is crin cin her sister n turns away
Rano grubs her hand: Di, please
Bani: No, every1 thinks I m mental
Rano: No, I don't
Bani: Yes, u do
Rano: Di I love u so much
Then u c a mans black shoes.
Man: Bani Walia
Nurse: She is right there
Back Rano n Bani
Rano: Di, just listen
Man: Dont u dare touch her
Rano looks up n is shocked 2 c
Pushkar: Dont go anywhere near her again
Rano: Pushkar
P: Yes, me, wat did u think I would let my bbest friend get hurt
R: I…
P: Do not want 2 hear, lets go Bani
He takes her hands n walks away
Rano: Pushkar just
Pushkar turns around n looks at a crin Rano: Wat now u feel pain
Pushkar hands paper 2 the nurse n they have no choice, but 2 give Bani 2 him
Outside
Bani: Pushkar where r we goin
Pushkar just wait n c. He leads her 2 the car. Then, they reach the airport.
Bani: Pushkar its the airport
Pushkar: Yes, lets go!!!
Bani: But
Pushkar: Just
Then he calls some1
They get tickets 2 America. Bani is crin cause she wants her kids. When she hears little baby cries.
Pushkar: Want ur children?
Bani gets up n rans 2 them. She takes them n crys: Thanks Pushkar
Pushkar: No, need
Bani: But how did u do it
Pushkar: Thanks Ranveer (hearin his name Bani turns around) 4 all ur help, but wat will u tell the family
Ranveer: Pushkar I will say that they were kidnapped, u just take care of babies n mami
Then he goes 2 Bani : Sorry didnt mean 2 do all I did b4, take care of urself n my cuz's. I will come there n meet u.
Bani, Pushkar, n the babies go on the plain 2 come 2 America.
Bani: Now, I will show them all
Pushkar: We both

Five year leap:
We c a women in a mini jeans skirt a pick tube-top with a short white sweater on the top a heart necklace with (Sameer n Pari written on the top) a pony-tail with side bangs n blonde high-lights, white heels & black sunglasses on top of her head lookin all rich since all her cloths were name-brand.
Woman: Sameer, Pari(name by Isha 4 my dau., so used it n the boys I like the name, didn't give Krishna fully cause its not fair)
Two kids one boy, with a blue top n jeans n a backpack n a little girl with pig-tails tied up with 2 pink bows, a white top with pink short sweater n a pink short skirt 2 match ran.
Kids: Mommy
We c the woman n it is Bani now huggin her two babies who r now five Sameer Nathan Walia n Pari Kisa Walia, Bani didnt have a heart 2 not give them their fathers name so she did the last n she is now Bani Dixit a leader n fighter...

~I tell u, I m a bad writter!!! Just had 2 write, due 2 some people (Hinnu n Nir)!!! Comment, dont mind any!!! Cont. later!!! Kk!!!

Index:
Part 1= pg 1
Part 2= pg 3
Part 3= pg 5
Note n preview= pg 6
Preview= pg 7
Part 4= pg 7
Note= pg 9
Note= pg 10
Part: 5= pg 10
Part: 6= pg 13
Preview= pg 14
Part: 7= pg 15
Part: 8= pg 16
Part: 9= pg 18
Preview= pg 19
Part: 10= pg 20
Preview= pg 21
Note= pg 21
Part: 11= pg 21
Part: 12= pg 23
Part: 13= pg 25
Perview= pg 27
Part: 14= pg 28
Part: 15= pg 29
Part: 16= pg 30
Note= pg 31
Last part, Part: 17= pg 31
Edited by cute1228 - 18 years ago

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no it was soo nice u r a nice writer.. i am happy that they helped bani out to go to america.. i like it.. pls continue...agar mein hoti to shayad even i wod have done it.. but it doesnt happen in ekta;s drama atleast u thought on it.. i appreciate it.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh, it's so nice, you're great writer! 👏 If you want to, you can continue... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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see Mitali, now listen to davie389 and Twinkle 20!!! ur a good writer, now CONTINUE!!! and that's an order, or i might have to blackmail u again 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh gr8 part
plz cont soon
cute names
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wooooooooooow loveley ff will wait for ur next update 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start. please continue soon.
swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey mitu..
see i told u, u r not a bad writter..
and hey love the names didnt know
ishu gave ur kids name already..
anyways..

please please
get JB togheter :(
please

and continue soon
love u jaan
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start👏 👏 i liked it very very much 😊 😊

please continue asap 😛

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